FIKR(CONCERN)- SHIVI FF PART 4 PG4 completed - Page 2

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PART 3

Shiva got scared as he found unconscious raavi on the floor. He rushed to her and found that her body temperature was very high. He got worried. He tried to wake her up but nothing helped. He rushed to the hospital leaving the store under kaka's observation who was back by then. Shiva reached hospital and rushed inside. Doctor took raavi inside the room. He was panicking. He cursed himself for arguing with her when she was in such condition. He was confused that should he tell the family or not. He decided to tell them when she will be okay.

Doctor came out the room talking to the nurse. Shiva rushed to him and asked about raavi’s health. Doctor asked him to come to his cabin. Shiva rushes behind him with tension on his face. Is everything okay? Hope it is not very big. Hope she is fine. With these thought, he entered the cabin. Doctor asks him to take seat. Shiva was very tensed. He worriedly asked doctor about her health. He bombarded doctor with so many questions without taking a break. Doctor told him to calm down. He asked shiva that how initially she got fever. Shiva told doctor that last night she got drenched in rain last night and then he gave her medicine and she took rest. Doctor say that if this was the case then raavi should have been okay by now but her health was not that good right now. Shiva panicked. Doctor says that he thinks that this was the case of mental stress. He says that raavi’s conditions shows that she was taking lots of mental stress. He says that he can give medicine to her but she should not take too much stress in order to keep herself okay. Shiva was listening him with tensed, guilty face. Doctor handed over the list of medicine to shiva and says that he can take her home as soon as she gains consciousness. He leaves the cabin after thanking the doctor. He walked in the corridor of the hospital lost in his thought. This was because of him. he was responsible for all her pain. He always did wrong to her. he was cursing himself for all this. He was guilty, sad. He bought the medicine and went to her. he entered the room and find that raavi was still unconscious. Nurse tells shiva that raavi will gain consciousness in some time and leaves. Shiva saw her carefully. Her dull, pale, lifeless face made him feel guiltier. this broke his heart into 100 pieces. Shiva sat beside her holding her hand and poured his heart out.

Sh: (crying) sab kuch meri wajha se hai………saari galti meri hai…….teri iss halt ka zimedaar main hu, sirf main…………tere iss mental strees ka reason mai hu………meri galtiyoon ki saza khud ko mat de raavi, mat de(kissing her hand)………..maun tujhe aise nhi dekh sakta….please khud ko aise takleef mat de…………main jaanta hu ki maine tere saath bahut galt kiya………tujhe chillaya, insult kiya, tere character par sawaal uthaya, tujhe talaq diya……….kya-kya nhi kiya…….par tu kitni achi hai….bhabhi ki pregnancy ke baare me sunte hi tu daudi chali aayi……..iss achai ke laayak nhi hu main, raavi…nhi hu(nodded his head in no)………..tujh jaisi achi suljhi hui ladki mujh jaisa jungli gawaar ko deserve nhi karti………isliye main tujhe jaane ko kaha, isliye tujhe divorce diya…....gusse me aake maine tere character par sawaal uthaya....lekin sach kahta hu mere dil kabhi tere liye aise koi khayal nhi the.. main tere upar shakk nhi karta.......mujhe apni galti ahsaas hai par main tujhse maafi bhi nhi maang sakta ........main nhi chata ki tu waapis aa kar compromise kar...….tujhe khush rahne ka pura haq hai…….aur vo khushi main sayad tujhe na de paun…….isliye tera mujhse alg hona hi thik hai…….tu khud dekh dard ke siva kya diya maine tujhe iss rishte me……..(wiping his tears)tu bhi khush rahna deserve karti hai…… aur vaise bhi pasand se zindagi nhi chalti, compatibility se chaltihai……..main chahe tujhe kitna bhi pasand karlu, par main tere liye compatible nhi hu, na kabhi ho paunga……….(caressing her cheeks)tu bas jaldi se thik ho ja…..main tujhse bikul nhi ladunga……..kuch nhi kahunga………tu bas thik ho jaldi se…..main tujhe kisi bhi tarha ka mental stress nhi-

Shiva paused as he got call from gautum. Gautum came to know about raavi health by kaka. Shiva tells gautum that raavi was okay now and he’ll be back in sometime. Gautum asked him that if he should come but shiva said that all is good and asked him not to get worried. As he cut the call he heard his name. he turned around to find thet raavi gained consciousness. His eyes lit up. He rushed to her and made her rest in comfortable position. He called out doctor. Doctor did all necessary things and left. Shiva came towards her. he made her sit comfortably.

