Asfi Zubiya |Shaadi Mubarak: The Wedding Story| Chapter 10 on Pg 12 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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OMG so beautiful, 👏you really write so well ! Absolutely amazing, loved it so much, It really made me happy reading about their wedding.. I can not wait for the next part, please update soon..
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Thank you so much for writing this OS.🤗
Drama me shadi nahi milegi bas yehi read kar k khush ho rahe ha 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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ehhp this was beautiful.
The way you portrayed Zubi's insecurities is amazing!❤️
Their relationship dynamic is so special and divine.
Looking forward to next update 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks so much for all your response guys! I hope I can live up to your expectations in the future too, lots of love and gratitude to you all
Keep reading and supporting :)
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Chapter 4

It had been a such a tiring day for Zubiya. Guests after guests had been coming for her mayoon/uptan function at Dr. Asifa's place. It was a ladies function which was kept fairly simple on Zubiya's insistence. She didn't want every function to be held on a large scale, because the wedding was anyway going to be a grand event. The guests had started coming in at around 12, and by the time they all left, it was 3 in the afternoon. She still hadn't washed off all the uptan that the ladies had applied on her. Most of it had dried on her skin, and she knew she would have to struggle with soap and water to get it off.

Lubna Aunty had especially come up to her during the function and explained something.

"Zubiya beta, aaj ka function itna important iss liye hai, kyunke iss ke baad tum officially Mayoon ki dulhan hogi. Puraane zamane main tou iss rasam ki itni importance hoti thi ke dulhanon ko mayon ke baad se kuch bhi karna allowed nahi hota tha. Mujhe pata hai aaj kal society has progressed a lot, but there's something you should know-"

'Mama ke kehne ka matlab ye hai ke ab tum shaadi ke din tak Asfi se nahi mil sakti," Gaiti interrupted, her face glowing with humour.

"Gaiti, tum meri nayi bahu ko tang mat karo," Lubna Aunty said while lightly hugging Zubiya.

"Mama main tou sirf bata rahi thi," Gaiti replied innocently.

"Aunty aap fikar na karein, hum log nahi milenge," Zubiya managed to say, her face crimson with embarrassment.

"Aisay waaday na karo jo poore karna mushkil hojaye," Gaiti whispered in Zubiya's ear.

Zubiya was glad that they were on leave from the hospital, or else it would really have become difficult to stay away from Asfi.

"Zubiya, Dr. Shehroze and I are going to the hospital to discuss a case with Dr. Haroon. You look really tired, I think you should rest for a while," Dr. Asifa interrupted Zubiya's thoughts while walking into her room.

"No no, I'm fine. I hope everything is going well at the hospital," Zubiya replied with some concern.

"Oh yes, you don't need to worry about it at all. You and Asfand deserve this break so much, I wish you guys had agreed to a couple of more days."

"Aray nahi nahi. You know we like working at the hospital, so it's not a burden at all," Zubiya explained.

"Okay then, we'll be back by late evening, and then we can celebrate your last night here at our house," Dr. Asifa smiled at her.

Zubiya had had many moments of realisation in the past couple of days. She kept telling herself that it was finally happening. Her once scattered, helpless life was now coming together. And most of all, she was happy about it. Sometimes she felt she didn't have enough words to thank God. It was their wedding tomorrow. She would finally be his wife. Perhaps a few months ago, if someone had questioned her about marriage, she would've reacted in the most harsh of ways. But this was her, the same Zubiya, who was more than looking forward to this new phase of her life.

As she heard the front door close, she got up and dragged herself to the kitchen. She needed some caffeine in her system. She filled a kettle with water and set it on the stove. Some trays of uptan, mehendi, flowers and mithai were still lying on the kitchen counter. She decided to organise them neatly while the water boiled.

Holding a bowl of uptan, she was levelling it down with a spoon when she felt a large hand circling around her waist and settling on her stomach. Her heart almost stopped beating as she struggled against the hold, trying to turn around.

"Sshh," he whispered, his mouth next to her ear. "It's me."

"Oh God. You scared the hell out of me," she exclaimed. "The next time you decide to break in, please take a moment and inform me in advance. Warna mujhe heart attack hojayga"

"Poori dunya ke logon ne aa ke tumhe uptan lagaya aaj. Tou mein kese peeche reh sakta tha? Mujhe tou aana hi tha na," Asfi said.

"Aapko pata hai, Aunty ne kaha hai ke hum kal se pehle nahi mil sakte. It's a ritual. Aur main ne unko promise kiya tha ke main aap se nahi milungi. Aap ne mera promise break karwa dia."

He was still holding her, her back against his front.

"Lekin iss ki responsibility tumhare upar thori aaygi. Main aaya hun na. I'll be responsible," he told her.

"Aap hamesha yahi kehte hain. Last time bhi aap ne kaha tha ke 'I'll handle it!' Lekin uss ke baad Gaiti Bhabi ki itni saari teasing ke sath mujhe deal karna para tha."

