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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

I know nibir part was too short yaar... ...mana ek long update plan ki thi...n the next part was nibir dance bt kya karti yaar it was too late and mom wanted me to keep my phone so I could upload this much only...m so sorry for that...n thank you for your opinion😊

Don't be sorry for anything vaishu.waiting for nibir dance.update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nitika4


Don't be sorry for anything vaishu.waiting for nibir dance.update soon


😃 I vl try to update it soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Wow i was missing ur update frm day b4 yesterday.did u get hiccups? Sorry mazak tha . Cuming to updaye supetb khahwato ki band bajana koi kabir aur tumse sikhe. Nibir ka eyelock kua tha yaar.r nd v dance main unke feelimgs kya baat worth the wait ab toh bas nibir k dance ki baari. Nd update miss to kiya tha.


aaweee...thank you niti😊 m so happy u like it that much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishrialways

lovely update yaar

the nibir scene was very nice
ye kabir foreign mein peda hua tha kiya
muhabaro ki band bajadi

raghav and vivansha were also good
update soon
ritika

thank you rititka 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

res😆
wl unres tomorrow🤣

UNRES😆 Massi🤗

Sorry 4 late comments..😳

Superb update👏

NiBir nok-jhoks.. Jhakass tha...🤣

Kabira & Kahawath...🤣

Sher sawa sher.. sachi bolu toh mujhe bhi samj nahi aatha yeh aisa q bolthe hai..🤣

@Pink This was my fav & Honestly jab Seat belt atak gaya tha tab main soch rahi thi aisa koi scene zaroor hogaa...😉😆🤣 & dekho mil bhi gaya aisa scene☺️

<font color="#FF0099">he stopped in the middle of his statement as he saw up into her eys their eyes got lockd again the fascinatng feelng their eyes provided to each other was somethng beyond their imaginatn they could feel each others breath on their faces nisha's long hairs were tickling kabir's face he tuged her hair strandes behind her ears while doing this his hands brushed her cheeks his touch was sendng thousand of sensatn through her body it was memorizng for her the effect ws the same for kabir a touch of her skin,her soft cheeks gave him a heavenly feeling she was indeed an angel for him they werw lost i each others eyes they didn't knew what was happening to them bt they were happy , happy being lost in each others eyes they wished to reamain like this forever

<font color="#000000">Vivansha- Raghav fight was funny & bechare Bache😆</font></font><font color="#FF0099"><font color="#000000">🤣

But Massi ek baath bolu if u dnt mind 😳 Actually mujhe show par NiBir par picturise kia hua gaana na kisi aur pair ke saath nahi pasand hai.. Woh Gaane sirf NiBir par suit hothi hai.. toh mujhe Dehleez song 4 Vivu-Raghav pair acha nahi lagaa.. (My POV) Sorry if u felt hurt..🤔 But Main sach bol rahi hu Jo gaana NiBir ka show par tha nah Voh phir sunthi hu toh sirf NiBir hi nazar aatha hai Mujhe🤪</font></font><font color="#FF0099"><font color="#000000">🤣 koi aur ko uss jagah Imagine nahi kar paathi hu.. Sorry again if u felt bad..😳 Hugss Massy🤗 Hope aap mere point samjengi..😃

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write more🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆</font></font><font color="#FF0099"><font color="#000000">🤣</font></font>

thank you bhanju 🤗
vaise mujhe bhi nhi pata ki yeh ser pe savaser kyu kehte h 😆 🤣
n about the song mujhe bilkul bura nhi laga n ma samaj sakti hu bcoz sach kahu to vo dance likhte smaya ma nibir ko hi imagine kar rhi thi bt kya karu virav ka dance sequence likhna tha n mana nibir ka liye do special song select kiye h so jeena jeena virav ke liye chuna bt next time I promise ma virav ko nibir ka song nhi dungi
sholly bhanju 😊 a big wala hug from me 🤗 PS -wrote it when my recess was ending so sorry agar spelling mistakes ho 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank U Massi 4 writing sucha long reply for ME... voh bhi cls ke beechh..🤗 dont wry Mistake nahi thi.. 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Thank U Massi 4 writing sucha long reply for ME... voh bhi cls ke beechh..🤗 dont wry Mistake nahi thi..
🤣


anything for my K khandaan 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu


aawee thank you naina😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

I vl try to update it today...coz aaj m free for the whole day😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 5-CONFUSING FEELINGS
Nisha and Kabir were in the car Nisha was looking outside the window she was lost in her thoughts she was confused about that feeling which she experienced few mins ago
N-(kya hogaya tha mujhe kyu mana use apne aapse dur nhi kiya kyu uske ek touch ma itna kho gayi?? Kya ho rha h mujhe?? aur sabse badi baat ma kabir ke saath akele aayi hi kyu???)
K-you trust me
N-kya???
K-kya???
N-abhi tumne kya kaha
K-you trust me...yahi song to baj rha h yaha
N-song??
K-Nisha tu thik to h na
N-haaa ma thik hu
K-thank god...varna mujhe phirse mazduri karni padti
N-kya matlab
K-matlab yeh ki mujhe phirse is bhari bharkam bho...bha...weight ko uthana padta
N-ma bhari bharkam bhoj??
K-haa bhoj yahi word to yaad nhi aa rha tha
N-kabir tere kehne ka matlab h ki ma bhaari hu??
K-bhaari nhi bohot bhari h
N-kabir tu kitna K h
K-aur tu mere k sa kitni J h
N-ma bilkul J nhi hu...khudme taaqat nhi h aur mujhe bhari bol rha h
K-oh hello ma roz 2 ghante gym jaata hu
N-haa aur waha jake kya karta h...chote bacho ke dumbals uthata h????
K-dekh miss J mujhe gussa mat dila tu bhari h toh iska mujhpe kyu nikal rhi h
N-phir se bhari bola mujhe??
K-haa bola toh???
N-abhi batati hu
Nisha started beating him whereas kabir tried to doch her hits
K-kya kar rhi h miss J...yaar ma drive kar rha hu...bas kar
N-(stopped beating him) agli baar mujhe bhari mat bolna varna...
K-miss J sach hamesha karela hota h
N-kya??
K-matlab kadwa hota h
N-yeh kya tha
K-vo karela kadwa hota h na
N-oh god kabir tu kitna bada bewakoof h
K-ooaa madam aap hongi bewakoof ma bohot intelligent hu
N-intelligent ka matlab bhi pata h
K-haaa acche se pata h
N-ohh re...
She couldn't complete her sentence as the car came hault
Kabir came out of the car and opened the door for nisha nisha came out and was mesmerized by the look of the place it was beautiful
It was a lake far away from the city Nisha was so lost in her thoughts n in fighting with kabir that she didn't noticed that they had came so far away from the city
Nisha's lips turned into a curve as she saw the eternal beauty of the nature the soft wind was kissing her face birds were expressing their happiness by singing songs her hairs were dancing with the wind everything was beautiful no actually it was beyond beautiful nisha closed her eyes to feel the beauty of the nature
Kabir was happy that she was smiling the reason why he brought her here was fulfilled
K-Oooaa miss J yahi khadi rahegi ya lake ke pass bhi chalegi
Nisha glared at kabir for destroying such a perfect moment and kabir made a cute baby face nisha wanted to smile at his cuteness bt she faked anger
N-thik h thik h chal
Kabir smiled and they both went near the lake they they inserted their legs in the water and sat on the land Nisha was happy she always loved being in such places all her stress and worries faded by the smile on her face she felt relieved suddenly something strike her mind
N-kabir tu mujhe yaha kyu laya h
K-kyuki ma laana cahta tha
N-kabir bata na
K-Nisha is jagah se meri bohot saari yaade judi h...ma jab bhi dukhi sad ya stressed feel karta hu to ma yaha aa jaata hu meri saari tension sari prblms bas hava ma gayab ho jaati h I love this place aur aaj tu stressed thi toh mana socha ki ma tujhe yaha le aau shayaad yeh jagah tujhe par bhi apna jaadu chalna de ...aur dekh ma sahi tha
Nisha was touched by his concern this guy could have asked her for the party also bt no he cared for her
N-thank you
K-wow yeh toh unexpected tha...par u r welcome ...vaise tujhme kuch toh khas h varna ma yaha kisi ko bhi nhi lata
N-Raghav ko tak nhi
K-nhi
N-phir mujhe kyu laya??
K-pata nhi lekin meri maa hamesha kehti h ki jis jagah hum duniya se chupne jaate h vaha hum sirf kisi aise hi insaan ko lakar jaate h jissase hume kuch nhi chipana padta shayad tujse mujhe kuch chipanae ki koi zarurat na pade
N-mujhe nhi pata tha ki us irritating K ke piche koi aisa chipa h
K-(smiling) abhi to tujhe kuch nhi pata h...yeh sab chod tu yeh bata ki tujhe dance pasand h????
N-haa
K-dance karegi mere saath
Nisha was confused at first bt then she agreed
N-haa
K-thik h ma abhi aaya
He went to the car n switchd on the music
Haan aa...

Kabir sat on his knees and forwarded his hand
Nisha involuntarily smiled n placed her hands in his

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye (x2)

His hazel brown orbs hypnotized her once again
The nature and the music also helped in making the moment beautiful

Haan hum badalne lage
Girne sambhalne lage
Jab se hai jaana tumheinTeri ore chalne lage (x2)

The lyrics of the song suited their condition
There was just a need to understand that

Har safar har jagah
Har kahin ban gaye
Maante thhe Khuda
Aur haan wahi ban gaye
Haan hansi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaanMeri zameen ban gaye (x2)

Each step they did was magical

Pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
Pehchaante hi nahi ab log tanha mujhe
Meri nigaahon mein bhi hai dhoondte wo tujhe
Hum the dhoondhte jisey wo kami ban gaye
Tum mere ishq ki sar-zameen ban gaye
Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaanMeri zameen ban gaye (x2)

He twirled her gently
N pulled her on himself
Nisha'shands were on his chest

O.. ooaa


The music stopped bt they were yet lost in their dreamland their faces were just a bit away from each other kabir cupped her face and looked at her intensively Nisha closed her coz she was nt able match that intensity kabir caressed her lips with his thumb they were so soft he couldn't control himself now n wanted to taste them the distance between their lips reduced and they were jusy inches away the distance was decreaseing with every breath they were about to meet bt Nisha came out of her trance n pushed him away
Both were shocked by the event that happened now first their intense eye lock n now this almost kiss what was happening to them why were their feelings out of their own control

Nisha could nt face him so she went to lake n sat there

in the orphan age

Vivansha was playing with childrens where as raghav was setting on a bench thinking about her he didn't knew why bt he wasn't frightened of showing his other side to her now she was so innocent Mrs mary had observed the whole scenario n went to talk to Raghav she sat besides Raghav
Mm-raghav my child
R-yes Mrs mary
Mm-do you believe in love
R-yeh kaisa saal h Mrs mary
Mm-raghav ans to what I m saying
R-yes I do
Mm -do u love someone
R-Mrs mary aap achanak yeh sab kyu puch rahe ho
Mm-batao na Raghav
R-haa in bachoo se aur apne bhai se
Mm-aur??
R-aur kya Mrs mary
Mm-tum aur kisi se pyaar nhi karta h
R-nhi
Mm-toh tum taiyaar ho jao jaldi hi tumko kisi se pyaar hone waala h
R-matlab
Mm-jab time aayega tab tum khud samaj jayega
R-par...
Mm-bas chalo ab baccho ke pass chalo
R-thik h
He went with Mrs mary n vivansha was playing there she was spinning in the middle n childrens were running around her Mrs mary pushed raghav at the center near to vivansha she collided with him and was about to fall bt balanced herself in this process she sprained her leg n shouted
V-aauch
R-kya hua
V-mera pair
Mm-kya hua beta
V-kuch Mrs mary bas mera pair sprain ho gaya
Mm-oh jejus ...raghav tum isko beanch pe lakar chalo
V-iski koi jarurat nhi h..
Before she could complete her sentence raghav picked her in his arms n started to walk towards the beanch Vivansha was shocked by his actions and looked at him his eyes had concern for her the care in his eyes could b clearly seen he reached the bench n made her sit properly he brought the first aid box n sat on the ground near the bench he removed her sandle n started applying ointment on it she was not able to speak anything due to shock raghav massaged her leg slowly vivansha felt all her pain vanished by his touch it was soothing raghav could see the confusion on her face
R-tum kitna girti ho
V-are par ma to tumhari vajah se giri
R-phir se mujhe blame saal rhi ho
V-excuse me galti tumhari h
R-bilkul nhi saari galti tumhari h
V-haww
R-ab muh kyu bana rhi ho
V-kyuki...
Childrens-uhum uhum
R-tum logo ko aaj kal kuch jyada khasi nhi hone lagi h
Aa-aur aapki yaadash kitni weak ho gayi h
K-haa abhi thodi Der pehle hi mujhe promise kiya aur ab bhul bhi gaye
V-hum nhi bhule vo to bas...bate kar rahe the
N-accha??
R-haa aur nhi to kya sirf baat hi kar rhae the
Mm-bas bas ab sab chalo khaana kha lo
Ch-ohkk
V, R-ohkk
Vivansha tried to get up bt it was paining
Raghav took her right hand and kept it on his right sholder and caught her through her waist vivansha saw into his eyes and got lost they walked towards the table in the same way without breaking the eye lock it was a beautiful eyelock as always as they reached the table raghav came out of his trance n helped her sit on her chair properly

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