Sh: (low voice) tu thik hai ab?......(raavi nodded her head inyes)……….tujhe kya jaroorat thi bhari dhoop me gumne ki…….dhyaan nhi rakh sakti kya apna……….(choking)

Ra: (with low voice) main thik hu, shiva…………

Sh: (sighed in relief) acha chal thik hai…….abhi thodi derr me ghar chalenge……tu vahan pe ache se aaram kar lena………..

She said nothing rather just nodded her head in yes. This was so unlike her. he thought that it must be because of her health right now.

After an hour, shiva-raavi reached home. Whole family was waiting for them. Rishita who knew the matter completely told the basic points to everyone.Of course she didn’t reveal about how shiva was awake last night and that he was the one who asked her to take a day off. Shiva made raavi sit on the sofa and asked krish to bring water so that she can take medicine. Everyone says that rishita told them everything. Shiva looked up at rishita with questioning eyes but rishita gave him assuring expression. Dhara asks raavi to take complete rest for 2-3 days and assure that she will handle all work. Rishita also saysthat she have 3-4 ELs left, so she’ll be there for helping dhara. Raavi tries to protest but stops as she get death glares by complete family. Shiva smirks at this.

Ra: (annoyed) meri tabiyat kharab hai aur tujhse hasi aa rahi hai…….

Sh: (smiling) tabiyat kharab hone par hi………….inn sab ek aankhe dikhaneke baad, tera chehra dekh kar hasi aayi…..

He started laughing loudly and whole family joined him. raavi too joined the group by giving slight giggles. Dhara asks rishita to take her to the room, shivi’s room. Raavi looked at shiva as if she wants to take his permission.Shiva gave her assuring look. Even when dhara said this, he didn’t utter a word rather he nodded his head to rishita. Rishita takes her in the room and made her sit on the bed comfortably. Raavi says that she was fine and she can manage the work and asks rishita not to make her work suffer because of her. rishita got angry at this and scolded raavi like an elder sister. Raavi just looked ather like a small baby who is being scolded by mother.

Elsewhere shiva was sitting in hall with his brothers. It was almost 6 in evening when shiva got call. He attended the call and toll the family thathe need to go to the store immediately as a new stock of goods approached. He rushed for the store quickly.

Here, raavi, sitting on the bed, was engrossed in her thought so much that she didn’t even noticed rishita’s entry in the room. Rishita saw raavi and waved her hand in front of her eyes. Raavi’s thought process broke after this.Rishita sat beside her and handed her the bowl of soup.

Ri: (concerned) ye lo raavi soup peeo………..you’ll feel better……………(smiling) vaise kin khayaalo me dubi hui thi, ki main aayi aur tumhe pata hi nhi chala…

Ra: (smiled back) nhi kuch nhi…… bas aise hi …….(after a pause of few seconds) tumse day off lene ke liye kisne kaha? Tumhe kaise pta chala ki meri tabiyat kharab hai…….

Ri: (nervously, what to say, she didn’t have a solid reason for this question as shiva took promise from her which she can’t break) raavi…..wo…woh….act..actually………

Ra: (caught the reason behind her hesitation) rishita, meri ek help karogi………

Raavi asked in determinant yet pleading voice. Rishita saw her with expression of confusion.

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PART 4 - PG 4

I am so happy you wrote about raavi's mental health❤️ looking forward

Thank goodness the doctor atleast had the good mind to tell that family to stop stressing her... I think Shiva kind of needs this jatka to know exactly how much he's been hurting her.... Overall, I loved the update.....

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PART 4

The clock showed 10 of the night. Shiva was wrapping up his work. He wasvsetting the things the back room of the store when raavi came. She entered the room and tapped on shiva on his shoulder. He turned around with jerk only to find raavi. As soon as he saw her he got furious. Why is she here? Can’t she listen to him for one day? She was already ill and now she is here again.

Sh: (scolding her) kya kar rahi hai tu yahan? 4 ghante hue nhi hospital se aaye hue aur tu yahan chali aayi………….tere Kanpur me hartaal hai kya…….bhabhi ne jo kaha tha suna nhi kya tune?...............(raavi was standing, listening to him without uttering a word)…kya hua? …..bhoot ban kr kyun khadi hai?..kuch bolegi bhi

Ra: (stepping closer to him) jo baat adhuri rah gyi thi vo puri karne aayi hu……(with determinant voice)

Sh: (reluctantly) mujhe koi baat nhi karni tu jaa yahan se……..(pointed towards gate and returned back to work)

Ra: (turned him to her by his arms) baat kiya bina toh main nhi jaaungi, shiva……..

