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Posted: 9 years ago

thanks mika 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

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super duper update nishssy👍🏼

aaj dil khush kr dia tune ye update de ke😊 u know aaj subah se mera mood bahut off tha😔😊but after reading yr update i m rofling like hell😊
vj n viraj convo was written perfectly😊 d way viraj cares for her mother loved it❤️

kabir n vj convo was verry emotional😊 der hug😊 loved it

jab kabir viraj ki taraf serious mood me aage badha n den fir use hug kia i was rofling like der is no 2morrow🤣

loved rajbir scene

vj ne to nirajbir ko dara hi diya🤣 asli star to vj nikli😉becharw nirajbir🤣 dar k mare kya halat ho gui thi😉

loved it❤️

update soon dear😉


@BOLD aisa kya hua tha ??
@pink ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

thank u sissy 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
hello K's 😃
h r u all ??
i m back with nxt part...
PART 12 do parts m hoga...
so kindly accept PART 12 (a)



PART 12 (a)

After 15 mins

Kabir - (annoyed) mom abh kitna time lagega.. ya aap chahti hi nhi ki hum dono ander aye(making face)

Nisha - (laughs) awweee... Thoda sabr karle

Vj - (room se ate hue...hath m red dupatta aur kalash leke) jojo(aangry look dete hue) beta ab to aap bade ho jaiye... ab aap bacche nhi rhe...

Viraj - (vj k piche piche hath m aarti ki thali leke) ha kabir aur ab to aap ki shadi bhi ho gai hai

Vj - chaliye ab grahprawesh ki rasam karte hai...(kalash darwaze pe rakhti hai n nisha ko dupatta deti hai )

Nisha - maa ye ??

Kabir - maa isse ye sab nhi ho payega... Kya aap bhi ?? (in a funny way )

Nisha - (gives a deadly stare to kabir )

Kabir - (baby face bna k ) sorry

Vj n viraj - (smiles)

Vj - beta ise odhlo humare yaha ye rasam hoti hai ki saas apni bahu ko shadi ka dupatta deti hai but kyu k hum tumhari shadi m nhi the to abhi hi wo rasam puri kardi..

Nisha - (smiles...n dupatta odh leti hai...)

Kabir - mom jaldi karo na...

Vj - 1 min jojo... (irritated) Ram singh wo...

Ram singh - ha mam le aya... Ye lijiye...(ram singh ek plate lekar ata hai jisme red color ka liquid hai)

Vj - hmm... chalo jojo ab tumhara intzaar khtm hua...(smiles)

(vj nisha aur kabir ki aarti karti hai... N nisha ko chawal wale kalash ko girane ko kehti hai... Fir nisha ko uss red liquid wali plate m pair rakh k ane ko kehti hai ... )

(nisha enters inside the house with kabir...nisha n kabir vj ka pair chuke unse blessing lete hai...)

Vj - god bless u both... Hamesha sath rho ...aur hamesha khush rho..

Viraj - (smiles...seeing nibir together)

Vj - kabir apne bade bhai k pair bhi chuiye...

Kabir - (confused) sacchiii...

Vj - (kabir ka kaan pakad k ) jojo...

Kabir - (face bnate hue) aaahh...mom mai majak kar rha tha...

Nisha , vj n viraj laughs

Nisha n kabir takes blessing from viraj...

Viraj - aap dono ka iss ghar m welcome hai... Aap dono yaha aaraam se rah sakte hai...

Kabir - bhai thanks... par hume wo ghar jayada pasand hai jo hume wedding gift k taur par mila hai hai (laughs)

Viraj - (smiles mischeaviuosly) hmm... Jaisa aap theek samjh

Nisha - (blushes)

Kabir - (blushes n smiles)

Vj - ahem ..ahem... viraj aap inko kyu ched rhe hai ??

Viraj - maa... hum to...bs..(smiles) majak kar rhe the...

Vj , nibir n viraj laughs in unison

Vj - chalo ab sath m breakfast karte hai

N they all leave for breakfast

Viraj pent house

Vj , viraj n nibir at dining table

Vj - ab sab kuch theek ho gya hai... humare dono bte hame mil gye (happily sees virj n kabir ) , ek pyaari si bahu bhi mil gyi (nisha k cheeks ko caress karte hue) , sari problems solve ho gai hai aur hamare ghar aur zindagi m khushi ne fir se apni jagah bnali hai... islie hum iss khushi ko apne pure parivaar k sath batna aur manana chahte hai...

Viraj - (happily) maa ye to bht acchi bat hai...