"Iss dafa tou Gaiti Bhabi ko bhi nahi pata chalega ke hum mile hain," he chuckled.

"Waisay aap andar kaise aaye? Without ringing the bell?" She asked.

"Dr. Shehroze apne ghar ki spare keys ka ek set meray paas rakhwate hain."

"Wah wah. Aur aap un keys ka in cheezon ke liye istimal karte hain," she shook her head while tilting it backwards.

"Madam, ye bohat important cheezain hain," he commented.

She was wearing a pale yellow short-sleeved kameez with a patiala shalwar. Her hair was left loose, albeit slightly messed up now after the event.

He glanced at the uptan bowl she had been working on. And immediately his gaze fell on her arms and face laden with uptan. Most of it had dried out now, remnants of it clinging on to her skin.

His hand slowly went to the bowl, his fingers dipping in and scraping out some of it.

"Ye kia kar rahe hain aap?" She asked.

Not answering her question, Asfi's hand came to her neck, and he began to smooth out the uptan on her skin in devilish motion.

He was staring directly into her eyes, his eyes fiery and unblinking. Zubiya gasped, unable to breath. Her hand touched his, attempting to stop him. But it seemed like he was in another world. His hands teasingly smothered the uptan on her neck. The chilly temperature of his fingers seeped through the layer of uptan, touching her skin and sending currents of adrenaline gushing around her system. Her mind was turning dizzy, as if she was under the effect of some drug.

The sound of the boiling water alerted them, and Zubiya broke away from him to turn off the stove. She set the kettle aside, taking a dreadfully long time to make her cup of coffee.

He was leaning against the kitchen counter, studying her carefully. He knew she was nervous around him, her usually measured movements seemed relatively shaky right now. He went ahead and steadied her hands.

"Calm down, Zubiya, it's okay," he said softly. "I had no idea ke 2017 main bhi larkiyan iss tarah sharmati hain"

"Main sharma tou nahi rahi thi, bas aise hi," she said.

Keeping an arm around her shoulders, he carelessly began to play with strands of her hair. He twisted them around while she stirred her coffee.

"Aapko kisi se bhi dar nahi lagta na, agar Dr. Shehroze aur Dr. Asifa aagaye tou kia hoga?" She asked.

"Thora dar tou lagta hai, lekin when I think of meeting you, tou woh sara dar face karna bhi worth it lagne lagta hai," he explained.

"Har baat ka jawab hota hai aap ke paas," she told him. "Lekin ab aap jaye, we're not supposed to be meeting anyway."

"Tou I guess ab main tumhe kal Nikah ke waqt hi dekhunga."

"Yeah, but not if you find another way to sneak in and secretly meet me," she smiled at him.

"Ab tou main poori koshish karunga," he laughed.

Running the back of his hand across her cheek, he felt the smoothness of her skin. Slowly reaching her lower lip, he ran his thumb across it. Her eyes closed in the moment and she sent a silent prayer to God, asking him to not let her faint out of nervousness.

Lightly touching his lips to her cheek, he placed a soft kiss.

"Kal milte hain," he whispered.

And he was gone.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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😳Breathtaking, so beautiful, I am totally dead☺️ beautiful update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks soo much guys! It really means a lot :))
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It was beautiful & hot☺️ expecting some ludo star in next parts ☺️ 😆
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Originally posted by: .Anya.

It was beautiful & hot☺️ expecting some ludo star in next parts ☺️ 😆


Hahahaha I'll try my best! Thankss
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 5
A sharp ring of Zubiya's phone woke her up with a start. She glanced at the wall clock before checking her phone, it was 10 already, she had definitely overslept. Looking down at her phone, she saw Asfi's name flash across the screen.

"Assalamualaikum," she greeted.

"Walaikumsalam," he replied, "kaisi hain aap?"

"Main tou theek hun, lekin I wish aap ne thori dair pehle call karli hoti. Main abhi aapki call se uthi," she told him.

"Oho, tou madam apni shaadi ke din oversleep kar gayi? Shaadi ke baad over sleep karti tou baat samajh bhi aati," he chuckled.

"Allah! Wesay shaadi ke baad bhi oversleep karne ka mauqa nai milega. Hospital jana hoga na."

"Achaa, tou matlab tum oversleep karne ko look forward kar rahi ho, aur oversleep karne ki wajah ko bhi," he teased.

She heard a knock at the door.

"Acha Asfand, main aap se baad main baat karti hun, darwaaze pe koi hai," she quickly told him.

"Jao jao, kal se main bhi dekhta hun mujh se door kaise rehti ho," he laughed.

Opening the door, she saw Dr. Asifa standing with a large sized package in her arms.

"Mubarak ho Zubiya, tumhare sasural se Nikah aur Shaadi ke joray aagaye," Dr. Asifa said cheerfully. "I hope you slept well last night, because aaj ka din bohat hectic hone wala hai. Nikah ke liye sab 3 bajay tak aajaynge. And then raat ko rukhsati ka function."

