NIBIR FF : ABCD 2 (Part 1 on Page 3) - Page 2

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New story yayyy... continue soon... sonu ur ha... pm aae na aae like n comment aa jaega 😉
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Sonuuu
I'll love to read
Waiting 😳
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Loved abcd and looking forward to read this!
Nice prologue and character sketch. 👍🏼
Please continue soon 😊
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Yeah ABCD ka sequel😊
Awsm prologue sonu😊
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waiting for next update ... i also liked abcd a lot at my stalking days 😊 ... continue soon ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dida.. Once again you are back 🤗
Chalo continue soon 😃
Soon matlab soon haan bhaag nahi jana phir Swaragini ke updates dene😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome back Sonal
I am really excited for the sequel ...
ABCD is one of my favourite stories...
I had read ABCD as a silent reader...and I had commented only on the last 2-3 updates...but this time I will comment on each and every update...😃
Now coming to the prologue...
The story has started on a interesting note...
Now kabir's journey to win back his stardom will be shown...
Excited for it...
Continue soon ...
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ABCD 2

Part 1

2016

(IDA's Conference Hall)

New Chairman(NC) of IDA - where is Mr Aditya

His PA - sir he is coming

[Aditya the choreographer(CH) entered]

Adi -hllo sir

NC - so mr Aditya Kirloskar finally u r here toh mr aditya can u tell me ki why the hell we again lost the LDC competition

Adi - mr kapoor I have tried my level best but the team work was missing

NC- mr aditya we r here to present our country on a higher level n u r giving me excuses

Adi - mr kapoor u cant blame me LDC mein toh hamara haal pichle 13 saal se yehi hai last mere se pehle bhi 3 choreographers koshish kar chuke hain toh why u all r blaming me but still m trying

NC- no need to try mr aditya u can go now...we r appointing a new CH

Adi - fine waisey bhi m not interested...dancing mein is country ka kuch nhi ho sakta...have a nice day sir

NC - have a nice day Mr aditya

(n he left from there)

NC - where is the new CH

PA - sir he is in canteen

NC - canteen

PA - yes sir

NC - call him

PA - calling sir

(after 15 mins)

CH - can I come in sir

NC - yes Mr Kabir Kumar

KK - well m surprised meri yaad aap logo ko kaisey ayi

NC - come on Mr Kumar...u know the reason right

KK(smirks) - I know but I thought u don't need me

NC - listen KK we need ur help I know tum is country ko phir jita sakte ho aur haan agar is baar hum nhi jeete toh yeh country dance ko fund karna band kardegi n I know u don't want that

KK - anything for dance

NC - fine dekho hum tumhe country ki best teams la kar denge n jo tumhe best lage wo team

KK - wait wait wait Mr Kapoor...I have some conditions

NC - what conditions

KK - main apni team khud banaunga

PA - arey par this is against the rules u have to choose from the existing teams

KK - I know Mr tripathi that's why I have said my conditions

PA - but

NC - fine...u can create ur own team but u have only 8 months...auditions karna dancers dhundhna n unhe prepare karna hope u will be able to do it in 8 month

KK - that's my prob

NC - where is nisha

PA - wo kal se ayegi

NC - nisha is ur secretary

KK - fine I'll meet her tomorrow

(At Kabir's house)

Kshitij-dude m so happy for u finally tujhe tera Self Respect wapas mil jayega

(mihika n niya came with tea n snacks)

Mihu - haan bhaiyu m so happy for u finally sabko pta chalega ki my bhaiyu is so talented

Niya - yep kabir we all r happy for u but shuruaat kahaan se karni hai I mean first of all u have to make a team

KK - shuruaat toh ho chuki hai meri team ke 2 members toh already hain

Nitij(together)-who

Mihu - u guys...kyun bhaiyu

KK- exactly

Niya - no kabir just because we r ur frds u cant put ur biggest opportunity at stake

KK - r u guys mad tum dono hi banoge mere lead dancers

Kshitij - no kabir niyu is right main lead dancer nhi ban sakta u know I have a stage fear toh I cant

Niya - aur main kisi aur ke saath pair up nhi hone wali u know that

Mihu - fine not as leads but u can be a part of team

KK - guys mujhe apne liye best chahiye that's why m asking u guys plzz for me for our friendship for us n most impotantly for dance...atleast be a part of my team

(Nitij looked at each other)

