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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

sorry anshika I vl try to update it as soon as possible...actually i m a bit busy my colg n cls n on top of it there's a marriage of our neighbour soo😔


No problem
I will wait 😃
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😃hiiee everyone sorry for being late once again...here is the next chapter
CHAPTER 4-A SIGHT OF LOVE

Kabir and nisha left the hospital kabir sat on driver's seat while nisha was seated on passengers seat kabir locked his seat belt and saw nisha she was struggling with her seat belt kabir smiled at her looking like this she was hell irritated she finally quitted and left the seat belt
K-kya hua miss j ??seatbelt pehnlo
N-nhi
K-are par...
N-chup kar...ek th tu mujhe bata nhi rha h ki hum kaha jaa rahe h aur upsr se yeh seat belt...huh
K-are isme seat belt ki kya galti
N-galti h khatara gaadi ki khatara seat belt
K-ooaa miss j mujhe joo bhi bolna h bol par meri gadi ko kuch mat bol bohot acchi h samjhi??
N-haa dihk rha h ...gaadi ki bhi kya galti maalik hi aisa hoga toh gaadi toh kharab hogi hi nah
K-oaa miss j gaadi bilkul thik h n uska maalik toh bohot hi accha h
N-really isliye seat belt aise h
K-seat belt thikh tujhe bandhne nhi aati...ab bas kar aur seatbelt pehenle
N-nhi
K-thik h
He started the car and applied instant break due to which nisha experienced a small jerk
N-what the heck kabir tujhe gaadi chalani bhi nhi aati
K-aati h ma toh bas...
N-chup...naach na jaane aangan teda
K-what???...n mujhe dance aata h...n tumhare ghar ka aangan teda h toh ma kya karu
N-abey ghade ye kahawat ha
K-ohh ...par phir bhi mje nachne ata ha
N-ma bhi kya bhas ke samne bin baja rhi hu
K-abey tere paas bean bhi ha...par bhas kaha ha aur tu bean baja hi nhi rhi ha...
N-KABIRR!!!
K-kya ha?
N-tuuu
K-ek min phir koi kahawat mat bolna plz
N-(trying to be calm)kabir chal yaha se
K-nhi
N-ab kya ha
K-seatbelt
N-kabir
K-chup
he leaned towards nisha he slided his rigt hand arund her and locked the belt
K-dekh ho gaya...
he stopped in the middle of his statement as he saw up into her eys their eyes got lockd again the fascinatng feelng their eyes provided to each other was somethng beyond their imaginatn they could feel each others breath on their faces nisha's long hairs were tickling kabir's face he tuged her hair strandes behind her ears while doing this his hands brushed her cheeks his touch was sendng thousand of sensatn through her body it was memorizng for her the effect ws the same for kabir a touch of her skin,her soft cheeks gave him a heavenly feeling she was indeed an angel for him they werw lost i each others eyes they didn't knew what was happening to them bt they were happy , happy being lost in each others eyes they wished to reamain like this forever bt soon they came out of their wonderland when they heard a sound it was nisha's phone it was ringing continuously both felt a littel awkward kabir moved away fro nisha n nisha picked up hr phone
N-haa mishra uncle(MU)
MU-ha nisha beta vo mujhe viyu se baat karni thi use phone dena toh
N-uncle vo tho mere saath nhi h orphanage gayi hui h
MU-tab toh usne phone silent pe daala hoga...isliye phone nhi utha rhi thi
N-haa uncle kuch imp h kya
MU-nhi bete ma baadme call karta hu
N-hkk uncle
MU-ok beta tc bye
N-byee uncle
kabir who heard the convo was curious to know something
K-nisha yeh vivansa konse orphanage gayi h
N-kyu tujhe kya kaam h
K-bata na plz
N-vo St Parker's orphanage
listening this kabir started laughing to which nisha got confused
N-kya ua to pagal to nhi ho gaya???
