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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: __shibani__

Awesome😳

Yesterday's updates were too good👏


Thank you betu😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie_ammu

opened forums after like ages.and the first thing I saw was your story.and I was literelly on cloud nine.ve read all the parts in one go,I must ask,how you manage to write so beautifully.this was my favorite story of yours so far.theway that you presented nibir is really something else.😳😳thank you a million times for coming back.

PS:pls plsupdate you story did kyu yeah mera Shor kare.m very much desperate 'bout it 😳👏👏


Thank you so much and Glad that you are liking my story so far, ammu. And yes, even i am glad that i came back. 😳

I should, in fact, thank you that, you still like what i write.😃

Will start updating all my incomplete stories, once i am over with my viva tomorrow. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Niyati_T

Mishkaaattt
Now that is a proper birthday 😳
And yes Chandler is Amazing 🤣 🤣


Thank you mummaaa😆🤣


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: poornima_15

Awesome bday celebration with unknown partners 😆😆

Keep updating ... A request update ur ts passion of love" also .

naya naam kya h I don't remember ,, 😆 love that story 😳


Thank you poornimaa...I will slowly start updating from day after tomorrow😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
What a beautiful updates!
You have expressed beautifully phases of life!
After facing tragedies now their life is becoming normal.
I really loved it.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Anmol333

What a beautiful updates!

You have expressed beautifully phases of life!
After facing tragedies now their life is becoming normal.
I really loved it.


Thank you 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

#719
A little moment of love.

"Aaah.. Kabirrr... Kabirrr... Ohh Kabirrr..." the voice recorder in my phone played out, Nisha's state from the last night. None of us, knew, how this thing got recorded in my phone. Nisha just closed her ears, using her fingers, trying not to hear it, and blushing. When even this didn't work, she just hid her head under a pillow, and I laughed. I randomly got this thing, while I was checking my phone this morning. I just went straight to Nisha, and played this near her ear, just to make her flush immediately. Since then, I am seeing a tomato red wifey in front of me. "Kabir!" She called me out, asking me to shut up. "What did you just say? Ohhh...ouchh...Kabirrr?" I teased her. She grabbed a pillow from her bed, and aimed it direct at my face, and I saved my face, and grabbed Nisha by her waist, and we both fell on the bed, with me on the top, chuckling. "Mine, you are... Completely mine.." She said, and kissed on the top of my nose. I just smiled, looking into her eyes. I just pecked on her lips, slightly, and stood up straight. I went into the balcony taking my cup of coffee, while she followed me. The weather, outside, was too good. Cloudy, dark, and just about to rain. "I love this weather!" I said, "So, do I, and even more, when we are together!" She told me, and I placed my arm around her shoulder, and she leaned onto my chest and smiled.

"Kabir... Where has our baby gone?" She asked me. "our baby is playing hide and seek with us... And is hiding, somewhere, behind these clouds. Our baby is a star, a superstar... And our superstar, will come back soon!" I told her, with a smile. She nodded. "Just till the time... You become healthy..." I continued. She nodded again. I spread my arm out of the balcony, to feel the cool pellets of water on my hand, as it has started raining. I collected some of those raindrops in my hand, and drizzled them on Nisha's face, as she chuckled. She did the same to me, and we started playing like kids, standing in our balcony, as Mrs. Kapoor, who stood in her balcony, beside ours, stared at us and chuckled. We greeted her a good morning, and she blessed us in return. She was an aged, old, lady, who lived with her husband. She went inside, asking us to come over to their house, sometime. I just sat in the swing, with Nisha in my lap. I had loved this swing, like, since forever. It had been with me, since I had shifted into this house, all alone, a few years back.

I encircled my arms around Nisha's waist, as she leaned back on me. I pecked on her shoulder, and she smiled. She folded her legs up, and wrapped her hand around me, and digging her head at the crook of her neck, she said, "I just want to sleep for sometime... Here... Like this," I nodded and slowly stroked her back, so she could sleep in relief. "I louuvvee you..." She said, as I chuckled. "Now sleep!" I said, as I closed my eyes too. The cool breeze, and the petrichor of the rain, was an amazing feeling, and even beautiful, when, she was with me, in my arms, like this. I always had day-dreamed this thing, since I had loved her. I want her to be in my arms, forever. I wanted to love her, care for her, keep her safe, and protect her, in every manner. Nisha is this lover's day-dream come true. "Do I even deserve this pure soul?" This question popped up in my mind, as I brushed my fingers against her face. This weather, and this girl in my arms, were the most beautiful things I've ever seen. I just closed my eyes, and felt these beauties of my life.