Shiva knew that how much stubborn the chipkali was. He knew that if she will keep poking him then the thread of his patience will break. He walked towards the door to leave only to find that the door was locked outside. He tried to pull him with more power but the door didn’t budge.

Sh: (shouted) aeee, jisne bhi ye darwaaza band kiya hai na…………khol de warna acha nhi hoga tere liye………khol……(banging the door)……..pata nhi kuan gadheda hai jo bahr se darwaaza band kar diya?.......

Ra: krish aur rishita ne….(said as she sat on one of the sack kept there)…………..

FLASHBACK

Ra: (to rishita) meri ek help karogi…..

Ri: (confused)kaisi help?.......................

At the same time krish enters the room to ask raavi’s well about.

Kr: (smiling) kaisa feel kar rahe ho Bhabhi?...............

Ra: (smiled back)better……....(after a moment) krish, shiva dukaan gya hai?....(krish nodded hishead in yes)……..raavi said kitne baje laute ga

Kr: (smiling) aree wah Bhabhi aap bada miss kar rahe ho usse?........lekin Bhabhi aaj vo late ho jayega….naya maal aaya hai na, isliye..

Ra: (happily) good……….(to krish and rishita) tum dono ko meri madad karni hogi

Krish and rishita both got confused. Raavi tells them that she want to confront shiva but he is running from her. she asked krish to come with her to store at closing time and told him to lock her and shiva in the store. She asked him to open the door at 5 in morning.

Raavi told rishita to handle things at home. She told her that no one in house should know that she and shiva were in store.

FLASKBACK ENDS

Shiva looked at her with highly schocked and angry expressions.

Sh: (angrily)ye tera plan hai……………kaha na maine mujhe koi baat nhi karni……….aur ye krish….. iss gadhede ko toh main abhi bata hu…….(start searching his phone)

Ra: (smirks at his tactics) koi fayada nhi tera phone bahar hai aur apna main ghr chodke aayi hu……..

Shiva was hell angry at this. What was she up to? What will he do if her health get deteriorate in mid night?. This girl is just impossible, he thought.

Sh: (picking her up by holding her shoulders) problem kya hai teri……….kyun padi hai peeche………. Kya jaanna chahti hai tu, gadhedi?.......

Ra: (looked in his eyes) sach……sach jaanna chahti hu…………

Sh: (sighed) kaisa sach? Kiska sach?.............mere paas koi sach nhi hai tujhe batane ke liye……..

Ra: (moved closer to him) tera sach…………humare rishte ka sach……….tere rude hone ka sach………aur humare divorce ka sach….(looking him urge to know the complete truth)

Shiva was shocked at her words. He was confused too. Why she was talking as if she came to know all about his feelings? He turned his face in opposite direction to hide his feelings. Raavi came in front of him.

Ra: (with determination) bol na shiva…………..kyun de raha hai mujhe divorce? Isliye ki tujhe mujh par yakeen nhi hai ya isliye ki tujhe khud par yakken nhi hai? Isliye ki tu khush nhi hai ya isliye ki tujhe lagata main khush nhi hu?Isliye ki main tere laayak nhi hu ya isliye ki tujhe lagta hai ki tu mere laayak nhi hai? Isliye ki tu mujhe pasand nhi karta ya isliye ki tu mujhe pasand karta hai par tujhe lagta hai ki main tujhe pasnad nhi karti?........

FLASHBACK

“……tujhe chillaya, insult kiya, tere character par sawaal uthaya, tujhe talaq diya……….kya-kya nhi kiya…..”shiva was saying all this when raavi got little consciousness. She heard his words but they were not so clear. She tried hard and finally was able to hear him clearly.

" ........tujh jaisi achi suljhi hui ladki mujh jaisa jungli gawaar ko deserve nhi karti………isliye main tujhe jaane ko kaha, isliye tujhe divorce diya…....gusse me aake maine tere character par sawaal uthaya....lekin sach kahta hu mere dil kabhi tere liye aise koi khayal nhi the.. main tere upar shakk nhi karta.......mujhe apni galti ahsaas hai par main tujhse maafi bhi nhi maang sakta ........main nhi chata ki tu waapis aa kar compromise kare.............."

