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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey NiBirians, just penned this down a few minutes ago to celebrate my 11715th post😉
Hope you like it😊
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Kabir entered the room with a cute smile plastered on his face. She was busy writing something on her book. He went and tapped on her shoulder. She turned to look at him and then frowned.

She- Badi jaldi aa gaye? Chaar bajeaane ko bola tha, its 4.30...

Kabir- (holding his ears) Sorry naa jaan, traffic mein phas gaya tha...

She- Bahana no.10... Naye bahaane sikho yaar...

Kabir smiled cheekily and knelt down to adjust to her position, but she ignored him and sat on the bed.

She-(sulking) Kyun nahi samjhote ho aap ki mujhe tution jaldi pahuchna hota hai Papa?

Kabir- Main kya karta Kisha? Tujhe pata hai naa, dance karte waqt dhyaan nahi rehta...

Kisha- Mumma bilkul sahi kehti hai... Aap chidiya ghar se bhaage hue chimpanzee ho... Ab main tution teacher ko kya bolu?

Kabir- (proudly) Arrey uski chinta kyun karti ho Shona, hum hai naa...Aapki tution teacher pe apna jaadu chalayenge...(he winked)

Kisha- Apne promise kiya tha aap Mumma ke siva kisi aur ke saath flirt nahi karoge, and you are planning to break that? I won't talk to you...

She stormed out of the room and Kabir face palmed. He looked at his wife, who smiled with innocence gleaming in her eyes.

Kabir- Badi hans rahi ho bateesi dikha ke... Yeh Kisha naa, bilkul tumhari tarah hai, nakchaddi...Par jaisi bhi, perfect hai...

He held the photo, and kissed Nisha's forehead. Staring at his deceased wife photo gave him ending happiness; it made him feel her presence, and her love...His eyes fell on the table from where he had picked the photo. It was Kisha's friend's father's second marriage's wedding invite. He understood the reason behind Kisha's anger and went in Nisha's room.

He opened the door to find her hugging Nisha's favorite teddy and crying her heart out. Being 15, she was going through many questions, problems and insecurities, which he wanted to sort out for her... After all, he had promised Nisha 5 yeras ago, that he would treat her like his princes, away from all the troubles of the world...

He patted her shoulder and sat on the bed and said

Kabir- Kishu, baat kya hai? Mujhe yeh invite mila tere room mein... Is this the reason why you are upset? Jaan, maine apki Mom se pyaar kiya hai, unhe apna dil diya hai... Main kabhi unhe dhoka nahi dunga... Main jaanta hoon ki tum yahin soch rahi ho ki main doosri shaadi kar lunga, par tumne yeh socha bhi kaise...5 saalon se meri dil ki har dhadkan sirf tere liye, meri chotu Nisha ke liye dhadkati hai... Mera pehla pyaar Nisha thi, aur aakhri tum ho...Hum dono beechad gaye toh kya hua, remember that main aur Nisha Soul Mates hai...

Kisha looked at him teary eyed and hugged him. She had never doubted her father's love for her mother, but knowing that Kabir too deserved Love, feared that he may replace her mom.

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Pyaar mera likha fizaaon mein...

Pyaar mera suno ardaason mein...

Pyaar mera mehsoos karo apni dhadkano mein...

Pyaar hai tera iss ruh mein...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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too gud
sweet n a bit emotional..
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Beautiful shibu 👏 👏
But 😭 😭 😭
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Awww shibu... 😳 that was adorable
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Awesome shibu 👏
Loved it 👏 👏 👏
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so good ... and emotional one.. describes a lot of emotions in few lines ... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

too gud
sweet n a bit emotional..





Originally posted by: Shats

Beautiful shibu 👏 👏
But 😭 😭 😭





Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Awww shibu... 😳 that was adorable



Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome shibu 👏
Loved it 👏 👏 👏





Originally posted by: poornima_15

so good ... and emotional one.. describes a lot of emotions in few lines ... 😊



Thanks a Lot fr commenting guys🤗
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Aww
That is a cute one
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Kudos Shibu... You make me feel stuff you write deeply... Thanks for this 😳
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Awesome Shibu😊
Soo cute and emotional bhi tha 😭

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