Nibir OS : **Destiny Wins**

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Hey guyzzz...I know tum sab k's soch rahe hoge ki ab mai tumare mind ke sath kaun sa experiment karne wali hu🤣...dont worry is baar koi dostana wala OS nhi h so chillax n i also know ki tum sab Miracle happens and TMK ke update ka wait krre...I m so sorry for making u wait...so long...so take this OS as a compensation...here u goes...

HAPPY READING

**Destiny Wins**



Kabir's POV

*hey u are getting late buddy its 1:30 pm* my friend said...and as soon as his voice reached my ears I immediately looked at my watch...yes he is right its 1:30 pm...I m getting late she must be waiting for me...I have to reach to her apartment anyhow at sharp 2 'O' clock...thinking this I took the packet , sat on my scooter and drove off to her apartment...huh...after covering the distance of 10 km finally I reached my destination...by the way wats the time...1:59pm...phew...I sighed...in relief that am not late n waited for the clock to strike at 2...oh lord when this one minute will be over...m dying to see her...yeah finally its "2" seeing the time I jumped like a mad person who had won Oscar and rang the door bell of her house just to see the smiling face of my angel...the door opens and here she is *The Love Of My Life* standing infront of me with an angelic smile on her face...and I bet oneday her smile will surely kill me by an arrow of her innocence...

*your PIZZA mam* I said with a smile ...she took her pizza and closed the door still carrying her angelic smile on her face...and being lost in her smile I went out from her apartment...huh being so lost in her...I forgot to tell about myself ...I am kabir who currently lives in mumbai ...works in pizza hut...and fallen in love with the most prettiest girl of universe...I still remember the day when I first saw her...

FLASHBACK

About 2 month ago I was going to deliver pizza and I was on my mid way to reach my destination when I saw some boys were misbehaving with 2 teenager girls I immediately stopped my scooter and ran towards the girls to help them but before I could reach there a girl of my age reached der to help those girls and she not only teach those jerks a gud lesson but also encourage those girls and became an inspiration of dem...while consoling those girls...a beautiful smile appeared on her lips...which flies to my heart carrying a wing of her courage...her innocence...and on that moment I gave the key of my heart to dat brave angel...i so wanted to meet her to talk to her at dat time but I couldn't and the credit of all dis goes to my bad luck...who brought some vehicles between us and as soon as those vehicles moved aside she vanished from there like a thin air...

After dat day I searched her everywhere...every possible and famous place of Mumbai...where one can go but I found her nowhere...then after a month when I was working my boss came to me as my gudluck and gave me an address and ordered me to deliver PIZZA on dat address by exact 2 pm...being lost in her angelic smile I reached the destination and rang the door bell...and when the door opens I became confused that whether I was day dreaming or it is reality seeing the view in front of me...yes she was there whom i was searching everywhere since last month...seeing my expression she snaps her hand in front of me and I came back to reality then giving PIZZA to her I went outside with bunch of happiness and started dancing madly...screaming in loud voice *I Found My Key Of Heart* I found her...and from dat day it has been a month I daily come to her apartment to deliver her PIZZA...at sharp 2pm ...and daily when she opens the door seeing her in front of me my heart started dancing in an anonymous bit inside the rib cage while her sweet smile always makes me confused and forced me to think that she too loves me...but my stupid mind always took control over my heart saying *don't think too much* huh...I don't even know her name...and I never ever bother to ask her...becoz for me it doesn't matter the only thing matter is her happiness her smile...and I can do anything for her smile...and also I don't want to force my emotions my feelings on her...

Nisha's POV

OMG ...its 1:45 pm I bet he is on his midway and within 15 minutes he will reach here...I have to...I have to get ready fast...I know he always comes in time...come on girl get ready fast I said to myself...and started getting ready...huh...I m done...let me see what's the time oh its 1:59 pm...I have to wait one more min. For him...I m becoming restless to meet him oh Lord...I bet this one min. Will surely give me a major heart attack one day...yeah 5 4 3 2 1 and here the door bell rings...*Triiing*...as soon as the sound of doorbell echoed my ears I started jumping and dancing like a maniac...*uh duffer first go and open the door* said my inner conscience...I then took a deep breathe...covered my face with an unknown attitude inorder to hide my excitement of meeting him and started walking towards the door...with covering each step my heart beat becomes fast ...and finally I reached d door...and opens it and here he is *The Love Of My Life* standing in front of me in blue jeans red tee...and a blue cap on his head ...as soon as I saw him my attitude automatically turns into a bright smile...huh...this boy and his magical presence made me crazy...while his hazel brown eyes hypnotised my black dove shaped eyes...in such a way dat my words always dies under my throat...he then gave me PIZZA I paid him and immediately close the door to catch up my breathe which always get stopped seeing him...I then kept the pizza aside and sat on sofa...wait a min. I forgot something...yes yes I forget to tell my name...I m nisha...nisha Gangwal works as a software engineer and fallen in love madly crazily with a guy...whose name is unknown to me...by the way its time to go to my dreamland ...hmm I still remember the day when I first saw him...

