NIBIR OS - LOVE CONFESSION IN MY WAY

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HAPPY NEW YEAR K KHAANDAAN
This is a small gift from me hope you liked it

NIBIR OS - LOVE CONFESSION IN MY WAY

CHARACTERS
KABIR SINGH RATHORE - A Sweet lovely boy who loves his family and also loves Nisha from collage times.Now he take cares of his father business.

NISHA GANGWAL - A Sweet innocent girl who loves her family and she is very possessive about kabir for an unknown reason.

Arjun singh rathore - Kabir's father

Vasundhra singh rathore - kabir's mother

Gangwal family as same as show

Kabir and Nisha are best friend from schools.kabir loves nisha from college time but he was not sure to confess his love because his friendship and trust can be broken with nisha but one day he decide to confess his love to nisha so he called nisha and says
kabir - Hi.
Nisha - Ha bol kya bolna hai itne raat ko phone kyu kiya hai.
Kabir - Vo bolna tha ki mai tujhe kal.
Nisha - kabir seedhe seedhe bol kya bolna hai ya do ek punch.
Kabir - Ok chill acha tu mujhe phone se kaise maaregi dil ka connection hai kya (kabir smirking).
Nisha - kabir topic mat change kar bol kisliye phone kiya hai.
kabir - kal tu humlog ke favorite park mai aa sakti kya kuch baat karni hai.
Nisha - ok mai aa jaungi lekin tu bhi aa jaana time pe ok bye.
Kabir - ok bye.
Monologue - kal mai tujhe apni dil ki bata jaroor bata kar rahunga. I just hope nisha also loves me.

Next day
At park
Nisha - yeh kabir ka baccha hamesha late karta hai aane mai k khainka.
Kabir - Kabir ke bacche ko aane mai time hai (murmerring to himself) aur sayad mere bacche tere hi pet se aaye.
Nisha - kuch bola kya.
Kabir - Nahi ...tune kuch suuna kya.
Nisha - Nahi...Acha bol kisliye mujhe yaha bulaya hai.
Kabir - Ha mujhe bolna tha ki mai tujse nahi tu mujhse nahi nahhi mai tujse.
Nisha - kabir kya bol raha hai saaf saaf bol.
Kabir(monologue)- Kabir yaar focus kabir tu propose kar raha hai na ki kisse jung mai ja raha hai waise nisha ko propose karna kisi jung se kam nahi hai kabir focus.
kabir bend down on his knees and caught her one hand on his knees and says
Nisha I love you i love you so much nisha.Nisha mai tere saath apni puri life bitana chhata kya tu bhi mere saath rehna chhati hai.
Nisha gets tensed because she does not know what to say so she immediately says
No kabir i don't love you mai tujhe sirf as a friend dekhti hu aur kuch nahi.
Nisha goes from there without looking back because she is also crying for an unknown reason.
Kabir was fully broken he was crying heavily but then he felt bunch of hands on his shoulder he turn and look them with a sad face.

Next morning
Rathore house
Nisha goes to rathore house to say sorry to kabir for breaking his heart. She rang the bell and vasu open the door.
Vasu- aere nisha beta aao na andar bahar kyu khadi ho.
Nisha- No aunty mujhe kabir se kuch kaam hai aap please usse bula sakti hai kya.
Vasu- Sorry nisha kabir kal hi london chala gaya hai.
Nisha(shocked)- LONDON par kyu kyu gaya london.
Vasu - Actually kuch official kaam aa gaya tha isliye vo gaya, mujhe laga ussne tumhe bataya hoga.
Nisha was on verge of crying.
Nisha- Nahi aunty ussne mujhe kuch nahi bola, aunty mai ghar ja rahi hu bye.
Vasu close the door till then arjun came and said
kaam hua?
Vasu-Abhi bas start hua hai abhi picture poori baaki hai.
Arjun- I hope humara plan successful hojaye bas.
Vasu- Hope for the best.
While nisha runs to her room and started crying.
Nisha - Kyu kabir kyu kiya mere saath aisa atleast mujhe bata toh deta kabir ki tu ja raha hai kyu kabir.
She again started crying.
3 months passed kabir didn't talk to nisha not a single time nisha tried to talk to him but everytime she failed.
Nisha's room
Nisha was standind near the window looking outside but she was thinking something in her mind.
Nisha - kyun kabir aisa kya kiya maine ki tu mujhse baat bhi nahi kar raha hai please kabir baat kar mujhse.
She again started crying.
Outside Nisha's room
Dolly- I think humara plans kaam kargaya hai.
Kirti- plans nahi plan dolly di shayad kaam kargaya hai lekin abhi bhi isko puri tarah realize nahi hua hai.
Saurav- ha dolly kirti is right.
Kirti- Vo toh mai hamesha se right bolti hu.
Umesh- Aere right wight choro aage kya karne ka plan hai.
Sukku- Mere paas ek idea hai.
Jwala- Ha bolo sukku bhaiya.
Then sukku told his plan and all became happy because they knew this plan will get success.
Then sukku called someone and told his plan and he also agreed.

