Here is the Fifth Part of the story... It is quite a long part... It will be an enjoyable update along with few things opened up to you all... 😃
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Part 5 :
At 6 pm...
Vishnu : (Takes out his phone and plays...) "Magane... oru kodi rooba kudutha kooda aaru mani aindhu nimishathuku mela vela seiya kooadhu..."
Karthik : (Laughs) Oru maasam leave kku apparom kudiyum idha daily follow pannuriye da...
Vishnu : Idhu ellam vaazhkaiyin kolgaigal... Marakka maatome... Sari vaa polaam...
Karthik : Veetuku poradhu kke kadupa irukku da...
Vishnu : Adhukaaga ingaye irukka poriyaa? Practical ah pesu...
Karthik : Pch... Sari va polaam...
KV come to their flats... K goes in...
Jo was sitting on the couch with her laptop...
Karthik : Hi Jo...
Jo : Hmm...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Laptop kullaiye poi vaazhura pola...
He goes to freshen up... Comes back to the kitchen to get water...
R comes in...
Jo runs to Raji...
Jo : (Hugs R) Anniii !!
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Adipaavi... Naan hi sonna onnume solala, ippo ivalukku mattum en ivalo periyaa reaction...
Raji : (Smiles) Hi ma... How was your day?
Jo : Perusaa onnum illa... Chumma veetulaye dhaan irukken...
Raji : Sari appo namba veliya polaama?
Jo : (Excited) Beach kku?
Raji : Yeah sure...
Jo : You are the best Anni...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Podhum ice vachadhu... Melt aaiyuda poraa...
Raji : (Smiles) Sari innum 20 minutes la we will start... Apparom oru 9 pm kku thirumba varalaam, for dinner...
Jo : (Nods)
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Over ah irukke... Anyway, eppadiyo poi tholainjaa sari dhaan...
RJ get ready to leave... K is watching TV...
K mom : Rendu perum thaniyaa poreengala?
Raji : Amaa athai... Appadiye Lakshmi um varen nnu sonna...
K mom : Night la edhuku thaniyaa poittu...
Raji : Adhu ellam paarthukurom athai... No problem...
K mom : Appadi laam vida mudiyaadhu ma... Dei Karthi...
Karthik : Enna maa?
K mom : Ivanga kooda oru ettu beach kku poittu vaa da... Thaniyaa poraangalaam...
Karthik : Ponaa pogattum... Adhuku en naan poganum?
K mom : Dei ennada ippadi porupe illama pesura?
Karthik : Vera eppadi maa pesuradhu?
K mom : Nee eppadiyum pesa vendaam... Avanga kooda poittu vaa...
Karthik : Amma ennaku neriya velai irukku maa...
K mom : Edhu vetti ah utkaarndhu TV parkuradhaa?
Karthik : Amma... Office la neriyaa work maa... Veetula konjam neram free ah irukka laam nu parthaa... Ippadi panureenga...
Raji : (Mindvoice) Amaa ivaru velai pakkuraaru... Innaiku meeting ah thavira onnum urupadiyaa pannala...
K mom : Dei adhaan solren beach kku ponaa naa konjam relax irukkum... Poittu vaa...
Jo : Dei anna... Time aagudhu seekirama vaa...
Raji : Naanga veliya wait pannurom... Seekirama vaanga...
RJ leave...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Kadavule... Enna en ippadi savadikuraa? Ivalodaa naan eppadi poradhu? (Thinks) Hmm... Correct idhukku avan dhaan sari... Nanbaa enna kaapaathu daa...
At Lakshmi's house...
Raji : Ey Lakshmi... Evalo neram di... Seekiram vaa...
Lakshmi : Oru two minutes di...
Raji : Enna aachu?
Lakshmi : Ennoda chain ah engayo vachutten... Scooty la dhaan irukkum nnu nenaikuren...
Raji : Sari vaa thedittu varalaam... Jo nee ingaye iru...
Jo : Okay Anni...
At Vishnu's house...
