Nibir story-Kismat connection-pt21 updated on pg113(19/01) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Haaye, NiBir ki first meet bilkul DDLJ waali<font size="3" face="Calibri">😳
Awesome yaar</font>👍🏼




yieee shibuuu...
u r back.. 😊
so good to see ur comment... 😳
missed u sooo much
Posted: 9 years ago
#52
ooohhhkkk...
so m back with next update...
thanx fr loving my story guys...
love u all...
will update within 30mins and PM will b sent soon...
i'll try to send pm to all readers... But If I forgot someone then sorry in advance... Love u all... Muaahhh... :* :*
Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Suhani_12

Wow ddlj scene.. Fab part


thanx dear 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

Thanx saaru baba 😊
Kabir duki hai kyunki FREE BIRD KABIRAA IS BEEN CAGED 😭
And suspense isliye kyunki NEHA loves suspense 🤣 🤣
Isi me toh alsi maza hai 😉
and maine kab boli ke Nisha yuvrani hai?? 😆
jo assume karna hai kar 🤣
Teri marzi...



U said in this stry thru Kabir's Dialogue nah?? He Said Yuvrani Sa...🤣

@Bold Here is the Proof...😉 Saru bina proof ke kuch bolthi nahi hai dr..🤣 ab dnt tell me Kabir ne aise hi bola...😉 Jaise bhi bola usne bola nah Nishu ko YUVRANI SA aur mahel ka bhi zikar hua stry main.. SO I guessed..🤣 agar aisi nahi hai toh achi hai.. par mera jo expression tha aftr reading dat I said in my comment.. My comments r my face's reflection😉 tu SYS???🤣

"Achchi isliye kyunki aap mere sath hain yuvrani saa aur buri bcoz of these surroundings , kisi jail se kam nahi hai ye jagah..."
Edited by SaruSenan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Yeh dono aisi baatien kyun kar rahe hai ?😆 The end reminds me of DDLJ😳
MishRI insta post
I miss them😭
cont. soon😊
and so sorry had no intentions to hurt you😊
Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: SaruSenan



U said in this stry thru Kabir's Dialogue nah?? He Said Yuvrani Sa...🤣

@Bold Here is the Proof...😉 Saru bina proof ke kuch bolthi nahi hai dr..🤣 ab dnt tell me Kabir ne aise hi bola...😉 Jaise bhi bola usne bola nah Nishu ko YUVRANI SA aur mahel ka bhi zikar hua stry main.. SO I guessed..🤣 agar aisi nahi hai toh achi hai.. par mera jo expression tha aftr reading dat I said in my comment.. My comments r my face's reflection😉 tu SYS???🤣

"Achchi isliye kyunki aap mere sath hain yuvrani saa aur buri bcoz of
these surroundings , kisi jail se kam nahi hai ye jagah..."




lol proof pesh mat kar.. par yuvrani bolne se koi yuvrani ni ban jata !! 🤣 🤣
aise toh kabir ne kitne naam diye h nishu ko 😆
and abt mahel... saru baba that's the mystery 😉

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Wow..!!!! Superb update Neha..👏🤗
Interesting.. Continue soon,...👍🏼
Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Yeh dono aisi baatien kyun kar rahe hai ?😆

</div>The end reminds me of DDLJ😳
<div>MishRI insta post

I miss them😭

cont. soon😊

and so sorry had no intentions to hurt you😊



its ok niyu...
m not hurt.. 😊
I was just curious to know ...
Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: ItsMeAarushi

Wow..!!!! Superb update Neha..👏🤗

Interesting.. Continue soon,...👍🏼



thanx dear.. 😳
and guess wat m abt to update 😉
tu sahi time pe ayi ...
an tera precious time b waste ni hoga!! 🤣 🤣
don't mind plzz just joking .. ur signature... 😆
Posted: 9 years ago
#60
here the next update...
happy reading... 😊
Nibir Story - KISMAT CONNECTION
Chapter 2
The cute eyelock broke with a voice...
"Oh hellos DDLJ ke Raj aur Simran .. Aise doors pr hi khade rahoge ya andar b aaoge???"
"Dolly hellos nahi hello & doors nahi door" , a girl corrected her
"Han han wahi.."
Dolly replied her but as soon as she looked at door her smiled vanished bcoz she saw Kabir standing there with a girl ...
"Raj aur Simran??? How blah dolly..." she said annoyed & went inside
"arey kirti sun toh..." dolly followed her..
"Tum dono ko andar nahi ana kya ??? Wapas bahar kudne ka iraada to nahi hai na??"
Saurav giggled saying that!!
"Arey nahi dude... I think ye DDLJ nai Chennai experience hogi ... Kabir wait kar raha baki logo b toh andar Lena hoga na..."
Sukku replied him
Both burst out laughing..,
Kabir glared at them & went inside...
On the very next moment...
Nisha was sitting on right side bench , dolly & kirti were sitting on opposite her..
And the boys(including Kabir,Saurav & suketu) were standing
All 5 were glaring at Nisha with an accusing look
There was deep silence in the compartment...
"Kyaa??tumlog mujhe aise gurr Kyu rahe ho??Mein koi alien nahi hoon... Tumhare Jaisi normal insan hi hu yar!!"
Nisha said breaking the silence
"Haan pata hai tum normals ho par aise??"
Dolly replied pointing towards her attire
"Normal log aise dulhan ke jode me platform par nahi dodte...!!"
Kirti said in a low voice but it didn't went unnoticed because There was deep silence..
" kirti plzzz yar stop it ..." Kabir requested her to be normal ...
"Wahhttt???meine kya kiya??"
"tum dono shaant rahoge plzzz... Is waqt ye ladki important hai..."
Saurav said
"Haan ab toh sabke liye yahi important hogi.. Mere toh value hi nai rahi na koi..."
"Kirti come'ons yar .. Gussa chhod de.. Me Mazak kar rahi Thi... And ye ladki... Kisi ko b shok ni hota aise kapdo me platforms pe bhaagne ka.. May b ye koi problems me ho??"
"Dolly bilkul thik bol rahi hai..." Saurav said then looked at Nisha & asked "kon ho Tum?plzz batao... Koi Problem me ho kya??tell us ... Shayad hum tumhari koi help Kar sake??"
Nisha was still quite .. She was thinking that she should tell them the truth or not?
"Ye log baaton se toh achche insaan lag rahe hain... Inhe sach batadun? Par me inko thik se janti bhi nahi... Aise kaise me... Nahi i cant take any risk..."
"Arey yar bol bhi do aise shaadi ke jode me milkha singh Kyu banna pada tumhe??" sukku said irritated bcoz she wasn't replying them...
Nisha was about to speak but kirti interrupt her..
"Guys i think meine isse pehle bhi kahin dekha hai..."
"Ye tu kya bol rahi hai yar??Tune isse kahan dekha?" Saurav asked
"Han Hum toh pehli times Jaipur aye hai!!"
"I dont know dolly pr I m damn sure meine ise kahin toh dekha hai!!!"
Nisha was feeling hell uncomfortable, she wanted get out of there as soon as possible...
Bcoz she will b in big trouble if they recognize her...
But before Nisha could think a way out Kirti interrupted her thoughts
"Haan yaad aya... Ye toh woh hai... Nisha.. Nisha Gangwal - The famous Archer... Maine iske bare me newspaper me padha Tha..."
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To be continued...

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