NIBIR SS- PHIR SE PART- 4 UPDATED PG-55 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Awesome concept
Kabir had crush on nisha bt married to priya nd even Nisha loves kabir
Wow...it seems interesting
Keep updating
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: poo10

Awesome concept
Kabir had crush on nisha bt married to priya nd even Nisha loves kabir
Wow...it seems interesting
Keep updating
Do pm if possible


Thank you poo 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: naucfan

Awesome👏update soon waiting n iss bari Teri bari hai pm's ke liye...


Thank you anu 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you janvi 😛
Posted: 9 years ago
#75
wow nice story...
welcome to Writer club... 🤣
nauc forum & nibir ka magic hi Aisa hai ke yahan aa kar ... hum sab writer ban hi gye!! 😳
stories padte padte ... sirf mein hi na mere bahut saare frnd writer ban gye!! apko b welcome h ji!! 😉
and prologue na pada tha but character sketch padke hi I guessed k Priya ko kuch na kuch zaroor hona h!!! uska exit hi misha ki entry karwa sakta h !! 😈
and abt prologue...
dream me accident?? o.O
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

wow nice story...
welcome to Writer club... 🤣
nauc forum & nibir ka magic hi Aisa hai ke yahan aa kar ... hum sab writer ban hi gye!! 😳
stories padte padte ... sirf mein hi na mere bahut saare frnd writer ban gye!! apko b welcome h ji!! 😉
and prologue na pada tha but character sketch padke hi I guessed k Priya ko kuch na kuch zaroor hona h!!! uska exit hi misha ki entry karwa sakta h !! 😈
and abt prologue...
dream me accident?? o.O
continue soon


Thank you neha 😛
Everything is possible 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Interesting story
Thanks for the pm!
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
PHIR SE
PART-1

4 years ago
A boy of early twenties was studying in a class lonely for the preparation of the final year of college.His study time was disturbed by his bestest friend

Boy-kabir yaar kitna padega itna bhi mat padh le Einstein bhi tere samane sharma jaye.
Kabir-karan please yaar don't disturb me padhne de final year hai mujhe concentrate karne de aur tu bhi jaake padh warna uncle aunty tera band bajaa dege.
Karan-mai kar lunga padhai par abhi nahi tuje kuch dikhaana hai
Kabir-kya dikhana hai?
Karan-race
Kabir-race! Muje koi race vace dekhne ka koi shauk nahi hai
Karan-Agar mai bolu uss race mai vo insan hai jiske liye tu kuch bhi karne ko tayar ho jaye tabhi nahi
Kabir-kon hai vo insan?
Karan-Nisha ... nisha gangwal
Kabir who was annoyed by karan disturbness till now but after listening nisha name his face give the brightest smile.Karan noticed it
Kabir-chal chalte hai
Karan-kyu bhai tu padh na abhi toh bol raha tha mai disturb kar raha hu tuje
Kabir gets angry while karan smirked
Kabir-tu chalta hai ki nahi ya du ek
(Showing his punch to karan)
Karan-ok chill bro chal chalte hai
Kabir became happy because he was going to see nisha

So here is Nisha gangwal college ki jaan shaan everything every college boy has a crush on her but no one has guts to go and proposed to her because if anyone goes to nisha then nisha uska band bajaa baraat nikal degi usse ladke ka. Nisha loves her family a lot and loves kabir.Only cousins knows that she loves kabir

Nisha was enjoying her win against priyanka on cycle race sge was brightly smiling all the time but when kabir sees her smile he was totally mesmerised by her smile He was looking only nisha like no one was there but his sweet dream broken by a voice non other then karan

Karan- oye kabira muh band kar le warna machar ghus jayega
Then kabir realize that his mouth was open then he give angry looks to karan and then he goes to class room with a smile in his face

Karan(monologue)- Bhagwan ji kis gadhe ko mera dost bana diya jo ek number ka fattu hai pyaar karta hai nisha se lekin bolta nahi hai

Karan shook his head goes to college canteen
Kabir was going to the classroom then he saw nisha was standing alone in the corridor so he goes to nisha thinking something in his mind
Kabir(monologue)- kabira bolde nisha se that you love her nahi nahi agar usne no bol diya toh mera dil toot jayega nahi jo hoga dekha jayega darr ke aage jeet hai.
Nisha- hi kabir kuch bolne aaye ho kya
Kabir- ha mai tumhe mai tumhe congrats bolne aaya tha congrats nisha
Nisha- Thank you kabir
(Monologue- nisha tu kaise bhul gayi yeh kabir ek number ka fattu hai)
Nisha- bas yahi bolne aaye the ya kuch aur bhi bolna tha kya
Kabir- nahi...ha nahi ha ha kuch aur bhi bolna tha
Nisha - ha bolo na kya baat hai
Kabir- ha mai bolna chhata tha ki mai mai mai
Nisha - yeh bakri ki tarah mai mai kyu kar rahe ho
(Both chuckled)
Kabir- mai bolna chha raha tha ki mai I ... I ... i
Nisha - I kya
(Monologue- Bhagwan ji agar isne i love you bol diya na muje duniya sr utha lena)
Kabir-I...I...I
Nisha- I ke aage bolo (angrily)
Kabir- I... I will miss you after the college
Nisha- you will just missed me
(Monologue - go to hell mr kabir kumar)
Kabir- i will miss you only aur kya karunga mai
Nisha-ok bye
Kabir- yup bye ok bye
Nisha -ya bye
Nisha monologue- shyad sab galat bolte hi bolte hai hai ki kabir loves me vo sirf muje apne dost ki tarah samjhta hai
Kabir monologue- oye kabire yeh tune kya kardiya i love ke jagah par i miss you bol diya tu na ek number ka duffer hai gadha,ullu ka patha hai bas


