Marriage Masterplan - A Shivi TS *Part 10 updated in Page 15 on 19/7/2 - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: katheriene

Amazing update😊

What is Shiva's plan

Raavi's concentration is on Shiva after her heartbreak😆

Waiting for next


😂 Shiva is too hot and confused Raavi 😉

Thank you 🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Loved that Raavi's heart is immediately turned away from Dev and all her attention and focus is on Shiva 😆


😂 literally, her heart didn't think about Dev even for a second in this chapter 😉

Thank you for reading 🙏🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice update👍🏼

Why do I feel that Shiva's masterplan is getting married with Raavi?

Will be waiting for the next one

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Swathu

Nice update👍🏼

Why do I feel that Shiva's masterplan is getting married with Raavi?

Will be waiting for the next one

Thank you 🙏🥰 i will try to write soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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dev is long forgotten here🤣

raavi ka mind 😆🤪

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

This is interesting.


Heartbreak ho, tsunami ho ya earthquake.... when Shiva is in her vicinity Raavi looses her sanity. 🤣


Waise, who's Dev ? And does she even remember that she fainted by the shock of heartbreak? 😆


Waiting for the next chapter.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello friends.

I am done writing the fourth part of my TS. I have shared it below. Please look into it and let me know your feedback.


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Part 4:


“Shiva… What are you doing here and who is this girl with you?” Raavi heard Mausi’s stern voice.

She prayed to god to save her by sending some earthquake. She took a side glance at Shiva who is standing there like a stupefied statue. This is not helpful.

“She is…. She is…. Hmph” he stammered and she considered banging his head against some wall.

“Who is she and why you have come early? You have to come with your family, right?” she stacked up her questions. Raavi saw him gulp and rolled her eyes.

“Oye maami! Stop your blah blah… Anyway I have to listen to all these blah blah from your behen ki beti from tomorrow. Let me peacefully live till then.” He snapped.

Seriously? If he wants to scold others also, he would pull her leg only.

“Arrey… my peace has gone already here. I have to send my flower like kid to your zoo like house”

Raavi tried to control her laugh on seeing Shiva gritting his teeth. He glared at her.

“She must have gone mad to choose your brother as her husband. I brought her up, but she got her brains from her dumb father’s side. Paagal ladki!” her Mausi whined.

Raavi frowned. But, Shiva lost it. He is laughing out loud now and it’s her turn to glare. But all her glaring is going waste since he is not looking at her anyway. His eyes are closed and his shoulders are shaking with laughter.

“See… whole Pandya family belongs to mental asylum” mausi sighed. But, Shiva didn’t even acknowledge it and continue to laugh. She rolled her eyes. It’s not even funny. He will do over acting if she is involved. Once she is done with all these, he is going to pay heavily for laughing at her insults. Her thoughts are interrupted when her mausi addressed her.

“Hey girl, who are you?”

This got Shiva’s attention and he looked like a deer caught in headlights.

She didn’t reply and signaled Shiva to somehow cope up this situation.

“What is this nonsense question? She came for marriage, of course” he replied and she exhaled peacefully.

“Okay, but who is she?” Why were you holding her tight earlier? Are you misbehaving with the girls coming to wedding?” she squeaked in dismay. Raavi got shocked and thought whether her mausi has finally gone insane because of her wedding to her enemy family. Does she even think before saying anything? How can she talk ill about Shiva in girls issue? The whole somnath knows that Shiva never talks to girls except her. Dhara di is even worried that he may stay bachelor. But, she is happy. Already, he is not giving her any attention. She doesn’t want any competition. Competition? She is confused and hence to change the subject she decided to look at the subject.

Shiva is shocked to say the least. He is opening and closing his mouth like attempting to say something, but no word is coming out of his mouth. Wow! What a sight? Mighty Shiva is spellbound.

