ShiVi SS: Tip Tip Barsa Pani [Chapter2Page16 06/12/2021]

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Background: Shiva and Raavi are attempting to navigate their brand new marriage and are failing horribly at reaching resolution. More often than not, they are found bickering endlessly and taking nasty jabs at each other. No one in the family has been able to solve their arguments yet whenever the two are faced with an uncomfortable situation such as falling in a bathtub, there seems to be a development in understanding between the two. This short story will be a light hearted series about all the Pandya Parivar members stepping out of their comfort zone and teaming up together to create uncomfortable "watery" situations to bring the newly weds closer together.


Jab tip tip barsega pani,

Toh kya hogi in do pagalo ki kahani?


I N D E X

chapter one [Page 7]

chapter two [Page 16]

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello meri jaans smiley31

I know what you all must be thinking: she has four other series to work on and she's posting yet another one smiley37

What can I do? This idea has been festering in my mind since the bathtub scene and I really really wanted to get everyone's opinions on it.

Based on the background, what do you all think?

Is this a plot line worth pursuing? smiley9

Would love to know everyone's thoughts - and I will update Roleplay & my OS series before posting something for this, promise smiley36

Until then...

Mrs. Dhillon smiley2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yes yes..bring on uber clean Shivi (i mean imagine the number of showers they're going to have 🤣)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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How cute is that Ideaaaa

Curious to know what the Pandya could probably do...

I have no single vein that is creative 🤣

So I will be surprised at every Idea...

I bet Krish will have the Best❤️😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Super interested!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aye MBZ! Pehle ek khatam to kar lo! Aur kitna start karogi???🤣🤣🤣🤣



On a serious note. Waitingggg

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yup it's worth pursuing I like where this is going

Arey hum ko ta achha hai jitna tum likhna chaho likho ..humare toh mazze hai

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Posted: 4 years ago
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You are on a roll!! 😂😂

Excited to read this ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sounds really interesting!!! Likho likho🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Interesting concept, it looks like a fun filled story😊

You have so many stories lined up

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