K-nhi yaar m,a yeh sochke has rha hu ki vaha baccho ka kya haal hoga
N-(confused) matlab???
K-matlab raghav bhi vahi h
N-wht??
K-haa bichare bacche
N-vahi toh unmese ek sher h toh dusra sava sher
K-nisha yeh sava sher kya hota h...matlab hindi me sava ka matlab 1+it's 25% toh yeh sher kaisa hoga
N-kabir mujhe maaf kar d mana tere saamne kahawat boli
K-haa par...
kabir got a angry glare from nisha
K-ohkk ma samaj gaya ...vaise tu tension mat le mrs mary h vaha sab sambhal legi
N-hmm
In orphanage
as kabir n nisha thought all the childrens were bored by now vivansha n raghav fought after every 20 mins n someone have to stop them again n again all were hell fed up now bt mrs mary was yet smiling bcoz she saw something special between these idiots she noticed them stealing glances , she noticed their small eyelocks , the smile on one"s face when he/she saw the other one smiling , the relif on their faces when they saw the other one playing with the childrens there was something special in them n she knew what it was
here all the childrens assembled to decide something really very very important that how wil stop vivansha n raghav this time
(childrens:aakash, kavya sahil neha nitesh ritu)
aa-guys koi roko yar inko
sahil-last time ma gaya tha ab kavya jayegi
kavya-ma nhi nitesh jayega
nitesh-mee...me nhi ritu jayegi
ritu-me bohot baar jaa chuki hu ab neha
neha-ma nhi aakash tum jaao
aakash-ghum phir ke mujhpe mat aoo
ritu-thik h to dekhte raho ink aise hi
kavya-nhi!!!...na jaati hu
nitesh-wah kavya...iskeliye mare taraf se tujhe khartoon ke khiladi kaa award jaa
kavya-ho gaya tre pakkka ke
nitesh-mana kab pakaya re
kavya-abhi abhi idio
nitesh-abey ooaa...
aakash-guyz ab tum log mat shuru ho jao plzz unko roko
kavya- haa jaa rhi hu
the poor little girl wnt towards the two which were fighting like cats and dogs
R-tum kabhi nhi sudrogi na
v-pehlr khud toh sudhro
R-ma tumse toh accha hi hu
V-haa dikh rha h mujhe idiot kahike
R-ooaa miss chik...
kavya-SHUT UPP!!!!!...you guyz fight like tom n jerry yaar
V-sorry kavya i promise ab me nhi ladugi./...pakka wala promise
R-ma bhi
K-no m angry
R-toh ma apni princess ko kaise patau
V-plz kavu batao na kya kare hum
K-simple meri ek baat mano
V-aapka hukum sar aankho par
K-ohkk then toh mujhe song sunana h
R-toh tum cahti ho ma guitar bajau
K-nhi aap gao guitar aakash bajayega...n viyu didi aapke saath dance karegi
V-isko gaana aata h??
Aakash-bohot aacha gaate h...ma abhi unka guitaar lata hu
V-ohkk cool
aakash brought the guitar it had RM printed on it vivansha felt sad as she read that she thought that it would be initials of his n her gilrfriend bt she decided to ignore it chain of her thought were broken by aakash's words
aakash-lo le aaya
k-ab start karte h
nitesh(N)-madam pehle gaana toh bata idiot
K-ma idiot tu hoga idiot
N-oooa dekh jyada mat bol
K-bolugi kya karega
N-maa teri complaint karuga mrs mary se
K-kar de raghav bhaiya ar viyu didi mujhe bacha lenge
N-nhi vo nhi bavhayege bcoz tu galat h...bewkoof gaana bataye bina hi start karne bolte ho
N-ab bhana mat bana
K-ma bahana nhi bana rhi hu
n-bana rhi h...
V,R-STOOPPP!!!!...tum khudk kitna ladte ho aur hume chup kara rhae the
V-like really yaar
R-yaa
kavya n nitesh glared at them angryly
aakash-aap donod bhi aise hi ladte ho
v-woo...woo toh hum
K-bas hum samaj gaye
R-ohkk
Aakash-ohkk...ab song bata de
K-mmm...ek min
she went towards raghav n told the song name in his ears n then to aakash
Raghav watched viyu awkwardly n asked kavya to changr the song bt she denied
k-ohkk start
aakash started playing guitar n raghav sarted the song

