ok. So this is my first comment on ur story per say and I m really happy writing this😆 I love writing comments on your stories Mansi and this story is again one of my favorites🤗😃 I hate making u wait for my comments yaar but u knw I m very busy and uske upar se ek toh I have this bad habit of writing lamba comments iss liye tumhari story pe comment karne mein mujhe time lagta hai😆
Since maine tumhe itna wait karwaya hai iss liye another surprise for u😆😳
Chapter 1- Love the concept and the intro❤️👏👏
Nibir as grandparents is amazing yaar😃
Nisha giggled seeing her grand children's sweet talks. Yes she was none other than nisha... nisha kabir kumar... now in her 70s living with all her cousins and their spouses in gangwal house. And the bunch of these naughty kids are their grandchildren as their parents are out for a function and left them in gangwal house and these kids love their grandparents more than anything. Nisha was still smiling to herself when a little boy came running to her.- Loved ur narration Mansi😃😃
Nisha - are baby... dadi to aap sab ko dekh k muskura rhi h... achha btao u learn counting ki nhi..
Deepu - kya dadi... m only 5... mai itti padhai kaiche kalu...- Choo cute😳😳 Nibir ke pote toh unse bhi zyaada adorable hain😳
Here nisha was thinking how the life changed. Once there was a time when she was a tomboy who would have beaten the person black and blue if someone has told her that she will have grandchildren and she would be telling them some story. But no one knows what course the destiny take and now today she had 2 children that too happily married and in a total 11 grandchildren. Everything changed but the love remained the same. The cousins love which was still not changed a bit that is the only reason why all of them are still together and living in their very own house. Their children may have shifted due to their work priorities but they too have the same bond inherited from their parents and what amazed her the most is the love that is still young between her and kabir. They may have been aged but the sparks, the magic was still there. Or one could say it has grown to be more deeper and darker. His one touch still sends an electrical wave through her body. And not forgot he has been aged to be more k than he was before. He still love to be fooling around making everybody smile and adore these kids like anything. - love this part❤️ Love ur decription 👏👏👏 It is adorable to read how Nibir's bond has remained as strong as it was earlier and how their love for each other hasn't changed Kaash aisi stories hamari bhi ho
Waise 11 granchildren😆😆 Who would have thought Nibir will have so many grandchildren😆😆
Deepu - nhi dadi... I know they are 10 n m 11... dadi where is kabir dadu... he will tell us story... aap to kuch nhi sunate..
Nisha - achha... to go search yaar dadu only.. fir mere pass koi nhi aana jab tmhare dadu tm logo ki chocolate kha le to... - Kisne socha tha ki iss umar mein bhi Nisha will be J of Kabir😆😆 Waqt badal gaya magar yeh nahin😆 That is the best part about Nibir❤️
Iss story ki shuruat bahut acchi ki hai tumne Mansi👍🏼 Cz we readers can imagine ourselves in the place of the baccchas and u can be imagined as Nishu who is telling us her story. U have intrigued ur readers very well👏 Waise we r always eager to read ur stories but I love ur narration style in this chapter🤗
Edited by arviabhigya - 10 years ago
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