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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 4


[in hospital]

Vishnu and lakshmi come to hospital.

Karthik is not there.

After a while karthik comes and gives them vibuthi.

Lakshmi: yennaku kuda kovil ku poganum nu thonala karthik,yeppudi da.

Vishnu: athan lakshmi karthik,pasakaran.

Lakshmi: antha pasakaranuku than raji nu roshakari pidichuruke.

Karthik: seri lakshmi raji oda appa kita sollitingala?.

Laksmi: innum illa karthik ,yenna solrathu nu yenaku therila.

Karthik: avar call panna sollidunga lakshmi.

Vishnu: seri da,nanum lakshmi yum poiyu HR kita yenna nelavaram nu sollitu,permission potu varom,nee variya karthik.

Karthik: naa innaiku leave..rajiya vitutu yennala vara mudiyathu.

Karthik asks the nurse to put the vibuthi and kunkumam in raji's fore head.nurse says ok and she does what karthik said.

Karthik: thanks sister,ippa ava yeppudi irruka?.

Nurse: sir,doctor kita than neenga kekanum,apuram bhayapudathinga ,unga wife ku unnum agathu.

Karthik slightly smiles,vishnu and lakshmi paar karthik innimel yellam nalathuthan nadakum.

Vishnu: karthik vaada doctor poi pathutu varalam.

Lakshmi waits near ICU.karthik and vishnu go to doctor's room.

[Doctor's room]

Vishnu: doctor ippa Raji yeppudi irrukanga?

Doctor: high dosage nalla than she is under serious condition,sucide panra alavuku mentally she had been under pressure.

Vishnu: when will she recover?.

Doctor: raji is in semi conscious,anytime she may recover or she may even go into coma.

karthik emotionally: doctor naan rajiya pakalama?,naa avakita pesamnum,please doctor.

Doctor thinks then says : ok ,karthik,neenga poi parrunga,but patienta disturb pannathinga.

Karthik says ok and leaves to see Raji,while vishnu and lakshmi wait outside the room.

[in ICU]

Karthik sees raji,he pats her forehead and holds her hand.

Karthik: RAji..Raji naa pesurathu kekutha Raji...yen raji ivvalo avasara patta...naa yevvalo bhayanthutaen theriyuma..unnala yenna veruka mudiyathunu theriyum,athu unnakum theriyum..yen raji aparum suicide panra alavuku poitu,naan than un kita sorry sollanum ,unna ronbha hurt pannitaen,yenna manichudu raji..unaku yethuvum agathu,naa irrukean de,unnaku yethuvum aga vida maten...I LoVE YOU RAJI..yenkuda sanda poda vathu nee uyiroda varuviya raji??..

Tears roll from karthik's eye,one tear drop falls on raji's hand ,raji eyes starts tomove slightly.karthik feels happy that raji is gaining conscious and calls lakshmi and vishnu inside.

Karthik: Raji ..yenna paaru ..

Lakshmi: raji..kanna thiunthu paaru de.

raji holds karthik's hands and tears come from her eyes.

Karthik: Raji..are you alright?.

Raji tries to speak.

Karthik: raji..raji..yethavathu sollu.

Raji: karthik

Vishnu and lakshmi happy that raji recovered.

Raji: karthik,yenna manichudu please.

lakshmi: yeah loosu yen di ippadi panna?.

Vishnu: vidu lakshmi ippa yethuku thitra,avanga office ku varatum apa pathukalam.

Lakshmi and vishnu leave to office to inform HR and put permission.

Karthik: yen raji,ippadi panna?.

Raji: therila karthik,neeyum susanum kalyanam pannikanum nu asa patathu naanthan,ana athu unmaiya vey nadaka poguthu nu nee sonnathu ku apparam,sethidalam nu thonichu,nee illatha valkaiya yennala vazha mudiyathu karthik.

Karthik: athuku nee I Love you nu sollirukalam la.

Raji emotionally: apa yennaku yenna panrathu nu therila karthik,ana ippa solraen I LOVE YOU karthik,yenna vitu poga mata la karthik.

Karthik surprised ,hugs raji and both cry in happiness.

Karthik: unna vitutu poga mataen raji.

"Raji unnaku yenna achu?" a bold voice is heard.

Raji shocked to see him.

Thodarum..😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yeppaa...Meesai entry ar? 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Suha eppidi ippidiyellam😳
Kalakitta pooo
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
superb Suhaa,
ingeyaavadhu raji dhairyamaa ava appa kitta karthi ya love panren nu sollanum
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Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
A big thanks suha bulb kudukadhathuku 😃. Appada raji finally said those 3 words to karthik.. Kadaisila keta kural mr. meesai'dha??? Atleast he should have heard KR's convo.. Story interesting'ah pogudhu...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow wow wow part 4 nice one Suha! Hospital scene was so emotional and good.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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super suha...kalakara da...🤗

office present situation vechu story move aaradhu too good.👏

Oru valiya raji ILU sollta....hospital la entry kuduthadhu avanga appa thaane...ipo raji epdi avanga appava face panra nu parka ...am eagerly waiting ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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suha kalakura da 🤗

atlast raji said i love you.next epi meesai entry yaa waiting da
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 5


Karthik: ivar yar raji?

