Nibir ff : Miracle Happens\\\\\\ (part 19 on page 117) 18/02 - Page 54

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anshi1509

Awesome nimi
I loved it ...
Sry for being late
Mere FA ke test shuru ho Gaye hai so uske prep busy rehti huin plus navaratri aa rahi so uske bhi prep Chal rahe hai

P.s can I call u nimbu maasi 😆

hey dont be sorry anshi😊 i can understand😉 n thanx for taking time to comment...on my ff frm yr super busy schedule yr n all d best for yr tests😊👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aha121

Awesome as always
Please update soon
Really excited to know how will Nisha realise her feelings 😳

awwweee thanx alot sanna😊 will update soon😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

awww... mere mojo jojo are choo cute...

awwee thanchu so much mansi😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nitika4

Part 8

Awesome update
Dress compliment was sweet
Cake scene was cute
Nibir eyelock
Sorry for late comment

awwee thanchu...so much niks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guyzzz...thanx for yr patience n here is d next part...


PART 12


MIRACLE HAPPENS



After hearing d sound of door bell...both turns towards d door...

Nisha(in confused look)- abhi is waqt kaun aaya hoga???

Kabir- ab woh to darwaza khulne k baad hi pta chalega na ki kaun aaya hoga...wifey...
He stressed on d word "wifey"...

Nisha gave him "how intelligent u are" wala sarcastic look while kabir gave him a silly smile...

Nisha- mai ja ke dekhti hu...

Kabir - ruk mai bhi aata hu...

Nisha noded in positive n both went towards d door to open it...

Wen dey open d door a handsome dude ...of mid twenty dressed up in blue jeans and white shirt...was standing der...as soon as nibir saw him der eyes got widened wid shock and happiness n...both screamed together ...

Nibir(loudly) - saurav??????

Saurav (putting his both hands on his ears)- aahh itni zor se kyu chilla rhe ho...bhaira nhi hu mai...

On hearing dis Nisha hits him slightly in his arm n said...
Nisha(in happiness)- tu sudhrega nhi na...waise tu achanak yha kaise???...aur...pehle kyu nhi btaya ki tu aane wala h...???she said dis in one go...den saurav open his mouth to speak but he was again cut off by kabir

Kabir- ha saurav agar pehle bta deta to mai tujhe lene aa jata...

Saurav -ab mai bhi kuch bolu...

Nibir - ha bol na...kisne roka h...

Saurav - agar pehle bta deta to tumdono ka ye billion dollar wala expression kaha dekhne ko milta...n he smiles...

Nisha(excitedly)- ghar pe sab kaise h???

Saurav- nishu ab sare sawaal yhi pe puchegi ya andar bhi aane ko kahegi...atithi devo bhava naam ki bhi koi chiz hoti h...i think so...

Kabir- oh sorry plz...come in...

Nisha- ha hoti to h par tere jaise atithi ko dev nhi rakshas bolte h...

Saurav- haha watever...

n he comes inside and nibir followed him...n den d trio sits on sofa...

nibir sits on 3 seater sofa while saurav sits on single seater sofa...

After comfortably sitting on sofa...

Nisha(lovingly)- saurav

Saurav- hmmm...

Nisha(a bit loudly n sarcastically) - ab to bta de...tere yha achanak se tapakne ki wajah...

On hearing dis saurav gave her a deadly stare while kabir controlled her laughter...

Nisha- ab aise hi ghoorta rahega ya kuch bolega bhi...

Finally he gave up n said...

Saurav- mai ek imp. Business meeting attend krne k liye aaya tha...but..meeting 2 hr postpone ho gyi to socha yha aa k tumlog ko surprise dedu...

Kabir(happily)- bahut accha kia saurav jo tu yha aa gya...we r verry happy to see uh...

On hearing dis saurav smiles...

After a min.

Saurav(while seeing here n der)- waise vasu aunty kaha h... kahin dikhai nhi de rhi...

Kabir- wo mom ko na aaj subah hi dubai nikalna pada kuch imp. Kaam ki wajah se ...

Saurav- ohkk...

Den nisha gets up frm her place n said

Nisha- tum dono baith k baat kro mai tumlogo k liye kuch khane ka bna k lati hu...

Saurav + kabir(together wid fear) - nhiii

After saying no saurav n kabir look at each other n gave mutual understanding wala look. While nisha gave dem a confused look

Saurav- arey nishu tu bhi yhi baith na...teeno mil k gappe ladate h..na...aur waise bhi mujhe abhi bhuk nhi lag ri...jab bhuk lagegi tab tujhe bol dunga...

