Kanda Naal Mudhalaai - Completed

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Getting inspired by nallu,usha,anju,giri,sri,roja akka & all other writers.....i thot of doing this visha paritchai......i dun no whether u guyz like it or not....but feel free to comment on it....i need all u'r suggestions.......😃

Kanda Naal Mudhalaai

Lead Characters: Raja & Sanjana (sidharth as Raja & genelia as Sanjana,just 4 u guyz 2 relate 2 the story)

episode 1:

sanjana is living in a joint family with her appa,amma,thaatha,paati,chithappa & her small sister ranjani.

she just entered her teens & her harmonal changes started playing in her life ;one day her family took her to her chithapa's betrothel....her chithi lukd cute & chithi's brother luked smart & handsome & she gets attracted 2 him in the first sight.....everybody is busy doing something in the function...she z following him knowingly or unknowingly......he didn't bother to luk at her bcoz he was extremely busy....she was asking her aunt who the guy was...her aunt said he is Raja,u'r new chithi's brother & u'r mama.......mama echoed in her ears many times.....😳

After 1 week,they all visited her place......maapillai veedu paarkum formality....she was excited,dressed well & was waiting.........ellarum gindal pandraanga avalai.....unakku thaan aduthu kalyanam sanjuma namma veetula,ippove school'ai vittu niruthittu pannidalaamanu sollikittu maaminga ellam sirikraanga......avalukku manadhukkul pattampoochi parakudhu.....andha nimisham Raja veetu car ellam vandhu veetu vaasalla nikkidhu..........avalukku odi poyi munnadi nikkanumnu aasai aanaal veetil ellarum irukraanga...enna ninaipanganu bayam.

Raja voda parents & relatives ellarum vandhirundhanga.....anaal Raja varavillai.....avalukku periya emaatram...enna aunty chithi varaliya avangakooda yaaru iruppa,thaniyava irukraanganu Rajovoda ammakitta maraimugama visarikra......illaima Raja ku 12th public exams nadandirukku avan irukaan unga chithi koodanu solldraanga...........oho avan 12 th padikraan naan 7th padikiren....5yrs difference....okay okaynu manam kanakidudhu.,

school pora,vara,ellame usuala irukku but thanimaila,thookathilanu avanadhu ninaipu vandu pogudhu.....avan ennai parkave illai naam en thavikanumnu.......ninaikum podhe...avaladhu annual exams varave...she had 2 concentrate on her studies& she did her exams quite well.

Summer holiday's la kalyanam shopping,paati veetukku poradhunu vodiduchu...........she scored well & entered 8th std & her chithapa's wedding day neared.

school'ku 1 week mattam....kalyanathunala.......ponnu veetula kalyanam....maapillai veetu karanga ellarukum hotel room potirundhanga.....arrangements ellam paarthutte....comfortable'a irukkanu check panna Raja vandhu ivaladhu room'la visarika vandhapo......paati,thatha,athai,mama ellarum irundhaanga...vaapa Raja...nalla 1st class pass panniyirukka polirukke...ennapa sendhirukka appadinu visarika....engineering serndhirukirenu solla.....enga pethi sanju kooda nalla padippa...eppavum school 1st thaanu perumaiya sollikite...paarudi Raja madhiri nalla mark vaangi engineering seranum neeyumnu solla....appo thaan avalai mudhalai formala introduce pandraanga

sarinu sollittu Raja kilamba,sanjuvoda athai....Raja konjam Sanjuvai kalyana mandabathil vittudriya paa....avunga amma vara solliyirukanga avalainu ketka....kandipa,vaanga sanjunu avan koopida.....avalukku oru pakkam sandosham marupakkam tension.naan eppadi athainu aval solla unakku maaman murai thaandi Raja,chumma bayapudama ponu solla.......romba embarassing'a irundadhu avalukku.

