NiBiRaj FF:Kisi Mod Par~Chappy 1 on P6

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Prologue: Page 1
Chappy 1: Page 6



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Hlw every1 rockstar is back!!! Now dont say dat i dont update ABC n starting a nw FF. I'll update dat. Actually there is so less readers dat i dont feel lyk updating n giving u jhtakas(since aftr some chapters u will get vry much jhatkas there😈). Bt this story is lyk my dream. So not going 2 ask should i continue coz i knw the ans will b positive bt m asking will u read?? If u toh only thn i'll update. šŸ˜‰
M sry coz this prologue has bcome prologues ki amma. It's 2 big.🤣
Dont get vry much kanphused. šŸ˜›
Btw,this is the story jiska prologue maine pehle bhi likha tha bt there r several changes. So plz kindly again read this.Thnxx 2 all who read widout evn pms. N ritz u r ri8 Koyal luks bttr wid Raj bt RaYal ka chehra hi change hi gaya 🤣n yeh kaunsi koyal hain ye jald hi pata chal jayega. šŸ˜‰Roop n vaiahu u will surely get pms,dont worry.šŸ˜† N lili u r ri8... Rain n confusuion is common in my prologues.🤣 N also colors n ovio NiBir šŸ˜›. Mansu this kind of banners r calld AVI. šŸ˜†

N plz it's NiBiRaj toh equal importance 2 both Kabir n Viraj...

Hop u'll lyk it.

N as u knw m not gud in writing n expressing since m a bengali poem writer who writes wid bengali literature.

Don't 4get 2 say how is the banner.. Pura din mehnat ka phal hain 😃 Jhuta tareef maat karna.. Sacchi bol dena ki kaisa laga both AVI n Prologue varna how'll I improve...

Sry 4 2 much bakbak.. Here s the Prologue...

N since aftr xm i'll hav some tym toh main sab ka ek ek karke writings padhne ki try karungi. Evn I hav started reading 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PRoLOgUe:

"POV on PURPLE

Others on BLACK"


It was a very beautiful day. Sun was shining, bird was singing, leaves were playing. But it couldn't gain it's real beauty widout the sweetness n madness of some1. But who will break the wall of her beauty sleep? The sunrays were trying 2 disturb her sleep. It kept fi8ing wid her face,her eyes but all in vain. The chirping of the birds were unable 2 enter the path of her ears. The sound of the beautiful play of the leaves evn could not play through her soul. Bt she was smiling,the sweet smile was atleast presenting sweetness 2 the nature. She was dreaming. Dreaming of achieving the most desired thing she had evr prayed 4. But only this sweetness, this smile couldn't satisfy the nature. Coz they knew this mad creation needs something more.. Something more pure... Something more beautiful... Deeper thn her this dream... N suddenly nature smiled brightly feeling some1's presence. Nature now had 2 do nothing, the person would do everything, but this mad girl had 2 understand dat... Will she?

:Koyal,wake up. It's 9 am. How much will u sleep,huh? Wake up na... Need 2 go...

I m knocking the door since 15 mins bt she... Uff...

:Listen,if u don't wake up na...

Still no response?? I always heard n saw dat boys sleep lyk this bt this girl... Out of the world. No,u should not think lyk this. If she comes 2 knw she will b hurt. My anger.. Hah!! Why can't I control. Lemme try sweetly.

:Plz Yaar... See sunrays r waiting 4 u... Ur dreams r waiting 4 u.

Again no response. Bt... She is not lyk this. M getting tensed coz at least she says "2 mins", "5 mins" bt 2day she's saying nothing. I hav the key of this room, should I open? Bt if she misunderstands me? Such a dilemma! No.. Atleast she bilivs me dis much. Ok, Lemme take risk. Lemme open the door. "Jor lagake Haisha".. No... "Dilemma bhulake haisha" Here is the key.
Omg... The door is opening by itself!!! Noo wait,It's she. So, finally she woke up.

:So u r awake??? OMG!!!

:Uff.. Shut up na.. Listen... U knw wht happened!!!

She is smiling so brightly. I also also wanna join her in his laughter... No... Don't 4get dat u r angry wid her.

:Where r u lost yaar.. Listen na..Ok,at 1st congratulate me.

:Yeah,congratulate u... Ok.. Congrats.. Aftr all ur beauty sleep is broken. Incredible matter. Congo Shongo.

Now she is giving me angry look. Nothing 2 worry i am 2 angry wid her.
Wht??? Her anger is changing again into laughter?? She is really incredible.

: Chal,aaj tere saath khoon maaf. U knw, I dreamt dat the dream of my lyf has come true.. Really... Yippeee...

N she hugs me ti8. N I.. The stupid fellow... Can nvr b angry wid her. Actually who can b angry wid such a person who can b so happy only dreaming of her dream being true. Bt I knw it'll really b true one day coz fate luves her. N me... Me 2...Luv her 2 the core... I smile n embrace her back.
Aftr sometym she breaks the hug n sees me smiling.

:U r also vry happy na?

