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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART 5


Dhara : Tu dusri shaadi karega? Pagal toh nahi hogya.

Shiva: Aree agar Raavi dusri shaadi kar sakti hain toh mein kyun nahi. Mein bhi apni zindagi sudhar leta hoon.

Raavi angrily pouts and leaves for her room. Shiva enters the room but doesn't say anything and goes to sleep remembering Kaka's word and smiles.

Flashback.

Shiva goes to store angrily hearing Raavi's condition. He bumps into Kaka who ask him what's wrong. Shiva blurt out the truth.

Kaka : Kya?

Shiva : Haan aisi bhi koi condition rakhta hain kya. Usse pata hain mein usse kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakta isliye yeh baat nikali taaki mein usse divorce na doon.

Kaka : Mujhe toh yeh nahi samaj aa raha ki tu usse pyaar karta hain toh divorce kyun dena chahta hain.

Shiva : Kaka mein uske liye theek nahi hoon.

Shiva looks down.

Kaka : Dekh Raavi bhi tujhe kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakti. Toh ek kaam kar tu jaake usse bol ki tu bhi dusri shaadi karega.

Shiva : Kya? Mein dusri shaadi? Kaka aap theek toh hona?

Kaka : Aree karni thodi hain. Vese bhi Raavi karne hi nahi degi. Toh tu aisi condition rakh ki tu uske liye ladka tab dhundega jab tu khud ki shaadi ke liye ladki dhund le. Raavi ko aayega gussa aur voh iss condition se peeche hatt jaayegi.

Shiva looks at him and pulls his cheek.

Shiva : Kya baat hain Kaka ekdum superb idea dhunda hain. Par aap kisiko batana mat samjhe. Aap mere team mein ho. Ek toh already uss chipkali ne puri family ko apni team mein le liya hain.

Kaka : Haan theek hain.

Shiva is smiling happily and sleep when a bucket of water splashes on his face. Shiva wakes up startled and looks at Raavi.

Shiva : Ayee Chipkali. Ruk tu.

He takes the bucket from her hand and goes out and fills the water from well and comes back to find her fuming in anger.

Raavi : Dur rakh balti mere se

Shiva : Kyun Kyun. Tune bhi daala na mere pe paani.

Raavi : Kyunki mujhe tujhse baat karni thi.

Shiva : Acha toh mujhe bhi baat karni hain. Yeh le.

He throws the bucket of water on her. Raavi shivers due to sudden splash of cold water on her body. She gets completely drenched and shivers as the water was cold.

Raavi : Paani thanda tha.

Shiva : Toh kya tere liye ab paani garam karun.

Raavi : Haan

Shiva : Nahi karunga

Raavi holds his collar angrily and pull him closer.

Raavi : Haan kyun karega mere liye. Ab toh tu sabkuch voh dusri ladki ke liye karega na. Haina?

Shiva : Tu bhi toh dusri shaadi kar rahi hain. Mujhe toh koi problem nahi hain.

Raavi : Par mujhe problem hain kyunki tere liye sirf mein best hoon.

She leaves his collar and steps back. Shiva holds her arms and pull her closer.

Shiva : Haan toh tere liye bhi mein

Shiva stops in midway and closes his eyes.

Raavi : Mere liye bhi kya?

Shiva : Tere liye mein theek nahi hoon. Mein tujhe iss rishte se azaad karna chahta hoon. Agar tujhe dusri shaadi karni hain toh khud ladka dhund le mujhe mat bol.

Raavi : Acha aisa hain theek hain. Mein ladka dhundti hoon. Aur jaise his meri shaadi fix ho jaayegi tu mujhe Divorce dega haina?

Shiva : Haan.

Shiva leaves her. Raavi sits down with folded arms as she is feeling cold.

Shiva : Tujhe thand lag rahi hain ja kapde badal le.

Raavi : Nahi badlungi. Aise hi soungi bhale bimaar ho jaun. Aur tujhe kya? Meri fikar karna bandh kar de. Ab meri fikar karne koi aur aayega.

