Beqaraar Dil ~ TalRosh TS | Part 3 (Last) - Pg 9 - Page 2

Omggg This is such a beautiful piece of writing

Loved it so so very much. Talha buying his aayat the wedding ring..ooh has my heart you penned it down beautifully. Loved every bit of it.

Yup now with only two episodes left we will not get all the scenes, I'm so glad you penned this bit down. In my head and imagination now this is exactly what buying her the ring scene would look like

Do write more. You are gifted.

Much love

Prachi

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Awwww... Mr. And Mrs. Talha....

Though I feel Roshi has every right to be upset over the past rejection, but she's being outright brat, doing everything opposite that Talha would like.

I like Talha here. Yes, he's head over heels in love... But he's got the traces of that authoritative boss, who knows to get things done out of her which is necessary.

I loved their Tom and Jerry kinda bantership...

This was an amazing read Mrina. I loved reading it. Thank you for writing....

Thank you so much for your lovely comments, Aazeen.

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it. Yes, I was honestly missing the "boss" Talha so thought of incorporating subtle hints of him along with our favourite pookie Talha.

Love ya dost. Now you should write something soon.

Originally posted by: serena_shadow

oh i just love this so beautifully writtenMujhe toh aur padhne ka maann hai pls next part jaldi se post kro i cant wait to readjoh episode mei nai mila yha meine yeh padh ke imagine kar liya ...feeling so good after reading it

Thank you thank you! I'm so glad you loved it so much.

Hahaha, I am not planning on continuing this one but I will probably write a longer story once the show is over. I can then work on a lot of miss opportunities and scenes that could have been.

Originally posted by: mesravz

Very well written, Mr mature need everything on his plate served after spilling raitha

Thank you so much! Mr. Mature has his ways.

Originally posted by: NINALOGY

Soo cute

Beautifully written

I wish yeh sab show main bhi dekhaty

Thank you so much my pyaari Ninu!

I wish too but that's why I ended up writing this.

Originally posted by: itsShonali

This was amazing! I love that Roshi hasn't forgiven Sir Talha and that he's doing his best to coax her. They are so cute

Thank you so much Shonali.

Yes, there has to be angst and turmoil to ensure that the reunion is beautiful.

Originally posted by: Pori

this was BEAUTIFULLY written!!

It flowed efficiently with what was aired (I yet have to watch tonight’s episode, but I’m saving it) lol

Absolutely loved the casual, carefree Talha and off-beat, edgy Ayaat.

Well done

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

Did you watch the episode yet?

Originally posted by: sharadrocks

Beautifully written ….completely in sync with the dynamic of the show and yet taking it forward and showing how much more could’ve been done ..,thank you for showing us a glimpse of how the ring came to be on Roshi’s finger

Awww, Thanks so much. Yes, I kept looking at Roshi's ring and they never kinda justified it. I'm glad I could give you a glimpse on what I imagined.

Originally posted by: pyar-ishk

Once I started reading I couldn't stop. You capture them so well that if they didn't show Talha in that Alpha roop, I'll think writing about someone else not Talha. Roshi was capture so well, on her love for Talha and conflict of the past. Talha loves claiming Roshi, kash if we had a ring scene as you describe and will be a big moment.

Love Love Love and didn't want it to end

Thanks for the invite

Thank you so much for such lovely comments.

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it and yes, that ring scene is something I really wanted. They had to justify the wedding ring on her finger.

Originally posted by: mysticltales111

Omggg This is such a beautiful piece of writing

Loved it so so very much. Talha buying his aayat the wedding ring..ooh has my heart you penned it down beautifully. Loved every bit of it.

Yup now with only two episodes left we will not get all the scenes, I'm so glad you penned this bit down. In my head and imagination now this is exactly what buying her the ring scene would look like

Do write more. You are gifted.

Much love

Prachi

Hi Prachi, Thank you so much for your kind comments. I'm so happy to see that you enjoyed reading the story and were able to imagine it.

I have been writing for quite a while on different couples and this was my first attempt on TalRosh. It came easy so I think I will definitely write more on them.