TBC

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oooooooooh!!!Puppy love!Kalakreenga Ambi.I'm enjoying that 'Nayyandithanam'that runs through your story telling.Way to go Ambi.Waiting to know what happens next.I've always thought that you should write ff.Now i'm happy that you have come up with one. 👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: GGG3

Oooooooooh!!!Puppy love!Kalakreenga Ambi.I'm enjoying that 'Nayyandithanam'that runs through your story telling.Way to go Ambi.Waiting to know what happens next.I've always thought that you should write ff.Now i'm happy that you have come up with one. 👍🏼

thanx a lot gg......😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ambi besh besh, very good start pa.. Next part please 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vani19

Ambi besh besh, very good start pa.. Next part please 😃

Thanx vani..😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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episode 2:

Kanda naal muthalai kathal peruguthadi
Kanda naal muthalai kathal peruguthadi
Kanda naal muthalai kathal peruguthadi
Kaiyinil vel piditha karuna siva balanai
Kanda naal muthalai kathal peruguthadi
Kaiyinil vel piditha karuna siva balanai
Kanda naal muthalai kathal peruguthadi
Kaiyinil vel piditha karuna siva balanai
Kanda naal muthalai kathal peruguthadi .........
Sanjana manadhukkul munumunuthaal indha varigalai....☺️

rombave tensionai avan kooda nadandhaal......Sanjana,enna romba quieta irukeenga,i heard u're a talkative gal..........aiyyoda yaaru adhukulla nam image'ai spoil pannadhunu ninaichikittu....who said i'm talkative 2 u😉....u'r sister Ranjani told me when i meet her in mandap,she is a sweet gal.......

sweet gal echoing in her mind........Sanju what are u dreaming?asked Raja.....no no nothing........then talk to me......oh sure......how much did u score in u'r 12th?(mind voice: romba mukiyam ippo,ennadi sanju nee ippadi sodhapranu avalaiye kadinjikura😡)

1178/1200........oh god,romba padipsa neenga.....yaen neenga illaiya.....yeah yeah,me too😳 enna group B.E'la....computer science....okay okay.u wait here sanju,i'll go & get my car....okay mama....enna sonna...adhu vandhu neenga mamanu athai sonnanga,vendaamna.....avalukku vore kularal.....illai illai...nobody ever called me like this....i like it.appada,vera yaarum sakkalathi illai....aana indha Ranjaniyai konjam correct pannanum.

car'la 2 perum ....konjam nerathuku silent'a irundhaanga appuram....he asked her nee enna padikra......i'm in 8th std this year.....nee romba chinna ponnu but paartha theriyalaiye....enna mama gindala....paartha eppadi theriyudhu.....illai illai kovichikaadha....partha oru 9th 10th std maadhiri irukkanu sonnen........naan enga appa madhiri uyaram,adhunaala ungalukku appadi thonudhunu solla...okay okay,don't get upset......u luk beautiful though'nu avan solla....avalukku thalai kaal puriyalai.....avan avaladhu sandoshathaiyum,vetkathaiyum☺️ ora kannaal notamitaan.

aval thannai normal aakikittu,innum evlo dhooram mandabam,ennai voorai suthi kaatreengala illai correct'a kootittu poreengalanu ketka....unnai kadathittu poyidlaamnu irukken,unakenna abipraayamnu avan avalai seendinaan.....ponga mamanu aval sinunginaal😳

innum 5 mins thaan avan solla......appadiyae thookittu ponaal kooda okay thaan manadhukkul ninaithaal.mandapathukul car nulaiyum podhey 2 perukum aiyyo vanduduchenu oru sad look parimaatram nadandadhu..........avanukkum edho feelings irukkum pola ena avalukku thondriyadhu aanaalum kulapamai irundadhu😕

TBC



Edited by kadhambari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Amibaye........Awesome super.............. fantastic.........I think i should hide under the table......... I love the concept.............. continue sooooooooooon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: basanthi

Amibaye........Awesome super.............. fantastic.........I think i should hide under the table......... I love the concept.............. continue sooooooooooon thanx anju dear......😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww love is flowing in IF now😳

i will read thru fully then comment 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ha ha ha.........I broke out into laughter.Enna flirting........Enna sightu..........
Your narrative style is unique;so hilarious.
You are rocking Ambi.

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