NiBir ff - dil mil gaaye(updated part 6 pg 27) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Black_Maniac

Hey Soundharya, I am Krishi... Congrats on ur first story, it's a really nice idea... I'd love to get PMs too 😃
Continue soon 😊

thanks krishi I will send pm to u too😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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saundarya can I gets pms too😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
awsum part
kabir nisha ko dekhte hi uspar lattoo ho gaya..
love at first sight..
wooo...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was sho cute
Please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey soundharya it was a nice update..loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey thank you for the pm
Lovely start to ur story
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

awsum part
kabir nisha ko dekhte hi uspar lattoo ho gaya..
love at first sight..
wooo...

😉
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Originally posted by: newIFmember

Hey soundharya it was a nice update..loved it..

thank you 😉
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Hola guys!!😃 I am really happy by the comments do share them and a happy reading😆

Soundharya

(imagine rashi as anybody you hate the most 😡even i did the same😉)

Part 2

Saurav & sukku - kya ?

Kabir -Er... main ye soch raha tha ki woh bohot intelligent lagthi hai toh uske saath frndship karke i can score better marks .

Saurav- achcha ayse ! (relieved look)

Sukku - haan yaar ek minit ke liye toh mai darr hi gaya tha (smiles)

Kabir- haan aur kuch nahi

Saurav- chal canteen chalthe he thoda fresh up ho jaayega

******************************************************************

Meanwhile ...

Dolly- aur nisha bathao apne gujrat ke bare mei

Kirti - hai even i am excited suna hai waha navratri bahot amazing hota hai

Nisha -yea of course waha ke navratri ka tho jawab nahi (smiles remembering those memories)

Dolly-miss kar rahi hai na gujrat ko?

Nisha-han

Kirti- chal wo sab chod canteen chalthe hai

Dolly -(smiles widely)haan nisha chal ,hamare school ka canteen hi hamare school ki pehchan hai

Nisha- kyun?

Kirti- chal kudh samaj jayegi

At the canteen

Kabir- aare sauro kithna hai tere paas

Saurav-sir i have 100

Kabir - (in doubtful tone)aur sukku?

Sukku(smiles widely)mere paas...

Kabir- bol na

Sukku-mere paas 100minus 100 hai

Kabir - pagle bola tha na paise leke aane ke liye

Sukku-sorry!

Saurav-kabir chod tere paas kithne hai

Kabir-mere paas be 100 hai

Saurav-teek hai such chocos le lete hai

(kabir&co. Go to canteen get there chocos and sit in one of the table parallel to nisha&co. Without anybody of them noticing)

Nisha-sahi hai yaar so amazing ek dum college type ka hai

(suddenly they notice a girl with open hair with light makeup walking towards the canteen in a very weird style)

Nisha- kaun hai ye ajeeb ladki ?yeh school hai ya party aise bhi koyi school aatha hai

Kirti- aare yaar ye na rashi hai ,bohot ajeeb si hai infact iske aise harkathe hame weird lagthi hai but boys ko bohot stylish lagtha hai

Dolly-hain pura school hai iske peeche ,hamesha boyfrnds change karthi hai monthly - monthly u know

Nisha-chee.. kithni bad girl hai

Kirti- haan bohot saare boys ko heartbreak kiya hai is ne

(nisha started to create a bad image for rashi)

Rashi- oh hi new girl maine suna hai tum bohot studious ho y cant u join my group instead of these foolish ones

Nisha -nice meeting u rashi lekin i am happy with them and i want to get good marks in studies rather than flirting so i am sorry and by the way i am not new girl i am nisha(shakes hand)

(rashi feels insulted)

Rashi- nisha just wait and watch wat i do with u

Nisha - lets see

(these all incidents are being watched by kabir and co )

Sukku-bhai ye to Jhansi ki rani nikli

Saurav-kabir sach mei yaar uske ek hi line bolthe hi rashi ke hosh udgaaye

Kabir- (monologue)ab tho mujhe nisha se dosti karni hi padegi

Sukku-kya soch raha hai yaar?

Kabir- soch raha tha ki nisha se ab dosti kar hi letha hoo

After school finishes...

Dolly - nisha we r surprised

Kirti- han us ka muh dekne laayak tha sach mei(grins)

Nisha - guys use chodo wo mujhe challenge nahi kar sakti anyways ...bye

Dolly- bye

Kirti-same here

Next day..

Before class starts ..

Saurav -kar le yaar nisha se dosti

Sukku- han kar le

Kabir-hmm.. lekin kaise?

Sukku-ye toh socha hi nahi yaar

(After some time )

Saurav- sukku uske bench mein ek note hai na use leke aaja

Sukku- lekin kyu?

Saurav- leke aa to sahi

(sukku silently goes and picks it)

Sukku- le bhai

Saurav-ab kabir jaa yeh use deke aa

Sukku-aare kamine agar use lota na hi tha toh leke kyu aane bola?

Saurav- ek minit sukku ,sunn kabir tu ye notebook use ye bolkar de ki yeh tumare bench mila tha

Kabir - wah kya idea hai(gives hi-fi)

(Kabir does as he says and ...)

Kabir-nisha kya ye tumara note hai?

Nisha- han thanks me yahi doon rahi thi thank you ,vaise tumhara ...

Kabir -kabir... kabir singhania

Nisha-(shakes hand)fine toh hum aaj si dost huye

Kabir-sure y not(grins)

(saurav and sukku smile seeing there mission succeding)

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Guys maaf kardo agar bohot boring tha toh

SORRY!!!

Edited by itssound - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome 👏
Chalo nibir friends toh ban gaye 😃

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