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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
sorry for such a late comment niana I don't know how I missed this part m so sorry
about the update
it was tooo cute
cousins planning awesome
nibir confession was sooo cute yaar
just loved it ❤️
awesome update
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Originally posted by: crazyvaishu

sorry for such a late comment niana I don't know how I missed this part m so sorry
about the update
it was tooo cute
cousins planning awesome
nibir confession was sooo cute yaar
just loved it ❤️
awesome update

areee...its alright
dnt say sorry...
thanks dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
hello guys...
i m back with next part of my story...
yes...this is the last part of the story...
try kiya hai ki sabki wish kar saku fir bhi agar kuch choot gya ho to sorry..
mehnat to bht lagi hai is part ko likhne m...hope k tum logo ko pasand ayega..
Maine recheck nhi kiya hai...to agar koi galti , spelling mistake , gramatical mistake ho to mujhe bta dena...ok..

Special thanks to :- ammu4u , ayesharocks , _A-Hopeful-Ray_


PART 12 (LAST PART)

They come out of their trance due to clap sounds made by cousins who were cheering their victory

Nisha n kabir (leave each other ...gives embarrassed expression )

Kabir - guys w..wo... hum...to bs yuhi

Kirti - how blah jiju... Jhoot mat bolo (laughs)

Umesh - (seeing kabir ...winks)

Sukku - Nishu tu to badi chupirustam nikali... Jo isne kabhi nhi kiya wo ab khullam khulla karne lagi...(laughs)

Nisha- (lil angry) ruk tujhe m abhi batati hu.. Nisha runs behind sukku but dolly holds her hand...

Dolly - nishu..nishu.. Kya yar ab isme sharmane ki kya bat h...

Nisha - (blushes)

Kabir - (situation ko light karne k liye) whi to dolly... Shadi ki h maine nisha se...wo bhi 2 ..2 bar to itna to ye sab to banta hai..

Saurav - ha ha bhai hum sab samjh gye... But tu sambhal k rehna tune galti se gangwal khandan k sherni se shadi ki h... (Laughs)

Sukku - (sad face banate hue) aur ye sherni marne m expert h. ..

Everyone laughs

Nisha - ( angrily seeing saurav n sukku)

Kabir - ( sad face banate hue ) yar ab to chahe jo ho jhelna to h hi...

Everyone laughs seeing kabir sad cute face...

Nisha - (angrily seeing kabir)

Umesh sabka mind divert karne k liye guys chalo game continue karte h...

Dolly - ha ha guys...

Kabir - (seeing nisha ) ha yar... Chalo khelte h shayad isi bahane mujhe kisi ka dance dekhne ko mil jaye...

Nisha - ( giving deadly look to kabir ) mujhe nhi kelna h game... I m going...

Dolly - (nisha ko rokte hue ) nishu wo majak kar raha tha...

Nisha - dolly di pls mera mood nhi h..

(Nisha leaves)

Kabir - guys chill mai abhi manake k lata hu...

Kabir apne aur nisha k room m jata hai...

Kabir - nisha yar mai majak kar rha tha...

Nisha - ye tera majak hai kabir

Kabir - ha...

Nisha - ( angry look ) aur upar se ha bhi kah rha hai..

Kabir - (cute face banake ) mera matlab nhi...

Nisha - (kabir k face ko notice karti hai...fir apna face ghoma k smile karti h ) (fir fake anger dikhate hue) dekh kabir mujhe abhi tujhse bat nhi karni tu ja yaha se...

Kabir - (shocked) nisha...

Nisha - i said go...

Kabir - (lil angry) ok.. As u wish...

Kabir room se bahar ata hai...

Umesh - (tensed) kya hua kabir

Kabir - yar chote se majak ko itna serious le liya h...yhi hota hai ek bar i love u bol do fir to tumhari koi value hi nhi rah jati...

Umesh - (tensed) kabir m nishu se bat karta hu tu chal

Kabir - (angry) nhi yar umesh rahne de... Chod m ja rha hu suarav k room m sone mujhe nind aa rhi h.. (Kabir leaves )

Umesh - (confused)

Girls gang was secretly listening the convo between umesh n kabir

Jwala - (tensed) dolly di majak m ye kya ho gya ??

Dolly - whi to mai bhi soch rhi hu...(thinking)

Aman - khi ye majak mehnga na pad jaye...

Kirti - how blah ... Nishu kuch jayada hi bhav kha rhi h...

Dolly - ha yar .. Ek kam karte h hum sab direct usi se bat karte h...

Sari girls nisha k room m ati ... Nisha apka bag khol k sara samaan faila k bathi kuch khojne m lagi hoti hai...

Girls (ek dusre ko dekhti hai ) (sari girls dolly ko nishu se bat karne k liye ishara karti hai)

Dolly - (in slow voice) isne room ka kya haal kar diya hai...

