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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Ashoo20

Interesting concept I would love to read more

Thanks for the pm
Update fast 😊

thanks ashoo🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome start to ur story

Loved it

thanks alisha
hope that's ur name
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anu012

awsome update dear

cont soon & pm me plz...

thanks will surely pm u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mkjr

prologue is too good

please start the story soon😊

thanks
may I know ur name
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

thanks
may I know ur name

my name is yashika
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's ossmmm ritik...
Luving it. Plz pm me whn u update.

Nxt proposal kabira ka hi hain na? Nahi toh viru ka hi hoga
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Originally posted by: _A-Hopeful-Ray_

It's ossmmm ritik...

Luving it. Plz pm me whn u update.

Nxt proposal kabira ka hi hain na? Nahi toh viru ka hi hoga

thanks maggu
Actually suprised to see your comment
thanks ki u took time from ur exams and read the story
will surely pm u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks dear😃
nice to see u back in the forum🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NIBIR RAABTA CH 1

Ch 1

Nisha returned from shop after a stressful day of work she straight went to her room had a good refreshing bath and came for dinner. Everyone was already there Nisha took her place and enjoyed the dinner chit chatting with her cousins when dadaji interrupted and told her about a new proposal which had come, hearing this nisha's smile faded dadji noticed this and decided to skip it for the night

Nisha mentally thanked her luck as she could now have a peaceful sleep atleast.

The next moring when everyone was at the dinning table dadaji broke the news again.

Dadaji- main kal jis rishte ki baat kar raha thaw oh viraj singh rathore ka hai.

As soon as Nisha heard the name her food got stuck and she stared coughing badly . dolly who was sitting next to her patted her back and made her drink some water.after being a little fine Nisha spoke

"dadaji viraj matlab woh delhi wala sadu Mr Hum businessman"

Dadaji- Nisha aise hi bolte

Nisha - phir kya bolu aap aise ajeeb ajeeb logo ke rishte kyun late ho

Dadaji - nish beta rishte khud chalke aate hain. Ramesh mohan viiren tumhe vasu betiya toh yaad hogi na

Ramesh- ji babuji bilkul hai hamari choti behen jaisi thi woh

Dadaji- viraj ussi ka beta hai aur issiliye yeh rishta mujhe bahut pasand hai aur viraj se bhi mil chukka hun mein bahut hi accha ladka hai ani zindgi mein kya karna hai kya nhi usse acche se pata hai aur bahut hi shant aur suljha hau ladka hai

Nisha (monologue) - shant toh hoga hi shayad kissi ne awaj bhi nhi sunni ho bolta hi nhi hai and last time jab shop pe aaya tha toh ek jewleery ko kharidne mein itna time lagaya ki pucho mat suljha nhi pura uljha hua hai. God kidhar phasa diya.

Her thoughts were broken when she heard dadaji asking for ramesh's opinion

Ramesh-babuji paarivaar bhi accha aur rishta bhi par aakhri faisla nishu hi karegi.

Nisha smiled hearing this.

Dadaji - toh batao Nisha tumhare kya khayal hai

Nisha- dadaji mujhe thoda waqt chahiye

Dadaji- thik hai tumhare pass aaj sham tak ka waqt hai

Nisha was in a great dilemma she never liked viraj infact she couldn't stand him but saying a direct no will again lead to a fight between her father and dadaji and she didn't wanted this. She was very confused and thought of seeking her father's help and headed towards her parents' room. She stopped just before entering the room as she heard them talking about this only.

Laxmi- ramesh mujhe toh yeh rishta bahut pasand ayya. Dekho na Viraj aur Nisha ek dusre ko jaante hain. Babuji ko bhi bahut accha laga aur toh aur hum unke paarivar ko bhi jaante hain.

Ramesh- hain Laxmi yeh abb tak ka sabse achha rishta hai par hoga whi jo Nishu chahegyi par iss baar mein us ski haan sunn na chahata hun

After hearing all this that even her parents liked the proposal but still she was in two minds after all her heart didn't click and her father always asked her to do as her heart says and when it doesn't say anything just say a no. Here too her heart was sleeping peacefully just like the previous 5 but she feared saying a direct no.

It was now time for her to answer dadaji called her to his room.

Dadaji- phir kya socha tumne

Nisha- dadji haan ya na karne se phele mein Viraj ko jaan na chachati hun taki sahi faisla le saku.

Dadaji- thik hai waise kuch dar phele Vasu ka phone aaya thaw oh keh rhi thi ki viraj bhi tumhe jaan na chahata hai iss liye unho ne tumhe udar bulaya hai 2 haft ke liye. Mein tumhari kal hi ticket karvata hun

Nisha- ji dadaji woh kya mein kal..

Dadaji- kal ki chutti tumhari jaane ki taiyaari karo.

Nisha went to her room and sat n her bed cursing her fate. Here she wanted to avoid this topic and thought that by her answer dadaji will not get angry but little did she know that the two families have already prepared her aarthi. She was still lost when her gang entered.

Dolly ame sat nxt to her and gave hera side hug - i am happys nishu ki tujhe kisi mein toh interest ayya.

Nisha gave her a really wala lookleaving dolly confused.

Umesh- dolly Nisha ko Viraj mein koi interest nhi hai issne toh aisa iss liye kiya taki pichle baar ki tarah ramesh chahu aur dadaji ke beech mein koi jaghda na ho.

Nisha- haan dolly di viraj uski toh shakal dekh kar mujhe irritation hoti hai. Jab dekho hum hum karta raheta hai aur jab Jaipur aaya that oh maine iss ko tum kiya bula diya bolta hai ki "hume hum sunn ne ki aadat hai". Dolly di inn do hafto mein meri waat lagne wali hai. Ahhh...

Kriti- oh toh Nisha tu ek kaam kar iss do hafto ko take it as a trip maine sunna hai ki Delhi mein bahut sare acche acche malls hai and ghumne ki bhi bahut sari places hain toh tub hi yhi karna aur maan kare toh Viraj se baat kar na warna mat karna.

Nisha- baat toh tab karungi jab woh kuch bolega bhi

Sukku- kyun dumb hai kya

Nisha- nhi hai toh nhi par bannana zaroor chata hai

Doly= Nisha tu yeh sab chod aur chal hum shopping chalet hain tera mood bhi thik ho jayega

Nisha- nhi dolly di mujhe thoda time akele spend karna hai

Umesh- toh tu apne fav caffe ja rahi hai

Nisha- haan aur agar mera hone tak aap ki shopping chal rhi hogi then i will join u

hope u all like it

everything welcomed

Edited by mishrialways - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
superb chap
viraj sadu.. 😆
nisha ki watt lagne wali h.
update soon.

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