Raji: ivar than Mr.shakthivel,US Mappilai.

Karthik shocked.

Shakthivel: raji yenna nadakuthu inga,I went to office to see you,as you were not picking up the phone,the security told that you attempted for suicide.what happened raji?.

Raji: illa..naa mothala unga kita sorry sollanum.

Shakthivel: yethuku?.

Raji: yennaku intha marriage la interest illa,appa health kaga than samathichen.

Shakthi vel shocked: raji,itha neenga yen kita solliru kalame?,seri raji,may I know the reason?.

Raji: athu vanthu...

Shakthivel: do you love someone?.

Raji: uhmm..ama ,naa karthika love panraen.

Shakthi vel: ohh,raji,marriage ahh stop panrathuka neenga suicide panninga?,ithuku neenga yen kita theliva solliruntha,naane intha marriage stop panna idea kuduthirupaen,naa love ku ethiri illanga,neenga yenkita solliruntha naa itha easy solve panna help pannirupaen,anyways everything is good in love and war.

Raji: yenna manichudunga please.

Shakthivel: unnum problem illa raji,naa unga appa kita pesikiraen.

Raji: illa appa kita naane sollikuraen.

Shathivel: kavala padathinga unga love pathi yethuvum solla mataen.

Karthik: thank you shakthi vel.

Shakthivel: that's ok,karthik,you are lucky to get a girl like Raji who is ready to sacrifice her life for you,but ithu oru cowardly act raji,you should be bold enough to face problem,anyways all the best,unga marriage ku yenna kupiduvingala?.

Karthik smiles and says sure.Shakthi vel leaves.karthik and raji look at each other and smile.

Karthik: yeppadi raji,tappunu potu odachuta.

Raji: naan mudivu pannitaen karthik,unna yethakagavum yaru kagavum yennala vitu kuduka mudiyathu.

Karthik: I love you raji.

Raji hugs karthik,

Raji: I too love you karthik.

Nurse: excuse me sir.

Karthik comes back to reality,raji shy.

Nurse: doctor is coming.

Karthik slightly smiles: ok sister.

Doctor comes.

Doctor: yenna raji,ippa yepdi irrukenga?.

Raji: feeling good doctor.

Doctor: irunthalum neenga konjam rest yedukanum,so nalaiku discharge agikalam.

Karthik: innimey yentha prachanaiyum illa la doctor?.

Doctor leaves talking along with karthik

Doctor: unnum prachana illa,innemel intha mathiri suicide try panra alavuku avungala kashta paduthama irruntha pothu.

While karthik and doctor were talking.

Nurse: madam unga husband,ungalukaga night fulla mulichu,rombha kashtapataru.

Raji: illa..avaru yen...

Nurse: ungaluk kaga avar kovil lam poi vendikitaru,neenga rombha lucky madam,ippadi oru husband kidaika.

Raji smiles: unmathan sister,thank you.

Sister leaves,raji admires karthik's kindness and caring towards her,but she is un happy at the same time thinking about susan.

Karthik comes.

Karthik: raji,unna ippa normal ward ku shift panniduvanga,nalaiku discharge agidalam.

Raji: uhmm..ok,

Karthik help her to shift to normal ward.

Raji legs are numb, that she was in bed for about a day,she slips.Karthik catch her.raji sees his eyes full of love and smiles.

Karthik: intha siripa naa yevvalo naal miss pannaen theriyuma alaghi?.

Raji smiles: appudiya ...Injarango?.

Karthik: yennathungo.

Both laugh and move to normal ward.

[at evening]

Karthik admires raji sleeping,he gently massage her head and pats along her hair.

Karthik mindvoice: alaghi,yennakaga vaa dee nee suicide panna?.

Raji: ama karthik.

Karthik: yeah ..nee thoongalaiya.

Raji: illaiye,nee yenna thadavinatha rasichutu irunthaen.

Kathik: adi pavi,nalla aalu de nee.

Karthik takes some fruits and cut them to make juice for raji.

Raji: karthik naa unkita unnu kepaen..

Karthik: uhmm sollu da.

Raji: susan kita yenna solrathu?.

Karthik stops making juice and gets little worried.

Raji: naa ketathu thapuna sorry.

Karthik: athu yellam unnum illa,naanum athu pathi than yosikiraen.

Raji: susan kita sollidu karthik,ithuku mela late panrathu,risku.

Karthik: seri avanga nalaiku leave mudichu varuvanga la,apa solikiraen.