Kirti - how blah ... Itna gussa kis bat ka

Aman - dolly di yaha k halat dekh k to lag rha hai mano yaha jang ladi gyi hai

Jawala - (apne nails ko bit karte hue) aman bhabhi dara kyu rhi hai...

Nisha- (khusar fusar k awaj sun kar... Piche dekhti h n sees all girls r standing there aur apas m hi kuch badbad kar rhi h) kya hua ??

Girls - (scared) k...k...kuch nhi...

Nisha -(angry) to yaha kyu aye ho ??

Jwala - wo nishu bro...hum sab kab...(jwala k nam lene se pahle hi nisha cuts in middle)

Nisha - (annoyed) dekho mujhe kabir k bare m koi bat nhi karni...

Kirti - how blah nishu... Ek bar to...(nisha interrupts in between )

Nisha - tum log yaha se ja rhe ho ya nhi...(angrily)

Jwala , kirti , aman leaves nisha's room

Dolly - (concerned) nishu ye kya tareeka hai ? Tujhe kya ho gya h yar ?? Tujhe pta hai k kabir aise majak karta rehta hai fir isme itna gussa hone ki kya bat hai...

Nisha - (silently dolly ko sunti hai...n then starts laughing )

Dolly - (confused) nishu kya hua ??

Nisha - (luaghs loudly)

Dolly - (angrily) nishu m tujhe itni important bat samjha rhi hu aur tu has rhi hai...

Nisha - (apni hasi ko control karte hue) relax dolly di... (Nisha dolly ko bed pe bithati h..uska hath pakad k ) di aplog bhi buddhu ban gye na...

Dolly - (confused) matlab ??

Nisha -matlab ye k mai kisi se bhi gussa nhi hu... Wo aaj kabir k trick usi pe try ki hai... Har waqt mera majak banata rahta hai to maine socha kyu na aaj use pareshan kiya jaye..

Dolly - (thode relax hote hue ) nishu tu bhi na... Pta h hum sab kitna darr gye the..??

Nisha - aree...di aaplog bhi na mai usse gussa rah hi nhi pati jayada der ... Abhi aya tha... Itna cute face bana k sorry kehta hai k gussa chu ho jata hai.. But maine khud ko control kiya aur thodi acting ki taki usko usi k style m parshan kar saku...bs..(laughs) aur dekho mooh fula k baith gya jake saurav k room m.

Dolly - tum dono pagal ho...(room ko dekhte hue) par agar tu gussa thi hi nhi to ye kamre m samaan ko aise kyu faila diya ??

Nisha - batati hu...wo mai kuch dhoodh rhi thi ... Aapne suna na kabir ne game k time hall m kya kha...??

Dolly - ha k wo tera dance dekhna chahta hai...(confused) to...??

Nisha - to ye dolly di ki mai use surprise dena chahti thi islie...

Dolly- (still confused) matlab ??

Nisha - matlab ye k mai uske liye kuch plan kar rhi hu...

Dolly - (naughty smile dete hue) to ye bat hai islie itna drama kiya ??

Nisha - (shyly) ha di... But plss aap ye kisiko mat batana...

Dolly - ok ok...nhi bataungi

Nisha - (baby face bana k) ek help bhi chahiye ??

Dolly -(smile karte hue) kya ??

Nisha - aap sabko leke sham ko khi ghoomne chali jao..

Dolly -(nisha ko tease karte hue) oho...to u want alone time with ur hubby...ahemm ahemm

Nisha - (blushes) di..plss...

Dolly - ok ok..anything for u..

Nisha - thank u di..

Hall m kabir k alava sab baith k nisha aur kabir k bare m discuss kar rhe hote hai...

Dolly hall m ake... Guys chalo hum sab khi ghoomne chalte hai...

Umesh - dolly yaha nishu aur kabir ek dusre se bat nhi kar rhe aur tujhe ghoomne k padi hai..

Dolly - ha ha janti hu... Guys hum sab jante hai dono ek dusre k bina jayada der nhi rah sakte to.. Thode der m khud b khud normal ho jayenge...

Aman - dolly di..par...

Dolly - aman bhabhi... Dono ko akela time milega to sab theek ho jayega...

Saurav - i think dolly sahi kah rhi hai..dono kuch time akele bitayenge to sab khud hi solve ho jayega...

Umesh- (worried) hope k aisa hi ho... Chalo tab chalte hai.. Waise bhi car bhi ban k aa gai hai..

Cousins n saurav leave for some temple (temple guest house se kaafi door hai)

[Guest house - guest house k front door se ander jane pe ek corridor hai jiske upar shade lagi gui hai...(jisko samjhne m dikkat ho rhi ho wo plss remember big boss house ka ghar ghar k bahar jo shade wala are tha jaha sab baith k gupshup karte the ) waha se ek door ghar k ander jake k liye ghar k ander hall , aur baki rooms... ghar k end m ek garden hai ]

(nisha aur saurav ka room adjacent hai...)

