NiBir FF-3rd joker:A mystery [part-6b updated] - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome start...
Types of jokers?
Bahut research kiya h tune lagta h 😉
Nice character sketch ...
M really excited for this story...
Going to read the chapters now !!
Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: TASYAM

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<font color="#000066">PROLOGUE PAGE NO.-1
PART-1 A HOLIDAY PAGE NO.-5
PART-2 ARRIVAL TO BOMBAY CIRCUS AND A MEETING PAGE NO.-8
PART-3 FRIEND PAGE NO.-11
PART-4 INVESTIGATION AND CLUES PAGE NO.-15
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title me likha h part 5 updated?😲
konse page me?! index me kuch kyu nai h? 🤔
is it our task to find out the part 5? 🤣
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 1
Adheer sir strict lagte hain !!
Nishu is so much involved in case... And saurav 😆
so cute n funny he is!!
Aryan sharma ka murder? I thought wo actress shruti ka murder hua hoga! 😲
Bombay circus !! 😃
Ye to wahi h na jahan kabir kaam karta hai 😳
Posted: 9 years ago
Part2
Title padhke hi lag raha h nisha n kbir ki meeting hone wali h
Awesome update ansh 😃
clowns n case.. Kuch to connection lag ra h ab mujje b!! But kya?
Nibir met ❤️
Nisha ne clown k makeup me v kabir ko pehchan liya 😳
Excited to Read more 😈
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3
Awesome update!!
Flying kiss to nature .. Not to u 😈
Kabir's expression 🤣
Nisha gangwal k liye kuch b impossible nai h 😎
Haha loved her proudy look 😃
Kabir also wanted to b a CBI officer 😳
Poor kabir.. Na mom dad h na koi human frnd just pet dog he have... 😭
But loved the way nishu said I ur frnd now 😉
Excited to read next...
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4
Kabir ki speech on jokers 😊
But nisha didn't paid attention bcoz of time 😲
Umesh bhaiya k msg came as her saviour 😉
Nisha got permission to reinvestigate in Aryan apartment !!
Saurav ko bulaya 😲
Itna danta usko 😔
But honestly speaking sabko wo padke bura laga hoga but it made me laugh 🤣
Building ka Watchman?ansh 😲🤣
U seriously killed it baby 🤣
Action speaks louder than words ... Such a right saying 😉
Saurav bhale hi jokes crack karta h but that doesn't mean k wo apne kaam ko leke serious nai h!! I m pretty sure will prove himself and adheer ka muh bandh kardega 😉

Aryan k ghar se note mila...
Abt joker n Bombay circus ka ticket?
Posted: 9 years ago
Part 5
Awesome update ansh..
Bombay circus obvio the main link of this case...
2 deaths and evidence same!!
Mein kabse se Soch rai thi kabir ka kaam kab shuru hoga iss story me !! 😊
And u know... Now I can see his dream becoming true ...
To be Officer in crime branch..
Nibir milke ye case solve karenge and then kabir will become a part of the team.. 😉
Haye m so excitedss 😃
Posted: 9 years ago
22 march ko last update di thi tune!!
agey ka kab likhegi??? update soon
Posted: 9 years ago
I dont know... Mujje ye likhna chiye ya nai but...
Mera dil kr ra likhne ko!!
Nd i always follow my heart so...commeting it!!
Ansh... Mujhe to saurav k role me koi problem nai lag rai!!
Waise b wo nishu ka assistant h!! And sarthak... CBI officer serious hi hote hain aisa koi rule h kya? Coz meine ajtak jitne movies n shows dekhe hain CBI me v koi na koi Bandar hota hi h thodi comedy karne ko!! 🤣
I don't know abt real CRIME branch but in Indian cinema and show... We need .. Maal maal maal masala 😉
CID show dekha h kabi? Sony me ata hai! Usme ek Freddy naam ka namuna h Jo ki CID OFFICER hi h but always do comedy and uski comedy me se hi aksar case solve ho jati hai!! So ansh... Plzz saurav character jaise h waise hi rakh plzz .. M loving it!! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART-6a
INVESTIGATION



Adheer- So lets start the investigation Nisha tum aur Saurav bombay circus jakr clowns ke bare mai sari details pta kro aur baki sab Aryan ke ghar ke ass pass ke ilako mai aur ushke padoshiyon seh pooch-tach krenge mujeh sari report ajj hi chahie taki hum jitni jaldi ho skeh utni jaldi case khatam krenge becoz iseh aur bhi jano ko khatra ho skta hai...

They all nodded positively and reach there areas...

At Circus
Nisha- saurav ek kaam krte hai ki sabse pehle hum yha ke manager seh clown show ke bare mai poochte hai ushkeh baad ek ke baad ek clown seh unka intro lenge aur kuch questions poochenge whats say...

Saurav- nisha yeh sab toh theek hai but mujeh aisa lag rha hai ki may be agar yeh murder huva toh joh murderer as a joker work na krta ho but joker ho...

Nisha- matlab

Saurav- matlab kuch nhi lets go we should go and ask about clown shoes to manager
He said and drag her in but his this thought made her to think for this once...

A man was going out from there when saurav stopped and ask about manager... The way man was behaving was unusual which go unnoticed by nisha as she was lost but saurav was lil conscious about that...
Man told them about manager and leave from there while saurav and nisha move towards the cabin of manager and ask come in on which manager gesture from his fingers as he was busy on his phone while they both enter in...
So how can i help you people... he asked while saurav give him the intro...
what happen is there any complain from our shows or something else...manager ask all worried
See mr. manager we are here to know about the clowns of this circus and to know the procedure you appoint a clown for your show...Saurav ask
Why do you guyz wanna be a part of our show... he said and laughed on which nisha and saurav give him a deadly glare...
He thought for a while and give them some files...this is the file for procedure and in this one there is the list of clown workers...he said pointing towards file...
Can you tell us your procedure... nisha said and took the files from table...
Yes firstly we take an interview than we take a look of their performance if  the person pass these things then he/she is selected as a clown
... manager explained and drink some water...
Is there is any kind of numbering... nisha asked
yes there is and ya its quite different...manager answered
Oh ok so is this present in these files... nisha again ask
Yes...he said
Pehle aiseh bta dete file dene ki jagah toh jada acha hota ok now leave it ab hum yha k sare clowns seh milna chahenge toh ek room mai table aur chair ka arrangement kar waiyeh aur ek baad ek sare clowns ko bhejte jaiyeh aur ha yaad rkhiye ga ki yeh number wise aye aur sare aye wrna apke circus ke liye acha nhi hoga ... nisha said and open the list
Ok... manager said and leave the room
Nisha tujeh kya lgta hai... saurav asked...
Saurav deewaro ke bhi kaan hote hai ... nisha said and turn the page of file...
Saurav understand the meaning of life and keep quite while nisha continue to read the file...
She was reading very keenly when the profile of no.3 distract her and the profile was of non other than kabir...
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At aryan's apartment...
Rohit, Karishma and Arjun reached to aryan's neighbour's apartment...
Rohit knock on door... and a sound strike ... a man in his 50's open the door and look at them all confused and ask them that what they want...
Rohit give him intro while arjun ask him to give his only 15min man nodded and ask them to come in...
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Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago

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