SHIVI Shadi kaand Meherbani dev mahaan

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Abhi jo sujha wo likh diya name anybody else gets any idea plz tell it to me

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Dev is on the terrace thinking about what all happened today because of him

Today After the insult faced by his bhabhi Dev hardens himself by cutting all his ties with Rishita and decides to marry Raavi the next day.

When suddenly krish and shiva comes to the terrace more like krish is dragging shiva there.

Krish chirped in his usual mood-

"Dekh dev aaj tere bachelorhood ka aakhiri din h toh thodi mauj masti toh bnti h na, kyun shiva?

(Seeing both DevShi glaring at him) krish toned down his excitement and spoke- Haan Haan thik h manta hu ki tu khush nhi h halat se par shadi toh karega hi na toh thodi si party krlete h mood cheer up krne k liye, kya bolta h.

Not geeting any response from Dev krish signalled Shiva to speak who although irritated tried - "Haan dev waise toh pn ye krish har Waqt bakwas hi karta h pr aaj toh main bhi iski Baat se agree krta hu kal se wo mami ki behen ki beti aajayegi ghar main aur phir nnaak main dum kr k rakhegi aise sukoon se bethne thori milega Hume"

"Bas shiva tujhe toh har baat main Raavi bhabhi ka zikr lana hota h pehle hi wo itna mayus h upar se tu aur jaale pe Namak daal raha h"- reprimanded krish "

khair Issko chor; Ae dev tu na aise muh latka k mat beth dekh ab jab tune mann bna hi liya h Raavi Se rishta jodne ka toh khush hokar jod na ab Iss sab main uski toh koi galti nhi na ki kyunki tune usse ye sab btaya hi Nhi kbhi.

" Krish mujhe Iss bare main koi Baat nhi karni "Said dev trying to close this shadi discussion" chal thik h teri Baat Maan lete h par party toh kar hi sakte h na ;suddenly krish shrieked chips toh main neeche hi bhul gya abhi laata hu"

Suddenly Dev's phone rang seeing rishita calling shiva simply said-" dekh dev usse Baat kar aur samajh de ki ab tere aur uska koi rishta nhi h aise do naoun main pair rakhe nhi aage badh sakta tu abhi bhi Keh raha hu main tereko"

By the time he finished the call got cut but it started ringing again

So dev went aside to talk but before he can say something he heard "Rishita crying dev dev dekho tm jo khaoge jaise rakhoge main tumhare Saath reh lungi main main tmhari dhara bhabhi se bhi pair pakad kr maafi mang lungi dev par plzz mujhe yahan se le jao dev main tmhe kisi aur se shadi karte nhi dekh sakti dev tumhare liye aasan hoga ye sab par main nhi badh sakti aage tmhe chorkar dev plzz mujhe le jao

Plzzz dev humare wo promises wo future plans unn sabka ka kya dev Plzzz manjao dev le jao mujhe yahan se Raavi ko hum dono milakar samjha denge wo mann jayegi par please tm mere Saath aisa mat karo dekho ek baar shadi hogayi pher donoo parivar khud ba khud apna lenge hume bolo dev bolo na kuch toh kaho main jee nhi paongi plzz dev

Rishita main ye nhi kar sakta samjho Baat ko and cutting her call switched off the phone

And broke down completely kaise samjhaun main tmhe rishita tumhare bina tumhara dev bhi kuch nhi h par mere liye meri family bhi utni hi important h kaise tod du unki umeed unka bharosa wo bhi tab jab bhabhi ne meri khushi k khatir tmhari family se itni humiliation face ki aur

Suddenly dev starts hiccuping to which shiva come to him and touched his shoulder seeing him dev hugged him tightly and said tu hi bta shiva main kya karu kaise thik karu sab

AB tu kuch nhi kar sakta dev jaise jo chal raha h chlne de kyunki agar ab tune apne kadam piche liye na dev bakiyon ka toh pata nhi kahin main hi na tujhe Maar daalu teri ek chuppi ki wajah se kayi zindagiyan taq pe h dev aur agar tu Raavi se shadi karta h toh sirf rishita ki life kharab hogi Haan manta hu tujhe main selfish lag raha hounga pr tu khud soch dev wo rishita bahar wali h ek uske liye tu pure parivar ko dukh dega aur wo gadhedi pure somnath ko pta h uske tere pyaar k izhar k baare main uski soch kya izzat rahegi life barbaad ho jayegi uski toh isliye ab ye sab khyal dimag se nikal de aur chup chap jaise chlra h chlne de.

Saying that Shiva turned to leave but Dev said-shiva sunn

Mere pass ek rashta agar tu Haan kahe toh dekh isse sab kuch thik hojayega mere bhai bas agar tu mann jaye toh

Kya manwa rahe ho shiva se Dev babu

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awsome story 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩


Waiting for next part ❤


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting concept! Waiting for more!❤️

PS- Please add in title that this is a ShiVi fiction so more people can read this. 😳


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Is thing going to be a RomCom fic?

Reading the title, I actually thought that it was a post about Anita's shaadi 🤣

I liked the title

And Dev ka last minute plan

Shiva ko manaa bhi liya toh bhi, Raavi ko kaise itni jaldi convince karega?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhaakshu

Is thing going to be a RomCom fic?

Reading the title, I actually thought that it was a post about Anita's shaadi 🤣

I liked the title

And Dev ka last minute plan

Shiva ko manaa bhi liya toh bhi, Raavi ko kaise itni jaldi convince karega?

Not it is not a rom com

Wo to jis din shivi se dil bharega tabhi nobat aayegi likhne ki😂😂

Wo toh aage pta chalega😬😬😬

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice beginning! Waiting for update!

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