Mihikaa's pitara of unreserved comments - Page 2

Originally posted by: ..MysticAura..

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Originally posted by: arviabhigya

thanks beta😆😆

stalking mamma's thread🤣🤣

normally ppl would say, gandi baat but I say lage raho 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Waise toh u were supposed to get this comment yesterday but wifi off hone ke kaaran, my comment was lost and I had to re-write the comment today😆😆

This comment is on ur drabble on Insecurities😃

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4553677

So I just happened to click on this story while I was skimming through your index and it was then I realized, I had not read this OS of yours😆

Perhaps my TY final sem was to blame cz I was too busy writing reports then😆

Nevertheless, I m glad I read it😆😃😳

A short fun but entertaining read😆

I was grinning throughout the story😆😆😆

Pehle hi bata doon, in this comment, my bias is towards Nisha 😉

Loved the adjectives Nishu used for Kabir🤣🤣

I love the murder plans Nishu was making for Kabir🤣🤣🤣

He is a smug...an irritating smug...!" I shouted out of nowhere, forgetting about the place surrounding me-

why do I love him so much...??" I again shouted aloud , not realizing the place, - Both these situations were hilarious🤣🤣 I couldnt stop laughing🤣🤣🤣

Kabir gave those girls a side hug😲🤣🤣 Aur stupidity dikha Kabir beta 🤣🤣

I love the pun on the word expecting😆😆😆

Aarree...nishu peele...tere liye hi bachayi thi...jhoota peene se pyaar badhta hain yaar.." he exclaimed.- Kabir sach me K hai🤣 ladkiyon ke saath flirt aur side hug ke baad Nishu se pyaar badhane ke baat karta hai 🤣

I was dancing when Nishu shouted on him😆 Good going Nishu😎

I got amazed at his inborn tendency to use these cheesy lines to woo me after making me angry.- Main bhi amaze ho gayi isski K panti dekh ke🤣🤣

Love how Nishu was falling for his charms while she tried so hard to maintain her anger at him😆😆😆

Waise Nishu ko Kabir ko maarna chahiya tha na 🤣🤣 Sirf chillane se kaam thodi chalta hai😆😆😆 Pregnant wife ko wait karwaya toh isse thodi zyaada punishment milni chahiye thi🤣🤣

Kabir shouted on Nishu😲but when he said sorry to her, he made up for it😳his style of saying sorry was sooo cute😳😳😳

I want to go home...I am tired...take a leave naa...i want to go out too...with you...we'll have lunch outside..." I said pouting like a kid looking at him.

He sighed convulsively seeing my remorseless actions, and giggled a bit.

You amaze me nishaa...that's why I love you so much..." said he standing up, and giggling looking towards me- This part was cuteness and adorableness overlaod😳

I grabbed my bag, and pulled him along with me gripping his arm, as we were about to pass through those skimpy and smarmy girls, he slid his hand through my waist, leaving me to blush and them to burn in anger, to add some more to their jealousy, I wrapped my hand around him, and leaned my head on his arm, while we walked, making them burn a little more. He laughed like no more than a mania-hit person, after seeing my jealousy, but I replied him by pecking both of his cheeks- This was my fav part😳 Kabir ke iss action ke liye mera usski taraf gussa maaf😎 Romance, cuteness and adorability ka perfect combo❤️

As a story, I would rate it 10/10, kyunki it had the perfect blend of romance comedy and cuteness😳😳 In short basically it had everything that symbolizes Nibir😳😳😳

Waise u did use some really hi-fi words, whose meaning I had to refer from the dictionary😆😆😆 My beti writes very well now👏👏👏 and I couldnt be more proud🤗

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

I know chaar mahine wait karwaya for the next comment in this thread and 1 yr for the comment on this chapter 🤣🤣

Hope my comment makes up for it😃

Chapter 4- Love Obsession and Crime😊

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4556937&TPN=17&#p131314814

Kya dhamakedaar chapter likha hai Shibu👏👏👏

Loved the twist u introduced😆

kya shuruat ki hai😎😎

Who would have thought ki Nibir ki happy life mein itna bada twist aayega😆😆

Navya missing and her dead body was found !!!!

kya shock diya tune readers ho😆😆😆

Waise love the way u narrated this part, cz it actually resembled a crime investigation scene👏👏👏

Finally Nibir got to know of Navya's love for Kabir😆

The direct no-nonsense attitude of the ACP was so cool 😎

Love the fact that u chose Khyati Kumar for the role cz I can actually picture her being a strict no-nonsense ACP😃😃

Tune usski pic bhi acchi choose ki hai😆😳😳

The manner of the crime was indeed quite strange ! Sar pe maarna phir Sleeping pill along with belt ki nishaan and then throwing the body off a rock into the jungle !

Kaafi complicated tareeke se maara hai👏👏👏

Itna complex crime tune kaise socha😆😆😆 crime patrol dekhke🤣

JK🤣🤣🤣

Upar se jiss ne crime kiya hai ussne Nisha ke top ko as evidence chod diya😆😆

Kaafi smart hai yaar😎

Nibir police ke shaq ke daayre mein😆

Waise loved all your dialogues but this particular dialogue was hilarious🤣🤣

Nisha Navya pe jaan chidakati thi, uske baal ko bhi dhakka pahucha toh Nisha bardaasht nahi kar paati thi- Waise Shibu baal ko dhakka kaise dete hain🤣🤣

I m guessing u wanted to say ki baal ko baanka karna but looks like u forgot the main word in the idiom😆😆

Koi nahin, thanks to you, I had a good heart laugh🤣🤣

All in all, a mindblowing chapter with an epic dialogue🤗

Looks like u ace in the mystery genre too Shibu😳😳😳

Love u 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Jaanti hai maine kitna wait kiya for ur reaction😆

Looks like I m getting a taste of my own medicine😃

I miss u yaar😳😳😳

Tu busy ho gayi hai kya?😭

Originally posted by: __shibani__

haan re😭
m in 12 naa, so school, tutions, hw aur tests ke beech band bajati hai😕