Shiva angrily storms out of the room and goes to aangan to sleep. Raavi sits there in wet clothes crying and dozes off to sleep. Next morning when he enters room he finds Raavi shivering. He goes to her and checks her temperature. Its very high. He gets tensed. He picks her up in his arms and take her out. He shouts everyone's name. Everyone gather around him. Dhara checks Raavi temperature.

Dhara : Aise geele kapde mein kaun sota hain Raavi? Ruk mein abhi kadha banati hoon. Kapde badal le sabse pehle tu.

Raavi nods half consciously.

Gautam : Shiva isse room mein leja.

He again picks her up and drops her in the room. He is standing outside the room pacing back and forth. When he hears her shivering voice.

Raavi : Dha. ..Dhar..dhara di

Shiva enters the room worriedly to find her sitting on mattress with eyes closed. She had worn her clothes but was unable to zip the dress.

Raavi : Ple..please. help..kar...kardo

Shiva close the door not wanting anyone to see her like this. He goes and sit behind her. He gently pulls her zip up brushing his hands on her back in process. Raavi instantly recognize his touch. She feels heat building up in her body. She clutches on to mattress tightly. Shiva makes her wear her dupatta. Dhara knocks on the door.

Dhara : Raavi Raavi

Shiva opens the door. Dhara enters with kadha. First she dries her hair and then make her drink the kadha and advice her to sleep. Shiva doesn't even move an inch from there. Dhara takes out a cloth and dips in water.

Shiva : Bhabhi mein karun?

Dhara hands him the water. Shiva continuously keep replacing the water and does it till she doesn't stop shivering. He covers her with warm blanket and leaves the room to find some guy entering the house.

Rishita : Aaj actually Raavi ki tabiyet achi nahi hain. Kal mil lena.

Dhara : Aree Rishita yeh khichdi Raavi ko de. Aree Vansh tum.

Vansh : Mujhe dijiye. Mein khilata hoon usse. Issi bahane hum mil bhi lenge.

Shiva : Kaun hain yeh?

Krish : Tune toh na bol diya ladka dhundne ke liye. Toh Raavi Bhabhi ne apne liye khud dhund liya. Ussi se milne aaya hain.

Shiva tightens his fist and looks at him angrily. Vansh enters the room and wakes her up. Shiva is pacing outside the room watching them.

On the other hand in kitchen.

Rishita : Baki sab toh theek hain par Raavi ka bukhar aana hamare plan ka part nahi tha. Sab ulta hogya.

Dhara : Shayad nahi. Raavi ka bukhar hamare plan mein madad karega.

In room

Raavi : Mujhe nahi khaana thank you.

Vansh : Acha theek hain

Shiva : Kya theek hain? Khaana toh tujhe padega. He snatches the plate from Vansh's hand. Muh khol apna.

Raavi looks away.

Shiva : Dinosaur kahin ki

Raavi : Mein dinosaur nah...

Before she could complete her sentence Shiva puts spoon in her mouth. Raavi pouts angrily. He then starts feeding her. Raavi quietly eats without further arguments. He gives her a glass of water. He removes his handkerchief and cleans her mouth. Raavi looks at him with teary eyes.

Raavi(in mind) : Shiva kab samjega ki tu hi mere liye best hain. Koi teri jagah le hi nahi sakta.

Vansh : Raavi mein chalta hoon. Mein kal aata hoon shaadi ki baat karne.

Vansh leaves.

Shiva : Kya Shaadi? Abhi toh mile bhi nahi ho ache se

Raavi : Mein Vansh ko bachpan se jaanti hoon isliye.

Shiva : Phir bhi

Raavi : Tujhe bhi toh jaldi haina khud ko mujhse dur karne ki.

Raavi looks at him hurt

Raavi : Aur vese bhi Vansh mein koi kami nahi hain. Agar hogi toh mein usse shaadi nahi karungi.

Shiva remembers her words and goes out of the house to find some ''KAMI'' in Vansh.


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Posted: 4 years ago
#72

Amazing update👏

Shiva is following Kala's advice😆

Shivi are equally hurt 😭

Family is continuing with the plan😉

Let's see what Shiva will do

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Shiva is going to find Kami in Vansh🤣

Nice chapter waiting for next one

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#74

Haha.