FLASHBACK

After helping those teenager girls...I straightly went to my office...the entire day I was busy in my work...being tired and exhausted I left from my office at sharp 9pm...I was on my mid way when I saw some rich spoilbrats...were making fun of 2 poor kids...by throwing their food and taking their money...without thinking twice I ran towards those kids to help them...but before I could reach there a boy of my age in blue jeans and white tee reached there...and he not only help those kids by giving them food but also make those spoilbrats realised their mistakes...and on that moment *i locked my heart with his love* with his selfless and helping nature without even knowing his name while the innocence of his voice...ruled over my heart...I wanted to talk to him to ask him his name but before I could reach there he drove off with his friend...and from the verry next day I started searching him everywhere and after still searching for a month I didn't found a single clue of his existence...then next day to distract my mind from him I called my neighbour's kids and started playing with them...after an hour wen the kids became hungry they demanded pizza...*PIZZA* I screamed loudly...OMG I so hate pizza I don't even understand why people like it so much...huh...to fulfill those wish of those dramebaaz kids I dialled no. Of pizza hut and ordered a pizza...we were happily gossiping when clock strikes 2 and the door bell rings *Triiing* I went towards the door to open it being aware of the fact that what destiny is going to do with me...I then absentmindly open the door and saw him...yes It was him...seeing him right in front of me...my heart started beating fast while my eyes...my eyes got lost into his deep hazel brown eyes...then within a second I took control over my emotions and saw that he is lost somewhere...I then snaps my finger in front of him to bring him back in real world...he then gave me PIZZA i so wanted to ask his name but his hazel brown eyes hypnotised me and my words died on my throat...taking pizza I paid him and immediately close the door and pinch myself to know whether it is dream or reality...

From that day 2 became my lucky number...though I hate pizza but from the verry next day I started ordering pizza at same time just to meet him...and also started silently praying to God to send him only...and since one month it became my daily routine to come to my home from office at lunch time just to meet him to see him...took pizza from him and let my neighbour's kids to enjoy that pizza...after all just becoz of them I found my lost prince charming...and went back to my office I so love him...and sometimes seeing his eyes and smile my heart feels that he too likes me...but my stupid mind took control over my heart...saying* uh duffo...to smile is his job is his duty don't misunderstood his smile*...huh enough is enough I m totally confused between my mind and heart I can't tolerate it anymore...I want an answer...a perfect answer but how?? *Propose him* said my inner conscience...firstly I became shocked hearing my inner conscience but at the verry next moment I realised that it is the only option that left in front of me...gathering some courage I finally said*I will propose him tomorrow*...and left for my office...

Next Day

Its 1 pm I took a leave from my office to prepare myself to encourage myself to propose him...I got ready wearing a red coloured knee length sleeveless dress ...with light makeup..I have to look perfect today...and I can't take any chance...because this today will decide my life my entire life...I was waiting impatiently for him my legs started trembling becoz of nervousness while my heart started doing hip hop inside the rib cage...the clock strike 2 pm and as expected the door bell rang...hearing the sound of door bell I became numb as fear and nervousness overpowered me...but I anyhow gather some courage and started walking towards door...at that moment the distance of 5 meter seems like the distance of 500km...I closed my eyes and open the door with smiling face...

*your PIZZA mam* an unfamiliar voice reached to my ears...makes my eyes open blankly while my face was covered with shock...*your pizza mam* he again said...to bring me back to reality...I was in no state to say anything...my lips became sealed...while tears started brimming in my eyes *where is the person who daily deliver pizza here* I only managed to say this with great difficulty...*he left his job today* saying so he left from there...*he left his job* that bitter word was enough to make me fall on the floor...I cried...I cried bitterly...thinking I lost him ...I lost him again...and I not only lost him along with him I lost myself too...I can't even think my life without him...now how could I found him...I don't even know his name...*why u left your job ...my love please come back I can't live without you*...saying so I again broke down...then after an hour when I started sobbing...I took my clutch(wallet) and left for the place where I can find peace where I can find new hope...

Kabir's POV

Today I left my job...and standing at beach...and seeing the sea shore...it is her favorite place...last Sunday I knew about this when I stalked her...wait a min. Yes I stalk her but not as a stalker but as a secret admirer...today I decided to propose her dats y m here to gather some courage to propose her...and to tell her the reason behind leaving my job...I then turn to go to her apartment but what I saw...in front of me was enough to make me numb...I saw her..she is standing in front of me...tears were rolling down her cheeks...seeing her like this my heart ached but immediately the pain of my heart vanished when her lips forms a small curve...

