The same Mistake-SS-PART 5 PAGE 19

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: shreya52
Waiting for chapter-1 😊

thank you😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aha121
Wow
Waiting for 1st chapter

Thanks Chapter 1 will be updated soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sam_premc
awsm cs dear...do update soon.

Thanks Annie Baba. ill update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Amina...
Its Nice ... continue soon ...
But i am a little scarred of sad endings 😭
Is it really very sad ?

Thank you Amina. Muje abhi aisa kyu lug raha hai ki I am praising myself😆. And yes its a sad ending

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Originally posted by: poornima_15
continue soon ...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mishrialways
Nice one
will be nice to see a different relationship between ramesh and nisha

Thank you. chapter 1 will be updated soon

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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...
update soon😊
and yaa, to post chapter 1, just post the chapter as a comment😊

Thank you so much for the help😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hello guys so chapter 1 is here:

CAPTER 1: UGLY

' I love you... I will always love you... and I would never leave you for someone else.'

' Do you promise?'

'I promise...'

Nisha thought about her ex-boyfriend's words over and over again as she cried and curled up in a ball.

"That liar! I should have known that he'd never keep that promise! I should have known that he'd leave me! ... I should have known that he'd never truly love me..." Nisha said between her sobs.

" Why did he pick her? ...What's wrong with me? Is it because of my weird habits and personality? I can change that! ... Or am I just ...Ugly?"

She looked at herself in the mirror with disgust.

"Who ...is that...? Who is that girl whose eyes and face are burning red...? Whose face is full of tears."

She touched her face I the mirror.

"Why is she crying? Is it because of the boy that broke her heart? Is it because he broke his promise/ Is it because of all the love and care she gave him which hurts? But isn't that because...she's ugly? Doesn't she know that? Didn't she already know that she'd never be loved? No matter how much love she gives to others, they will never return it back to her. Can she continue to live like that? No, not at all."

She wiped away her tears and stood up with a sad smile on her face.

"So... let's end her suffering... Where nobody would ever find her... It would be as if she hadn't existed at all."

So... kaisa laga chapter 1..

Do like and Comment for chapter 2

Shayed chapter 2 main Kabir ki entry hojaye😉😊

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