Interesting

Nice update bro🤗

Continue soon

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#75

Loovveeedd it…

Cant wait to see what will happen next..

Both Shiva and Raavi are hurt.

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Wow amazing update❤️

This is getting interesting❤️

Please update soon🤗

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I’m loving the way this is going!!!

Super interesting!

Please update soon!

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This is interesting.

I'm waiting to see if Shiva succeeds in finding any KAMI in Vansh.


Update soon.

Edited by MeeraWrites - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Just caught up with the parts. And they are all great.

Continue soon.

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PART 6


Shiva returned home at night after a whole research about ''VANSH''. Throughout the day he kept calling Dhara Bhabhi and kept asking her about Raavi's health. First thing he did when he returned home was to check up on Raavi. He found her sleeping. He checked her temperature and was relieved that it was normal. He went out of the room and was passing through hall when he hear Krish and Rishita talking.

Krish : Bhabhi mujhe toh Vansh Raavi Bhabhi ke liye theek nahi lagta.

Rishita : Kyun?

Krish : Raavi Bhabhi ko dekha hain Aapne. Kitni ziddi hain. Unko toh sirf Shiva hi sambhal sakta hain aur koi nahi.

Rishita : Haan pata hain par Kaash yeh baat Shiva ko bhi pata hoti.

Krish : Aur aaj ka hi dekhlo, jaisi care Shiva Raavi bhabhi ki karta hain kya vesa Vansh kar paayega?

Rishita : Ofcourse not. Shiva toh hamari Raavi par jaan chidakta hain

Krish : Aur toh aur mujhe toh aisa lagta hain ki Shiva Raavi Bhabhi se pyaar karta hain.

Rishita : Haan I doubt Vansh kabhi aisa pyaar kar paayega ki bhi nahi.

Krish : Aapne dekha haina Raavi Bhabhi Shiva ke saath kitni khush hoti hain. Vansh ke saath itni khush nahi reh paayegi.

Rishita : Hmm

Krish : Par dekho na Shiva ko lagta hain voh Raavi Bhabhi Ke liye theek nahi hain.

Rishita : Vese Krish ek baat bolu. Kami kisme nahi hoti? Everyone is flawed. Koi perfect nahi hota. Na Shiva perfect hain na hi Vansh aur na hi Raavi par Jab Shiva Raavi saath mein hote haina toh tab jaake voh ek '' Imperfectly Perfect Couple'' bante hain.

Krish : Ekdum sahi baat boli aapne.

Shiva listen to all this and unknowingly a smile crept up in his lips. He went away from there. Krish and Rishita see him going away and smile.

Shiva enters the room to find Raavi awake.

Shiva : Tu so rahi thi na?

Raavi : Haan par neend khul gai.

Shiva : Ab tujhe acha lag raha haina?

Raavi : Nahi dard ho raha hain mujhe.

Shiva quickly went to her and touched her forehead.

Shiva : Sar dard ho raha hain? Dabba doon.

Raavi : Sar mein dard nahi ho raha.

Shiva : Toh?

Raavi : Yaha dard ho raha hain.

She keeps her hand on her left chest indicating her heart is paining.

Raavi : Shiva kyun chod raha hain mujhe? Maine koi galti ki kya? Kyun Divorce dena chahta hain? Kyun? Tune khud decide kar liya ki tu mere liye theek nahi hain. Mujhse pucha? Agar koi mujhse puchega na ki mere liye kon best hain toh mera ek hi jawab hoga. Shiva. Shiva Dev ke liye jo bhi meri feelings thi voh sirf ek bachpana tha. Ab toh mujhe Dev Ke liye itnu sa bhi feel nahi hota. Par koi hain jiske liye mein physical attraction se bhi zyada feel karti hoon. Jisko dekhe bina mera din complete nahi hota. Jisse jhagda kiye bina mujhe neend nahi aati. Toh uss insaan ke bina mein puri zindagi kaise nikalungi. Tere liye itna aasan hain kya mujhe chodna? Sab chod ke chale jaate hain mujhe ab tu bhi chala ja. Kal Vansh aa raha hain Shiva. Mere liye toh tu hi best hain aur hamesha rahega. Ab tujhe sochna hain Shiva ki tere hisaab se mere pe kiska hakk hona chahiye? Mujhse jhagda karne ka hakk kiska hain? Mera dhyaan rakhne ka hakk kiska hain? Mujhe pyaar karne ka hakk kiska hain? Aur sabse important Mujhe choone ka hakk kiska hain?

