Durai - Priya Fan fiction - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww.. the first part at the bookstore was cho cheewt!😳😳 love it! pls continue soon!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Good start madhu...waiting for the continuation though..keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

Durai is trying to punch hard at the punch bag, but he is visibly disoriented. He was apparently distracted and losing his focus. Disgusted with himself he sits down on the oversized chair and the day of his last meet with Priya weaves in front of him.

Priya's dad is adamant that he wont let Priya marry Durai inspite of Shanthi, RK and Durai's parents interference. Durai succumbs to the fact that priya might indeed have a terrible life if they married, but he cant bear to let her go either. But Priya is determined and pleaded with RK uncle and Durai's parents to come and talk to her dad. But her dad just would not agree. So Priya wants Durai himself to come and speak to her dad.

Durai walks into Priya'house with hope.

Priya's' DAD:Vaanga AC sir, eppadi irukeenga?, thirumba priya pathi pesa vantheengala. Naan thaan en mudiva sollitenla.
Durai: Neenga intha kalayanathukku thirumba thirumba maruthum naan inga vanthirukenna, ungalukku puriyalaya Priyava naan evlo virumbarennu. Ippa kooda priyava oru kovilukku kottittu poi ava kazhuthila thaali katti en sondhamakkikka mudiyum, aana enna pethavangalum enna appadi valakkalai, neengalum priyava appadi valakkala.
Priya's dad: Enna AC sir, meratreengala? ,
Durai : Illa uncle, naan inga Duraiya vanthirukken AC ya varala.
Priya's dad: Sari sir, naan sammathikkaren aana unga police velaya neegna vitturanum.

Durai looks visibly shocked and so is priya. Appa, enna pesareenga, avoroda velai avarukku evlo uyirnu ungalukku theriyalaya, priya asks her dad angrily. Amamma, enakku puriyudhu avaroda uyir avar velai thaan, nee illa.

Priya looks at Durai and brings her hand together and implores, Naan kuppitu neenga inga vanthathukaga rumba thanks. Aaana intha veetla ethuvum maraporathulla, ithukkum mela engappa ungala avamanapaduthina ennala thaanga mudiyaathu. Athu namma anba kochapaduthramathiri irukkum. Neenga Kelambunga. Enna mannichidunga, I am very sorry.

Priya is crying and encounter Durai looks beaten. He lets out a big breath and asks priya's dad that he wants to talk to priya alone for few minutes for the last time. Priya's dad puts on his sandals and leaves the house. Priya is sitting in the sofa crying. Durai comes closer kneels down near the sofa and calls her gently. Priya with red eyes looks at him and says "Enakku ungala paathu pesa kooda thaguthi illa"and turn away Durai says, "Illama inga paaru " and gently turns her face towards him. I am not being a martyr or anything. Parents decide what is good for us, infact unga appa nenachathaye thaan naanum munna nenachen,
athanalathaan unkitternthu velagi velagi ponen. But deep inside I loved you and still do. This will remain forever in both our hearts but we also need to make our parents happy. So I want you to promise me that you will get married and live happily. Priya nods her with disagreement. "Illada, you have to. Your dad has already lost his son and its your duty to make him happy ", Durai compels her.
Priya wipes her tears and looks at him, Ok I will, but you must promise that you will also get married and live happily. Durai nods, takes both her hands squeezes them and says, "Take care Priya, I will meet you few years from now...who knows, maybe as a mom. He gets up and as he is close to the door looks back and gives one last yearning look at Priya. Priya with flooded tears glances at him back.

That's it , Priya was out of his life. After that fateful it was today that Durai saw her and though he was happy to see her, somewhere inside his heart was the yearning for this unfulfilled dream.

..will be contd soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow...it was an excellent flashback.... 👏
Poor the lovers. They are separated 💔

Priya is not married and the same with ACD. 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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What a wonderful flashback.... brought tears to my eyes. I am a romantic fool-and that's why. Thanks Giriamidai, can't wait for the next chapter! 👏

"Thullatha mannamum thullum, thullatha mannum thullum, nenjoda asaiyai killum , inba thenaiyum vellum, ungal kathai, inba thenayai vellum.................." ❤️
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Edited by patraj - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aayaayo maadhu
Enna touching flash bak paaa...Hope directors dont copy ur idea.inda madri oru sogam Priyakum nadakka kudathu...Viewers kum nadaka kudadhu😉 .Painful to even imagine.😭Nice sogamana thought anyway.

ACD priya va Ma-Ennada-ipdilaam address panra kaalam eppo daan unnmayana serialaa varumo 😭 😭 😭

Edited by kams_123 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
Madhu!

Adadada, sathyama romba touchinga irukku ungal second adyayam. 👏 Pl write 2 episodes every day, that way u can compensate for the days u r off. Can't wait for the episode when they will actually unite. 😛

as Pat rightly says we r all romantic fools! 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow, Madhumitas. Congratulations. Short but poignant. You have the makings of a novelist. You should seriously consider publishing these chapters as a short story. Or set up a blog and publish it online.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW! this is some amazing work madu!👏👏 i love your work! please do continue soon!😳😳😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Guys thank you so much. Never expected so much response. I have my next chapter already. I have a new character Kadhir and i need ideas to put a face to it. I have my own selection, but coming from you would be good. Actor with max vote will be designated as Kadhir.

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