it was my first attempt in writing something ..so plz forgive me if u dnt like it ...here u go ..
Enemies Turned Into Lovers
PLOT = Kabir and nisha , the two known enemies of the college
Flashback
Nisha nd kabir were friends at a time , their group was the most known friendly group . Nisha was a tombyish type of girl whereas kabir was a cool dude ...they were new frnds at that time so kabir didnt knew abt nishas pilani incident . One day nisha was late as she had extra classes, the group was sitting in the canteen , so noticing nisha not there kabir finally spoke out his feelings ..
kabir - guys i wanna ask u something ...yaar yeh nisha itna ladko jaise kyu behave karti hai , gender acha nhi laga kya nd yeh ladko se itna rudely kyu baat karti hai , jab dekho chillati rehti hai , mujhe toh vo samjh hi nhi aati , use ladka bulau ya ladki meri confusion door karo yaar ..nd he laughed ...when he saw everyones faces having a shade of fear he asked ...kya hua tumhare chehro pe 12 kyu baje h ?
saurav pointed in a direction ...kabir got confused nd he too looked in that direction , nisha was boiling with anger , kabir gulped , without saying anything nisha stormed from there
saurav - kya yaar kabir tune abhi college join kiya hai isiliye tujhe kuch nhi pta , itni mushkil se
maine nisha ko mnaya tha tujhe grp mei include karne ke liye lekin tune sab kuch bigaad diya , guys chalo nisha ke paas isse pehle ki vo kuch kar de ..
FLASHBACK ENDS
From that day kabir nd nisha didnt talk to each other , whenever they saw each other , one of them will go from there or will fight for a silly reason ...the group had become sandwiched between them ...they were finding ways to resolve their fight ..
Yet they were having a cold war but still there were some feelings for each other in their heart ...they were having fights but they never spoke some personal bad abt each other except "bandar" nd "bandariya " .Kabirs nature was down to earth hence nisha started liking him nd nishas jolly nature made kabir fall for her .But they didnt knew hw to end their fight .
whenever kabir thought of apologising , his so called girlfriend riya would stop him , kabir was hell irritated by her but it was also true that he was nt having a serious reason to end the fight becoz he too knew what blunder he have done by speaking those things .
Nisha too thought of forgiving him , but what reason will she give that "she had fallen for him " ..no ways .. she never liked riya getting so much close to kabir ...she was soo possessive abt him , she knew that riya was with him only becoz of his looks nd wealth ..
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Saurav was having his birthday nd so he invited all his friends including nisha nd kabir to his farmhouse ...dolly nd kirti went with nisha to her home so that they will go together whereas kabir went with saurav
In nishas room
d - kya nisha aaj bhi jeans top , thats not fair yaar aaj toh tu kuch sexy sa pehenle ...
n - guys plz tum logo ko jitna asan lag rha hai , utna simple nhi h yeh sab bhulana , tum log jao sauro ki party mei...mai thode time mei tumhe join karungi ...
saying so they went from there , saurav nd kabir had come to pick them up ...kabir noticed nisha not being there but avoid questioning
after they left ..nisha was watching herself in the mirror nd kirti 's words were ringing in her mind ...she spent an hr thinking abt herself .."nisha move on yaar " ...atlast she decided
She opened her cupboard to search a dress ...but no dress was there ..when she was abt to close the cupboard a packet fells from the top ...she opened it ...it contained a beautiful red coloured knee lenghth backless dress ...she gave a second thought to it but she brushed her thoughts nd went to change
after changing she observed herself from top to bottom "not bad " ...she thought ..she opened her tied hair nd staightened them nd ...curled some in the bottom ...after ages she did some light makeover ...wore high heels...nd when she got ready " dollz nd kirti get ready for a shock"..she spoke to herself ..nd giggled ...
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she went to the party in a taxi
the farmhouse was beautifully decorated with lights nd balloons ...she stepped out of the car handing a clutch purse ..she felt a sense of confidence in herself ...she took a long breath nd walked through the entrance ...all eyes were on her ...dolly nd kirti were shocked but were happy also..saurav was standing with mouth wide open ...boys started composing themselves nd setting up their hair whereas girls made a face
Kabir was talking on his phone nd didnt noticed nisha ...riya came nd hugged kabir , kabir hugged her back with an irritated face ..riya turned him to the other side so that he doesnt see her becoz somewhere she knew abt kabirs feelings nd she didnt wanted to loose him ...actually loose her money bank
nisha was behaving like a girl like smiling , talking , walking etc etc ...saurav ran towards kabir to give him the news
s - kabir kabir ...
