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Hello Everyone, Due to shift of place.. I haven't been much active these days so just thought of coming up with an SS. Well, i am not that good in writing but just gave it a try so I hope you people like it. Guys, appreciations and criticisms..both are welcome so please do leave back your reviews. I will continue it only if you all want me to or else will not bother you all with it.


CHAPTER 1
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Roshni woke up after what seemed like an eternal sleep. Her head felt heavily intoxicated, as her eyes merely justified her vision but when it did... Her mouth flunged open. There HE was with that killer smirk which once upon a time made her drool over but today it was scaring her or rather say PETRIFYING HER.


Gauti walked up to her while she backed off until her back hit the wall and His taut chest trapped her in admist himself and that wall.

"What the hell Gauti! Let me go..", sheepishly she said

"Why Roshni..do you hate me also..am I too included in that list of REVENGE??", His voice grew huskier.. Gauti traced her jawline with his finger sending shiver down her spine while Roshni once again felt like loosing herself in those hazel coloured alluring eyes.

ROSH'S POV

O GOD Gauti, how do i tell you that you were never a part of it, and that you can never be also. I know which i had thought to be LOVE at the first place was not that but a mere INFACTUATION yet I still care the same for you. Only if you could understand..


!!!

They were still looking at each other while there eyes spoke when suddenly the door opened ajar. Gauri and the gang walked in, making Roshni gasp in terror.

The gang had investigated out the chip which had all the terrible confessions. And Now There was no way Roshni could get out of it..."so thats the reason am here", rosh thought," everything is over, Am sorry Neha di.. I couldn't avenge ur death. I have lost..lost with these brutual murderers.. Ho sake toh iss chooze (mice) ko maaf kar dena."

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Nikhil had been trying to call Roshni for past five hrs since his return to his room which was all messed up and Before he could dial her once again, someone hugged him from back.

" Oh God Shivani, NOT NOW please, chooza apna phone nahi utha rahi hai. I am really worried yaar so just cut it out ok.", he yelled at her.

This was too much. Shivani knew that Nikhil loved Roshni but Roshni didn't. Nikhil was always just a friend for Roshni then why on Earth this guy was not getting It. Why couldn't he see the love for him in her eyes.

Shivani grabbed him by his collar," Roshni.. Roshni.. Roshni. I toh have NO IMPORTANCE in your life na Nikhil.", her body shuddered in anger.

Nikhil threw her hands roughly down his collar, making her collapse in the bed which was inches away...," I said NOT NOW SHIVANI, Am going to look for Roshni, so You just stay here OK and if she comes just let me know. Understand!"... With that Nikhil walked off leaving a shattered Shivani..," i understood Nikhil..but i guess YOU NEVER UNDERSTOOD my feelings..my love for you.", shivani spoke through her tears,covering her face with her palms.

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Here the Paanch had trapped their prey..

"So Roshni k. Siddharth...oops i mean Roshni kataria.. You hate me right..", Gauri spoke confidently.. " Very well planned Revenge Sweetheart..but just Well planned NOT Well Played."

Roshni's eyes were filled by now, all her dreams had come crashing down and the reasons for this were here laughing at her helplessness. Oh how much she wish that she could just stand and smack that devilish grin from that Nihaal and Roy's face who had so selfishly exploited her Neha di and For Zara, she just felt like slapping her(ZARA) until She (ZARA) realised how much it pains to go through torture. Roshni threw her most shrewd disgusting look at them making Zara fist her hair.." Read My Lips Roshni kataria.. You destroyed our career..isn't? Now you will see how WE RUIN your life."

All this while, Gauti had been looking at her. He couldn't believe he was letting Roshni, whom he so fondly considered HIS ROSHNI, to go through all this but This was the way she had choosen for herself. Pain, remorse and anguish were terrifically visible in his eyes. Since no longer being able to watch it, he just interrupted , " Stop it Zara and leave her."



Roy and Nihaal chuckled at his antics as kharbanda spoke.."tsk..tsk..tsk baby brother ko gussa aa rha hai?" he came beside Gauti," where had this anger gone little brother when this little piece of dirt was using and betraying your own sister for her so called Revenge.. Speak Gauti what shall WE do with your this lady love??"

Gauti had it enough,anymore of this could now result in his breakdown front of everyone.. He just went to Gauri and caught her hand in his," please Gauri! For the last time, if I have ever meant something to you then please just let her go."



Gauri was dumbfounded, never in her life had she seen her brother so emotionally drained...

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HappyST thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow... nice ...loved it. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: TasrinS

Wow... nice ...loved it. Continue soon.

Thanks Samima!

Will surely continue soon if response is better . For future updates, plz do accept my buddy request.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nash di
awsm starting yar
eagerly waiting for next
btw it is rohil or tashi?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyatode1

hey nash di

awsm starting yar
eagerly waiting for next
btw it is rohil or tashi?

Hello Shreya!

Thank you so much.(but i can't see your like..did u really like it??lolz )

Will update soon baccha btw it is based on the whole of cast, you will know it once the story proceeds..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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opps di
cmnt karneke chakkar me like karna bhul ga😳i thi bt ab kar diya😃
waiting eagerly for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot
Edited by Nash.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreyatode1

opps di

cmnt karneke chakkar me like karna bhul ga😳i thi bt ab kar diya😃
waiting eagerly for next

Never mind sweety. It happens. Will update surely if i get little more likes
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome dii!!...
plzz cont. soon!!

n plzz pm me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww baby sister! Will surely update by tonight. 🤗

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