That is my mausi. Scold him more. Her best day had already become worst day. She deserves at least a little fun. Raavi could not help but giggle at Shiva’s position now. Shiva took one glance at her and his expression changed from grimace to vengeance.

He suddenly took her hand and her laughter died in her throat. Why is he holding her hand? He gave her a fake smile and she swallowed hard. OMG! She is certain that Shiva is going into get her into difficulty.

“How dare you? You are misbehaving with my guest in front of me? Leave her or I will…” when Raavi heard her mausi marching towards them, she got afraid that she will get caught and impulsively moved close to Shiva. She only stopped once her head hit his chest.

“Arrey stop maami. Can’t you see she is getting afraid?” For once Shiva rightly judged her action. Please tell her to stop coming closer.

“Yes, she is. Hence,Stop harassing my guests. She got afraid of your behavior” Mausi yelled.

“Does your whole family sell all your brains and eyes in market for the marriage expenses? If she is afraid of me, how come she is hugging me right now?” Raavi blinked. What does he mean by hugging? She is simply standing against him like how people do with walls.

“She is not your guest, but my guest to my brother’s wedding. I came to drop here”, he lied casually. But, this makes sense.

“And to answer why we are holding each other, she is my girlfriend” Raavi eyes widened and she is sure Mausi’s too. This is not at all making sense. Her cheeks have drained all the colors and she became pale like a ghost. Her tiny gasp is silenced by a big gasp from her mausi.

“You have a girlfriend….?” Her mausi asked in an unbelievable voice. Well, she could not blame her. She would not have believed too if this is a different situation.

"Is that so difficult to accept?" he said in a bored voice rolling his eyes.

“Where is she from? You must have brought this girl surely from some mental hospital only. Who in their right mind would marry a kadoos?” her mausi taunted. Raavi is confused as to whether she should feel happy or sad about this. Her mausi is absolutely right, but she is indirectly talking about her. Oh god…

“You are right, maami. She is from the same hospital in which you are staying with your family for years now. In fact who knows you two may even already know each other” he shrugged his shoulders.

How dare he call our lovely home as asylum? Yes, we laugh a lot. But, this is too much… He is going to die in her hands for sure today. She heard a gasp from behind.

“What if I really know her? Perhaps she is a daughter of one of my friends? Poor girl… look at me…” her mausi gently touched her shoulders and tried to turn her. She got terrified and tightly hugged Shiva like her life depends on him.

Shiva smack away her mausi’s hand.

“Arrey… I just want to look at your lovely girlfriend” her maami whined.

“No need. I don’t want any evil eyes to fall upon her” he said mockingly.

“Oh ho… Is she so pretty?” her mausi asked.

“I swear I am currently holding the prettiest girl in the whole somnath” She looked up at his words and found him looking down at her with a proud face. Why he is proud of her? She is not even going to be his bhabi now. Shiva’s timing is very bad.

Their eyes are still locked when she heard her mausi.

“Whatever… nobody is prettier than my charming little daughter” she declared proudly. This brought an instant big smile to her face and Shiva too smiled back. Did she already said anything about his captivating smile?

She blinked and he mirrored. She loosened her hold and moved back a little.

He coughed and looked everywhere but her.

“But, I have to see…” her mausi touched her shoulders again, but Shiva caught her hand instantly.

“Baby… do you want to see my mom’s bangles that I am planning to present you?” he said looking lovely at her. He shook her mausi’s hand before her eyes with a wicked smile and her mausi gasped.

She pulled her hand off from his hold immediately and started running murmuring “Today is my only daughter wedding and I still have so much work to do. I don’t have time for anything… why there is so much dust infront of the mandap? Bharat would come anytime now. Somebody sweep this… ”

When Raavi turned and looked at her mausi’s retreating figure, she could not help but laugh out loud. Shiva grabbed her hand and began pulling her towards the back side of the mandap. He stopped moving, but she could not quit laughing. He rolled her eyes and shook her shoulders.