Kabir - (excitedly) ha mom ye to bht accha idea hai but... aap karna kya chahti hai...

Vj - tum dono k shadi m to hum yaha nhi the.. na humne koi rasam dekhi na shadi ko enjoy kia..

Kabir - mom ab plss aap ye mat kehna ki hame fir se shadi karni hai (irritated look ).. already do do bar (figure se action karte hue) shadi kar chukka hu (annoyed) wo hi same ladki se (nisha k taraf dikhate hue)...

Nisha - ( stares kabir angrily) kabirrr...

Kabir - (apne ears pakad k ) are sorry sorry... Mai majak kar rha tha...(silly smile dete hue)

Viraj n vj laughs

Viraj - (apni hasi control karte hue) ha maa aap bataiye aap kya karna chahti hai..??

Vj - hum ek acchi reception party throw karna chahte hai apne bte aur bahu k liye (sees nisha n kabir lovingly)

Kabir n nisha sees vj n smiles

Viraj - (happily) ye to bht accha idea hai maa... (kabir k taraf dekhte hue...naughtily ) aur kabir ko firse shadi bhi nhi karni padegi (n laughs )

Nisha - (sees kabir angrily)

Kabir - (sees nisha making baby face...then sees viraj ) k..kya bade bhaiya aap bhi meri leg pulling karne pe lage ho... mai majak kar rha tha...

Nisha , vj n viraj laughs in unison...after kabir joins them in laughs

Viraj - theek hai maa jaisa aap chahti hai waisa hi hoga... aaplog date decide kar lijiye...

Vj - beta hum chahte hai ki reception kal hi...(hesitantly)..ho jaye...

Viraj - (confused ) maa.. par itni jaldi...

Vj - ha beta hume jaldi hai... kyu k hum un sab logo se bhi maafi mangna chahte hai humne jinka dil dukhaya hai

Nisha - (taking vj's hand in her hand) maa sab aapko maaf kar denge aapko guilty feel karne k jaroorat nhi hai...

Vj - (with tears) tumhare parivaar wale bht acche hai nisha...hume pta hai wo sab hume maaf kar chuke honge par fir bhi... Hum ek bar sabse maafi mangna chahte hai... aur ye bhi chahte hai ki wo sab iss party m aaye aur humsab mil k apne nayi rishtedaari ko sacche man aur pyaar k sath apnaye.

Nisha - (eyes full of tears...hugs with vj) (cries)

Kabir n viraj sees vj n nisha n smiles

Vj - (nisha k back rub karte hue) nisha... beta rona band karo ab to khushi k din aye hai...

Nisha - (cries...holding vj)

Kabir - (nisha k paas aa kar...uske sar pe apne hath se sahlate hue...) oye...(cutely) mat ro yaar...

Nisha - (sees kabir's baby face n smiles )

Kabir hugs nisha n vj

Viraj - (sees the trio n smiles...kabir k paas ake uske hair ruffle karta hai n gives feathery kiss to vj on her hair...n hugs vj n kabir )

Vj - (smiles with tears...viraj , kabir n nisha k cheeks ko caress karti hai one by one)



Part 12 (a) de dia...

koi galti ho to bta dena 😃 😃

bcoz it is not read proof

hopw you guys like it...

waiting for ur likes n comments 😃

Edited by naina.majik - 9 years ago
Sujayricky thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update 👏
Nibir reception
Can't wait for part b
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dat was a beautiful update
Loved it

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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar kash show hum likh rahe hote... We have such great ideas 😎
Reception ka toh CVs ne kabhi socha bhi nahi hoga 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aware kinna cute update tha nishssy😊

kabir ki WO besabri...
nisha ka gussa...
viraj kabir ki kya leg pulling krra that ...
kabir ki sangat ka asar ho ra viraj ko😉
kabir nisha ko kinni cutely sorry bola...
do do baar shadi🤣
receptn...
loved emotional scenes of nisha n vj...
loved d family hug🤗

update next part fast😉
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsome update dear
great idea of nibir reception ...
can't wait update soon nxt chptr
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Yaar kash show hum likh rahe hote... We have such great ideas 😎

Reception ka toh CVs ne kabhi socha bhi nahi hoga 🤣

sochte to jyada paise lagte na isiliy to nibir ko honeymoon me b nhi bheja😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update nishi
loved it
viraj pe kabir ka asar ho rha hai who bhi leg pulling Kar rha hai
waiting for the reception

@niya sachi asie ideas cvs ko nhi aa sakte kyunki yeh hum k's ki speciality hai

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