Suddenly I bcame serious since a tough question came in my mind.

:Will u 4get me aftr fulfilling ur dream?

I m feeling lyk she is shocked hearing this. Bt wht can I do.. I can't let her go out of my lyf. Bt here is she..again smiling. N here.. Starts her drama.

:Kyon janab, aap aisa soch bhi kaise sakte hain? Crore balti pyaar ki kimaat aap kya jane Zalim baba?

N she laughs n me 2 laugh not only bcoz of her joke, bt also seeing her laughter...The laughter which can console my every pain.

:Wht happened? Aise kya dekh rahe ho? U wanna learn frm me how 2 crack jokes.. Arey, u should. U knw wht,widout fun life is lifeless. Arey, Bachpan mein main jab choti si thi na...

:Ok ok stop.. Kitna bakbak karti ho.

:Kya baba... U r such a lifeless person.

"Baba" her fav word n now my fav...

:May I ask u something?

She givs me an unbilivable look.

:U need my permission b4 asking?

I smile.

:U said,crore balti pyaar.. Bt pyaar.. Where did it came frm?? I should hav been dosti,ri8?

She is luking at me wid confusd yet peaceful eyes. Bt her lips has a small smile n her cheeks... Turning red. Hop she is nt feeling awkward.Lemme handle the situation.. Wait,I didnt evn realize.. We r again having eyelock. Hmm..

:Look kya de rahi hain? I knw dosti wala pyaar na? Get ready n let's go.. We r already vry late.

She looks down n jst says:Hmmm

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2day is the day... I'll tell her wht I feel.
Wow m feeling gentle wind breeze around me. Dat means she is around me. I can feel her. Bt where is she? Behind me?
Yeah, there she is coming wearing the li8 pink saree I had gifted her. A confued smile on her face, her hair dancing in the cold wind, the anchal of her saree joing her hairs, her earings n bangles playing music, her fingers intertwined with each other in confusion (lyk we r intertwined wid each other wid a confusing feeling) n her eyes in my eyes... Looking lyk an angle... No, much more dan dat.
N me 2 luking at her almost opening my mouth. Whenevr she is b4 me why can't I tell he r dat 3 magical words. I knw she want 2 hear this.. No i need 2 tell her 2ni8 at any cost.
OMG!!! She is now standing b4 me. N m speechless again.
She is saying something while blushing...

:U called ne here n now u r mum?

M getting more speechless now. I close my eyes n finally widout changing topic, widout uttering any thing else, widout wasting a single moment,widout thinking abt the battle of heart vs mind n widout keeping mum any more, finally I say...

:I luv u...

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Bt 2day is not the same. 2day wind is blowing bt blowing wid anger... Birds r angry n hav not come out of their house... Sun is upset n has hidden himself under the wrap of sky. Can sky tolerate so much?? So sky is crying.. Bitterly... N the raindrops falling over the stupid fellow standing over a bridge over a merciless giant river. Nature is trying 2 slap his mind bt he.. Who will stop him?

:I hop I could reain the moments wid u. Bt alas... So many things happend.. Lyk really... So many things.. U dont biliv me... N u r not wid me... Bt see m laughing.. Laghing at my fate ehich is nvr wid me bt it's at least wid u. U r happy.. Ur dreams has now bcom reality. So Nothing matters whether we r 2gether or not.. Thn nothing maters whether I m not not... No necessity of me in this earth... U won't come 2 me , so lemme go 2 death. Yeah, death... N yeah, her fav nature,plz tell her how much I luv her n may b we will meet again "Kisi Mod Par" ... (Screaming) I Luv U Nisha... I'll see ur smiles.. My most fav thing.. Frm wherevr I m...

N he jumps frm the bridge, hugs the river.. Or should b said, hugs the Death.. N the nature jst sees.. Curses it as it couldnt do anything 2 save the most pure thing.. The luv.. Of them...

Bt at the same tym a girl wake up frm her sleep may b seeing a ni8mare.

:Nooo...
Edited by _A-Hopeful-Ray_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yr maggs jiju banner to ekdam super se bhi upar h loved itā¤ļø

now coming to prologue...isko prologue bolte h😲 agar prologue isko bolenge to part 1 kaisa hoga...

jab mai prologue padhi...to question k inne sare bundles dimaag me jump krne lage ki mere dimaag ka pura bhajiya ban gya😈

ye koyal kaun h???? kabir kud gya kya???? kiska nightmare tha???

m totally conphuzeddd...

Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
Aha121 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Prologue
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue maggu... 😳 but i still cant see the banner 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Prologue MausajišŸ‘šŸ¼
loved itā¤ļø
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome banner loved it..haye mere nibiraj😳
Awesome prologue šŸ‘
Jaldi se update karo or please mujhe pm milega please please pretty please😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aha121

Awesome Prologue
Loved it
Continue soon


Thnxx a looot 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue šŸ‘
Please update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Awesome prologue maggu... 😳 but i still cant see the banner 🤣



Upar hi toh hain.. Pehle banner hi toh hain šŸ˜† N Thnxxx 😃

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