Kshitij - m in but only as a team member

Niya -me too but what about other members...we need 8 more members

Kshitij - yep we have to find 8 more peoples jo dance karte ho

KK- nope I want those jo dance karte na ho balki Dance ko jeete ho

Mihu - bhai aise log kahaan milenge

KK - zaroor milenge

LUDHIANA , PUNJAB

(a girl in her early 20's trying to escape from her house)

Girl - bas babaji aaj bacha lena warna na mummy ji ne pakad ke meri shaadi kara deni hai wo bhi uss bengoli ladke se

(she was about to ran suddenly her dad came there)

Dad - shibu

(shibu stopped)

Shibu - daddy ji

Her dad - what r u doing

Shibu - trying to escape

Her dad - arey toh udhar se kyun ja rahi hai teri mummy ji hongi wahaan

Shibu - peechey wale gate par

Her dad- haan she knows na ki aagey se tu nhi bhaagne wali toh is bar aage se bhaag aur haan shaadi punjabi munde de naal hi kari...arey main punjabi hoon teri maa bengali hui toh kya hua

Shibu - sure daddy ji m going bye

Her dad - amritsar pohoch ke phone kari puttar

Shibu - sure dad

(n she ran from there)

Her mother - suri ji where is shibu

Her dad - parineeta ji wo toh gyi

Her mother - kyaaa...shibuuu

(shibu is running suddenly she is collided with someone n fell on the ground)

Shibu - WTH andha hai kya

Kunj - tu andhi hai kya

Shibu - oye faaltu na bol teri wajah se main gir gyi...andha naa ho toh

Kunj - ohh hello tu kya road par marathon samajh kar bhaag rhi thi mera news paper bhi gira diya

Shibu - ohh god main giri wo kuch nhi tujhe tere newspaper ki padi hai haath de

Kunj - excuse me

Shibu - shaadi ke liye haath nhi maang rhi hoon uthane ko bol rhi hoon jada double meaning mat ja

Kunj - whatever...ab uth hi rahi hai toh mera newspaper bhi saath hi utha le chal

(kunj helped her)

Kunj - haan ab

Shibu - oye thank u nhi bolne wali main...teri wajah se giri main

Kunj - that toh I wasn't even expecting from you...thank u wala trait toh tujhme dikhta hi nhi hai

Shibu - haww tera matlab kya hai I m ungrateful

Kunj - no u r wanna be

Shibu - excuse me

Kunj - excused...my newspaper

Shibu - le kha le tera newspaper

(she was about to hand it over the newspaper but she saw something)

Shibu - ohh teri

Kunj - ki hoya tu mainu mera newspaper degi ya main dusra le loon

Shibu - oye ruk na...Dance audition for LDC...agar main isme part loon aur select ho jau to yeh shaadi ke jhanjhat se bach jaungi...n I can dance yaar

Kunj - kya badbad kar rahi hai

Shibu - nothing aur tu kya road par newspaper baanta hai

Kunj - nhi jab koi anjaan sirfiri ladki mujhse takra jati hai toh main usey uthatha hoon aur apna hi newspaper ussey maangta hoon...anything else

Shibu - sirfira hoga tu aur ye le tera newspaper tujhe hi mubarak

Kunj - thank u ji bohot badi meherbaani aapki

(n he left from there)

Shibu - yahi sahi chance hai shibu chal audition de daal

Kunj - babaji plzz ab toh job dila do (he saw the newspaper n that LDC news)dance...wow...matlab but suddenly he remembered something(his dad's voice - beta ji ye dance vance mein kuch nhi rakha ek job pakdo aur secure ho jao dance doen't have that security)papaji nhi maanengey...chal kunj beta job IV he de

(KK's house)

Kshitij - r u sure tu chandigarh auditions mein khud ayega

KK - yep m coming n tu aur niya bhi a rahe hain

Niya - yeah we r coming with u...chalein flight ka time ho raha hai

Kshitij n Kabir (Kshibir)-lets go

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sonal tumne update kar diya i am shocked 😆
Superb update sonal 👏
Kabira is back 😉 will be auditioning for his new team 😃
Shibu and kunj scene was too good
Waiting for nisha's entry




P.S-PLEASE UPDATE SANAM RE OR MY ONLY WISH SOON PRETTY PLEASE 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update 👏
Kabir 😎
Shibu and kunj scene was awesome 😆
Continue soon!!!

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