Vishnu : Mudiyaadhu mudiyaadhu mudiyaadhu... Naan varave maaten...
Karthik : Dei please da... Ippadi enna mattum thaniyaa maata vaikaadhe...
Vishnu : Haiyoo enna aala vidu... Anga vandhum unga rendu perthukkum sandai ah irukkum... Naan indha aatathukku varala da...
Karthik : Dei moonu girls da... Naan paavam...
Vishnu : Amma vum poraangala?
Karthik : No... Ava friend... Lakshmi... Sari vidu... Naane poikuren... Bye...
Vishnu : (Thinks) Dei dei iru daa...
Karthik : Enna?
Vishnu : Sari naanum varen...
Karthik : Edhukku indha dhideer maatram?
Vishnu : Moonu pera samalikuradhu romba kashtam... So naan help pannuren...
Karthik : Nee dhaan da ennoda nanban...
Vishnu : Sari vaa polaam...
Outside the flats... KV walk towards RL...
Vishnu : Ennanga enna aachu? Marubadiyum scooty repair ah?
Raji : Adhu iva chain ah engayo vachutta... Adhaan theditu irukkom...
Vishnu : Adhaan kazhuthula maati irukaangale...
Lakshmi : (Notices her neck) Amaa di... Inga dhaan irukku...
Raji : (Stares) Nee ellam nalla varuva...
Vishnu : Enga... Ippadi dhupatta va kalutha suthi scarf maadhiri potaa ippadi dhaan aagum...
Lakshmi : Sorry naan notice pannala... Anyway, thanks...
Vishnu : Sari Jo enga? Ava dhaane beach kku poganum nnu sonna?
Lakshmi : Veetula irukka... Irunga kupitu varen...
L comes back with Jo...
Raji : Sari Jo... Unnaku triples okay dhaane? Namba moonu perum scooty la dhaan porom...
Jo : Of course, no problem...
Karthik : Mudiyaadhu... Triples too dangerous... Besides, police kitta maatiduveenga...
Raji : Naanga paarthukurom... Neenga bathirama vaanga...
Karthik : (Mindvoice) Kozhuppu... (Talks) Ennamo panni tholainga...
KV leave from there...
RLJ started their ride... Lakshmi drove the scooty with RJ seated back...
In the car...
Vishnu turns on the FM ... Song plays...
Nenaichapadi nenaichapadi mana ponnu amanchadhadi
Unnakenna pirandhalo uyirudan kalandhalo...
Vishnu laughs... Karthik glares at him...
Vishnu : Machan idhukum ennakum endha sambandhamum illa da... Radio Mirchi pannura velai idhu...
Karthik : Deiii...
Vishnu : Anaa machan indha pattu ketkum podhu unnakagave ARR compose pannina maadhiri irukku da...
Karthik : Irukkum da irukkum... Dei modhala adha off pannu da...
Vishnu : Dei ivlo arumaiyana pattu eppadi da off pannuradhu?
Karthik : Ippo nee pannala apparom eppavume ON panna mudiyadha maadhiri panniduven...
Vishnu : Sari da... Sari da...
Vishnu turns off the FM...
Karthik : Dei anga paru da... Ennamo perusa sonna la naanga parthukurom nu ippo parthiya?
Vishnu : Modhala vaa namba poyi help pannalam...
Vishnu stops the car...
Police : Adhellam ketka mudiyaadhu ma... Olunga fine ah kattitu nadandhu ponga...
Lakshmi : Sir sorry sir... Indha orudhadava vittudunga sir...
Karthik : Excuse me...
Police : Yarupa nee?
Vishnu : Husband...
Police : Ennadhu?
Vishnu : Illa Ivangaloda husband dhaan ivaru... (Point towards KR) Jo nee car la poi utkaaru ma... Naanga varom...
Jo : Okay... (She leaves to the car)
Karthik : Sir I am Karthik... I am working in Nettech... Ivanga ennoda wife dhaan... Rules meerunadhu thappu... Sorry... Evalo fine nnu sollunga sir...
