Shivi os - shattered part 2 on page 3 - Page 3

Very emotional part 😢😢

I m very much excited for next part .How ravi would assure shiva of their changed equation n her being only his n loved this one

Multiple emotions after reading this again and again!

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Awsome story 👌😀

Shiva ko koi complete kyu nhi krne deta apni bat 😅😅😅😅😅

Waiting for next part

Cont soon🤩🤩

Thank you ❤️

Updated the second part.

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

This was beautiful...the failed attempts to have the talk...Dobbi Raavi asking about acidity and making kaada😆

The scene at the shop....I love possessive, jealous Shiva...I can see him coming in this track even though he is going to be distant from her❤️

End mein...they fought....I want to know how he confesses to her...please give the part 2 soon....I want to see how they resolve the fight and have the conversation❤️

Continue soon Pixieee....loved this🤗

Thank you so much for the encouraging words prii❤️🤗🤗🤗

Update the second part.

Originally posted by: kitm

Loved it ❤️❤️❤️

Waiting for next update 😊😘

Thank you.❤️

Updated the second part.

Originally posted by: luvshivika

As usual fantabulous Please please write more Itna Khoobsurat tha ye . The kamra scene be so cute Uff ye Shiva itna pyaara pyaara kaise haiJealous shiva is the bestest Please write moree and also please update entangled 😊

Thank you so much ❣️

Will try to update entangled as soon as possible.

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

this is amazing.......heart wrenching for both raavi and shiva.....i do understand the situation both are in and shiva's feelings......he is shattered right now but letting her go would be the best thing he can do for her......

they are mismatch in eyes of society and one of the partners feel it....den better to make way for dem......but here we dont know what raavi wishes right now...........

and she was getting married to dev so would have seen so many dreams.......god i feel so sad for both.........

Thank you for commenting.means a lot❤️

Yess,both are hurt for no fault of their own.😣

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Aww. This is truly shattering for Shiva. Raavi's going to have to build up his confidence, step by step. Hope she gives him her diary in future where he makes an entry as a hero at the end of the resolution or maybe after their confession.

I love how you amazing writers are prepping us for what's about to come.

Thank you so much 💗

Originally posted by: mpks1

Pixie, read both the parts, it started with a happy note but the second part was heart wrenching😭 Hope you have planned a happy ending, can’t see Shiva hurt so much neither in the show nor in your OS😃

Thank you so much premaa ❤️❤️

Shiva ko hurt to Mai bhi nahi dekh Sakti💔

Will try to update the end soon.🤗🤗