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Posted: 10 years ago
Nicely written. Sorry chote comment k liye majburi hai. Tujhe viraaj k headphone gift mein
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar awesome 👏
Rajbir was lovely 😃
This karan 😡
I hope niaha will b fine 😕
Kabir plzz come back 😭
Loved it yaar 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Viraj ka plan 😲 😃
Rajbir scene 😃 😃 kaash aise scenes TV me milte 😭
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Nisha 😭 😭
Again story padte padte mujhe tntn ho rahi thi like ab kya hoga ab kya hoga 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Annie...big hug for u 👏
Such an amazing writer u r ...
Loved each nd every part but will comment abt it in detail after exams, sorry
Abhi ke liye itte se kaam chala lo sissy 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

CHAPTER-9

Finally, the time has arrived when they reached Delhi . Kabir just wasted no more time...he and viraj just picked up their luggage as fast as they could and exited out of the airport. They took a taxi for jaipur...jaipur was just two-three hours away from delhi. All the way from delhi to jaipur, all kabir thought was about nisha and gangwal family...their memories were a little blurred in his mind. They weren't clear. As he reached india, his health started taking steps towards betterment .

Kabir kept his head near the car window...as the air flew through his face, he felt a little good...he felt as if that flowing air was trying to tell him something...he smiled as he heard the silent noise of the air.

Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake

Kitni chahat hai dil mein tu jaane na
Kaise dil ko samjhaaye dil maane na

Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake

On the other hand,

Nisha was trying hard to free her hands from the tight grip of those chains...whose noise were making nisha feel like a criminal. Even after trying a lot , she could not free herself...she was in rule of that monster. She just folded her legs towards herself and knelt her head on her legs. Lone tears escaped her eyes. She wished if kabir could be with her.

Meri tammanaao ka ehsaas tum
Main kahin bhi rahun mere aas-paas tum
Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane..
Ek pal bhi tumse door jaa na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake

Ajnabi silsila mere saath hai
Bheed mein tanhaai ka ehsaas hai
Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane, Khuda jaane..

Yaadon ko teri hum mitaa na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake.

as nisha and kabir remembered each other...their beautiful memories spread across their minds...their first meeting...their cute fights...their moments...a smile appeared on both their faces. Those memories were enough to get them their strength back.

Baaton ko teri hum bhula na sake
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake
Dil mein hai zinda har ghadi tu kahin
Hoke judaa hum na judaa ho sake


After a long journey , kabir finally reached jaipur for his nisha...he stood in front of the gangwal house and viraj beside him. He was so happy today..after a long distance ...he was here..!!

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Nisha felt that kabir was somewhere near her. A smile spread across her face. Just then someone opened the door banging it on the wall beside it. it was karan ...he walked towards her with an evil smile on his face. Nisha looked at him with disgust in her eyes . only if the chains were not there today...she would have killed him here itself.

Karan: aur madam...aa gaya hosh..??

Nisha replied nothing...she just kept staring him with anger. With rage in her eyes.

Nisha: aaj to tu gaya beta...ekk baar tu haath kholde mere...phir dekh main teri kya haalath karti hun...!!

Karan: haath kholne keliye thodi na baandhe hain..!! ab to main jo chahe wo kar sakta hunt ere saath...aur tu...kuch bhi nahi kar paayegi...cryy...shout...do anything you would like to..but no one will come to save you...kyunki ab tera kabir bhi mar chukka hain..!!

Nisha: k..kk..kabir...??? kk..kahan hain wo..?? kya kiya tune...??bol...!!

Karan: itni aasani se thodi na kuch bata dunga main...!!

Nisha: to jo bolegaa main wo karne keliye taiyyar hun..!!

Karan: sachchmein...??

Nisha: h..haan..she stumbled with her words.

Karan: phir peeche hatna mana hain...!! Warna main kya kar sata hun tu bhi nahi jaanti...actually main khud bhi nahi..!! and he showed her a photo in his phone...of kabir...which was secretly taken by kabir...when he was in the icu.

Ab to tu samajh gayi hogi na ki main kya kar sakta hun..??

Nisha gulped down her anger as fear took that place. She worried if kabir was okay or not..!! she hoped him to be all right.