Nisha noded n sits in his place...While saurav sighed in relief n kabir thanks him through his eyes


Nisha - kaisa chal rha h tera business...

Saurav- mast chal ra h ...

Kabir was about to speak something but suddenly his phone started ringing n he excused himself frm der...

Nisha(excitedly) -saurav ghar pe sab kaise h???maa papa dadaji dadi cousins aur baki sab???

Saurav - sab acchhe h...yr...den he took a small pause n said..nishu...ek baat puchu...????

Nisha- ab tujhe kab se mujhse permition lene k zarurat padne lagi...puchh na kya puchhna h tujhe...

Saurav - nishu tu thik to h na he asked wid concerned in his voice...

Nisha - ha saurav mai bilkul thk hu...par tu achanak aise kyu puch rha...

Saurav- agar tu thk h to fir teri aankh itni laal kyu h...???

Nisha - wo...na wo...ha...wo meri aankh me kachra chala gya tha...usi ko nikalne k liye eyes ko rub kr ri thi isiliye laal ho gyi...

Saurav - oh to tumdono ki aankho me ek sath kachra chala gya tha haina...???

Nisha- wat???

Saurav (angrily)- nishu andha nhi hu mai...aate hi meri nazar tumdono ki aankho me chali gyi thi...den he took a pause n said calmly...bta na nishu kuch hua h kya...tumdono thk to ho na???

Nisha(widout making eye contact wid saurav) - ha saurav sab thik hai tu bhi na...kuch bhi sochta rehta h...

Saurav- nishu jab jhuth bolne nhi aata na to nhi bolna chahiye... bachpan ka dost hu tera m yr best friend dammit...tujhe mai bhut acche se janta hu samjhi...ab tu sach sach bta rhi ya mai ramesh uncle ko call kru???? N he took out his phn to call ramesh...

Nisha- saurav ruk mai btati hu...

Nisha - wo..wo...aaj mai aur kabir bhut close aa gye the...hum almost kiss krne wale the

Saurav(confusingly) - to kiss nhi hua isiliye ro rhe the tumlog???


On hearing dis Nisha...stamped his foot

Saurav - aaahhh...pichle janam me donkey thi kya...kiss tumara nhi hua aur bomb mujh bechare pe fod rhi..

Nisha(in serious look) - saurav...

Saurav - ok sorry sorry...ab bta kya baat h...

Nisha - saurav tujhe yaad h na mai is shadi se bilkul bhi khush nhi thi

Saurav - ha nishu mujhe yaad h n hum tere liye kuch bhi nhi kr paaye the...he said dis in sad tone...

Nisha - nhi saurav aisa mat bol...tumsab to meri himmat ho...she den again continued...u know saurav mai is shadi se bilkul khush nhi thi...mai bhaag jana chahti thi yha se kahin dur...bhut dur...par...
Saurav - par apni family ki wajah se nhi bhaagi h na...he completed her sentence...

Nisha - ha saurav...aur fir meri shadi ho gyi...aur mai...wha se chali gyi...fir...

Saurav - fir...

Nisha- fir hum hotel aa gye...n der i was...i was... feeling all alone i was missing ...i was missing u all badly .n...i was fee...feeling like a dead soul...aur maine...tab tak kabir ki taraf ek baar bhi nhi dekha tha...saurav was listening her peacefully n she den again continued par mujhe kaha pata tha ki meri kismat me itna understanding aur itna caring hubby hai n den she told him der whole convo of dat 9t how he calmed her how he asked her for friendship n how he promissed her dat he will never forced himself to her...n den she told him about todays incident

On hearing all dis saurav became dumbstruck...

After gaining his sense saurav said...

Saurav - kabir bhut accha h nishu...sab se alag hai...aur wo tujhse ki...before he could complete his sentence he was cut off by nisha...

Nisha - ha saurav kabir bhut accha h..bhut bhut bhut accha h..wo...sabse alag...h...aur...aur uski yhi baat usko... sabse khaas..bnati h...while saying all dis a beautiful curve...form on her lips...n she was lost in her own world...

Saurav -nishu...

Nisha - hmmm(still lost in her thoughts)

Saurav - tu kabir se pyaar krne lagi h na...

On hearing dis she came back to her sense n said...

