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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks Madhu, can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Madhu, Supero......Super. Inniku inoru episode unda?
Neenga engeyo poitinga ma........pull arikuthu ma! 👏

Dee, yetho konjum konjum. 😳 😳
Pat
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my god! madu, ur an amazing writer!👏👏👏 everytime u say kadhir looks at uma, i feel my heart jumping in my ribcage!😆😆😆 please continue soon!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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superb chapter. Im jumping with joy.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER 8

GUys here is the next chapter......making up for monday's absence!

Kadhir was still speechless, Uma came close to him..her eyes were fluttering…Eppadi irukeenga?. Coming back to his senses, he blurted out..um,aan..naan nalla irukken, neenga eppadi irukeenga Uma?. Inga..neenga eppadi , Uma forced a smile on her face. Sahiti solutions company MD ennoda best friend, athan parka vanthen, Kadhir holds the door open for Uma. As uma passed Kadhir, her shoulders slight brushed kadhirs and their eyes met again for a second . Kadhir stood mesmerized at this heavenly touch and the smell of her gentle perfume kindled his emotions. As they walked together inside the office towards the elevator with reflecting doors, they saw themselves standing shoulder in shoulder making a perfect pair. Neither of them spoke as they got into the elevator , the silence was speaking thousand words. "This is the MD'd room, I will see you later Kadhir", Uma forces herself to leave kadhir. Kadhir looks a bit disappointed and says thank you. They walk in opposite directions each one looking back intermittently until they reach their respective destinations. Kadhir heaves a big sigh and gets into Rams' office.

Its been almost 10 minutes since kadhir came to Ram's room and he hasn't spoken a word. He was still floating In the memory of the past few minutes. Ram knew about Kadhirs feelings for Uma. You know what Kadhir, lets go out for lunch. You drive…OK. Not wanting to leave his soul which was a few cubes away…illada Ram, lunch ellam vendam. Naan chumma onna parka thaan vanthen. Amam amam neenga enna partha latchanam thaan theriyuhe…vaada polam, Ram calls Uma on her desk and asks her to join them much to the surprise of Kadhir. Uma accepts and Ram winks at Kadhir and they all set to go out. Oru nimisham da….Kadhir ran to the wash room to set his hair right. As Ram and Kadhir wait outside the elevator near the reception, Uma steps out smiling at Ram and Kadhir. She looks around and asks where are the rest? Ram stammers and tells that only 3 of them are going and its to discuss about graphics for a new portal that Kadhir's company was starting. Uma is not convinced but she agrees to go with them, all the while stealing glances at Kadhir.

Kadhir's car….he opens the door for Uma and there it was the slight touch which provokes a spark within Kadhir. Ram sits in the front and Kadhir starts the car. Uma looks at the Hanuman statue in the dashboard…is happy that Kadhir like her is devotional too. No one is speaking except for the soft flute music. In the back seat are a bunch of familiar tamil novels……Ram asks Kadhir to stop at a Chinese restaurant, it's a quiet place he says. All of them get down and walk inside. They choose to sit in a spacious booth …Kadhir and Uma directly opposite to each other. Neither look up for fear of facing the other…They order spring rolls and drinks when Ram's cell rings. Ram takes the call , it was from his wife about their daughter needing to be picked up. "Sorry Kadhir, Uma I need to go get my daughter, lets talk about this portal some other time, you guys continue your lunch, have a good time. Uma I will be back in the office by 3.00 ok? Ok sir, take care….do you need any help…she asks with concern. Dei enna aachu…naan venumna porenda , kadhir too offers. "IThats ok, naan parthukarenr…Ram secretly winks at Kadhir and leaves.

Kadhir couldn't believe it, he remembered the concert when he and Uma chatted about music and there It was just another perfect moment to immerse in! Neither spoke and when Uma opened her mouth to say something the waiter came in with the spring rolls!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Nanthan first, yahooooooooooooooo. When reading this chapter, my heart was beating fast. Avalo interesting. 👏
Thanks.
Pat
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
Madhu,

Both the chapters were too good. As Pat said, seat nonilla thaan utkardu padichen. Keep it up. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Edited by serial123 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
Wow, yours story is pretty good. 👏

I am sure by the end of this FF you will have became a author and ready to publish this story as a book 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
Enna solli paduvatho?
solla oru varthai illai!!!

(T.M.S voice le padikkonga madhu)

Excellent - both the chapters. Great Job madhu.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
gr8 story line.......Keep it up Madhu. 👏 👏

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