Shivi FF: Chooriyan (Part 17- Pg.74) (complete) - Page 32

on page 40 he says bhayank dayan kahin ki and on 44 raavi fell from bed trying a seductive pose🤣 these 2 cracked me up so bad........🤣 still laughing.......

u gals are making me giddy, my ears turn so read and hot that i can feel the heat literally........

i missed all parts after the 2nd update.......so read dem together and would be understatement that i loved it till last update.......

vishwamitra fisal gaya and menka ne apna 1st o..m experience kiya☺️ her with his pendant would be a site for sore eyes.........

shiva shirtless........☺️

Dude read it in one go and wow what a concept and story.....Shiva's transition from villain to her Prince Charming was effortless, how he began liking her, his self control etc was uff🔥🔥🔥 I want to see this instead of that crap they're currently showing. Thank you for bringing this to us now waiting for next update😳 also "bhayanak chudail" one liner was epic.🤣

Shiva finally gave in ☺️! The chapter was a mix of funny and hot. Can't wait for the next!

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

BRO.

Sab kuch baad mein.

.. she went and sat on the bed, waiting for Shiva to enter. Raavi tried a seductive pose but she almost fell off the bed, so she sat normally waiting for him ..

This had me in SPLITS 🤣🤣🤣

This is SOOOO Raavi 🤣

Also .. Shiva Pandya naa naa karte karte .. almost sab kar gaya 🤭 ... nahin matlab yeh toh aise itraa raha tha jaise Chattaan hai .. so sakhth ... but end mein .. phisal hi gaya ☺️

Good job Dobi, attagirrrrl 😎

Itni cute dobi milegi toh koi bhi fisal jayega 😳

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Oh man, Raavi!!!

I kind of get how and why Shiva exercises so much control with her. But I really really hope he doesn’t think she is using him for time pass.. I mean they are way beyond that point, right? I’m so excited to see what happens next?

As for the request, *sigh* yes, I’ll take more frequent updates any day. Thank you!

Yayy! Thanks. I might upload twice today.

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Anaaaaa meri jaaaannnn!!!!! Gaane ne kyaa asar dikhaya hai!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍

I had to comment!!!! Aaahhhhhhh

Now my sadist part is looking forward to kya hoga next! 🤣

Zara zara behekta hai- Iss gaane ki wajah se Shiva behek gaya bechara 🤣

Originally posted by: ananya.2

Zara zara behekta hai- Iss gaane ki wajah se Shiva behek gaya bechara 🤣

I swear lekin mera aim woh nahi tha jab tujhe gaana bheja. 🤣

Originally posted by: lourel24

Will shiva go back to his negation mode with the guilt that he has taken advantage of ravi knowing the extent to which she is crazy ,he should have beem the matured one.Hope not.loved it.

Thoda angst toh banta hai 😆

Originally posted by: MayaTharkiFairy

🎶Chaand aankhon mein aaya aadhi raat ko

Bela mehka re mehka aadhi raat ko

Ho man kyon behka re behka aadhi raat ko

Bela mehka re mehka aadhi raat ko🎶😭

Never thought a mere thank you after such intense pleasure would be the most sexist thing in the world.

Baaki main kya hi bolu....tumhe toh apni aatma de di hai maine...bas aise hi tharak deti raho devi...🙏😭❤

Tumse hi inspired hu Maya 😂

Tum meri Devi ho 🙏

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

Read this in one go and I got blessed with another update 😎

Bro how do you come up with such good concepts one by one! This story is hilarious! The family reaction to Raavi wanting to marry Shiva 🤣unke toh pairo neeche zameen nikal gai and Shiva did the most obvious thing threw her out - khud akal aa jayegi😆

Shiva’s desperation on mai hari chudiyaan kyu di🤣

love how she has been chasing him constantly and FINALLY he ends up blurting out he’s her to be 😆

ohooo last update she’s got more than she anticipated! Please don’t be a sadist here now!!! Sab happy happy rakho🥺

can we have a quick update on this 😆🥺

LOVE LOVE THIS STORY ❤️

Ani🌸

Concept Barkha ne diya mujhe.

I won’t go full on sadist, but thoda sa angst otherwise apni dobi dobi hi rahegi🤣