In Evening

Kabir - (hands stretch karte hue ) ye room m itna andhera kyu hai..??

(saurav k room k bahar ata hai...lights on karta hai but light on nhi hoti...)

Kabir - umesh ... Umesh ...(monologue) kha chale gye sab ??

Dolyy ka room kholta hai

Kabir - (monologue) ye light kyu nhi jal rhi ?? kha gye sab ?? NIsha... Nisha...

Nisha ko bulate bulate corridor m ata hai... Guest house k front door pe jake

Kabir -door pe ake... ek street light ko jalte dekh kar ( monologue) light to hai fir ghar m kyu nhi aa rhi...yaha bhi itna andhera hai...

Kabir wapas ghar mai jata hai...

Kabir - ( surprised ) pure hall m candles jal rhi hoti hai...n heart shape balloons floor pe pade rehte hai...Dim light aur halka sa music chal rha hota hai...

Intaha ho gai, intazaar ki
Aai na kuchh khabar, mere yaar ki
Ye hamen hai yaqeen, bevafa vo nahin
Phir vajah kya hui, intazaar ki, intaha ho...


Kabir - (monologue) (confused) ye kisne kiya ?? aur kiske liye ??

N music ka sound badhata hai...


Baat jo hai us men, baat vo
Yahaan kahin nahin kisi men
Vo hai meri, bas hai meri
Shor hai yahi gali gali men
Saath saath vo hai mere gham
Men mere dil ki har khushi men
Zindagi men vo nahin to kuchh
Nahin hai meri zindagi men
Bujh na jaaye ye shama, aitabaar ki
Intaha ho...


After few minutes...

Kabir - nisha k presence ko feel karta hai...aur turn kar k nisha aur apne room k door pe dekhta hai...

Zor k hawa chalti hai...


o, mere sajana
Lo main aa gai


Nisha - in saree... apne aur kabir k room k door pe dono hath door k side pe rakh k

Kabir - (shocked)

Nisha - dheere dheere kabir k paas ati hai (nisha kabir k neck pe apne hath encircle kar k )


Are, logon ne diye honge
Bade bade nazaraane
Laai hun main tere liye dil mera
Dil yahi maange dua ham kabhi ho na juda
Dil mera tera hai ye dil mera
Ye meri zindagi hai teri... (2)
Tu mera sapana, main tujhe pa gai
O, mere sajana, lo main aa gai
Laa laa...


Nisha - (dancing...{like kareena bebo m bebo})

Kabir - ( staring nisha with love )

Nisha - (kabir k hath ko apne hath m leke)(bht close dance)


Vo ghadi kho gai intazaar ki

Aa gai rrut hasin, rasm-e-yaar ki

Ye nasha, ye khushi, ab na kam hon kabhi
Umr bhar na dhale, raat pyaar ki


Kabir - (nisha ko waist se pakad k apne close lata hai)...(they both look eachother with love)

Tabhi zor se bijali kadakti hai...nisha darr k kabir ko hug kar leti hai...Kabir hug ko tight karta hai...both lost in eachother...

Bahar zor zor se barish start ho jati hai...


(background m )

Meri adhuri kahaani lo daastaan bann gayee
Ho tune chhuaa aaj aise main kya se kya bann gayee

Nisha hug break kar k waha se jane lagti hai hai...kabir nisha ka hath pakad k use rkta hai... nisha halka sa face ghooma k kabir ko dekhti hai(blushes) n smiles lightly aur hath chuda k garden m bhag jati hai...

Kabir(blushes)(smiles)... nisha k piche garden m ata hai...

Sehame hue sapne mere haule haule angdaiyaan le rahe
Thehare huye lamahe mere nayi nayi gehraiyaan le rahe

n sees nisha is dancing n enjoying rain
kabir nisha ka dance dekh k usme kho jata hai...

Zindagi ne pehani hai muskaan karne lagi hai
Itna karam kyun na jaane

kabir nisha k kareeb ake use piche se hug karta hai...nisha apni eyes close karti hai n (blushes..)

kabir uska hath pakad k uske sath normal dance karta hai...

nisha (blushes)..waha se jane k liye age badhti hai but kabir use apni taraf wapas kheech leta n her backs colloides in his chest...




Karvat lene lage hain armaan phir bhiHai aankh nam kyun naa jaane

o saiyyan


kabir nisha ko apni taraf ghoomata hai (now they are face eachother)


nisha hugs kabir...kabir bhi use hug karta hai...

After few minutes...

Kabir hug break karta hai aur nisha ko apni arms m utha k room mai le jata hai..