Raavi look at him with anger and hurt. She goes to sleep. Shiva looks at her stilled. Next morning Shiva wakes up to find Raavi getting ready. She was wearing a purple halter neck suit. It was little backless. Shiva woke up seeing her. He could sense that she had cried all night. Raavi went to him. Shiva stood up and looked at her. She was looking beautiful. Raavi went close to him. She took his hand and placed it on her cheek. He started caressing it unknowingly. Raavi closed her eyes. She knew now Shiva was lost in her and that's what she wanted. It was her final vaar. Shiva pulled her close by grabbing the waist. He leaned down and kissed her neck. Raavi clutched on to his vest tightly. He started lingering his hands over her back and didn't failed to notice her cheeks which had turned red like tomato. He wanted to eat that up. As it was halter neck he roamed his hands over the collar bone and shoulders and travelled downwards stopping at her arms. He bent down and gently bit her shoulder. Raavi moaned. He loved it. He loved how she was blushing. He smiled at her.

Raavi : Shiva soch le. Vansh mujhe aise touch karega. Tujhe chalega?

Shiva stepped back. No way. No one had the right to touch her like that except him. Only he had the hakk to touch her. He can't even imagine someone else touching her like he did. Raavi looked at his shocked expression and smiled. She took her dupatta and covered her shoulder where he bit her. She made her way out of the room. Shiva stood there shocked. He went to the terrace pacing here and there fastly. He was tensed confused nervous and frustrated. Gautam came up to him and pat his shoulder. As soon he saw him he hugged him tightly.

Gautam : Gentleman voh hota hain jo aurton ki respect kare, izzat kare, unhe pyaar kare, unki care kare. Voh nahi jo ache kapde pehne. Shiva yeh jitna jaldi tu samaj jaaye utna acha. Already kaafi der ho chuki hain.

Gautam points at Vansh who is arriving with his family. Raavi sits on the couch upset. Shiva quickly goes down and stands blocking the way of Vansh.

Shiva : Chalo chalo idhar se U- turn maarlo. Kyunki Raavi toh shaadi shuda hain aur uska pati abhi zinda hain jo usse bahot pyaar karta hain.

All look at him smiling.

Vansh : Mr Shiva. Vese bhi mein Raavi se shaadi nahi karnewala tha. Mein toh yaha Anita se shaadi karne aaya hoon.

All laugh at Shiva including Raavi.

Shiva : Tu kya hass rahi hain chipkali? Aur yeh sab kya natak hain?

Raavi : Karna pada natak. Taaki teri akal theekane aaye. Gadhera mujhe chodne ki baat kar raha tha. Teri himmat bhi kaise huyi yeh sab sochne ki? Mein koi khilona hoon kya?

Shiva looked down.

Vansh : Shiva. Raavi ko maine aaj tak itna khush kabhi nahi dekha jitna voh tere saath hain. Kabhi uska haath mat chodna varna sach mein koi uthaake le kar jaayega.

All laugh at his statement.

Shiva : Aise kaise uthake le ke jaayega? Mein hoon na.

Raavi hugged him tightly.

Raavi : Bhootnath kahin ka.

Shiva : Chipkali itna sab kon karta hain. Pata hain mujhe kitna dard hua

Raavi : Aur tu jo chodne ki baat kar raha tha usse mujhe bhi toh kitna dard hua.

Shivi : Sorry.

All smile seeing lovers finally unite.

Ok so next part will be the last one and after that I am thinking to write something on Atta Romance. Do let me know if u want me to write something else.


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