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sathyakrs

@sathyakrs

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Kala..awesome update...

This karthik character is lovely...very naughty...

Bike ride funny..His comment about drooling...Raji korangu naye..payeen thitradhu very funy..

at last she herself finds herself looking like a witch..rofl...

love your style of writing kala...

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Mathi

@mathimathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

nice update Kala

liking this naughty karthik...teasing her always... when he said he will drool only at beautiful girls...LOL..

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Totti

@Totti

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Kala...I was all smiles from the beginning to the ending. It was so wonderful...makes one to forget all the worries. This scene is so lively better than the serial. I love this karthik...he's so charismatic ...I'm already falling in love with him. Raji too was superb...her anger and apologetic manner was too good. I could visualize this scene clearly. Enjoyed the 'drooling' part and of course raji's korangu, etc..

Kala, you're a natural...your ease in narrating the story is too good. Give yourself a pat on the back. Well done. ⭐️

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: shiningstar77
Thanks for the pm kala sis

ada ad ada,evalavu suuuppperrra iruku intha update👏.👏👏.👏.naan sathiyama ivalavu jollya irukumnu ninachu koda parkalai...seriala vida intha scenea arupudhama kaati irukeenga...

karthik vandha udana,rajioda reaction,expression😳😉...romba cutea irundhuchu...
koushik..karvam kattitan karthikmela...idiot.😡.

kr bike ride...sema comedythan ponga🤣🤣🤣...
karthik sariyana kallanthan😉😆...brakea pottukitte irukan raji than mela vilanum enbathukaga..
that speed breaker moment...paiyan maranthuttan atha poda...naan koda raji kochukittu ponna udane bayanthu poiten...adhuku appuram antha roda parthu ava fear pattaudan enaku konjam shock aayiruchu k unmaiyave poitananu...antha bike vera avala follow pannum podhu naan athirchi aayiten yaaruda athunu...aapuramthan nadanthuchu bayangara comedy😆🤣..

karthikthan helmetla vandhu avala noondi parthu irukan...killadi payalthan😆😳..

appada,raji ippathan irangi vanthu iruka...karthikitta sorry kettachu😳...am very happy...

aana,intha dilogue by k..
But neenga kavalai padaadheehnga...naan azhagaana ponnungala paarthu dhaan drool pannuven...So ungalukku oru problem mum varaadhu..."he said in a serious tone..with a suppressed smile...

intha dialoguethan EPIC ONE..rajiya semaya kalaikeeran🤣🤣...athuku rajioda kovam apppaa.😆...

rajiya nenachu nenachu payal urugi poiduvanpola...romba samtha irukan,romba kurumbukaranagavum irukan...i love this k so much😳

Ippadiyae...ponaa..naan avala love panniduven pola irukke.
inthula unaku sandhegam veraya karthik...atha nee kandipa panniduva 😉...

kala sis,thank u so muchhh for this wonderful update...
i am very very very very very very very very very very happy and thoroughly enjoyed it😳😃...

hi shiny,

wow what a looonnnggg...comment...!!!!!!😲

thank you so much...as usual you made me feel elated...

your comments compensated all the efforts i have put for this update..😃

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Lekha96
wow wow wow... chance illa ka romba supera iruku, awesome update👏👏👏. atlast karthik vanddhu rajiya kaapathitan, karthiya parthadhum raji yin reaction supero super😳😳, karthik romba naughty raji avan mela vilavekka ethana dhadava sudden brake potan😆, poor raji appo ellam vitutu theriyama panapo kochikira bt adhuvum cute aa dhan irunduchi. nallavela karthik kovathula poitano nenaichiten, rajiku thevaidhan avan avlo genjinaan paavam😉.adhuku appuram dhan rajiku karti importance therinjidhu. raji bayapadradhu karthi thiraumbavam pick up pandradhu all are nice to read👍🏼. highlight of this update KR conversation😳, semaya irundhudhu ka, main a karthi raji ya tease panrathu, raji oda reaction🤣🤣🤣.totally awesome update, cant wait 4 next part. pls, update next part soon😃

hi lekha,

thsnks ma,

next update aa???😲😲

no daa chellam..ippadilaam avasara pada koodaadhu..😲😲

nalla ponnaa samathaa irukanum...sariyaa...?😃😃😉

appo dhaan naan varum podhu unakku..kuchi mittaiyum...

kuruvi rottiyum vaangittu varuven...ok yaa?🤣

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Ramya05
wow.. such a wonderful update...
This completion was something missing in the serial.. and actually never spoken about later.. but acc. to me one of the most effective scenes leading to their closeness...

You have handled the scene sooo well.. Kudos to you...

I have become a fan of your writing.. appadiye.. Kan munnadi niruthiteenga... Ava koobam nyaya maanadhu when he put the sudden brake... karthi.. bayangara mischievous... :)

Very nice :) Keep up the good work and now, how will tomorrow be?

ramya thanks ma...😊

you r right ramya,me too expected a lot from that scene but they have ended the scene abruptly..😡

i had expected a bike ride desperately..but the dir disappointed me..

adhanaala naane screen play write panni andha aasaiya niraivethikiten..😆😆😉

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: sathya87
Kala..awesome update...
This karthik character is lovely...very naughty...
Bike ride funny..His comment about drooling...Raji korangu naye..payeen thitradhu very funy..
at last she herself finds herself looking like a witch..rofl...
love your style of writing kala...

thank u sathya..

i am glad that u are liking my writing style..but i wonder whether i have one..🤣

yes ,this Karthik is so adorable..i too loved him a lot❤️

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: mathimathi
nice update Kala

liking this naughty karthik...teasing her always... when he said he will drool only at beautiful girls...LOL..

thanks mathi,

yes,indha karthik yeppavume ippadi dhaan very naughty..😆😉

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Totti
Kala...I was all smiles from the beginning to the ending. It was so wonderful...makes one to forget all the worries. This scene is so lively better than the serial. I love this karthik...he's so charismatic ...I'm already falling in love with him. Raji too was superb...her anger and apologetic manner was too good. I could visualize this scene clearly. Enjoyed the 'drooling' part and of course raji's korangu, etc..
Kala, you're a natural...your ease in narrating the story is too good. Give yourself a pat on the back. Well done. ⭐️

hi,

thank u so much ma..😊

ur lovely words made me to feel great...

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729619

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Thank you for the PM and the wonderful update Di! It was simply superb and i was smiling right from the start till the end of the chapter. It was much better than the one in the serial so Awesome Job done!

I loved the bike scene! The way he was teasing Raji when she was reluctant to hold his shoulder was so cute! And he purposely applied the brakes so that Raji will fall on him! The way Karthik pleaded with Raji and despite driving off, he still ensured she was safe! I'm in love with this Karthik!

And for Raji, she was cute with the way she was scolding Karthik! The highlight was the last part - Drooling and Raji looking like a witch! The way they started feeling for each other is interesting and i am excited for the next part!

Seriously Di Chance illa, it was just super se uper! I really can't wait for the next part so please please please update soon! Lots of Love! 😊

Edited by Jezmine - 11 years ago