ShiVi OS- Stages (Epilogue updated on page 19) - Page 18

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakmen

Because I know you the best out of everyone here😆

And I'm an expert at reading people, remember?🤣

This is one of the unkahi things that I read about you but didn't tell the other day🤣

I repeat!

What am I gonna write next??

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

I repeat!

What am I gonna write next??

Something happy

With which I'm going to have khushi ke aansu🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

You are going to introduce a third angle named aryan in shivi's story in your next🤔

Or if he's just any other character maybe you're writing pixie's suggested prompt, where dev n raavi get married and later on discover their love for each other.🤔

Just guesses as u haven't dropped any hints, and you're an unbelievably expert writer so anything can go in your mind. U might be having multiple plots in mind at a given time🤷‍♀️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakmen

You are going to introduce a third angle named aryan in shivi's story in your next🤔

Or if he's just any other character maybe you're writing pixie's suggested prompt, where dev n raavi get married and later on discover their love for each other.🤔

Just guesses as u haven't dropped any hints, and you're an unbelievably expert writer so anything can go in your mind. U might be having multiple plots in mind at a given time🤷‍♀️

I do have multiple plots running in my head

And I do have dev Raavi story in mind too

So I will give u that Sakshi baby

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

I do have multiple plots running in my head

And I do have dev Raavi story in mind too

So I will give u that Sakshi baby

I can read your mind!!!!!!!

I have proved it!!!!!

Yayyyyyy🥳

I meant dev raavi get married and later on shivi realize their love..🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakmen

I can read your mind!!!!!!!

I have proved it!!!!!

Yayyyyyy🥳

I meant dev raavi get married and later on shivi realize their love..🙈

What is that monkey for😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

What is that monkey for😆

I missed writing shivi and their love in tge previous post. Maine socha kahin dev raavi ki love story na bana de tu🙈😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow amazing ......loved it so much 😍😍😢😢😢

Beautifully written ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: sangy

Thank you so much for this, Maahi. My first reaction to this was Sukoon..... Dil ko chaiin!!!!!

I still remember how tragic it was when Sati died in The immortals series. The pain was so profound for me.

I am great fan of the Shiva & Sati story. Any parallel they show in the series, I love them.

In all your stories, I always draw this parallel as well. I don't know if your intention was that or not but I somehow always see "them"in your stories.

The Epic love story of Sati & Shiva, how beautiful, intense and eternal it is.

Shiva and Raavi, one surviving without the other is not possible or feasible.

I always thought, when these two will love each other, their love will be endless. They will be too involved into each other, intense and too extreme. Because that how they are as individuals.

Maybe the serial will never show this aspect of their relationship. But your stories, mashallah, your stories do justice to that aspect to the T and more.

I love how inherently your Shiva and Raavi in all your stories are similar in emotional characterization.

Thanks again...for this Epilogue, now I can read this one again and again without the tragic pain..

Thank u so much💐💐

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Posted: 4 years ago

u bring out so many emotions of your readers........hats off to you for writing so brilliantly.....


i read it together so dont know about comments......


i was 🥺 cried and loved the story......their madness, love, hurt everything was just outstanding........

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