NIBIR/SWARON STORY - A Valentine's Week (Completed)*2/1*

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Anmol

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Posted: 8 years ago

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poornima_15

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Posted: 8 years ago

#214

Superb update👏 a lot of emotional up and down ...

But the end gives ray of hope ...

lifepartner part was too good😳

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Anmol

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: poornima_15
Superb update👏 a lot of emotional up and down ...
But the end gives ray of hope ...
lifepartner part was too good😳

Thanks poorni 😳

My mood was off when I was writing that part...and result is this 😆

Edited by Anmol333 - 8 years ago

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poornima_15

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anmol333

Thanks poorni 😳
My mood was off when I was writing that part...and result is this 😆

yes it happens ... 😊 but u know what ... Writing is one of the best ways you can get through your emotions ... And in the end u feel better ... 😃

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Anmol

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: poornima_15
yes it happens ... 😊 but u know what ... Writing is one of the best ways you can get through your emotions ... And in the end u feel better ... 😃

Yeah may be 😆😆

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357159pikachu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#218

Prologue

Nisha tu yahan hai toh razai mein kon hai?

best dialogue😆. And when the mystery unfolds, RAMESH, SUKKU and BUNTY were behind the razai.🤣

Aur woh bhi kyun? Just to save themselves from jogging. Waise i tell you i am one of these characters only. 😆😉

Ghar se nikal doongi.

Bilkul yahi reaction mujhe bhi milta hai when i tell my family that i want to get my hair cut. And specially yeh wala dialogue. i can truly relate to it. main bhi baal pratadit hoon Nisha ki tarah. 😭

Truly main bhi yahi soch rahi thi with that Daamad waali line of Sukku that her best friend would be Kabir but you and your revelations are awesome. It turned out to bhi Saurav.😆 saare armaanon par mitti pher diya tune.

But woh waale emotions phir se jaag uthe when i came to know that Nisha has a crush on Kabir

Haaye! main sadke ke jaawaan!😳 and hamaari chaar zindagiyan inculde Nisha and Kabir and Saurav and Kirti. Well Nibir was expected but this new Sauro story is cute.

Tere morning Good karne ki koshish kar raha tha.

Saurav sau saal aur jiye iske liye. and then nisha turned with her Gaali Galoch tone ready to hit the person who tried to save her. But the shock was here.😃 He was none other than Kabir. 😳

Tu bhi na Ashu... Nisha mat bola kar... Nisha Bhabhi bola kar...

nisha bahut lucky hai ki uske would be devar itne cute hain. So good they are as a friend. 😆

And then Kabir's dialogue about Nisha. The way he explained his possessiveness for Nisha and the reason for his hatred towards Saurav was real cute. 😳

I am becoming greater fan of Nibir with your story. Loved it.

Aur haan baaki replies ab thode chotte honge. Uske do reasons hai:

First of all mere paper aaj khatm hue hain so i am really tired

And most importantly, I am very aalsi.

i read all the chapters but didnt comment because of my aalas so you can imagine my laziness. 😆😉

sorry!

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago

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357159pikachu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#219

Rose Day

First of all mujhe Swaron Saurav aur Kirti se zyada pasand aa rahe hain. I love Sharon being the typical girlfriend and Swayam being the pratadit boyfriend. 😆

Now about the update,

Your humour is amazing and i am a die hard fan of it. especially that SHANTILAL line and the songs sequence.😆 Nisha bhi koi doodh ki dhuli nahi hai😆

Kabir ka crush kuch zyada hi hai. 😉 he is too damn jealous of Swayam.

But i couldnt understand Swayam itna chidta kyun hai jab Nisha usse bhai bulati hai?😕

Nisha sleeping wala part bhi bahut humour tha. Sorry Nisha thinking about some plan for Swayam. 😉😆

DJ WAALE BABU 😆🤣

Laila O Laila 😆 And Toota jo kabhi tara😆 Hey bhagvan Kabir gone crazy😕 Kabir is truly a Nautanki.

You have got the humour it seems.

Kabir really poora plant utha laya!😲😵 IDIOT😆

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago