NiBir FF: Teri Meri Love Story(Chp 17&18-pg 93)*8/4*COMPLETED

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sonal

@SONAL30

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Choti u n story👏

But awesomw CS n prologue

Best frds wow😃

Continue soon...m waiting🤗

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope
first, ishima!!!! u listened to ru and wrote

second, prologue mein hi cliffhanger😆 irada kya hai...aise cliffhangers dalte raho aur hum sab ko curiosity se heart attack hoga😆

third, please yaar. hindi mein likh...just love it when you write in hindi

fourth, you wrote second aunt and aunt mohan and rupan🤣

cont. soon

Corrected it 😳

I want to write in Hindi too but humari hindi zydada logon ko samajh nahi aayegi.. toh it will be Hinlish 😉

sabra karoRu.. Sabar ka phal meetha hota hai.. 😉

Option tha kya.. apne pyaare masum se baachon ka dil aksie thodte 🤗

Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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Niyati Tiwari

@Niyati_T

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: SONAL30
Choti u n story👏
But awesomw CS n prologue

Best frds wow😃

Continue soon...m waiting🤗

Dida🤗

continue kab hoga iska koi idea nahi hai 😆

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Nishtha

@naina.majik

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice start niya...

U r osm... U should continue...

Na sirf ye balki aage bhi bht saari stories likhni chahiye...

Do write more...

Continue soon...

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Niya_789
Appke comment ka hume intezaar hai😉

No need to wait mamaaa.. its Unres ed..😉😆🤣
Aapka Saru bacha aapko intezaar nahi karwayegi..😆 Do read🤣 & get shocked🤣

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Echo.of.Hope
first, ishima!!!! u listened to ru and wrote
second, prologue mein hi cliffhanger😆 irada kya hai...aise cliffhangers dalte raho aur hum sab ko curiosity se heart attack hoga😆

third, please yaar. hindi mein likh...just love it when you write in hindi

fourth, you wrote second aunt and aunt mohan and rupan🤣

cont. soon

@Bold Sissy I too Noticed & said it.. Mamma has shock Hangover😆🤣
So gender change karwa diaa..🤣
waise bhi Mohan tauji is HEN PECKED nah😉 Toh chalegaa🤣🤣🤣

@Blue Niyu Mamma I too agree.. I love Hindi Words.. Bcz Saru Loves Hindi..😆🤣
Hindi main K panti zyada umadke aathe hai..😉😆🤣

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arviabhigya

@arviabhigya

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Res😆

Time milne pe zaroor update karungi😆😉

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Shanz

@Shanaya1526

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

oye hoye kya😃 intro hai i just love it ...its soo cute cant w8 🤗more nd more nd i m really thankful for PM it was super nyc 👏

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Itsmeriya

@Itsmeriya

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Character sketch and prologue were really good 😃 😳
Update fast...waiting 😊

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Saranya Senan M C

@SaruSenan

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Mamma Mere liye sirf Likes.. 😡🤣 reply nahi 😲😡😆🤣

I want Reply.. 🤣
I want Reply...🤣
I want Reply...🤣
I want Reply.. 🤣
I want Reply...🤣
I want Reply...🤣
I want Reply.. 🤣
I want Reply...🤣
I want Reply...🤣
I want Reply.. 🤣
I want Reply...🤣
I want Reply...🤣