ShiVi SS- Ulajh kar tujhse- Part 6 pg 28(28.9.21) - Page 14

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Posted: 4 years ago

just saw this and started reading it.....u wont believe my heart was in my mouth.....i was shivering and shaking with all the possibilities i was thinking of......


the call which shiva made to his mom was the last nail in coffin for me.....his broken heart and raavi's realization was beautifully explained....the shiva u have shown is so amazing, he is pure bliss.....m in love with him so much......


my heart was racing, i was feeling all the emotions which raavi and he felt......


dev getting annoyed i didnt understand....is he taking it as some competition or what? he is not engaged to her, nor does he love her....y getting angry at shiva?


both of dem are so shattered but nothing can be done.....i know its not shiva's child ...i doubt he married her, but if he did its just to protect her.......she is in love with someone and i wish that someone comes soon........


shiva has loved only one woman and that's raavi.....he is a very sorted person and though he wants his love, his priority will always be his promise to tapaswini........


i see raavi had taken him for granted.....she thought that he would always be there .....where would he go......but she never thought that he might have his own family.....may have a relation so intimate that any third person would be an outsider.....she never thought about her being that outsider.......this is too much for her to take in.......she wants to be his meera and that broke my heart even further........she has the right to decline to marry dev.......she must do this.......


m feeling so suffocated and pain is heart wrenching while seeing dem like this.......beautiful writing.........

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: JiyaGupta30

You r doing an amazinggg job..❤️


Thank you so much Jiya!


The way u portray each emotion is brilliant 🤪

My shivi r in pain... both want each other bt Shiva is just too helpless between his love and responsibility 🥺


Ghrwali ya baharwali wali feeling😂


And here i feel tapaswini is in more pain.. 😭

My heart reach out to all three

For once Dev can see Raavi's emotions clearly..⭐️


Yes he does


Waiting for the main plot to unfold🤗

As always loved the chappy to the core 🖤


I am glad u did🖤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: katheriene

Heart wrenching update 💔😭


Don’t cry. Here... Take tissue🙂


Tapaswani's pain, Shiva's dilemma and Raavi realization were beautifully described👏


Thank you. Glad u like even Tapasvini. Usually the third angle is abhorred.


My hear goes for three of them😭

Dev clearly understood Raavi's feelings😭

Shiva is caught between responsibility and love😭

Tapaswani seems to have more pain😭

Let's see how the story unfolds

Waiting for next


Will try to update soon🌺

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

Beautiful, emotional, so heartwrenching update. Raavi was so heart broken 💔 And Shiva felt so bad. Feeling that child is not of Shiva's.



Waiting for next chapter❤️


Thank you sooo much.

I will try to update soon.

🌺🌺🌺

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kitm

So emotional 😢😢 loved this chapter ❤️❤️

I already read it twice .... all the emotions are beautifully written ❤️❤️

Waiting for next 🙏😊


I am really glad u liked it.

Thank youu!🌺🌹🌺🌹

Will try to update sooooon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Literally broke my heart....💔

I wouldn't even attempt to express in words.


Fevicol for ua heart.

And Thank u sooo much🌹

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

As usual super high on emotions! Shiva's helplessness and sense of responsibility, raavi's love and fear of losing Shiva and tapasvini's pain and broken heart were beautifully described

Loved it! ❤️


Thank you sooo much!

I am glad u loved it!

🌹🌹🌺🌹

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Posted: 4 years ago

This chapter is so well written.. I'm glad ravi didn't hide her feelings

Love love love this update

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am absolutely in love with this story..read all of them in one go🤗. How do you get such amazing concepts? ❤ Feeling bad for Shiva, one side is his love and other side is his responsibility..😢😢 excited to Tapasvini's back story...and yeah nice name Tapasvini💙 update soonish dear💜💜

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Posted: 4 years ago

I love how you never let your characters take the easy way out. Generally in ITV, even if the characters are with someone else, there is some level of emotional buffer- like the women have never slept with anyone else before etc. There is only societal pressure, no emotional baggage of being physically initiate with someone else. But even in “Mine”, the characters had to face the consequences of the emotional and physical ties from a previous relationship.


Coming to the current story- it is very gut wrenching. I have low key anxiety thinking about it will get resolved. Shiva and Raavi will truly need to give their pound of flesh to get to their happiness 😣

On a side note, Shiva’s “Sakhi” endearment is giving me serious “Krishna” vibes. Further enforced by Raavi’s Rukmini-Meera dialogue. Are you going for a Abhimanyu type story line where Krishna protects the child from Brahmastra? 😅

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