She heard it all.She heard his words of pain and gulit. She never thought this in her dreams that shiva can hide this much emotion inside him. she controlled her tears back so that shiva does not stop telling his feelings. When shiva received the call, raavi wiped her tears and start showing that she was gaining consciousness.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Ra: (stepping towards him)...bol shiva………..mujhe saare sawaal ke jawaab chahiye aaj…………….

Shiva was too shocked too say anything. Now she knew everything. Now she knew everything which he wanted to hid for her betterment.

Ra: (understood that why he was shocked)……tujhe kya laga ki mujhe kabhi pta nhi chalega(pulling him closer) ……….hn sayad pta hi nhi lagta…..tune feelings chupaane me phd jo kar rakhi hai…….(pushing him back) yahi laga na tujhe………socha hoga ki raavi toh dobi hai……. Kuch nhi samjhe gi………….(again pulling his collar) kyun kiya ye tune …………ek baar bhi nhi pucha ki main kya chahti hu………main kya sochti hu……….meri khushi ke liye kiya na ye sab?..............tujhe pata hai meri khushi kya hai………pucha tune ki meri khushi kisme hai…..nhi pucha na………….

Sh: (tugged off her hand and held her shoulders tightly) puchne jaisa kya tha ……jab mujhe pata tha ki tu khush nhi hai……aur ye sochna bhi bikul galt hai ki tu khuch hogi………..kaise khush ho bhi sakti hai……mujh jaise jungali gawarke saath koi khush rah hi nhi sakta(jerked her off slightly)…..(painful voice) main tujhe iss zabardastiki shaadi se aazaad karna chahta tha………chahta tha ki tu khush rahe………..aur tu mere saath khush nhi thi………isliye maine tujh-

He paused as raavi shuts his mouth with her hand and pinned him to the wall.

Ra: (pressing his hand tightly on his mouth) kya bola tu?……..khush dikhrahi hu main tujh ab?....tujhe sach me lagta hai ki main alag hone pe khush hu?........tere ankhoo me scanning machine hai, jisse pata chal gya ki main khush nhi hu?(left him and took few steps back).......shiva main khush thi………..main humari shaadi ko mauka dena chahti thi……….tere saath iss rishte me aage badana-

Sh: (pulling her closer) mauka dena chahti thi? Kyun? Kiske liye?………..raavi tu ek majboori ka rishta nibha rahi thi, vo bhi isliye kyunki tujhe mere pariwaar se pyaar hai(leaving her surprised)………..main teri majboori hu , choice nhi…….na kabhi banuga…….(tears filled in eyes)tune hi toh kaha tha ki tu saaf paani hai aur main mehekta hua tel,hum dono kabhi ek nhi ho sakte , sahi kaha tha………who kya kahte hai….compatibility…..main tere liye compatible hu hi nhi………….kahan tu stylish padi likhi, kahan main jaahil gwaar……koi match hi nhi hai……..baat toh ye hai raavi ki main tere laayak hi nhi hu(leaving raavi complete shocked by his statement)………iss laayak nhi hu ki mujhe tu mile……main chahe tujhse kitna bhi pyaar kar lu, par ye sachai nhi badal sakta ki main tere laayak nhi hu……….sahi kahte hai sab ‘SHIVA AUR RAAVI KABHI EK NHI HO SAKTE, KABHI NHI’

Shiva turned around with teary eyes. Raavi was devastated. He loved her. he loved her so much that he is ready to leave her for her betterment. She was realizing something. She realized that she was also guilty for this. She never made him feel that he was important for her. she never conveyed that how much necessary he is for her. but it’s not too late. She can tell him what she feels now.

While raavi was thinking all this, Shiva was standing with his back towards raavi. He realized what he did. Just now, he confessed his feelings to her. he knew that she never loved him. he was ready for rejection. He thought that if she will except him, it will be a sympathy, a compromise. This was the only thing he didn’t want. He was engrossed in his thought process when he felt a hug from back.

Ra: (hugged him from back) aur agr main kahu ki shiva-raavi ek hi hai toh…...(shiva froze)…….(went in front of him and cupped one of his cheeks)toh bhi tu yahi kahe ga?……..toh bhi tu mujhe khud se alag kar dega?………….(tears flowed down her eyes)

Shiva felt his heart beat going faster at her words. But still his thoughts of sympathy and compromise were overpowering him.