“Oh laughing maniac! Have you gone mad since your marriage with Dev got stopped?” his words silenced her and then her mausi’s words echoed in her ears ‘Bharat would come anytime now!’ OMG!

“Shiva… What are we going to do? Bharat is going to come.” She clutched his collar and asked in a panick voice.

“Seriously… you remember now? Thank god! Sorry, my princess of Somnath… I didn’t do anything yet” he said in a sarcastic tone and removed her hands from him.

“But, why?” she asked disbelievingly.

“Because some chipkali is not leaving me to do work. She just wants me to tuck her in bed and sing lullaby to her beauty sleep.”, he gave her a fake smile.

She winced. It’s true. She needs to leave him so that he could plan something and stop this impending marriage. She felt like her heart is aching. Not sure, whether it is because her dream marriage with Dev is breaking for real or because Shiva is talking about leaving her. She frowned. Second reason sounds so silly! First one is fare enough, but truth to be told she totally forgot about Dev for some time now. But, how? How could she easily forget about her charming Bahubali? That too in the presence of a brutal ballaladeva?

‘He is not being brutal to you now. Is he?’ her heart asked.

‘Only because he thinks his brother betrayed her and she is going through a heart break’ her mind replied. It added ‘he will flip back tomorrow’

‘But..’ her heart started but interrupted by none other than the subject.

“Thank god Raavi. You used curtain to get down from your room. Now grab it and get back in the same way. Just stay inside without doing any tamasha and I will get back to you soon.” He explained and pushed her towards the hanging curtain near the wall.

She looked up and gulped on seeing how high she has to climb. No way! She could not do this. Did she really jump from her bedroom just hour before? Everyone is right! She is really crazy.

Shiva pushed her again and she turned towards him helplessly.

“How can I climb up, Shiva? Am I looking like a trainee in a police academy?” she pouted.

“No, you are looking like a Icchadhaari Chipkali. Now, use your powers and go up.” He joked.

She rolled her eyes. Because of Dhara di, he is watching too much serials.

“I don’t have time for this. I am leaving. You do whatever you want.” He said gritting his teeth and started leaving.

She got panicked and grabbed his wrist.

“No, don’t go Shiva. What if I fell down? Please stay here for another two minutes. I will climb up soon” she pleaded with puppy eyes and he sighed.

“Okay. Make it fast” he said boringly.

She started climbing up and thanked her mausi for all the training. Her mausi is so strict that she had already done this many times, only this time it’s too high comparing her bedroom window at home. Shiva placed his hands lightly holding her waist for some support and they grazed down her back over the lehenga while she is moving up. His hands reached her feet and then nothing. She stopped in the middle. She felt like something is absent. What is that? Did she leave anything in the auto? Her thoughts halted abruptly when she felt his palms under her feet again. She gasped.

“Are you okay, chipkali? Why you have stopped in the middle?” Raavi peered down after the voice and her breath hitched on seeing the concerned face gazing toward her.

She doesn’t even want to think about what she had been missing. She shook her head and climbed up fast. If she had gone to police selection, she might have passed with flying colors. She exhaled only when she fell into her bedroom via window. She is taking heavy breaths when she heard a faint voice.

“Are you okay? Any problem there?”

She is lost for words and hence, kept mum.

“Raavi…?” the same voice with added dose of concern. She does’t want him to worry more and hence peeked from the window and showed a thumps up.

He mirrored it and smiled widely. OMG! Why ballaladeva is freaking handsome???


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Well, how is it? I hope you all like it. Thanks in advance 😃


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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Maami is on the verge of a heart attack 🤣

Their scene was too funny 😆

How is this wedding going to be stopped? 😲

Update soon!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Hilarious update🤣

Shiva and Maami together are epic🤣

The kangan also made an appearance😆

Raavi already forgotten Dev, Shiva is her bhalladev🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Its amazing..pl update soon

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