Kabir places nisha on bed...


Odhu teri kaaya solah singaar main saja loon
Sangam ki yeh raina iss mein tyohaar main mana loon

Kabir nisha k earings hatata hai...
uske ears ko kiss karta hai...
n kisses her neck...

Khushbu teri chu ke kasturi ho jaaun
Kitni phiki thi main sinduri ho jaaun
Soor se zara behaki hui meri duniya thi badi besuri
Soor mein tere dhalne lagi bani re piya main bani baansuri
Zindagi ne pehani hai muskaan karne lagi hai
Itna karam kyun na jaane
Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi
Hai aankh num kyun naa jaane o saiyyan
Mere aasmaan se jo hamesha gumshuda thay
Chaand taare tune gardishon ki lai badaldi laut aaye aaj saare
O saiyyan

Kabir bent over nisha n kisses nisha's forehead... her eyes ...Moves toward her lips...( Kabir looked in his eyes as if asking for her permission..Nisha blinked her eyes in assurance.)

Kabir needed no more assurance.. He locked her lips in a kiss.. a soft yet passionate kiss.. kiss which is full of love... Nisha too reciprocated the kiss..

Kabir broke the kiss...he came near her ears said I LOVE YOU kyu k bs TUM HI HO..Nisha just looked in his eyes(eyes full of tears).. all she could see was love..

kabir(eyes se assurance dete hue...says dnt cry i m here..always..)

NIsha wrapped her arms around Kabir's neck .and hugged him..

Kabir blow the candles n ofF the lights...

That night they finally bcame one...the most memorable n lovable night where two soul becum one.


What greater thing is there for two human souls
than to feel that they are joined together to strengthen
each other in all labor, to minister to each other in all sorrow,
to share with each other in all gladness,
to be one with each other in the
silent unspoken memories?


P.s - pic credit goes to _A-Hopeful-Ray_
thanks dear for beautiful edits...

hope u guys like it...😊
give ur views
happy reding
Edited by naina.majik - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
story ended😲 ithni jaldi
yeh kya bath hui...yaar write new one na plzzz pretty plzz


coming to d update
lovely update yaar
yeh Kabiraa bhi na
Nishu ka fake anger😉 seekh liya K pan apne hubby se LOL
girl gang convo was nice
NIshu's surprize 4 kabiraa and that song and sequence☺️
Nishu in saree uff..thnk u for eding d pic nishi...
awsum edit maggiee
and finally d become one☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

loved d update yaar

do write moree

waitng 4 ur nxt story😃
Edited by ammu4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nishi🤗

Commenting 4 last time in this SS🤔😆🤣 But I wnt cry as I knw U wl b back...😉🤣 Our SECRET😈🤣🤣🤣

Lovely Update...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

NiBir Nok-Jhoks...😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Nishu's Way of Manavofying Her Hubby☺️

Nishiii🤗 I love u more 4 the selection of the song "Intehaan ho gayi"😉 U knw Y??😳 Bcz Its SM's Fav Song☺️☺️☺️ & I was Blashing thruout the dance☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ Thank U yaaraa🤗

U included Rain dance also.. & The Pics were giving more Visual Effect to it☺️(Ji..Ja..Ji.. U rackedd with ur Editing skillss...👏👏👏)

After the dance...😳 Bas Yeh Haal tha Mera...😆 imagine my comment frm my Blashingg...🤣

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Superly U incorporate ur SS's Title in the story.. 👍🏼"TUM HI HO"☺️👏👏👏

It was a Nice & Beautiful journey Nishi 🤗& I love this SS more bcz Its written in my fav Language HINDI😳 I told U abt this B4 😃 I m saying it again bcz In my POV Hindi se behatar koi language nahi hai apne feelings express karne ke liye😳😆🤣 Jitna intensity hindi ke shabdom main hai nah voh kahi aur nahi hai...☺️🤣🤣🤣

DIL SE SHUKRIYA HUMEIN YEH SS DENE KE LIYE...!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗

Thanks 4 PM😳(I res ed b4 PM🤣)

Sorry 4 Superlate Comments😳

Thank U 4 Ur Patience In waiting 4 My Comments🤗🤣🤣🤣

Do Write More🤗 Be Back Soon😉 Q Ki DMM😳😆🤣

PS: Saru is waiting 4 ur Next PM SYS??😈🤣


Edited by SaruSenan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome👍🏼
NiBir😳
loved the edits Maggy❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼
NiBir😳
loved the edits Maggy❤️

thanks shibu
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing cute update
Sad it is the last
AhopefulRay - Terrific work with the pictures
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous update naina
Photo edits was awesome
Nisha kabir ki trick us per hi ajmati hai nice trick
Nisha kabir ko surprise karti hai❤️
Finally two souls become one
Naina miss this ss
Please start new ff or os

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