Nisha: kya kiya tune mere kabir ko...?? Bata karan...!!

Karan: na...na...na..ye galti main nahi karunga...main apne zubaan ka ekk dum pakka insaan hun..ekk baar kisi se paise leliye to baadmein main uska naam bhi nahi bol sakta..!!

Nisha: kya matlab hain tera..?? kaun...kyun..??

Karan: nishaa...kabhi kabhi...mujhe na tujhpe bht taras aata hain...ke tere hi ghar waale tere saath aisa karenge..meri marzi chalti to main kabhi tere saath kuch nahi karta...par kya karu...paisa aur pyaar...dono hi meri kamzori hain..main tujhse na tabhi se pyaar karne lagaa tha jabse maine tujhe pehli baar dekha tha..!!

Nisha: kabir teraa dost tha..main uski wife...hum bht pyaar karte the ekk doosre se..!!aur tune aisa kiya..how could you karan..?? she cried

Karan: koyi dost nahii tha wo meraa... Usko to maine dost banaya hi tere paas aane keliye tha.. main bachpan se hi use nafrat karta tha.

Nisha: bachpan se..?? lekin tu to use dance school mein mila tha na..??

Karan: ye dushmani abhi ki nahi hain...he smiled evilly . main to use tabse nafrat karta hun jabse usne meri life mein sab kuch bigaadna shuru kar diya...main..bechaara..ekk seedha saadha shareef sa ladka , rohan, uss kameene ke saath ek hi school mein padhta tha...wo kehta to mujhe apna best friend tha...par usne jo mere saath kiya..school mein hi ekk ladki thi...main use bht pyaar karne laga tha...maine use bht propose bhi kiya ..par wo nahi maani...ekk din main jab use apni baat manwaane ki koshish kar raha tha...tab pata nahi kabir kahan se aaya...aur mujhe maarne laga...keh raha tha ki main us ladki ke saath bht bura kar raha hun...maine kya kiya tha..sirf use kiss hi to kari thi...mana ki maine zabardasti kari thi ...lekin...usska jawab aise maarna to nahi tha na..!!

Usne mujhe pure school ke saamne humiliate kiya ...main kahi pe bhi jaata ..logg mujhe tease karte the...yaha tak ki mere mummy papa ne bhi mujhe kabhi pyaar nahi kiya..wo kabhi mere saath nahi the...wo humesha uss kameena ko merese compare kiya karte the...ye dekho kabir school mein first aaya...sports mein topper...ye dekho dancer kabir...ye wo..kabir kabir kabir...uska naam su sun kar pareshaan ho gaya tha main...mann karta tha ki main use maardu...usne meri life puri tarah se bigaad di thi...koyi bhi mujhse baat nahi karta tha...har ladki uss kabir se chipakti thi.. lekin mere paas koyi nahi aata tha..yahan tak ki koyi mujhe hi tak nahi bolta tha...mere khud ke parents bhi usi ke side the...maine phir socha ki sirf use maarne se kaam nahi chalega...main use tadpana chahta tha...har cheez keliye...yahan tak ki uss sheikh ke bte ko bhi maine hi peeta tha...aur naam laga kabir ka...uski girlfriend riya...jisse wo bht hi close tha...maine unn dono ka break up karwa diya aur use apna girlfriend bana liya...bechaara uske birthday pe maine hi uske liye gunde bheje the usko maarne keliye...wahan bhi bach gaya..main paanch saalo tak use nahi mila...main chupke waar kiya karta tha uspar...

Nisha was looking at him with disgust..anger...rage..!! she never knew that there could be a dirty person like him in this world.