Nisha - pta nhi saurav...par dil chahta h ki use...hmesha khush rakhu...use ...use har wo khushi du jiska wo haqdaar h...pta h saurav jab wo khush hota h na to man krta h mai bhi uske sath khushi se jhumu...aur aur...jab wo udaas ho jaata h na...to mujhe meri ye zindagi fizul lagne lag jati h...man krta h ki uske hisse k sare gam usse chhin lu ur meri hisse ki jitni bhi khushiyaaa h na sab uspe vaar du...mai uski aankho me ek bhi aansu nhi dekh sakti saurav n she didnt realized wen tears started falling frm her eyes

Saurav (while wiping her tears) - nishu jaise tu uski aankho me aasu nhi dekh sakti na...waise wo bhi teri aankho me aansu nhi dekh sakta samjhi n she noded like a small kid...while saurav smiles...

Saurav(monologue) - is idiot ko to ye bhi nhi pta ki ye kabir se kitna pyaar krne lagi h...aur kabir...jo aaj usne kia...usne nishu ko sorry bola aisa to koi ladka kisi ladki k liye tabhi krega jab jab wo usse bhut pyaar krta ho iska matlab ye dono duffer ek dusre se pyaar krte h...yes both are madly in love wid each other ab mujhe hi in duffers k liye kuch krna padega..

Nisha - saurav...

Saurav - ha...

Nisha - kya soch rha tha...

Saurav(to make d situatn light) -wo mai soch rha tha ki agar hum teri shadi k baad hotel me tere dulhe ko badal dete to tujhe to pta hi nhi chalta na...kyuki tune to tab tak use dekha hi nhi tha...haina n he broke into laughter

Nisha - saurav k bacche teri to...mai aaj band bja k rhungi...

Saurav - ha bja lena par pehle rona to band kr...

Kabir - nisha tu ro kyu rhi h...

On hearing kabir's voice both turned in shock...

Nisha(monologue) - omg kahin isne mere aur saurav ki sari baat to nhi sun li...

Saurav(monologue) - kash isne mere aur nisha ki sari baat sunli ho sari problem jad se hi khatam ho jayegi

Kabir - tum dono aise bhoot ban ke kyu khade ho kuch bologe bhi...

Nisha - wo ...wo...kabir mujhe na...

Saurav - wo nishu ko ghar ki yaad aa rhi thi isiliye ro rhi thi haina nishu

nisha nodded in positive

Den Kabir goes towards nisha n said

Kabir- nisha rona kisi baat ka soln h kya agar tumhe sab ki yaad aa rhi to hum kal hi sab se milne chale jayenge

Nisha - nhi kabir iski koi zarurat nhi h she said wid a smile while saurav was admiring dis love birds n seeing dem wid "awwee" look...


Saurav - okk guyzzz meri meeting ko 45 min. Hi bache h i think i should leave now

Kabir - chal mai tujhe chhod deta hu...

Saurav noded...

Nisha - saurav teri meeting lunch tak to over ho jayegi na...

Saurav - ha ho to jayegi...par kyu...

Nisha - to fir hum lunch krne kahi bahar chalte h ...jaise hi tu free hoga call kr dena hum tujhe pick kr lenge...

Kabir - great idea...

Saurav - ok...

Den kabir n saurav left frm der...

Precap - Nibir dance...

To know more about dis stay tuned wid dis story

Plz leave yr precious likes n comments...
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
res & unres b4 PM😆🤣

Superb Update Nimisswyyy👏👏👏👏👏

Saurav ka aana was a surprise not only 4 NiBir bt also 4 Me tooo🤣

Well I liked How U made Nishu to confess wat was in her mind to her bestie Saurav 👍🏼

I m glad dat Atleast Sauro understud dat NiBir r Dakkans who r mad Lovers🤣🤣🤣

His Dialogue "kiss tera nahi hua bomb mere sir par phod rahi hai" Too gud yaar🤣🤣🤣

Well.. Waiting 4 Sauro to play Cupid 4 NiBir☺️

Precap NiBir dance☺️

Advance Thanks 4 PM🤣 (Jo tu bhejegi nah🤣)

Do Write More🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally u updated
Luved it
Now Saurav will help
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update nimmi
Saurav nd nishas conversation was fab
Now saurav, the saviour will help them confess their feelings
Update soon..cant w8 for their dance for long
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Nimzzz 👍🏼

loved NiRav convo😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome just luved it so much yaar akhir saurav ke sibha inka kya hoga yaar n just luve nibir n saurav...

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