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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 3

Kabir nisha aur saurav ki batein sochta hua road pe chalta rehta h (tensed n confused)... Fir vasu ki bat bhi uske dimag m ati h...
Kabir-(ye ho kya rha hai... Mai kuch samjh nhi pa rha... Ek taraf uski khushi h , ek taraf apni ... Par bar bar ye kyu lag rha h ki khi kuch to galat ho rha hai... Maine koi decision lene m galti to nhi kardi...) (worried)

KNH Scene

Nisha- (apne bedroom m kabir ka jacket k sath leti hui kabir aur apne acche moments ko yad kar k roti hui)...(apne mobile m kabir k pic dekh k) kabir plss wapas aaja... I need you...(eyes full of tears)
Kabir-(apne phone m nisha k pic dekh k) mai tujhse milna chahta hoon nisha..ek bar bat karna chahta hoon.. I need you..nisha (cries)
Morning...

Nisha uthati h... Apna phone utha k
Nisha-(kabir k pic dekh k) I love you... Come back plss

Fresh hone k liye kapade nikalti h.. Washroom m jane hi wali hoti h k ghar k door bell bajati h... Nisha jake door kholti hai...sees an envelope

Nisha- ye envelope ?? Isme kya...(shocked) divorce paper... Nisha starts crying...
Nisha- kabir tu mere sath aisa kyu kar rha h...mujhse puch to leta k mai kya chahti hu..(cries)
Nisha apne tears pochti hai...
Nisha - viraj sir ye sab aapki wajah se ho rha hai...aapse bat to karni hi hogi (angry) n leaves for Viraj's house

After an hour

KNH Scene

Vasundra- ab tak to kabir london pahunch chuka hoga (evil smile)... Vasundra finally tumne woh kar hi liya jo tum chahti thi...aakhir kabir ko nisha se door kar hi diya... ab bs ek aakhri kam divorce wala ho jaye to nisha aur kabir kabhi bhi ek sath nhi ho payenge... Ek..n..n..aadha... Aadha to ho hi chuka h..bs kabir ko divorce k bare m batana h...(laughs loudly)
Vasundra kisi kam se bahar jati h n sees kabir outside Golden Retreat Hotel...
Vadundra-(kabir...yahan... Jaipur m... Matlab isne fir se humse jhoot kaha..)
Kabir-(thinking about nisha)
Vasundra-(calls kabir) hello
Kabir- mom..
Vadundra- kha ho beta..
Kabir-(hesitantly) mom London m hu..ye kaisa sawal h??
Vasundra- (taunt karte hue) tab to hum bhi London m hi h...
Kabir-(confused n worried) matlab mom
Vasundra- apne opposite m dekho...
Kabir-(sees otherside of road n sees vasu standing there) shocked
Vasundra-(ishara karti h k mere pas aao)

Kabir aur vasundra kabir aur nisha k ghar m...
Kabir- mom sorry... Maine bht koshish k but m nhi ja paya...
Vasundra- humse jhoot bolne k kya jaroirat thi jojo..
Kabir- mom...
Vasundra- wo sab chodo ye dekho...(gives divorce paper to kabir)
Kabir- divorce paper
Vasundra- ha... Nisha ne bheja h...
Kabir- mom...nisha aisa nhi kar sakti... Wo nhi bhej sakti ye papers mujhe pura trust h uspar..
Vasundra- jojo hum tumhe kaise samjhaye... K usi ne ye kiya h... Use tumhari jaroorat hi nhi h... (Pen dete hue) lo sign kro...
Kabir-(shocked) mom abhi aap us din mujhe pati patni k rishte pe lecture de rhi thi... Fir aaj aap mujhe ye paper sign karne k liye pressurize kar rhi h... Kyu ??
Vasundra-(shocked .. Khi kabir ko shq to nhi hone lga) (hesitantly) n..nhi beta wo to m..mai..
Kabir-(vasu ko notice karte hue) mai in paper pe sign nhi karunga... Mere liye ye papers matter hi nhi karte..

Kabir ghar se bahar ake... Divorce paper dekhte hue..

Kabir- (pta nhi kyu par mujhe kuch theek nhi lag rha...aisa lag rha h mano kisi ne janbhuj k misunderstanding create k h...par kisne.. Viraj... Vasu k bat sochte hue..khi maa to... Lekin maa aisa kyu karengi...) Mujhe pta lagana hi hoga...
Nisha divorce paper leke viraj k ghar jati h..
Nisha- (shouts) Mr. Viraj Singh Rathore Mr. Rathore
Viraj- Miss Nisha aap ?? Aapko humse milna tha to hme bta deti hum aa jate..
Nisha- oh plss... Main yahan aapse milne nhi aai hu..
Viraj- Miss nisha...
Nisha- plss apna drama band kariye... Aur mujhe miss nisha bulana bhi...
Viraj- Lekin... (Nisha stops him in middle)
Nisha- aapko kya lagta h k aap Jo bhi kar rhe h isse aap mujhe pa lenge ?? Nhi Mr. Rathore bilkul bhi nhi... Main sirf aur sirf kabir k hoon...
Viraj- (nisha k kareeb ate hue)... Par miss nisha ab to kabeer h nhi fir ye sab kyu ?? Aap to humse pyaar karti h na...
Nisha- nhi karti m aapse pyaar ... Kya aapko ye bat samjh nhi ati...
Viraj- lekin...aap bhi to yhi chahti thi na...