Hmm.. hmm...
(he forwarded his hand towards vivansha as if asking her permission she hesitantly gave him her hand )
Dehleez pe mere dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
(raghav kept his one hand on her waist n caught the other in his hand vivanshya kept her hand on his shoulder n both started following the music )

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum
(it was awkward in the begining bt then music did it's magic n both got lost in each other they were flowing with the music looking into each oters eye's)

Dehleez pe merey dil ki
Jo rakhe hain tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
(raghav twirled her n pulled her towards himself)

Haan sikha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na sikha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum
(her back collided with his chest n he back hugged her)
Hmmm.. hmmm..

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein
Dil se jo maine kari hain...

( she could feel his hot breath on her shoulders it was beautiful moment for them)

Jo tu mila to saji hain
Duniya meri humdum
O aasma mila zameen ko meri
Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
(all the childrens were shocked looking at them at the beginning bt then they were in aawww)

Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena
Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum
Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum
(the two love birds were in their own world)
Hmmm... hmmm..
song ended bt they didn't realized it n were in their same position looking in to each others eyes
their hearts felt n unknown warmth bt it was nice actually more then nice it was the best feelings being lost in those eyes their trance was broken by loud noise of clapping done by the childrens...

sorry guys ma nibir ka dance nhi likh paayi time scarcity yaar bt next update ma pakka nibir dance i promise ...n don't forget to give me your opinion
😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
res😆
wl unres tomorrow🤣

UNRES😆 Massi🤗

Sorry 4 late comments..😳

Superb update👏👏👏👏

NiBir nok-jhoks.. Jhakass tha...😆🤣🤣🤣

Kabira & Kahawath...😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Sher sawa sher.. sachi bolu toh mujhe bhi samj nahi aatha yeh aisa q bolthe hai..😕🤣🤣🤣

@Pink This was my fav & Honestly jab Seat belt atak gaya tha tab main soch rahi thi aisa koi scene zaroor hogaa...😉😆🤣 & dekho mil bhi gaya aisa scene☺️

he stopped in the middle of his statement as he saw up into her eys their eyes got lockd again the fascinatng feelng their eyes provided to each other was somethng beyond their imaginatn they could feel each others breath on their faces nisha's long hairs were tickling kabir's face he tuged her hair strandes behind her ears while doing this his hands brushed her cheeks his touch was sendng thousand of sensatn through her body it was memorizng for her the effect ws the same for kabir a touch of her skin,her soft cheeks gave him a heavenly feeling she was indeed an angel for him they werw lost i each others eyes they didn't knew what was happening to them bt they were happy , happy being lost in each others eyes they wished to reamain like this forever

Vivansha- Raghav fight was funny & bechare Bache😆
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

But Massi ek baath bolu if u dnt mind 😳 Actually mujhe show par NiBir par picturise kia hua gaana na kisi aur pair ke saath nahi pasand hai.. Woh Gaane sirf NiBir par suit hothi hai.. toh mujhe Dehleez song 4 Vivu-Raghav pair acha nahi lagaa.. (My POV) Sorry if u felt hurt..🤔 But Main sach bol rahi hu Jo gaana NiBir ka show par tha nah Voh phir sunthi hu toh sirf NiBir hi nazar aatha hai Mujhe🤪
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 koi aur ko uss jagah Imagine nahi kar paathi hu.. Sorry again if u felt bad..😳 Hugss Massy🤗 Hope aap mere point samjengi..😃