I didn't know, when I fell asleep like that. I opened my eyes, and saw that the rain hasn't stopped yet, and it was raining even heavily. I was almost half drenched in it. And she wasn't in my arms too. I just looked around to find her, and I was just about to get up from my place, when I found her, sitting beside the sliding door of our bedroom, and behind a huge canvas. I tried moving a little, when she said, "Don't move!" and I froze right in my position. "Come on baby, my back is sore, sleeping like this!" I cried. "Just wait for a few minutes, I am about to finish this painting!" she said, and I just lied back, like before. "Wait, what, are you painting me?" I asked her. "Somewhat!" She said. I was surprised. I was lying in my boxers, and what was she trying to paint!? I was curious, that I tried interrupting her several times, and she hit me, with whatever her hands could reach. Finally, the painting was finished, and I was allowed to get up from my place. I stretched a bit, and I could hear my muscles crackle. I just went and stood beside Nisha, looking at the painting.

I just kept ogling at it, for a while, and just try to feel the emotions, the love, in this painting. It was a painting of us, of when, just a while ago, we were sitting in that swing, and looked at the sky, but an addition in this painting was, that there was a kiss, happening in this painting, and also, the girl had a baby bump. I could realise, how much Nisha was yearning for our symbol of love. "Beautiful!" I said, and gasped. "I want out life to be this beautiful!" She said. "It will be!" I said, taking her into my arms, and kissing her. "I know!" She said.

"Let's go out!" I said, asking her to get ready. We were hungry too, as we didn't have the breakfast yet. I wore my usual shirt, and jeans, while she came dressed in a faded, pink, lacy, top, paired with jeans. "Why do you always have to look better than me?" I asked her, miffed. "Because I don't want someone else, to think, that, how did, a Greek God, like you, even choose this average looking girl!" She said, and I chuckled. "Greek God... Han? I assume that you praised me, your highness!" I said, bowing before her, as she laughed and patted my cheek. "You are the cutest!!" She said, pulling my cheeks, as I winced, and kissing my lips. "Let's go, now!" I said, and I grasped her hand, in mine.

Edited by -DrunkenMonk- - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Rain, and us, and Momos.

She wrapped her arms around my waist, and rested her head on my shoulder, closing her eyes, as I drove in this heavy rain. I used my left hand to hold her hand, while the other, was busy driving the bike. I intertwined fingers with her, and took her hand to my lips, and kissed her hand. She embraced me even tighter, from behind, and settled herself even closer to me on the bike. The heavy drops of the rain hit our faces, so hard, and the wind, made us tremble in cold, though this moment was too enjoyous. I always hated Delhi for the fact that, it rains so less here, and I miss Mumbai for this thing. But then, since she has come into my life, my house, it's raining, and raining happiness.

She kissed at my nape, and it sent down jitters through my spine. I was losing. She chuckled looking at my reaction. I eyed at the rear view mirror and I could see her hang her head back, and spread her arms, feeling this rain, this moment. I stopped at a red light near the India gate, and She got off the bike and tiptoed away, without a notice, and I raised my hands up in the air, asking her what she was doing. She asked me to wait for a minute, and told me that she would be back, before the signal is green. I just sat there and stared, as she went to an ice cream vendor and bought a few ice candies. I wondered what she was going to do with all of them, and she just went to a bunch of kids playing in the rain, and gave all of those ice candies to them. I smiled, and even chuckled, at the way, she jumped with them, in excitement. And as she told me, she came running, and sat back on the bike, before the signal was green, and the children waved at her, and she waved back. There was no traffic today, Just a few cars, and a bike, who looked at us and smiled.

I drove the bike off, from there, as soon as the signal was green. She embraced me from the back, and said, "I love this weather," and "me?" I asked. "I don't love you... But i louvveee you sooo, sooo, muchhh!" She said. I chuckled. Before she came into my life, this bike, and this rain, were my love, but since the moment, she entered my life, drenching in this rain with her, while I drove the bike, with her embracing me like this, has become my love. She completed me in every sense. My hand never left her hand. They were interlocked, the whole time.