"Honestly Dr. Asifa, mujhe tou soch soch ke dar lag raha hai ke sab kuch pata nahi kaise hoga. Agar main kuch bhool jaun tou please remind me," her voice was filled with concern.

"Aray don't worry Zubiya, hum sab hain yahan. Everything will be perfect. Tum bas iss waqt ko enjoy karo," Dr. Asifa said in a consoling manner. "Acha suno, mujhe bahar kuch arrangements check karne hain, tum ek kaam karo, check the clothes and see if everything is in order."

"Ji ji. Thank you so much, I'll just check them."

After she had opened the package, taken out every piece of clothing, and was silently stunned at how beautiful the clothes had turned out to be, she started organising them in a pile. Lubna Aunty and Gaiti had made Zubiya select all her wedding clothes, and Zubiya being herself, had gone with colourful, yet simple shades and designs. But she hadn't expected her choice to turn out so breathtakingly beautiful.

As she picked up a set of bangles to try on, a piece of paper fell out on the floor. She reached down to pick it up, expecting to find a tailor's receipt. She smiled as she recognised a familiar handwriting on the paper:

'Mama and Bhabi forbade me to see the clothes that you'll be wearing in both of today's functions. They said they want it to be a surprise for me when I see you wearing them. How could I have told them that seeing you in them, dressed as a bride, would anyway have been a surprise, irrespective of seeing them before or not. But I listened to them and am sneaking away this note into the package they're sending for you.
And just to let you know, I have this glorious, exquisite image of you in my head, as my bride. But I know for sure, the real you will bowl over my imagination. You always do.
Love,
Asfand.'

****

Asfandyar stood in front of the mirror folding the sleeves of his Kurta. He was wearing a plain creamy kurta for the Nikah, his hair freshly cut and smoothed out after a shower. His room had already been set up for Zubiya's arrival. Her stuff had been brought over to his house and kept in his room. The usually empty room now seemed to come alive with her colourful clothes in the cupboard, her accessories and cosmetics on the dresser and her shoes lined against the wardrobe. Gaiti had insisted on placing a flowery bedspread on the bed, however Asfi had stuck to his usual blues and greys. He said Zubiya could come and make those changes herself if she felt the need.

"Asfi beta jaldi karo, everyone is ready to leave," his father said entering his room.

"Ji baba, main bilkul ready hun"

****

Dr. Shehroze and Dr. Asifa's garden was set up with white tables and chairs, with a large white tent covering the area. Fresh orchids were used to bring the setting alive, yet making it look serene and peaceful. They had specifically followed a white coloured theme, in attempt to compliment the broad daylight.

As soon as Asfi's family reached their place, the elders got busy with finalising the legal requirements of the Nikah paperwork. Asfi was seated on a plain white sofa on a slightly elevated stage. He would never have imagined himself to feel so jittery and nervous before his own Nikah. But the truth was, he felt a mixture of emotions. Happiness was obviously at its highest peak, but the thought of seeing Zubiya as his wife for the first time felt surreal. He may have pictured this day in his mind numerous times, but watching it come alive was another experience altogether.

On the other side of the stage, they had set up a kind of seating corner. That is where the Nikah would take place. A chiffon curtain sprayed with tiny silver sequences was used to separate the area. Zubiya on one side, and Asfi on the other. When Asfi was called to be seated in his place, Zubiya was already sitting on the other side. He couldn't see much through the curtain, except for an outline of a figure dressed in white.

As the Nikah began, all the guests surrounded the bride and groom, the men on Asfi's side of the curtain and the women on Zubiya's side. Everyone had raised their hands in prayer, asking for Allah's mercy and blessings for the couple to be.

Papers were signed, consent was taken, prayers were recited. And they were pronounced husband and wife.

The curtain separating them dramatically dropped when the Nikah was completed. Zubiya was surrounded by a group of ladies, all of them taking turns to hug and congratulate her. The same going on on Asfi's side too. When he had met everyone, Asfi finally dared to glance at his wife. There still seemed to be a commotion near the bride. He saw Gaiti Bhabi sitting next to Zubiya, with an arm around her. It seemed like she was consoling her. Zubiya looked ethereal in a plain white jora, laden with silver embroidery and sequence work. Curled edges of her hair peeked through her dupatta, and her dull gold jhumkas glinted in the evening light. When their eyes eventually met, he saw a film of tears glistening in her eyes. It seemed like she was controlling herself, telling herself to be strong. She smiled at him through her tears, a warm, heart - wrenching smile.

"Asfi, Zubiya, chalo aao sath beth jao," his mom told them.

They were both guided to the sofa, people still surrounding them all over. As they sat down together, the side of Asfi's knees touched Zubiya's. Their first contact after the Nikah, strong and overpowering.

"Mubarak ho, Mrs. Asfandyar," he whispered to her.





To be continued...

So guys, no matter how much I tried I was unable to do complete justice to these potentially beautiful scenes of Asfi and Zubiya's Nikah. I still hope you'll enjoy the chapter! Looking forward to lots of feedback, and criticism is always welcome :)
Lots of love to all
Enjoyyy!!

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