NiBir SS- KIT KAT [Part - 1 updated on Pg:2]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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After some good advices i come to know some imp. points and after that i have decided to write stories by my own thoughts and after thinking of some days i started my new writing session on nibir... LOve u all forum wasi don't take these all as ur or my insult as i never mind these type of things i just try to follow every rule but by mistake in future any wrong thing did by me my forum wasi will be there to teach me a good lesson...

So after discontinuing my some stories as i forgot there story line here is new one hope u all will like it 😊



Prologue

What the hell yeh gadha mera project partner... i m not going to do this bhle mujeh anda mile par mai ish gadhe ke sath project nhi karungi... said girl all angry...

See tumeh fail hona hai toh ho i don't care but mere marks mat katvo samjhi ... a boy in his early 20 said all in attitude...

Oh mr. Atitude ki dukan apna muh band rkho...said girl and take a sip of her wine...

Yaar mujeh bhi ish wine ki dukan ke sath project nhi krna... he said and leave from there while girl back throw glass of wine at him and leave from there...

At Velvet lounge...

Girl's Pov

I miss you mom, dad...[sobs]

I think my life is full of sobs and sniffles...

Mai humesha seh akeli thi aur abhi hu...

She get up from there and tremble lil while walking becoz of the doze of wine but she hold down herself and come out...

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Guyz there will be no CH ok as the story proceed u all will come to know the characters...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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res...
after long time yaar
missed u
unres
lovely ansh😃
kya hua kyu stories discontinue kiyašŸ˜•

Edited by Niha0606 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niha0606

res...

after long time yaar
missed u


Missed u too Nihu !!!😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ansh awesome start šŸ‘


But mujhe drug me down ka update chhaiye 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Interesting start
Awesomely written
Continue soon

Please please please don't discontinue your stories. I really love them. You drug me down ..sparkling doll n all are my favourite ones. Plz pls reconsider Ur decision.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-1


At night in front of wight villa...

Hey nisha whats up again u re having your bottle of wine... said a boy and sit beside girl...

She smiled and sip bottle without uttering a single word...

Abhay...she said after finishing her half bottle in a sip while he look at her unbelievably...

Humm... he replied and start look at her pale face and red swallow eyes exploring something looking like she started to hate her sleeps...

Yar mujeh aisa lgta hai ki  mai ek dead soul ban chuki hu... she said and chukle while a lone tear escape from her eyes...

He softly her back of hand making some unknown patterns and nodded negatively on which she smile and hug him while he embarrass her tightly...

She broke the hug and look at him thinking of something...

Abhay koi house rent par mil skta hai... she said and rest her head on his shoulder...

Phir seh... he said and chukled...

Ya ish baar mujeh nikal diya but reason pta hai kya... she said and smile thinking of...

Kyu... he asked

Voh ush house mai jo family rehti thi ushme do bache the jo mujeh dekh kar dar jaya krte the aur ek old woman thi jo mere late ane aur drink krne ki adat seh pareshan thi toh mujeh at last nikal diya gya... she said and chukled while he crassed her hairs...

Oh so btaiyeh apko kis type ka home rent par chahie... he said

Umm acha dikhta ho ek room partner ho do bed room ho  that's it... she said and sip her wine...

Okz mil jayega waise room partner kaisa hona chahie and  doubt that koi ap jaisi mahan ka room patner banega... he ask and chukled while she hit him hard on his arm

Koi bhi chalega ya phir chalegi... she said...

Ok cool toh ajj tu adjust krle mai kal dhoondh kr btata hu... he said and get up...

Hey abhay toh abhi mai kha ruku... she asked pointing towards her luggage...

Khi bhi jha jgha mile becoz mere ghar mai meri pyari wife rehti hai aur ek choti si family toh tera rehna mushkil hai ek kaam kr hotel mai ek din ke liye rukle... he said

Are baba abhi mere pass ek phooti kodi bhi nhi hai ... she said getting up

Toh yeh wine kha seh peerhi hai... he ask

Are voh toh maine bchi kuchi salary seh kharid li... she said folding her hands...

Vah beta sir ke upar chat ki baat ayi toh paise nhi aur wine peene ke pure paise hai... he said

Theeke theeke abhi lone ke naam pe dede baad mai ushka double dedoongi... 

She said...

Koi jaroorat nhi hai samjhi age seh dhyan dena aur ha vapas krne k jaroorat nhi treat dedena ok... he said

Giving her money...

Chal ab bye and ha kal theater jane seh pehle tujeh tere nye ghar par chodoonga so be ready... he said and shake hands with her and took leave...

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Next Day

In- front of church


OK toh yeh rha address aur ... aur yeh rhi key... He said handling things safely in her hands...
Thike aur sun mate kaun hai... she asked 
Are voh humare theater mai koi new entry hai whi...
OK chalo bye...
Kha madam theater nhi jana...
Are woh maine ajj leave li hai ishliye aur ha sun tune jo kal paise diye the voh lete ja...
ae ladki tune ek raat mai aisa kya kiya ki tere pass itne paise a-gye...
kuch nhi bas ek raat church mai gujara... she said and winked
  while he shook his head on her...
Bye... she said and give him money while denied a lot but nisha is nisha and her self respect is more than anything in her life she handed him money leave from there in her vespa while he bid her a bye...
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At  Vaishali Nagar  
 

Nisha enter in and start to search her block and there she find it out...
A beautiful newly painted block with lot's of creations...
She smiled and enter in...
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A sound strike and there she enter in her apartment...
She push the door and look out the hall and all rooms...
OK so there are two rooms one hall and all nice... she said and settle down her room, unpack her luggage and walk towards washroom...
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At Night 8 pm

Again the sound strike and there a boy in his early 20's enter in with his bag packs...
His eyes were roaming in hall when something caught them and there he fell connected to the person sitting there on couch who is all lost in reading novel ...
He smiled
Nisha... words come out from his mouth as the emotions choked...
And the word was enough to broke the trance of a young lady...
She smiled and get up to meet the person standing in front of her
Kabir...words come out from her mouth as emotions also choked her words...
She run towards him and hug him tightly while he reciprocated with same feelings and make her feet leave floor an inch...
I missed u sooo muuuch... they at the same time and chuckle...
He put her down and cupped her face...
Yeh kya halat bna kr rkhi hai apni... he said while a lone tear escape from her eyes...
Mujeh bhi nhi pta... she said and tear started to beam in their eyes...
 
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a ton guyz for ur love...
NOTE------------
Guyz i m not discontinuing all stories just i will discontinue that one of whom i will forgot story line and yes may be i can continue them after remembering them...
So Just loose ur hopes...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update ansh šŸ‘
Loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update...
Do continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Awsm update.. Aise hi roz roz update kiya kro na pleajjj 😳

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