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Posted: 3 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Anu!!! I love how bothered Shiva is by Rohaan more than Raavi topping, and when I connect it to him being so pissed off at Raavi hugging Rohaan in the last chapter? I'm gleeful right now, because that's how much I enjoy possessive Shiva.... 🤪


Maybeeeee! Im glad you liked it!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

I am loving your super quick updates Anu❤️

This was another amazing update. I am so glad both Shiva and Raavi were in this sabotage game😆 But all went down thr drain with Rohan topping this time😆

So now it's time to see how this compromise works out!!!!

Waiting for the next part... update soonish❤️


Thank you priya!! well its 50% hate!! updating real soonish!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: mpks1

Nice update! Both have gone crazy trying yo one upman each other😆 now they want yo join hands to beat Rohan and others😆 Indeed 50% love and 50% hatred

Can’t wait for the next update❤️


Thank you!! Upmanship is the part of their life :D Updating soon!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

These two!! Lol I had an inkling the way Shiva was teaching her that Raavi was going to be first. Haha, don't blame him here for being a sore loser considering he planned stuff and gave her notes.


But we saw their 50% nafrat, or more like pettiness here. It was cute and adorable at the same time😂. They studied based on how much the other did. Totally reminded me of "do Billi ke beech bandar ki Jeet" 😂😂. Glad they learned to compromise. Will they make a dream team and now #3 will have to give parties? 😂😂 And Raavi, totaling loving her spunk. She didn't take long to give back the infatuation gyaan verbatim 😂😂


Continue soon! :)


AHH!! Yes :D Glad you liked it! Updating real soon!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter 5

Shiva and Raavi were both unsure of how this new dynamic between them would work. All their lives, they were enemies, competitors and now they were a team?

“Shiva, agar hum compromise kar rahe hai toh mera ek condition hai” Raavi said as she broke off from the hand shake.

“Kaunsa condition?” Shiva asked immediately.

“Iss saal annual day pe mera dance partner banega?” Raavi asked.

“Bilkul bhi nahi. Yeh kaunsa wahiyat request hai?” Shiva followed up.

“Ok. I tried. Worth a shot."

"Vaise Shiva, hum toh padai karenge, par uss Rohan ka kya karna hai”

Shiva thought for a second, looked at Raavi and said, “kya tu usse distract kar sakthi hai?”

“Distract? Rohan ko? Main?” She asked, confused

“Haan, Chipkali tu. I think woh tujhe pasand karta hai na? Hum usi baat ka faida uthaayenge. Ladkiyon ke chakkar mein padkar woh nahi padega. It’s a cliche.” Shiva continued.

“Shiva yeh toh galat hai na” Raavi said innocently.

“Tu apna nautanki band kar, everything is fair in love and war. Aur yeh war hai. Samjhi?” Shiva said sternly.

“Hmm.. Theekh hai.” Raavi reluctantly agreed “Main yeh karoon gi agar tu mere saath dance karega.

“Itna soch mat Shiva, bachpan se sirf curriculum pe dhyan dia, ab toh extra curriculars mein bhi hissa le. It's a part of the college experience” Raavi said with mischievousness in her eyes.

Shiva took a deep breath and sighed, there was no other way out of this fix.

“Chal, theek hai. Deal” he said, visibly annoyed . “Ek hi dance hai, kar loonga” he thought to himself.

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“Kya karna hai mujhe?” Raavi asked, tapping on Shiva’s shoulder as they were entering their college campus.

Shiva went aside and picked a rose from a plant nearby and gave it to Raavi, “Sun, yeh phool le, aur Rohan uss classroom mein hai, usko yeh de ka aa. Theek hai?”

Raavi was really unsure of Shiva’s plan but went along with it anyway. She took the rose from his hand.

“Ok all the best, main yahin khada hoon, classroom ke bahar” Shiva said as he pushed Raavi to the direction of the class Rohan was in.

Raavi walked over to Rohan who was reading a book in an empty classroom. “Hi Rohan!” She greeted him.

“Hey Raavi! What’s up?” Rohan asked as he stood up, wondering what Raavi was upto.

“Nothing much, Main woh kal tumhe congratulate nahi kar paayi” She said giving him the rose. “First rank! Well done” she said, hugging him.

“Thank you, Raavi” Rohan said excitedly.

“Cool! Main nikal thi hoon, you have my number na? Keep in touch!” She said giggling as she hurriedly tried to walk out of the classroom leaving Rohan utterly confused.

As Raavi walked out of the classroom she bumped into Shiva. “Gadhedi, Maine toh sirf phool dene ki liye kahan tha na, aur tune hug kar liya?” He asked.

“Shiva, sirf phool deti, woh ek hafte ke liye distract hota. Ab toh woh final exams tak distract ho gaya.” She said as they walked away from the class.

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Every night after dinner and whenever they had some free time, Shiva and Raavi went to the store to study. They wanted the peace and quiet which was impossible to find in the Pandya house on a normal day. On one study night, Raavi and Shiva were preparing their shared timetable.

“Shiva, main na data structures mein weak hoon” Raavi said suddenly.

“Pata hai, main teri help karoonga” Shiva responded.

“Aur tu object oriented programming mein weak hai Shiva.” Raavi continued.

“Pata hai, tu meri help karegi.” Shiva said immediately.

Raavi was confused for a second before she said “Lekin Shiva, agar humara phir se jadagah hua to....”

“Phele kaun baat karega?” Shiva completed her sentence.

After sitting in silence for a minute, Raavi exclaimed “Coin toss?”