At night
Gangwal house
All the members of gangwal family were eating there foods then suddenly vasu and arjun enters the house.
Dada ji- Aere aao arjun beta vasu beti aao na andar kuch important baat karni hai kya.
Vasu- Ha nemi uncle asal mai kal kabir vapas aa raha hai london se.
Nisha became very happy after listening kabir is coming back.
Nisha(Happily)-kya kabir vapas aa raha hai.
Arjun-Ha beta kal kabir aur uski girlfriend aa rahi hai.
Nisha(shocked)-Girlfriend??? Matlab kabir ki koi girlfriend hai.
Vasu - Ha beta infact vo uske saath parso engagement karega aur toh mai uski girlfriend ka photo bhi laai hu yeh dekhiye sablog uski girlfriend ko.
(Imagine kanchi singh as samaira as his girlfriend)
All were impressed by kabir's choice.
Then vasu and arjun leaves and nisha runs to her room and started crying very badly.
All the counsins came to see her but they all became sad.
At midnight
Gangwal house terrace
All the counsins were there with nisha and sourav.
Nisha was fully sad this was noticed by all cousins.Then suddenly sourav says
Bhai kabir aur sammira ki jodi bilkul rab ne bana di jodi hai.
Nisha(monologue)-acha beta rab nai bana di jodi ruk tera bhi kisi donkey ke saath shaadi kara ke mai bhi bolungi rab nai bana di jodi.
Sukku-Ha yaar tu sahi keh raha hai.
Nisha's anger has no bounds so she shouted and says chup karo tum sab
Dolly-kyu nishu tu jealous ho rahi hai kya.
Nisha- Mai kyu jealous hungi.
Kirti-Jhoot mat bol nishu tu jealous ho rahi hai uss samaira se.
Nisha - Nahi ho rahi hu mai jealous.
sukku-Acha thik hai tu na ek kaam karna tu kabir ke baarat mai dil khol ke naachna aur jab uske bacche hoge ne toh tu sambhlana uske bacche ko ok.
Nisha(angrily)-Dekh sukku chup kar varna.
Umesh-Varna kya nishu tu kyu jealous ho rahi hai tu toh kabir se pyaar bhi nahi karti hai.
sourav-Ha nishu
Nisha(shouted)- Chup karo tum sab ha karti hu mai usse pyaar lekin vo mujse nahi karta hai pyaar ab.
Umesh-Nishu vo bhi karta hai tujh se pyaar vo na kal aaeyga na tab tu usse proposed kar dena ok.
Dolly - Ha nishu.
Nisha-ok kal mai kabir ko apne dil ki baat bata dungi ok.
All shouted-ok.
Then they gave group hug and leaves for their room.

Next day
Kabir arrived with samaira and he takes blessing from everyone and give hugs to cousins but he was ignoring nisha.Nisha became sad but then she thought that she will proposed him at night in their favourite park.So she calls kabir and tell him to come in the park first kabir disagree then nisha requested him to come so he agreed.
At night
Park
Nisha arrived but waiting for kabir then kabir also arrived and said.
Ha bol kisliye bulai hai mujhe yahan.
Nisha-Dekh kabir tu uss samaira ke saath engagement mat kar please.
Kabir-Kyu???
Nisha-Kyuki mai tujhse bahut pyaar karti hu aur mai tere saath puri zindagi saath bitana chhati hu.
Kabir- Dekh nisha tune late kar diya hai ab mai tujh se pyaar nahi karta hu bye.
Kabir leaves and nisha started crying then she goes to her room and she cryed whole night.

