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Originally posted by: Nibirlove_amu

Awesome update😊. 😊

thanks amz

U knw Mansi tumhari stories have become like chotu rewards/incentives for me 😳
I had promised myself that once I complete my revision I will read it cz I like to read ur stories with a kind of mental peace and free time 😳
I m always smiling at d end of a story or a part 😃
And yes Res 😉
Love u 🤗

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

U knw Mansi tumhari stories have become like chotu rewards/incentives for me 😳
I had promised myself that once I complete my revision I will read it cz I like to read ur stories with a kind of mental peace and free time 😳
I m always smiling at d end of a story or a part 😃
And yes Res 😉
Love u 🤗

U dont know how happy i always become seeing even ur res on my stories... 😳😆 i know quite stupid but i love it when i get those comments from u 😃 this smile is the small one my face has a bigger one than that 🤗

hey i am very very sory for late comments

Awww sho cute awesome update😳

Originally posted by: Angel_alvira

Awww sho cute awesome update😳

Aww nibir☺️

mansi main kya kaho tum itni awesome writer ho mhari jitni tareef karo kam hai jitna appreciate karo utna kaam...please aise he stories likhti jao or hum padhte jaye

AAPKA HUKM SAR AANKHO PAR... LIKH DI... GO CHECK THE MAIN THREAD... 😆 waise kya bulau tmhe alvira... tm meri first beti ho na.. 🤣

Originally posted by: TASYAM

hey i am very very sory for late comments

both the chapters were AWESOME loved it

happy that they both became best freinds

and at last real gf and bf

the prposal was AWESOME

and as i said you are best writer

and one more thing want update of detinated togather as i cant say update soon

and write more

aww tasyam thank u... but i cant say when will i update i need to wrap up one more story of mine

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Mansi😃🤗

I just love how you surprise us every time with a new and extremely interesting Nibir story every time❤️

Seems like u have a secret pitaara of Nibir stories and every few days a new Nibir story just magically graces our forum😆😆😳

As usual loved this story too😃😆

Considering that most Nibir stories have Kabir playing a cassinova it was a delight to see the roles reversed😳

A bold and beautiful Nisha and a shy and sweet nerdy Kabir is a great combination😉😃

A cute charming yet studious boy always ready to help his friends but unfortunately nobody was really his friend and he knows it. Everybody was after him around the exams and after that nobody will give a damn about him. - Felt bad for KabirI can understand his situation and I think we can all relate to him😊

The first meeting of Nibir was nice although felt bad when Kabir's spectacles pierced his wrist.

But I love how Nishu was worried for Kabir and how Kabir can see that side of Nisha which nobody can see😳

Kabir was trying to jold the book in his hand when nisha circled her arm around him beamingly. " so here ladies and gentlemen... and not so gentle idiots... meet my new boyfriend... mr.. umm tmhara naam kya h" she asked in a whisper. Kabir who was dumstruck mumbled his name. " ha... mr. Kabir kumar..." she announced as everybody watched them in total disbelief.- This somehow was my favorite part in this chapter😆Hilarious🤣

" hm dost kab bne?" he asked. " umm... abhi abhi... hi kabir mai nisha... ur tum kabir... clg k topper... kya hm dosti kar le..." she shake her hand with his forcefully. " dekho ho gyi dosti... ab to man jao pls... dekho tmhe mjhse baat nhi karni ho to mat karna par bus kuch din k lie... tum bus acting kar lena pls..." she fluttered her eyes so cutely making his heart skip several beats on it. "ohk..ohk thik h... par koi bevkufi nhi ur koi esa kaam nhi jo mai nhi karna chahta..." he said. "ohk... thank u thank u sooo much... ab btati hu mai us abhay k bachhe ko" she said jumping on her feets. Kabir watched her with a curious smile. These some days would be special for him. - Cuteness & adorableness overlaod😳😳😳Nishu is too cute yaar🤗Nisha's excitement😃and Kabir's reluctance😉was lovable❤️

she fluttered her eyes so cutely making his heart skip several beats on it.- Hayee☺️☺️ Main mar jawaan

All in all, a lovely chapter and a pleasant read👏

P.s. I imagined Electrican Kabura as the Kabir with specs minus the mole and the weird clothes😆

mihu 🤗 itte din se itna ghamasan yudh yha chal rha tha... 🤣 iske baad ur comment is like a prize for me... but seriously u never never nevr dissapoint me... i luv u sooo much 🤗 and actually its commendable hoq u always manage to comment on my stories... mai to bhool hi jati hu khud ka likha hua 🤣

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

mihu 🤗 itte din se itna ghamasan yudh yha chal rha tha... 🤣 iske baad ur comment is like a prize for me... but seriously u never never nevr dissapoint me... i luv u sooo much 🤗 and actually its commendable hoq u always manage to comment on my stories... mai to bhool hi jati hu khud ka likha hua 🤣

Mansi sissy!!🤗... You lifted my mood...😳