OS: ASFIYA Wedding Night #YakeenKaSafar Updated 6/10/17

Aazeen02

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kayalover

No problem dear
I know its difficult to carry on with whole story...i am just asking out of curosity
Do write when you feel free whatever it is...🤗
Good to know about your whereabouts😛

Thanks for understanding...

And where are you from?

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: SanFrangirl
Since you asked for ideas, I want to know what happened after the roadside meeting, what happened after that Faryal ki wajah se? dialogue. That incident is so incomplete. Thats literally the BIG admission and I cant figure out how the director leapt from there to the reluctance in of Zubiya to come to the party and YET her total composure on meeting Asfi at the party. Can you use your lovely imagination?
Secondly, one feels so strongly for Asfi's family that one wants to know how happy they were when they came to know about them . I guess that would be before these two lovebirds went on that walk.

I am so looking forward to your thoughts :)

Your ideas are phenomenal dear... And after thinking, I think I can write on this also...

But there's a little reminder that it will be my take and the writer might not have thought so or would take a different turn in the show... Obviously, I am nowhere near or any way FI... So my take it will be...Is that ok for you?

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: octaverider

This!

Okay, done!

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Thanks for understanding...
And where are you from?

No need to thanks

And i am from Lahore, Pakistan

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aazeen02
Thanks for understanding...
And where are you from?

No need to say thanks

And i am from Lahore, Pakistan

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Originally posted by: Kayalover

No need to say thanks
And i am from Lahore, Pakistan

Good to know that...😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Briyanikidaig
Loving the update dear

Oh did you read it another time?

Btw, whats ur name?

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Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-
this was so beautiful!

Thank you so much...

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Originally posted by: .tiNNi.
really beautiful..

Thank you very much...

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Maria

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Posted: 7 years ago

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You have totally blew me away to another level of Asfiya land! Beyond magical I don't have any words... You write so beautifully... and those dialogues are totally fitting their characters! 😳

You have totally made my day!

Are you planning to write more? AWWW plz do! 😳

Words fail to describe my feelings, really sorry! 😕😆

Thank you for sharing this masterpiece! 🤗

Love,

Maria

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