Karan:(continued) : p..phirr pata nahi ekk din wo kahan gaayab ho gaya...main pagal ho gaya tha...maine thaan lit hi ki main use iss life to main kabhi happy nahi rehne dunga...maine use dhoonda...bht dhoonda...phir mujhe wo yahan par milaa...india mein...tere saath...ek dance conference mein...bht bada dancer ban gaya tha na wo...jealousy hone lagi thi mujhe phirse...jab maine use conference mein dekha tere saath main pagal ho gaya tha...tu itni beautiful lag rahi thi...main tabhi se tujhse pyaar karne laga tha...mere andar tujhe pane ki chaahat aa gayi thi...either by tit or tat...I wanted you..!! main usi din kabir se phir milaa...lekin mera luck to dekhoo..usne mujhe pehchaana hi nahi...to maine isi cheez ka faayda uthaya aur apne aap ko as karan introduce kiya...maine phir teri aur uski story ka paya lagaya...mujhe pata chalaa...ki tum dono to ekk doosre se ekk dum paaglo ki tarah pyaar karte ho...to mujhe isse better mauka mil hi nhi sakta tha...ekk teer aur do nishaane...kabir bhi khatam...aur tu meri ho jaati...maine kabhi nhi socha tha ki ye sab itni aasani se ho jaayega...main to soch hi raha tha ki main kya karun...jab mujhe vasu aunty aur unke tumhaare family ke saath dushmani ka pata chala...wo khud tum dono ko alag karne ke plans banaa rahi thi...to maine bhi unka saath dediya... thode paise liye...aur unke apne plan mein trap bhi kar liya...bechaari soch rahi thi kit um dono ko alag karegii..par unhe kya pata tha...ki wo apne liya hi gadhdha khod rahi hain..!! bass uskee baad hi tum log manali gayee...wahan maine kabir aur tera accident karaaa...bas uske baad wo kabir ko apne sath London le gayii aur use kushal bana diya..!!

Aur isi time mein maine tere gharwaalo ka dil jeet liya...!!

Nisha was in tears now...the hatred for vasu was more than her love for kabir right now...although she was happy that kabir was alive..but she was sad that how could a person be dawned upon in his revenge that he would forget other things..

Karan : maine socha tha...ki main bhul jaaunga uss kabir ko..lekin maine jab use tere saath dekhaa too...mujhee bht gussa aaya ..ki wo khush kaise reh sakta hain...!!

Nisha: tere se ghatiya insaan maine aaj tak nahi dekha karan...kabir ne tere baare mein humeshaa achcha hi socha tha..par tune ...chii...tujhe kabir kaa dost bolne mein bhi mujhe bht ghatiya lag raha hain..!!tu uske dosti ke kabhi laayak tha hi nahi..!!

Karan: wo meri dosti ke kabhi laayak nahi tha...ab main usko aur jeene nahi dunga...maine apne aadmi bhej diye hain udhar...ab to wo marke hi rahegaa...aur kal subah tak main tujhe bhi maar dunga..!!abhi to main jaa raha hun...lekin main aaunga...thodi der mein waapas...aur tab tak tu ye khaale..!!

He threw a sandwich towards her...he opened nisha's chains... And he left the room...leaving nisha in tears...

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Kabir walked towards the entrance door...he rang the bell...with a faint yet bright smile on his face...no one opened the door...he rang the bell for the second time...he heard someone's footsteps coming towards the door...the door opened with a thuddd...kabir didn't knew what the person's reaction would be seeing him... the person who opened the door was umesh...followed by suketu...they both had tears in their eyes...actually their state was a little confusing for kabir...he feared if something has happened to nisha..kabir gave a faint smile towards them...both of them were shocked to see him after so many years...they just hugged him tight...and he hugged them back.

Sukku: kabirr...tu aagaya...??t...tu...theek to hain na...he stumbled with his words.

Umesh: pata hain humne tujhe kitna dhoonda...nisha to jaise paagal hogayi thi...!!

Bunty who just came to see who it was on the door...as umesh and sukku were taking a lot of time to return...was shocked to see the scenario there...he started shouting...maa..maa...papa...dadaji...dadi...!!

All the people who were discussing something in the living room...got frightened when bunty started shouting like that...they thought that nisha was back...all came running towards the door...the scenario there shocked them too...finally he was back..they feared that what would they answer him if he asks something about nisha...why he has been not here since these many years was clearly visible...he looked weak...and the cut marks on his head..was enough for them to understand the reason...lakshmi and ramesh saw their son after so many years...every day felt like jail for them...although they got a little selfish when it came to nisha's future ...r-l hugged him tight...!!lakshmi started crying..!!kabir came back to his k pana.