Shiva agreed as he took a coin from his pocket “Heads hai toh pehle tu baat karegi, tails hai toh pehle main baat karunga. Ok?”

“Done!” Raavi said as Shiva tossed the coin.

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Raavi and Shiva genuinely worked as a team. They exchanged notes, helped each other with doubts and motivated each other.

They woke up at 4 in the morning daily, studied till 8, went to collage, came back home, had dinner and went to the store to study again. They had their routine and timetable sorted.

While studying during the day on the Pandya house terrace, Shiva and Raavi would come to the kitchen for a snack and Shiva would make coffee for the both of them.

During one coffee break Shiva said, “Arrey Raavi, kya lagtha hai tujhe, Rohan padai kar raha hai?”

“Kar raha hai toh hum nahi karne denge” Raavi said as she picked up her phone to call Rohan.

After exchanging greetings, Raavi muted her phone and let Rohan speak as he was a talker. She would occasionally unmute to say “Hmmm.. accha.. Really?... Phir”.

After successfully ruining Rohan’s study time. Raavi and Shiva dived back into their notes.

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Raavi and Shiva would spend hours studying but time flew for the both of them.

While taking breaks during their study sessions, they began to converse, share childhood memories and sometimes also engage in gossip. Over the past 21 days, they discovered things they never knew about each other since the past 21 years.

“Shiva, hum toh compatible hai, par itne saal mein hum dost kyun nahi ban paaye?” Raavi asked Shiva one day as they were chatting.

“Kyun ki tu Maami ki behen ki beti hai.” Shiva replied. “Aur tujhe bhi pata hai ki Maami kaisi hai”

“Haan janthi hoon woh galat hai, par kya karoon Shiva? Woh toh meri family hai na?” Raavi said with dejection in her voice.

“Friends are family too” Shiva said “aur tune kaha na ab hum dost hai.”

Raavi smiled looking at him.

“Ok chal faltu ka timepass mat kar, aur database management ke notes nikaal” He said trying to bring their attention back to studying.

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Over the next few days, the Pandya house saw a Shiva and Raavi they hadn't seen in the past 21 years. Shiva and Raavi behaved cordially with each other, they no longer taunted each other or bicker like usual and sometimes were seen laughing and joking.

One day, in the courtyard, Raavi and Shiva were blasting music:

*Dharti ambar chand taare sab rahe khushyal

Sardiyo ki dhoop ho tum rab ka hai yeh kamaal

Is kaal kaal main hum kare dhamal*

Dev and Krish entered the house and they stopped at the doorstep in shock. Raavi was teaching Shiva, their brother Shiva, who had two left feet some dance moves. The best part, they noticed, was that Shiva was enjoying himself.

“Kya kar raha hai Shiva? right hand aur left leg! Left! .” Raavi said with annoyance in her tone.

“Haan Shiva, kya kar raha hai?” Krish said, mocking Raavi’s tone.

Shiva turned off the music in embarrassment "Pagal ho ab ke sab" he said as he walked out of the house.

“Shiva rukh, kahan jaa raha hai? Aaj shaam ko performance hai” Raavi said in vain.

“Kaunsa performance Raavi?” Dev asked her.

“Shiva aur main iss saal annual day mein dance kar rahe hai.” Raavi said slightly blushing.

“Kaise maana woh?” Krish asked curiously.

“Woh, it was a part of a deal. Tujhe baad mein detail mein explain karungi. Abhi mujhe nikal na hai” Raavi said to Krish.

“Shiva ka dance video zaroor banana” Dev asked as Raavi left the house and she gave a thumbs up to Dev.

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“Oh god! What did I sign up for?” Shiva thought to himself while standing on the side of the stage.

“Kya hua Shiva? Stage fright?” Raavi asked.

“Teri wajah se yahan phasa hoon, Gadhedi” Shiva told her. “Yeh dance wance main nahi kar saktha”

“Mere paas ek idea hai, tu bhool ja ki tu stage pe hai.” Raavi said “tu sirf mujhe dekh kar dance kar, jaise itne dino se practice kiya” She continued and Shiva nodded. Raavi raised her hand for a high five and Shiva high fived her back.

“Agle performance ke liye, Please welcome Shiva and Raavi” the MC announced.

Raavi and Shiva got on stage. The music played, Shiva zoned out the audience, the lights and the noise. He looked into Raavi’s eyes and let her take the lead.

*Bekhabar is dhadkanon ka pooch na tu haal,

Is kaal kaal mein hum kare dhamal.*

As the music ended and the audience began to cheer, Shiva snapped back to reality.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#96

Update is here doston!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Update is here doston!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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💖update .... I sense tashan between Rohan and shiva 😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I feel sorry for Rohan😂😂

But I am so happy for Shiva and Raavi😘😍

They are great as a team❤❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

woohoo I'm in time for the newest update and what a coinky dink, I just caught up on all the previous parts!!

yay 🥳

I absolutely love this story so much, the concept is refreshing and entertaining

I love how they fight but also help each other if needed and the little pact at the end of chapter four was just sooooooo cute

my favorite part obviously is when shiva was jealous of Rohan hugging raavi 😆 I had kind of hoped that raavi would hug Rohan when he got first and add more fuel to the fire 🤣 but it looks like shiva was already pretty upset

another favorite moment of mine was when raavi was like oh please shiva it's called extracurriculars 🤣 this is probably something I would say so I related hella to it 😆

can't wait to read more - I'm gonna go read chapter 5 now woohooo 🥳

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