NIBIR SS - MAGIC OF LOVE (UPDATED PART- 2 PG-27)

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Hello guys me again with a new story on nibir so hoped you liked it
Thank you nimi for helping me 😉


To all niraj fans if you don't like the story so don't comment here if you have any problem with the story then pm me no bashings are allowed here
The story will focused on more rajbir then compare to nibir.


So bakwaas bandh ab padho prologue do like and comment also please


SCROLL DOWN FOR PROLOGUE 😉
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Nibir Story- Magic of love
Prologue

A boy of age 5 was asking questions to his father to him there love story but he is not telling him don't know why.

Boy-Papa please batao na love story aapki aur mamma ki please na.
Father- Aayu ache bache zidd nahi karte hai.
Aayu-Papa batao na please na pretty please.
Mother- Bata do na kabir bechare ko kyu pareshaan kar rahe ho.
Kabir- Acha bata du na ok nisha ji isse yeh bhi bata deta hu ki yeh 6 saal pehle tumhare pet mai kaise yeh bhi bata deta hu toh beta sunno hua yeh tha mai aur tumhari mumma nai.
Kabir was cut off by nisha.
Nisha- Aieee mere bete ko apne jaise k mat banao.
Nisha to aayu-Beta aapko kyu story sunni hai.
Aayu-Bas mujhe sunna hai.
Then a voice came from outside the room.
Voice- kya sunna hai aapko.
Aayu-Mamuuu
Aayu goes to him and hugged him.
Nisha-Bhai kitne dino ke baad aaye ho.
She also goes to him and hugged him.
Voice- Nahi choti bas hum thode se busy hogaye the. Acha yeh chodo yeh baatao ish chote k ko kya jaana hai.
Kabir- kuch nahi bade bhaiya bas jaana chaata hai meri aur nishu ki love story.
Voice-Toh bata dijiye na.
Kabir- Kya bata du iske mamu hi iske mummy papa ke love story mai villain the.
Voice- Hum koi villain nahi the.
Then a voice came of a lady.
Lady- Kya kaha apne viraj aap villain nahi the balki aap hi inke story mai grahan the.
Viraj- Lekin kaira.
Kaira-Ek dum chup mujhe kuch nisha se baat karni hai.
Then nisha and kaira started talking and they are talking nonstop.
While kabir and viraj shook their head.
Kabir and viraj(monologue)-Sabkoi shahi kehte hai ki jab aurat ko bhagwan nahi samaj paye hai toh humlog kaunsi khet ki muuli hai.
Then kabir goes to viraj and says.
Tab bade bhaiya kaise chal rahi hai marriage life.
Viraj gets emotional and says
Kabir aap mahaan hai aapne 7 saal kaise reh gaye iss shaadi mai. Mai toh pagal hogaya hu 1 hi saal mai.
Kabir understands his feelings and says
Mai samajhta hu aapki feelings par aapko bhi aadat ho jayegi kyuki humlog vo hai.
Viraj-Kya hai humlog?
Kabir- GHULMAI-A-WIFE hai humlog ab samjhe aap.
Viraj understood what he is saying is right. So he hugs kabir and he also reciprocates. While nisha and kaira were shocked to see what is happening?
Nisha- Yeh kya ho raha hai?
Kaira- Lagta hai yaha pe dostana 2 ho raha hai.
Both the ladies laughed while both the mens gave angry glare to them.
Nisha- Acha sorry bolo yaha pe kya ho raha tha?
Kabir- Nahi bas bol rahe the ki humlog ki life kaise ho gayi hai shaadi ke baad.
Nisha and kaira(angrily)-kaise ho gayi hai life.
Kabir(monologue)- Oh teri maine kya bol diya.
Viraj(monologue)- Yeh khud marega mujhe bhi marvaega.
Viraj- Kuch nahi bas bol rahe the ki shaadi ke baad humari life jannat ban gayi hai. HAI NA KABIR.
Kabir- Ha humlog yahi bol rahe the.
Murrmering to viraj- kya baat hai bade bhaiya aap bhi bade jhuth bolne lade ho.
Viraj- Jab jijaji jhuth bole toh saala bhi kaise peeche rahe.
Both chuckled.
Nisha- Koi bol sakta hai kya pehle aap dono ek dusre ke dushman the.
Kaira- Sach mai nishu right bol rahi ho. Viraj toh villain the.
Aayu- Mamu villain???
Kaira-Ha beta tera mamu villain the.
Viraj-Mai koi villain nahi tha bas apni sister ko protect kar raha tha.
Kabir- Ha toh but aap mere liye toh aap villain hi the.
Aayu(cribbed)- Mujhe story sunni hai abhi ke abhi.
Kabir- Ok mere baap sunle story but tu kuch bhi beech mai nahi bolega ok.
Aayu-Ok.
Kabir-Good boy toh suno yeh story start hoti hai aaj se 7 years ago.

So this is the prologue hope you liked it.
Please do like and comment.
Sorry for error
Bashers stay away.
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Character sketch
Kabir kumar- College ka hero no 1 stud.His best friends are kirti,dolly,saurav,umesh,aman and suketu
Nisha gangwal- Sweet innocencent girl who loves her bade bhayiya a lot.
Viraj gangwal-Nisha's big brother who loves his sister a lot and protect her.
Vasu and arjun kumar- kabir's parent.

So this is character sketch.
Hopes you liked it.
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Index
Prologue and character sketch pg - 1
PART-1
PART-2
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
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wah wah ek aur story?? 😃
mujhse lika hi nai jara meri pending stories !!
and ap toh likhte hi jaa re 😆
shatabdi express 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

wah wah ek aur story?? 😃
mujhse lika hi nai jara meri pending stories !!
and ap toh likhte hi jaa re 😆
shatabdi express 🤣


Correct bas idea aaya hai kal tak prologue bana ke update kar dunga aur tumhartumhare stories ke updates ka waiting hai bas 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res...😲

-----UNRES-----

Nice start...continue soon...thanx for the pm...😊
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky


Correct bas idea aaya hai kal tak prologue bana ke update kar dunga aur tumhartumhare stories ke updates ka waiting hai bas 😉

keep waiting!!
m too lazy to write N update!!
kabi kabi yakeen nai ata meine 4 likhliye!!.han thik h only one is completed and kther three still going on 😆
but phir ... Its hard to believe!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786


keep waiting!!
m too lazy to write N update!!
kabi kabi yakeen nai ata meine 4 likhliye!!.han thik h only one is completed and kther three still going on 😆
but phir ... Its hard to believe!!


Ok waiting neha ji
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon

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