Kabir: aree lakshmi...relax me...!! Aapko rulaane thodi na aaya hun yahan...ab to main yahin rahunga...aur tab tak nahi jaaunga jab tak aap logon ke faces pe wahi waapas bright waali smile nahi aajati..!!

Ramesh: bhagwaan ka laakh laakh shukar hain ki tu theek hain...!!

Kabir took everyone's blessings..everyone had happy tears in their eyes. Dadaji called kabir towards him.

Dadaji: kabir mujhe maaf kardo...maine socha kit um kahin chale gaye ho...aur waapas nahi aaoge kabhi..!! mujhe laga kit um ne dhoka diya hain...aur isi ki saza maine ...he stumbled as he felt guilty.

Kabir: daddu aap apne aap ko iskeliye blame mat kijiye...mujhe bhi nahi pata ki main London kaise phncha...mujhe bas itna yaad hain ki mera accident hua tha...aur uske baad meri memory loss...mera kushal ban jana...mujhe kuch nahi pata...aur jinko pata hain wo mujhe bata hi nahi rahe..!! main kabhi aap logon ko dhoka nahi de sakta...aap logon ki wajah se hi to mujhe meri life mili hain...meri nisha...aur dadaji aap kis saza ki baat kar rahe hain..??aur ye aapko aur viren tauji chot kaise lagi..??? dadaji kuch hua hain kya..??? bataiyee na..!! nisha kahan hain..???

They all stood silent...while bunty and jwala came towards him...and hugged him.

Bunty: kabir jiju...!! He cried.

Kabir knelt down before him and jwala stood beside him...with her hand on his shoulder...he wiped bunty's tears..

Kabir: bunty...kya hua bachcha...?? Tu ro kyun raha hain..??

Kabir's eyes became moist as he saw bunty crying. He feared of something bad.

Kabir: bolnaa...bunty...kuch hua hain kya..??

Bunty just hugged him tight while he cried...all the members present there were sad...their eyes became moist.

Kabir: tu rotaa hi rahegaa to mujhe kaise pata chalega ki kya hua hain...??? Tu bolega to hi pata chalega na beta..!!

Bunty: kabir...ji..ju...he stammered while cying.

Kabir told jwala to bring a glass of water...he made bunty drink some water. After that he was able to speak a little.

Bunty: jiju...nishu di ko bachaaloo..!!

Kabir was shocked at this statement of bunty...tears fell from his eyes...he feared if something have happened to nisha.kabir looked down as tears flew from his eyes. The cousins came towards him and took him in a group hug..

They explained him the whole situation...about karan...about vasundhara...everything. While viraj stood beside kabir consoling him.

Kabir: meri khud ki maa aur mera dost...dono ne milkar aisa kiya...mere aur nisha ke saath...main unhe kabhi nahi maaf karunga...maa ne pehle bhi aisa hji kiya tha aura b bhi..!! unko ye sab karke milta kya hain...?? Aur uss karan ko to main chodunga nahi...usne mere peeche nisha ke saath...chee...use mera dost bolte hue bhi sharam aati hain..!!

And he cried.

Umesh: kabir dekh...tu royega to nishu ko kaun waapas laayega...aur nibir ko kya ...aisi roti hui shakal dikhaayega...???

Kabir: nibir...??? He was confused ( hue naa readers bhi kaan phoose..?? even I am🤣) even viraj was confused as he didn't knew this from before. his anger for vasu...raised to another stage.

Dolly went towards her room...and brought a baby in her hand...the baby was around two years old.

Sukku: ye dekho pata chala...kaun hain nibir...??

A smile appeared on kabir's face...dolly placed the baby on the floor ...and the baby slowly took steps towards kabir...as he was about to fall...kabir catched him. And nibir fell in kabir's arms.

Nibir shouted ...papaaa"

Kabir was somewhere else now...in his dreamworld..he was on the 9th cloud..!!

He took nibir in his arms and placed him in his lap...!!

Kabir: y...yee mera baby hain...???

Sukku was hell irritated at his question now..!!

Sukku: nahi padosii ka hain...khelne keliye achcha lag raha tha to isiliye rent pe laaye hain..!!sarcastically

Kabir: kya..?? bol rah hain tu sirf suketu..??