k - kya hua sauro koi bhooth dekh liya kya
s - are kabir chal toh mere saath..tujhe ek shock dena hai .. .riya understood what saurav was talking of...
r- nhi kabir mere saath rahega hume kuch baat karni h ...
s - riya bas 2 min ...
r - nhi maine kha na ...kabir made a helpless face becoz if he would speake something she would start her mellowdrama ...
k - sauro tu chal mai thodi der mei aata hun ...saurav understood his conditon nd so went from there
They heard an announcement ..it was sukku "hello ladies nd gentlemen , welcome to the bday party of my bro saurav , lets make this party a little interesting by doing a dance .." ..all cheered ..." hold on hold on !! ..it have a twist , u have to wear an eye masks nd dance , the one wearing similar masks will dance together ..so r u ready" ...""yesss"" all shouted
r - dont kabir , its boring , lets do some romance ..nd she tries to get close to him ..
but kabir finally spoke up " plz riya mai yahan apne dost ki party enjoy karne aya hoon na ki tumhare saath romance karne ..smjhi so plz stay away frm me "...nd he goes frm there while riya makes an angry face
kabir goes to get the mask ...kirti nd dolly insists nisha but nisha denied but when sauro pleaded her with his cute antics she agreed
kabir nd nisha wore the same eye masks..all goes on the stage searching for their partner ..kabir nd nisha finally looked at each other , nisha recognised kabir but kabir didnt as it was not the old nisha ..
kabir held her hand..he felt that he knws her but was nt able to recognise ...nisha was feeling extremely happy tht finally they r together though for some time only..she smiled but when kabir passed a weird smile she understood that he havnt recognised her..
music started
nisha kept her one hand on his shoulder while he kept his on her waist nd the other hand of them were interwined with each other nd they started swaying slowely with song
kabir was dancing like dancing with some stranger nd she was not able to take it so she said "kabir"..in a slow voice ...kabir was shocked .."is she nisha "...kabir looked at her from top to bottom "no she cant " ...he said to himslef nd so he said " who r u " ...nisha got emotionall that he didnt even recognised her by her voice ..tears formed in her eyes ...she left his hand nd moved away from him ...kabir noticed her tears ...she went away towards the bar area
kabir was confused at what he did so he followed her
nisha sat at the drink area ...she threw her mask nd started to cry ...her back was towards kabir ...she ordered a drink altough she dont drink but at that time she needed to ...kabir took small steps towards ...he placed his hand on her shoulder nisha turned ...kabir was shocked "nisha"..."oh pehchan liya ab mujhe " ...she said in a drunken way , her eyes were red due to constant crying ...
k - nisha yeh kya haal bna liya hai tune apna , or yeh dress yeh sab kya hai ...though he liked her new avtar but as boys were staring at her with not so good looks ..he felt possessive...
n - kyu ab tumhe isme bhi problm hai , pehle mera mazak udaya mere tombyish looks pe ab jab maine ladkiyon wale kapde pehne h usme bhi tumhe dikkat hai , akhir tum chahte kya ho mr. kabir singh rathore ...kabir felt bad he soo wanted to hug her nd say sorry but he controlled as she was not in the state to listen anything ..
k - nisha chal yahan se ..he held her hand ...
n - nhi chodo mera haath nhi jaana tumhare saath ...she tried protesting
a guy comes there all drunk - are vo keh rhi h chodne ke liye toh chodde kyu zabardasti kar rha hai , hum mna lete hai ..
k - just stay away ok , its none of ur business...finally nisha left his hand but the guy holded her hand - chaliye lets have a dance ... ...kabir holded his hand nd punched him on his face ...
k - maine kha na door reh nisha se samjha ...he picked nisha in his arms nd left frm there
he entered in a room nd made nisha lie on the bed
n - mujhe yahan kyu laay ho mai jaa rhi hun ...nd she tried standing up but kabir again made her sit ...
k - chup bilkul chup ..yahin baithi raho mai abhi aata hun ...
after some 5 mins he came back with a glass of lemon juice ...he made nisha drink it after a lot of attempts
after drinking it nisha clutched her head - aah ..!!!...
k - are u ok now??...nisha looked at kabir ...the vision was not so clear ..so she replied - hmm ...kabir made her sleep
after half an hr she woke up ...