Kabir viraj k ghar ata h...

Nisha aur viraj k convo sun k door k wall k piche chup k sab sunta h...

Nisha- nhi mai aisa kuch bhi nhi chahti thi... Mai kya chahti hu wo koi nhi samjh rha .. Mere sath kya ho rha h mujhe khud kuch samjh nhi aa rha...

Viraj- lekin miss nisha wo msg..

Nisha- maine nhi kiya h aapko koi msg ... Aap samjh kyu nhi rhe... Maine wo dinner kabir k liye plan kiya tha...

Kabir-(shocked)

Viraj-(shocked)

Nisha- aapko ghar pe samaan k liye bhi maine kabir k rehne pe lene ko bola tha par aap pta nhi kaise pahle aa gye aur sab bigad gya...(crying)

Kabir-(eyes full of tears)

Viraj- to kya aap hamare ane se khush nhi thi...

Nisha- nhi mr. Rathore kyu k aapki presense meri life kharab kar rhi h... Mera wo rishta kharab kar rhi h jo mere liye sabse jaroori h...

Kabir-( nisha maine kya kar diya)

Nisha- aapki wajah se kabir mujhe chod k chala gya h... Aur ab to usne mujhe divorce ka notice bhi bhej diya...

Kabir-(shocked)(Maine notice bheja ?? Par ma ne kha h ki nisha ne...)

Nisha- aap apni in sab harkatoan se mujhe haasil kar sakte h par pa nhi sakte...Kyu k m sirf kabir ko hi apna pati manti hu... Wo nhi to kuch nhi...kuch bhi nhi...

Kabir- ( ye maine kya kar diya... Koi hamare bich misunderstanding kar rha tha aur maine uski saza nisha ko de di...) Mujhe abhi nisha se bat karni hogi...

Kabir nisha ko ata dekh waha se chala jata h...

Viraj - (sees nisha with eyes full of tears) (Miss nisha hme lag hi rha tha k aap in sab baton se khush nhi hai.. hum to bs aapse sunna chahte the... par ab hme ye pta lagana hai ki ye notice bheja kisne)



hope you guys like it 😊


Edited by naina.majik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Awesome👏

Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
res
unres

superb update sissy👍🏼

finally kabir apne decision ko reconsider krra😊

tumne nishu n kabir k inner turmoils ko bhut beautifully explain kiya h❤️

nishu divorce paper dekhti h😔

vasu ne kabir ko dekh lia😲😲

Kabir-(shocked) mom abhi aap us
din mujhe pati patni k rishte pe
lecture de rhi thi... Fir aaj aap
mujhe ye paper sign karne k liye
pressurize kar rhi h... Kyu ??
Vasundra-(shocked .. Khi kabir ko
shq to nhi hone lga) (hesitantly)
n..nhi beta wo to m..mai..
Kabir-(vasu ko notice karte hue)
mai in paper pe sign nhi karunga...
Mere liye ye papers matter hi nhi
karte..


@blue finally kabir ko vasu pe shak ho gya😊

loved niraj convo...😊 tumne meri dil ki khwaish puri krdimai chahti thi ki viraj ko pta chle ki nisha ne usko ghar n hotel me nhi bulaya tha aur kabir ye sune😊iske liye magic wala hug tujhe🤗

Kabir- ( ye maine kya kar diya...
Koi hamare bich misunderstanding
kar rha tha aur maine uski saza
nisha ko de di...) Mujhe abhi nisha
se bat karni hogi...


@pink loved kabir monologue kinna guilt h uski baaton me😔

update nxt part soon
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
res b4 PM😛

unres😳

Lovely Update Nishi👏👏👏👏

I wish aisa hotha Show mein bhi🤪

I loved How Kabira ko sach ka patha chala vo bhi Nishu ke thru👏👏👏👏

Superbly Written...😃

I want to say sumthng Nishi Will PM U😉 (Meri ek req hai yeh)

Thanks 4 PM😳 Sorry 4 late comment😳

Do write More🤗 Q ki DMM
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
res
unres
mujhe pm nhi mila
vasu gayi...yay
cv's ko kuch aisa dekhana cahiye tha
awesome update
loved it ❤️
Edited by crazyvaishu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
superb update nishi
muje pm Nahi mila

so kabir ne virak and nisha ki bath sun li😛
waitng 4 der confession
iwant VJ ka BB...jo shw main dekhne ko nahi milaa


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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
awesome yaar par tumne mujhe pm nehi kiya...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Vasu tho gai re heheheh ;)
Nisha crying :(
Plz update sooon
Awsome like always

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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Tune serial kyu nahi likhi...agar tune likhi hoti to atleast hume kuch nibir moments to mil jate...:P Loved it!!! Finally kabir dhakkan ka dimag chal raha hai lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Superb update nishi..
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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