Raji: naa unna rombha kashtapadutharan la karthik.

Karthik looks at her eyes: ama raji.

Raji shocked.

Karthik: naanum ara ma nerama fruit juice panraen,konjam mavathu help panniya nee?.

Raji playfully beats karthik.

Karthik: doctor ,inga uruthi yenna adiche kolra,sikiram yenna kapathunga.

Both raji and karthik laugh.

Karthik mindvoice: namma ippa irukura mathiriye kadaisi varaikum irupoma raji?.

Raji mindvoice: irupom karthik,unnodu than yen life.

Both smile with heart full of love on each other.

Vishnu and lakshmi comes.

Vishnu: yennada ore puripa irruginga.

Karthik: hey,vishnu unnuku oru vishayam theriyuma,mr.shakthivel inga vantharu.

Vishnu shocked: iiyo aiyoo,aduthu meesai aruvaloda thorathuvare.

Raji smiles.karthik: illa da,raji mr.shakthivel kita naa karthik ka than love panraen,sorry yennaku intha kalyanathula eshtam illa nu sollita.

Lakshmi: paar ra,kovil patti ku yeppadi yevvalo thairiyam vanthuchu,parava illa di kalakita po,congrats.

Vishnu: ithuku yen raji,thooku mathiraiya waste panninga?,karthik ka kupitu naallu apu api naa unna love pandaen nu solli irukalam la.

Lakshmi: seri vidu da,nadanthathu pathi pesa vendam.

Raji: rombha scene agiduchula lakshmi?.

Lakshmi: pinna,office se athirchila iruku.

Karthik: yetha vathu prachanaiya?.

lakshmi: onnum periya perachana illa karthik,but HR than kadu pakitanga,irunthalum raji ya nalla padiya pathu kanga nu sonaru.

Raji: apdiya sonaru.

Lakshmi: ama raji,namma vishwanathan sir vera,nee fool mathiri sucide attempt pannitanu lecture yedutharu...

Karthik: vidunga lakshmi .

Vishnu: illa da,avaru konjam overa pesunaru,namma intha target projecta seriya pananum.

Karthik: seri da.

Lakshmi: karthik,raji appa ava mobile ku oru call kooda panala.

Raji: lakshmi avar rendu naal veli oruku poraen sonnaru.

Lakshmi: ohh,apa busy ya irunthiruparu nu nenakiraen,raji unga athai mama lam yeppa urula irunthu varanga?.

Raji: innum rendu naal agum,lakshmi naa suicide panna vishayatha yaar kitayum solla laiye.

Lakshmi : illa ,yen di.

Raji: illa lakshmi ithu yarukum theriya vendam.

Vishnu: raji intha vishayam therinja,unga appa kita ithu valiya karthik ahh neenga love panringa nu solla easy ya irukum la.

Karthik: illa da,first shakthi vel intha kalyanatha niruthatum apram pesikalam.

Nurse comes and informs,visiting time is over.

Lakshmi: seri karthik,nee kelambu,naa ingaye irukean raji kuda.

Kathik: illa lakshmi naane irukaen.

Vishnu: oru naal nee illa na un aalu unnum tholanju poida matanga,va namma kalaiyla sikiram raji discharge panni kutitu pogalam.

Karthik looks at raji for approval,raji asks him to leave through her eye.karthik smiles and looks at vishnu.

Vishnu: dei rascal yennala mudiyala da,neenga panra loves ku ,laila majunu ve thothiduvanga da,

All laugh. karthik asks raji to sleep well,tomorrow we will go to office together.

Karthik and vishnu leaves.

[night time]

Raji: thanks lakshmi.

Lakshmi: yeah loosu yethuku de thanksu.

Raji: yennaku help panathuku.

Lakshmi: nee yen friend de,actually naa unkita sorry sollanum,unna hurt panitaen la.

Raji: appadi yellam unnum illa de,yen nalathuku thane thituna,nee yenaku oru nalla friend de.

Lakshmi smiles and hugs her.

Raji: lakshmi ,na kovathula kaushik team ku maritaen la,thirumbhavum seat change panalama?.

Lakshmi: athu david kita than kekanum,unnum prachan irukathu nu than nenakiraen,yenna konjam thituvanga,but place change panna accept pannuvaga nu nenakiraen.

Raji says ok lakshmi good night.

Both sleep peacefully.

Thodarum..😉

Precap

Vishnu: raji antha team la work panra thu nallathu illa da,kaushik seriyana criminal da,vara aathurathuku monjileye rendu kuthu kuthanum nu thonichu,ana avan than antha vyshayatha panangrathu evidence illaiye.

karthik: dei vishnu,yengada irugan antha kaushik,itha ippadiye vida kudathu da,ithuku innaike oru modivu katuraen.



Edited by Suha95 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😛 awesum update...lvd t a LT..waitng fr nxt part...

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