Next day
All were preparing for the engagement.They all leave for rathore house.
In the engagement there were only gangwal families and rathore family only.
(Imagine kabir and nisha dress same as they wear on their sangeet ceremony)
All were enjoying the party but nisha was fully sad she was not enjoying the party at all.Then samaira enters this make nisha shocked because she was wearing jeans and top.
Nisha(monologue)-yeh pagal hai kya koi apne engagement mai aise kapde pehnta hai kya.
kabir was standing on the stage with pandit ji.
Pandit ji - ji dulhan ko laaiye.
Vasu - ji pandit ji abhi laate hai.
Then vasu signalled dolly and kirti to bring her.
dolly and kirti takes nisha to the stage she was shocked what is happening??
Then she came to the stage and all the engagement rituals complete she was still confused what is happening??
Nisha - Kabir tu toh samira ke saath shaadi karne waala tha na.
Kabir-abey duffer agar mai tere saath engagement kiya toh mai tere saath hi shaadi karunga na lekin agar tu chhaye mai samira ke saath shaadi kar hi leta hu.
Nisha- Nahi tu aisa kuch nahi karega samjha.
She immediately hugs him and not letting him go anywhere.
Nisha - Agar tu mujh se pyaar karta tha tune kal manna kyu kiya.
Kabir- Revenge
Nisha-Revenge????
Kabir-Ha kyuki jiss tarah tune mera dil toda tha vaise hi maine tera toda bolte hai tit for tat.
Nisha-Kabir tu kitna bada k hai(she cribbed) .
Kabir-Ha tu mere k se kitni badi j hai.
Nisha - lekin samaira toh tere girlfriend hai na???
Kabir- Nahi vo mere seceretary hai na ki meri girlfriend samjhi.
Nisha - toh tune aisa kyu kiya??
Sukku- Taki tu realize kar sake ki tu kabir se pyaar karti hai.
Nisha-Matlab
Then sukku told his plan to nisha
Jab tune kabir ka dil tode ke gai toh humlog bhi wohi the aur phir humlog kabir ke pass gaye

FLASHBACK
Kabir stands up and hugged umesh and started crying and saying
Sab kuch khatam hogaya hai vo mujh se pyaar nahi karti hai.
Umesh-Chup kar kabir sab theek hoga tu dekh lena.
Kabir-Kya theek hoga mai barbaad hogaya hu.
then they take him to near bench to sit him properly.
Sukku-Dekh kabir tu kuch dino ke liye na london chala ja.
Kabir-kyu.
Sukku- Taki humlog nisha ko realize kar sake ki vo tujh se pyaar karti hai.
Kabir- Aur vo kaise hoga.
Sukku-Meri maa kehti hai jab koi important cheez dur chali jaati hai tab uska importance samaj mai aata aur yahi humlog nisha ke saath karenege.
All agreed and kabir also agreed.Then he goes to his house and tell his plan to vasu and arjun they also agree.Cousins goes to elders and tell them there plans and they also agreed.

FLASHBACK ENDS
Lekin jab tab bhi tu realize nahi ki tab humlogo nai samaira ki madad li aur usne agree bhi kiya humaara saath dene ke liye.
Nisha-Matlab sab koi ismai shaamil the aap sab koi k hogaye ho.
All together said - Aur tu hamre k se j ho gayi hai.
All laughed.
Kabir - ab lagta hai kabir ka baccha nisha ke pet se aayega (Kabir smired while Nisha blushed)
And she hugs kabir and he also reciprocates.
Kabir-Nishu I love you.
Nisha-I love you too.
They again hugged each other and promised to each other that they will remain close like this in there whole life.
THE END
Sorry for errors.
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Happy new year

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Posted: 9 years ago
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RES for the comment of new os gift 😉
unres----------------😃
awesome os bhaiyu 👏👏👏
bola tha na ki sabko acha lgega 😉
loved it 😃
awesome plan of cousins 👏
not so much of comedy but there was so much of love 😃
great revenge taken by kabir 😆
and a great dialougue ab lagta hai kabir ka baccha nisha ke pet se aayega 😆😆😆
do write more bhaiyu 😃

Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago
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Res...😉

*****UNRES*****

Superb OS Sujay...😊

Nishu ne Kabiraa ka dil toda to sab log K ban gae...😆

Sab ne milke Nishu ko ullu banaya...🤣🤣

Luved it...do write more n more n more...😉

Thanx for the pm...😊

PS= Abhi padai karo...3 din baad tumhara exam hai...🤣
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Hayee kya os tha isse ts bana do na pls..chalo subah se koi toh update mila..it was awesome..pls agar ho sake to isse ss ban do pls.. 😉
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superb sujay do write more👏
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Thank you shibu 😊
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Hayee kya os tha isse ts bana do na pls..chalo subah se koi toh update mila..it was awesome..pls agar ho sake to isse ss ban do pls.. 😉


Thank you so much sameeha 😛
Agar koi idea hai toh please bata do kyuki mere pass koi idea nahi haihai 😃
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superb sujay do write more👏


Thank you soundarya 😊
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Cute 😳
Nisha be reject kiya 😲
Poor kabira 😭
Kabira gaya 😭
Felt bad for nishu
VA b plan ka hissa 😉
Loved j ness of nisha 😆
Kabira na b reject kr diya 🤣
Loved tit for tat 🤣
Kabir ka bacha nisha k pair sa ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Kabira k kahin ka ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Lovely is 😳😳😳

And happy new year 😳😳

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