Sh: (removed her hand) raavi, mujhe tera ye sympathy or compromise nhi chahiye……….tujhe mujh par taras khane ki jarrorat nhi hai……

Ra: (shocked) taras?...................shiva main taras nhi kha rahi hu shiva(cried)……….ye koi sympathy ya compromise nhi hai ye meri choice hai(holding his shoulder)….. I know jab humari shaadi hui tab tu meri choice nhi tha, par ab hai………..please mujh khud se alg mat kar main nhi sah paaangi(hugged him again)……….bahut phle se tujhe bolna chahti thi but phele tere saath hui ladai and phir meri self respect ne mujhe rok ke rakha tha…….......shiva,please……. Aisa mat kar…………...

Sh: (broke the hug and said with teary eyes) raavi tu mujhse hazar gunna better deserve-

Ra: (shouting at him) kaun better? Tujhse better kaun hai? Kiske paas tujhse saaf dil hai?Kisme itni himat hai ki ek baar nhi, baar baar meri jaan bachaye apni jaan pe khel ke? Kaun hai jo apno ke liye kuch bh kar guzarne ki taakat rakhta ho? Kaun hai jo apne hi pyaar ko chod de uska acha soch ke?(looked directly into his eyes with purity)........aree itni himat toh pure somnaath me kisi me nhi hai………..tu kyun soch raha hai ki tu mere laayak nhi hai……..main toh bholenaath ko thank you bolti thi ki unhone tujhe mere liye bheja, jisne tab mujhe samhaal jab mujhe kisi ke saath ki sabse jayada jaroorat thi……(holding his hand in hers)….sachai toh yeh hai shiva ki tujhse better meri liye koi ho hi nhi sakta………..jab maine bholenaath se apne birthday par mere liye XXL best gift maanga, toh unhone mere saamne tujhe laake khada kar diya……………ab samjh aata hai ki aise kyun kiya unhone(smiled as said)………shiva main yeh divorce kabhi nhi chahti thi, sign bhi maine gusse me kare the……..(she cried and shiva stood motionless as he was still processing her words)yeh divorce ne mujhe bahut takleef di hai, life me kabhi itna pain nhi hua…..tab bhi nhi jab dev ne mujhe mandap pe chod diya tha……….(hugged her)shiva please, please mujhe khud se alag mat kar…………..main tere bina nhi jee sakti shiva, I LOVE YOU……..

Shiva froze at her words. He couldn’t believe on his ears. she loved him. She said it again, this time louder. He still can’t believe it. Raavi broke the hug and saw his shocked expression. She pinched him and said it again “shiva,I love you……”. He realized that it was true. She was not saying this out of any sympathy or compromise, her eyes were saying it all. He hugged her tightly and can’t stop his tears. He held her close and said, “I love you too raavi…..”. they stayed in same position for some time. Then they broke there hug.

Ra: (forwarding her hand to him) promise kar shiva, aaj ke baad mujh khud se durr karne ka khayaal bhi nhi laaye ga apne man me……..

Sh: promise…….(exachaning smiles)

Ra: (held his hand tightly) toh aaj se, infact abhi se, humari nayi life ki shuruwaat hui…….

Sh: (freed his hand)nhi abhi nhi……..ek cheez baaki hai……..(raavi looked him with confusion)

Shiva held both her hands from wrist and slapped himself with one of her hand. Raavi was shocked. She tried to get rid of his hold but he held them too tight.

Sh: (with first slap) ye tujhse bina wajha nafrat karne ke liye……….(then 2nd)ye tujhe rulane ke liye……..(3rd one)ye tujhe hurt karne………(4th one)ye tujhe sab ke saamne insult karne ke liye…………..(with 4-5 continouos slaps) aur ye sab, tere character pe sawaal uthane ke liye………(raavi continouosly mnodding her head in no and crying) ye saare thappad toh bahut kam hai unn galtiyoon ke liye jo maine ki hai ……….(knelt down in front of her and joined both hands) par ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena…………

Raavi sat too down on her knees and held his hand nodding her head in no. she hugged him again. She aplogised him for making him feel inferior and worthless and also for hitting him. he said that he deserved this to which raavi replied that he deserves her love.

They broke the hug and kiss each other’s forehead promising that they won’t let the other one go and nothing will come between them now.

THE END.......................

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Originally posted by: Kfof

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