My POV

Seeing him in front of her...firstly she became shocked..then in verry next moment her lips formed a curve seeing her life in front of her...her tears of sorrow ...tears of pains turns into tears of happiness tears of joy...without wasting a sec. She immediately ran towards him...who was standing there like a statue...as soon as der eyes met...der eyes got locked..and started capturing each other's emotions... dat were hidden in their heart...der is no need of words their eyes were clearly conveying their feelings...their feelings of love ...without thinking twice he took her into his protective embrace...and he too started crying...and his cry was full of happiness full of joy...becoz today he got *The Love Of His Life*...

After breaking apart they wipe each other's tears ...*may I know your name* she said with great difficulty and started dancing mentally that finally today she succeeded in asking his name...today her word didn't died on her throat..

*kabir ...kabir Singh Rathore* he said casually...hearing his name she became shocked and started showering him with no. Of questions...

Nisha- you are *The Kabir Singh Rathore The future of Rathore industries of bengluru...* ??*you are that Kabir Singh Rathore who is coming from London tomorrow*??*you are that Kabir Singh Rathore for whom media is struggling to take one glance of him whom no ones knows here*???

"Yes " he said innocently...*any more question??* he added...

Nisha - yes *you are that Kabir Singh Rathore jiska for whom I m finding every possible excuse just to reject him since one month*??

Kabir - wait a min. He immediately took out his phone open his wats up account and downloaded a image...and then he again continued...no this can't be happen...u are Nisha Gangwal the girl whom my mom found for me...

She innocently nodded in positive...and both started laughing...thinking that what game there destiny had played with them...

Nisha - kabir can I ask something??

Kabir - u don't need any permission nisha...

Nisha - why this famous Kabir Singh Rathore was working in pizza hut??

Kabir - I was tired of being a celeb guy...I always want to live my life as a free bird...my training got over two month before...so taking advantage of that I came here Mumbai the city of dreams to live my life as a free bird though for few months only without informing anybody...and today I left the job because tomorrow I have to be Kabir Singh Rathore not an ordinary person...so this is my story he said smilingly...and she too smiled...

He then took out a diamond ring from his pocket and sat on his knee and said *so now also u will find an excuse to reject The Kabir Singh Rathor* ???? *Yes* she said smilingly making him confused *And why so*?? he asked raising his eyebrow...*becoz I fall in love with that selfless guy who without thinking twice helped those poor kids*hearing this from her he became shocked thinking how come she know about that incident while she again continued *I fall in love crazily with that ordinary pizza delivery guy whose hazel brown eyes always hypnotised me*...I love that kabir not this The Kabir Singh Rathore...

Hearing this he smiled cheekily and kissed her hand saying*and I fall in love with that brave girl who without wasting a sec. Ran to help two unknown teenagers without thinking about the consequences...* now its her time to get shocked while he continued *I love dat innocent girl who became an inspiration for them , I love madly that girl whose smile flies over to my heart carrying the wings of her innocence , I love that girl whose magical presence makes my heart beat fast*...I love that nisha...saying this he touched his forehead with her smilingly...*nisha dont u think we are destined to meet*...he said...while she nodded in positive n said *our love wins*

mmmhmm*Our Destiny Wins* he said...still touching his forehead with her...

Love is above rich and poor...love is a pure feeling which connect two souls by connecting their heart together ...keep faith in love ...if your love is pure your love is true...then your *Destiny will surely Wins*

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Shanaya1526 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U make me mad for u one day ...loved it alot ...u always makes a new concept for all
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nimmi nimmi kya os h luvd it to d core
Pizza delivry boy kabiraa☺️
Kabir nd Nishu pov 👏Such a cute stry awsmmm dil garden garden ho gya
Love at frst sight
Aag dono tarf barabar ki lagi
Tooo cute mele nibir itne pyaare nazr naa lage
PS- Pizza pizza pdh k Bhoook lag gai 🤣
Kabira ko koi bhejo mele liye pizza leke bhoook lgi 🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW! SUCH A BEAUTIFUL OS NIMI ...!!!
YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT VERY BEAUTIFULLY DEAR ...!!!
REALLY DENSITY CAN WIN OVER EVERY HURDLE ... EVERY PROBLEM ..!!!
LOVED IT SO SO SO SOOO MUCH ...!!!

THANKS FOR THE PM ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Cuteness overloaded...
Awesome description nimzi... loved it...

Ps - i luv pizzza

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow wow wow 👏
Fabulous!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..Nimi..Awesome..Loved it..😊
Muje bi pizzas chahiye from kabiraa..😉😆
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Awesome os nimi 👏 👏 👏
Loved it
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awesomee babaa...loved it!👏
haayyee the lovestory of an extraordinary pizza guy n an ordinary girl...interesting!😆

itni baar pizza bol bol ke, pizza ki yaad dilaa di jo maine ek month se nahi khaayi😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS!
Both their feelings were well captured in their respective POVs.
The confession was very cute
Do write more and thanks for pm 😊

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