lets make horror story

hi guys

yar actually i have read this topic in one of other forums and i found it really interesting ,it was something that i will start a story and every one who read it ,will write the story ahead and in that we all will try to make a story ,u can add humour in that but dont distract the story ,at the end of the day it should look like a complete horror story . one more request i want to made here is that ,plzzz dont quit it so early .....try to add maximum incidents in it, to move story ahead .....and at the end when it will complete ......we will poll that who was good in writing story ......so guys what do u think about this idean.......do tell me and above all i need ur serious effort in it.....the other point i want to clear is tha it should be in urdu as, me myself and i think some members r not very good in english ,so we wil try to narrate it in urdu

so i m starting it now

meri shaadi ek aise shakhs se meri marzi k baghair kar d gae jis k bare mei, mei us k naam se zayada kuch nehi jantee thee
wo ajnabee tha, lekin us k harkaat us se bhee zyada ajnabee thee,wo aur mardo se bohat mukhtalif tha ,har waqt hata k hamari suhaag raat ko bhee wo mujhe soonay ka keh kar ek dusre room mei chala gaya ......khud mujhe bhee shayad abhee kuch waqt chaheye tha is liye mei ne is baat par zayada gour nehi kiya .....lekin akhir kab tak pure teen maheenay tak jab use meri zaat mei dilchasbeee na huee tu is baat ne ab mujhe sochnay par majboor kar diya k akhir agar yah shaks mujhe mei interested nehi tha tu is ne mujhe se shaadi hee kyu k................baat yehi tak hotee tu theek tha lekin mei ne kaha na k us k kuch harkaat bohat ajeeb thee wo sara sara din darwaza band kar ka pata nehi kya karta rehta tha........lekin ek raat wo meray paass aya aur us nay apni kampati awaz mei kaha k
''meray baad agar tumhei koee masla ho tou tum is kitab se madad lena''
mei kuch samjh nehi paee wo kitaab mujhe dikhanay k baad apnay saath hee lay gaya ........kabhi kabhi tu wo shaks mujhe pagal lagta tha......us se aglay roz jab mei uthee tu mujhe wo kahee nazar na aya ....mujhe kise unhoni ka ehsaas hua aur mei us kamray mei dakhil ho gaye jis meius ne mujhe kabhi dakhil nahei honay diya.......aur kash mei ab bhee us kamry mei na jatte ......kynk waha us k lash padhee thee aur kamray k fiza ajeeb holnak ho rahee thee......mujhe sirf itna yaad hai k mei cheekh marr ka behoush ho gaye ..aur jab mei uthee tu .........

sorry taurean..i would hav definitely replied but my urdu isnt gud enuff to write a story..sorry

Taureen mujhe samaj nahi aarahi hei ke woh ajnabee kaun hei ek sapna ta ya phir real mein ta kyu ki last sentence mein app neh likha ke mujhe sirf itna yaad hai k mei cheekh marr ka behoush ho gaye ..aur jab mei uthee tu ......... tou is ka matlab kya huwa ke woh real hei ya eh bura khuwab ta likhna chati hu mein kuch lol par mein samji nahi warna zaroor kuch likhti bilkul scary 😆 😆 aur haan suhc mein bht hi achi idea hei

wow!! nice topic taurean ... actually this is my fav topic since i just prefer watching/reading horror stuff! 😳 ..btw why did u wrote "suhag raat" 😕

omg taurean kiya yeh waqay main hua hai ke sirf story hai yeh muhje samahj nahi ayi 😕

oh i love horror toooo much yeah is really good topic 😉

guys its not true story , i m just writing it for the sake of fun and thats it,fiza i wrote 'suhag raat'
bcos i dont know urdu mei ise kya kahe gaye
chalo yun kar lo shaadi ki raat
sairah yar its not nightmare ,it happens and when she woke up shee sees u have to write ahead anything u like
i mean u have to take story forward
and i want every member to write
ok i m moving story ahead and then u ppl start where i left
theek hai

us ne apne gird bohat se logo ko dekha , ye wo log thay jo us kay shohar k maut par us ka saath ronay aye thay ....us k bohat say apnay chehray bhee yahi thay...us k ma baap k chehray aur us k behan bhai jinhono usey ek bhoj samjhte hue ....us ki shadi kar di
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