Kabir goes to his house and nisha goes to her college canteen
College canteen
Nisha goes to canteen with a mixrd of sad or angry on kabir
Cousins noticed that
Kirti- nishu kya hua hai itna mood sad kyu hai
Nisha- vo kabir ne
Dolly- oh my gods nishu kabir ne proposed kiya hai
Suketu- sacchi nishu matlab kabir jeeju nai proposed kar diya
Nisha- chup karo tum shab kabir nai aisa kuch nahi bola hai
Then she told the conversation between her and kabir
Then all became sad after hearing this
Kirti- koyi baat nahi nishu ek din vo bol hi dega I love you
Nisha - kab bolega jab mai 80 yrs ki ho jaungi tab
Dolly- oh ho nishu humlog sab jaante kabir tumse pyaar karta hai
Umesh- ha nishu
Suketu-aur vaise bhi maa kya kehti hai jab pyaar saccha hota toh vo pyaar pura hokarhi hota hai
Nisha - let's hope for the best
Dolly- Nishu ek kaam kar tu hi kabir ko proposed karde
Nisha- mai kyu mai ladki hu aur vaise bhi ladke ladki ko proposed karte hai na ki ladki ladke ko
Saurav- yeh kya baat hui nisha chhaye koi bhi proposed kare propose propose hota hai
Nisha- janti hu lekin
Dolly- ab mai kuch nahi sunogi tu jaake kabir ko proposed karegi bas ok
Nisha - ok main karungi propose uss duffer ko ab khush
All the cousins gave group hug to nisha
They were happy that finally these duffers are going to proposed each other

These all cousins discussion are heared by non other then karan he became very happy that nisha loves kabir
Loves kabir. He happily goes to kabir to tell him the important news of his whole life
Kumar's house

Karan enters the house and see vasu arranging items in drawing hall
Karan- namaste aunty kabir kaha pe hai
Vasu - kabir apne kamre mai hai beta jao abhi vo ready ho raha hai
Karan- ready kisliye ?
Vasu- beta ghar mai kuch important guest aa rahe hai isliye
Karan goes to kabir room he saw kabir was fully prepared to welcomed the guest
Karan- bhai aaj mai na aisa news laya hu jisse suun ke tu paagal ho jayega
Kabir- kya tu mental asylum ja raha hai kya very good chala ja
Karan - chup tuje ek good news batana hai
Kabir - Hawww tu maa bane wala hai lekin maine toh sunna hai sirf ladies sab maa banti hai tu kya special case hai
Karan - chup ekdum chup mai kuch important baat bolne aaya tha lekin tuje toh shyad sunna hi nahi hai
Kabir- oye drama queen bol kya baat hai
Karan(happily)- Mr kabir kumar mujhe meri bhabhi mil gayi hai
Kabir(shocked)- tu kya bakwaas bol raha hai
Karan- sahi bol raha hu toh kaan khol ke suun that nisha loves you
Kabir(happily)- sacchi
Karan-mucchi
Kabir- tuje kaise pata chala
Then karan told the conversation between cousins
kabir(emotionally)- i can't believe this vo mujhse pyaar karti hai i am so happy
karan- ja bhai bol de usse apne dil ki baat
Kabir- tu sahi bol raha hai abhi jaake bol deta hu that i love her
Kabir happily hugs karan
Kabir- thank you karan tu nahi jaanta hai ki mai kitna khush hu
Karan- thank you sab baad mai bolna abhi jaake dil ki baat bol ke aa bhabhi ko mai bhi ab ghar jaata hu chal bye
Kabir - bye bhai
Monologue- aaj mai kisibhi haalat mai nisha ko i love you bol ke rahu ga

PRECAP

Arjun(kabir's father) - Kabir beta kaha ja rahe ho?? Inse milo ye hai mere bohot khas dost n ye unki wife aur iye unki beti...priya...humne tumhara rishta priya se pakka kar dia hai...ab tum bhi priya se baat karlo...jald hitum dono ki sagai hai




Ab batao kaisa laga please do likes and comments also
Sorry for errors


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Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Res

----UNRES-----

Awesome update Sujay...😊

Thank god kisine to Karan ko positive role dia...😆

Kabiraa kitna bada fattu hai...ilu k jagah imu bol dia...😆🤣

NIBIR ek dusre se puar karte hai...❤️

But Kabiraa's dad... 😡 Priya se Kabiraa ki shaadi kaise fix kar di unhone?😡

Continue soon...😊

PS= Lo kar dia unres...ab shaanti mili tumhe?? 🤣
Edited by Roopsha_98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
RES FOR COMMENT PART 1 😉
UNRES
awesome update 👏
and roopsha thanks for pm🤗
lovely update
ahh kabir's dad😡
love nibir part😳
phattu kabir 😆
waiting for next update

Edited by TASYAM - 9 years ago

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