Thanks 4 PM😳

Do write more🤗 Q ki DMM😳😆
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome👏
Kabira aur kahawat😆
loved the kids😳
update soon😃
Edited by ...Shibu... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry had been really busy so couldnt comment on ur earlee updates but had been reading all ur updates religiously 😉 Finally u updated 😆 Really nice update 😃 Loved Nibir car romance 😳 Raghav-vivansha scene was also nice 😊 Children's discussion and plan to stop their fight was awesome 😆
Lagta hai Kabir aur kahawaton ka chattees ka aankda hai 🤣 🤣 bhains kahan hai 🤣
NiBir dialogues were awesome 😆 Virav scene and dance was nice 😳 Vivansha sad CZ she thought R's guitar had his and his gf's intial 😆 Good to see her J 😆
Continue soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Sorry had been really busy so couldnt comment on ur earlee updates but had been reading all ur updates religiously 😉 Finally u updated 😆 Really nice update 😃 Loved Nibir car romance 😳 Raghav-vivansha scene was also nice 😊 Children's discussion and plan to stop their fight was awesome 😆
Lagta hai Kabir aur kahawaton ka chattees ka aankda hai 🤣 🤣 bhains kahan hai 🤣
NiBir dialogues were awesome 😆 Virav scene and dance was nice 😳 Vivansha sad CZ she thought R's guitar had his and his gf's intial 😆 Good to see her J 😆
Continue soon 😉

thank you sooo much😊...it's ohkk yaar I can understand...n m glad that u liked my updates😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesm update dear... 😊
loved der seat belt wala scene 😉
nibir fight on dat kahawat was 😆
kabira great h yr...mujhe naach aata h n tere ghar ka aanghan tedha h... 😡


he leaned towards nisha he slided his rigt hand arund her and locked the belt K-dekh ho gaya... he stopped in the middle of his statement as he saw up into her eys their eyes got lockd again the fascinatng feelng their eyes provided to each other was somethng beyond their imaginatn they could feel each others breath on their faces nisha's long hairs were tickling kabir's face he tuged her hair strandes behind her ears while doing this his hands brushed her cheeks his touch was sendng thousand of sensatn through her body it was memorizng for her the effect ws the same for kabir a touch of her skin,her soft cheeks gave him a heavenly feeling she was indeed an angel for him they werw lost i each others eyes they didn't knew what was happening to them bt they were happy , happy being lost in each others eyes they wished to reamain like this forever bt soon they came out of their wonderland when they heard a sound it was nisha's phone it was ringing continuously both felt a littel awkward kabir moved away fro nisha n nisha picked up hr phone

i really like d way u describe der inner feelings...m totally falling for dis yr...

loved nibir reactn wen dey came to know virav are in same orphanage

loved virav nokjhok
childrens nokjhok
j vivansha
n virav dance was so romantic...

update fast vaishu mujhe nibir dance jaldi dekhna h i cant wait dear
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
My first comment here😛
I just loved it kabir nisha nok jhok was cute and that eyelock😳
children were cute
Raghav Vivi dance
Awesome update vaishuu 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👏
Kabira aur kahawat😆
loved the kids😳
update soon😃

thank you shibu...😊...I vl try yo update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: itznimi003

awesm update dear... 😊
loved der seat belt wala scene 😉
nibir fight on dat kahawat was 😆
kabira great h yr...mujhe naach aata h n tere ghar ka aanghan tedha h... 😡


he leaned towards nisha he slided his rigt hand arund her and locked the belt K-dekh ho gaya... he stopped in the middle of his statement as he saw up into her eys their eyes got lockd again the fascinatng feelng their eyes provided to each other was somethng beyond their imaginatn they could feel each others breath on their faces nisha's long hairs were tickling kabir's face he tuged her hair strandes behind her ears while doing this his hands brushed her cheeks his touch was sendng thousand of sensatn through her body it was memorizng for her the effect ws the same for kabir a touch of her skin,her soft cheeks gave him a heavenly feeling she was indeed an angel for him they werw lost i each others eyes they didn't knew what was happening to them bt they were happy , happy being lost in each others eyes they wished to reamain like this forever bt soon they came out of their wonderland when they heard a sound it was nisha's phone it was ringing continuously both felt a littel awkward kabir moved away fro nisha n nisha picked up hr phone

i really like d way u describe der inner feelings...m totally falling for dis yr...

loved nibir reactn wen dey came to know virav are in same orphanage

loved virav nokjhok
childrens nokjhok
j vivansha
n virav dance was so romantic...

update fast vaishu mujhe nibir dance jaldi dekhna h i cant wait dear


thank you nimi...that was my favorite part tooo 😊...n I vl try to update it soon

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