I drove the bike to our favourite, and a famous, Momos joint in Delhi, which opens early in the morning and runs till 10-11, at night. Momos and this weather, were a perfect combination, like me and Nisha. I ordered two full plates, and started gorging on them, while she stared at me. "What?" I asked. "nothing!" she said. "Tell me, na!" I asked. "That guy, behind you, is ogling at me!" She said, secretively. I slowly turned around to see, who it was, and as I turned, that guy started looking somewhere else. I asked her to ignore, and we started eating again. I was about to put a momo in my mouth, when she snatched it from my hand, and kept it in her own mouth. That was the last piece. "Nikaal mera momo!" I said, almost strangling Nisha, jokingly. And also, I was simultaneously hissing, as my tongue was on fire, due to the spicy sauce. I coughed a few times. She bought a water bottle, and made me drink some water, and it was better than before. No matter how spicy as hell, the sauce, might be, it is a fact that no thing, can beat that taste.

Nisha again told me that the guy was ogling at her again, and this time, even I saw it, through the rear view mirror. I just turned around immediately, and warned him, raising my finger. We finished eating, and we sat on the bike again, and I drove off.
She rested her chin on my shoulder, and embraced me, and asked, "Weren't you jealous?" Nisha asked. "Main? Aur Jealous? Aur wo bhi usse?" I asked, chuckling. "What if, I leave you some day, for someone else?" she asked, out of nowhere. "Why that question, now? Did you find someone else?" I asked, and giggled. "Kabirrr..." She said, and hit me slightly on my shoulder. "Okay... If you are happy, with that someone else, what else, do I even need? But if he even tries to hurt you, that moment, I'll kill him! But, before all that, Main mar jaunga, but tujhe kabhi kisi aur ka hone nahi dunga! You are mine forever, jitni bhi baar paida hona hai... Bas tujhse hi aake milna hai mujhe!" I said, and she chuckled. "Now tell me, do you like someone else?" I asked her, trying to act all serious. "Shut up, and drive, Kabir! I am never leaving you!" She said, and I giggled, and kissed her palm. I drove back home. And as we reached, we slipped off our wet clothes, and just changed into fresh clothes. I am always shirtless, and in my boxers, as usual, and she slipped in my shirt, that was too large for her, and her black shorts. Our hair all wet. "You look totally irresistible!" She spoke, sitting on the bed, as I dried my hair with a towel, standing near the mirror. "And you look yummy!" I said, looking at her in the mirror. I walked towards her, as she looked at me seductively. She rested back on her elbows, as I crawled onto her, looking deep into her eyes. She closed her eyes in anticipation, and smiled. Her lips trembled.
"I need the charge... err" I said, seductively. "The charge is always yours..." she said, opening her eyes, and raising her head, a little above to kiss me. "Thank you... Nisha.." I said, as I grabbed her charger, which lied beside her on the bed. I got up, and plugged in the charger in the socket, and kept my phone to charge. She glared at me, all this while. "Kabirrr!" she shouted, and threw a pillow at me. "Were you talking about the charger? You moron!" Nisha screamed on the top of her voice. "Obviously! What did you think?" I asked. And suddenly, I played the same voice clip on my phone, and I mimicked along with it. "Ohhh... Kabir... Aah... Aaah... Kabir... Faster... Harder.." "Oh? Were you talking about this charge?" I asked. My face all filled with an evilness. That was it, our house echoed with my laughter, and her shouting, as she ran after me, throwing whatever she got in her hand, at me. "You're gone, today, Kabir!" She screamed. "Ohh... Aaah... Yes!" I mocked her again.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful😳
That superstar dialogue
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Posted: 7 years ago
Beautiful updates yaar...
Too much romantic
Balcony scene was damn beautiful as much as nisha's painting.
Ride to momos stall 😳
Nisha's sweet gesture of giving ice-cream to kids was so sweet.
Bringing that guy to reveal Kabir's feeling was best thing.
Ohh god Kabir will never live Nisha in peace by teasing her with that audio clip.

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