Raji : (Smirks) Sir ivaru yaaru nne ennaku theriyaadhu sir... Poi solraaru...
Karthik : Ey arivu irukka unnaku? Endha time la vizhaiyaaduradhu nnu theriyaadha?
Police : Hello... Unga sandai laam apparom vachukonga... Olunga fine 1000 Rs. ah kattitu kelambunga...
Karthik : (Hands the money) Indhaanga sir... Sorry for the trouble...
Police : Seripaa... IT la velai seiyuradhu perusu illa, indha maadhiri basic rules laam therinjukonga...
All nod and the police officer goes back to his spot...
Karthik : Yaro naan parthukuren nu sonnanga...
Raji : (Firmly) Sorry... Vaa di namba polaam... (Goes with L)
One the way, Lakshmi listens to music on her headphones and Raji comes silently, just looking out... And... Thinking back...
FLASHBACK :
"Please please please... En chellam la..." she pleads him...
"Raji... Naalaikku polaame... Ippo oru mukkiyamana velai irukku..." he tries to make her understand...
"Please da... Please, please, please..."she continues with the same hope in her voice...
He takes a deep breath... "Inga paaru... Beach engayum pogala... Ingaye dhaan irukkum... Anaa naan ippo indha mail ah post pannala naa, next four days kku mudiyaadhu... Ellam national holidays... So definitely crowd jaasthiya irukkum and minimum one hour edukkum naan thirumbi varadhukku... Apparom romba late aaiyudum..." he says all that in breath, looking at her hopefully...
She stares at him... "You and your lame excuses... Get lost Avinash..." she looks away...
"Paarrah... Full name laam solra... Kovam ah?" he asks with a tone to lighten up her mood...
She frowns back... "Illai... Kovakai... Enna kelvi idhu? Anyway... Don't change the topic... Un mela semma kadupu la irukken... I am leaving... Bye..." she turns to leave...
He grabs hold of her wrist and she turns around without looking at him, still angry...
He finally gives in... "Sari sari... Koopitu poraen... Vaa..."
"Nejamaava? You are the best !! I love you Avi !!!" she squeals in delight...
END OF FLASHBACK
KVJ and RL reach the beach... They park their vehicles at the parking lot and move towards the beach...
It was evening time, so the whole beach was surrounded by families, friends, kids, couples, etc...
Raji : Wow... The beach looks so good...
Jo : Amaa Anni innaiku semmaiyaa irukku...
All five of them were admiring the waves of the ocean...
A few kids were playing and running behind them... A girl accidentally bumped into Raji and in a fraction of a second... She hit Karthik and both fell down without balance...
Karthik : (Flinched) Aahhh...
She tried to get up by balancing on the sand, but fell again... He then got up and helped her up... Both stared at each other...
Karthik : Enna moraikkura? Ippadi ah mela vandhu vizhuva?
Raji : Amaa ivar mela vandhu naanga vizhanum nu aasai paaru... Nee edhuku en pakkathula ninna?
VLJ laughs at seeing KR...
Karthik : Dei... Friend vizhundhutaane avanukku help pannanum nu illaama ippadi sirichu kittu irukka?
Vishnu : Naanga cashew nut maadhiri help panni irundhaa ippadi oru azhagaana scene paarka mudiyumaa? (Laughs)
Suddenly they heard some crying sound...
Lakshmi : Ippo enna aachu nu nee azhara? (Looks at R)
Raji : Loosa ah nee? Naa enga azhuvuren?
Jo : Apparom vera yaaru?
They turned back... All shocked/confused...
To Be Continued...
Precap :
Comedy shots of KR...
Stay Tuned...
~~ Sush and Abi ~~
Authors' Note -
Hey Friends
Firstly, Hope you Guys enjoyed the update... Also would like to ask for a request to you all... Please read the story with an open mind as we promise you that we will never let you down of any sort because of the storyline... 😃
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Edited by Abinaabi - 10 years ago
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