n - yeh mai yahan kaise aagy ...nd she looked here nd there nd found kabir sleeping on the sofa n - yeh yahan kya kar rha hai mai toh party mei thi ...nd she remembered what happened at the dance stage nd bar ...
n - oh no yeh maine kya kar diya ab toh yeh mujhse or nafrat karega , mai tomboy hi sahi thi , jab bhi mai kuch ladkiyon wale kaam karti hun mere saath humesha kuch na kuch galat hota hai ,..nd she started crying ..
kabir wakes up nd saw nisha crying he gets tensed ...
k - kya hua nisha r u ok?...nisha looks at him ...
n - iam sorry maine jis tarah se tujhse behave kiya vahan was not correct ...
k - its ok mujhe bura nhi laga ...
n - hmm thnks nd she stands up to go from there but kabir held her hand ...
k - mai bhi sorry uss dinn ke lie bhi or aaj tujhe na pehchanne ke liye bhi ...
nisha turned towards him kabir too stands up nd cups her face ..."lekin mai kya karta kabhi tujhe aise kapdo mei dekha hi nahi or agar uss dinn mujhe tere past ke baare mei pta hota toh mai vo kabhi nhi kehta iam extremely sorry "he said with moist eyes...nisha just hugged him ..kabir too hugged her tight ...after some time they realised their postion nd so parted ...
n - voo .its okay maaf kiya ...nd she was abt to go when kabir pulled her back nd pinned her to the wall ...
k - or bhi kuch kehna hai mujhe jo bht time se kehna chahta tha ...nisha gulped somewhere she knew what is going to come ...
n - hmm ...
k -voo.. he came close to her ear nd she closed he eyes ...you are looking sexy in this dress ..or ...
n - or ...
k - or i ..iam sorry once again...kabir mentally slapped himself for not confessing his feelings but what to do he was nervous ...
nisha pushed him upsetly nd went towards the door ...
kabir closed his eyes nd called - nisha ..she stopped ...i love you ...he was expecting a tight slap from her but instead she came nd hugged him tight ..he took support of the bed to balance himself nd she shouted " i love you too mr kabir singh rathore " ...kabirs happiness had no bounds ..he knew that she loved him but was not sure ...they remained like that for some good 10 mins ...
after breaking the hug ...
k - ab ...
nisha was confused - ab kya ...
k - offo nisha ...propose karne ke baad kya hota hai ...
n - kya hota hai ..she was still trying to figure out ..
k - tera kuch nhi ho sakta saying so he sealed his lips with hers ...nisha was shocked but she too recaprocated it with the same passion ..encircling her arms around his neck ...they parted due to a knock at the door ...
s - kabir tu andar hai kya ...
k - han han sauro vo thoda head ache ho rha tha toh aaram karne aagya ...he said holding nisha tightly nisha blushed hard ...
s - acha theek hai vaise nisha ka kuch pta hai kya vo bhi kahi dikhaay nhi de rhi ...
k - nhi mujhe kya pta vo bandariya kahan hai ..ho sakta hai ghar chale gy ho ...
s - acha theek h tu aram kar ...nd he left ...kabir looked at nisha who was boiling with anger ...nisha started hitting him .."kya bola tune bandariya ..abhi btati hun tujhe jungle se bhaga hua chimpanzee "...kabir tried to miss her beating ...nd finally he caught her hands
k - acha na sorry ,continue kare jo adhoora reh gya tha ...
n - nhi kuch continue nhi hoga samjha ..but kabir being kabir ..he holded her tightly their lips just a few inches apart when kabirs phone rang ..
k - kya yaar ..nd he angrily picked up the phone while nisha giggled ...
k - hello ...
r - hello kabir where r u jaan ...
k - han sweety voo ..nisha looked at kabir ...kabir got scared ...
k - riya mai jahan bhi hun tumhe usse kya matlab , ab plz mera peecha chodo ok ..nd he cuts the call ...nisha smiled nd held his hand ...
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Next day in college kabir told the whole grp abt their fight being solved but not abt their new relation as he wanted nisha to be by his side while telling them .
Kabir was talking with sauro when suddenly boys crowd stood near the main gate ..they too went there ...kabir was shocked seeing nisha in a backless suit ...her hair were freely swaying with the wind...kabir was getting possessive abt her as all eyes were on her ...kabir ran towards her nd holded her hand , nd walked with her throwing daggers at the boys ...nisha enjoyed this ...later on they told the whole grp abt it nd promissed to live the whole life together
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Epilogue - page 5