Sukku: abee oo...tere ko papa bola to tera hi hoga na..??

Nibir: silf...sukeeyuu...

Everyone laughed...as nibir has already started copying his father.

Kabir: ye mujhe jaanta hain..kaise..??

Aman: nisha..roz isee tera photo dikhaay karti thi aur bht saari baatein karti thi.

Kabir felt sad as he wasn't here at the most crucial time in their life.

.Sukku: ye jo tera bachcha hain n...tere se bhi bada k hain..!!said sukku diverting the topic.

Nibir: me kayy...me kayy...!!

Kabir: haan beta tu k..!!

Sukku: tere papa se bhi bada k..!!

Kabir was really very happy that he was going to meet nisha...but he never expected this little cute world to be a surprise for him.

Kabir just hugged his baby tight...and placed kisses on his face...he started playing with him...whime the baby was talking in his own weird yet cute language. He started hitting kabir on his face with his little hands... kabir smiled and touched his face...as he was a complete mix of them...nisha and kabir...nibir..kabir whispered in the baby's ears.

Nibir: ibilll...( nibir)( he said pointing towards himself)

Kabir: haan ibilll. And he laughed.

Nibir: ku..loleee oo..??

Kabir: aapne maala na mujhe isliye..!!

Nibir: sholiii paa..!!

Kabir: aap ku sholii bol le hoo..?? paa sholliii..!!!

All the family was watching kabir and nibir in awe as kabir already had learnt the language,...no one in the house could understand him so clearly.

Nibir's face reminded kabir of nisha constantly..

Kabir: aap na yahin rukoo...paa..u gayee aur mummu ko leke yu aaye..!!

Nibir: ibill..bhi jaayega..!!

Kabir: no babuu...wahaan pe bade bade bhoot hain...unko maarna hain na..aap to bht chote ho naa...aap kaise maaroge..!!

Nibir: bhooo...ibill nai daltaa..!!

Kabir: mujhe pata hain...aap kisi se nahi daltee..par aap yahan rukoo..!!

Nibir: naii...ibill bhi aayega..!! and he started crying.

Kabir: achcha achcha lotee nai...aap chaloo..!!

The elders tried stopping him...but kabir...made them sure that they will be fine. He looked towards the cousins to come with them. They nodded in a yes. Nibir too nodded his head and all of them smiled.

Viraj: lekin hume ye kaise pata chalegaa...ki wo kahan hain..??

Viraj then too took nibir in his arms and started playing with him.

Kabir: bhai aap bade cute lag rahe ho..!! aapko kisi special se milna tha na..?? aap jaayenge nahi..??

Viraj: kabir...lekin hum aapko akelaa yu chodke kaise jaa sakte hain..?? humara kaam baadme bhi hota rahega..!!!

Kabir: nahi bhai aap jao..warna kaira chali jaayegi..!!

Viraj: aapko kaise pata chala ki wo kaira hain..??

Kabir: bhaii..

Viraj: aap to bachpan se hi talented hain..

Nibir: ibill bhi talent..!!

Viraj: haan ji aap bhi talented.

They all laughed.

Viraj: lekin kabir aap unka pata kaise lagaayenge...aur hum aap ke saath hi challenge...hum boldenge kaira ko ki hum abhi nahi aarahe..!

Kabir: jaisi aapki wish bhai..!! aur uss kameene ka pata hume Natasha se chalegaa...!!sukku tere paas Natasha ka number hain na..???

Sukku: lekin Natasha ka inn sab se kya lena dena..wo kuch nahi jaanti..!!

Umesh: abee o...wo teri gf ki baat nahi kar raha...wo dance academy waali Natasha ki baat kar raha hain gadhe...!!

Sukku: haann...haan..hain..!!

Kabir: to abhi usko call karo...aur baato baato mein karan ka address nikalwao abhi..!!

Kirti: lekin kabir usko kaise pata hoga..??

Kabir: aree...har cheez mein wo humeshaa mastermind hote hain...aur aisa bilkul nahi ho sakta ki unn dono ko ekk doosre ka location nahi pata ho...aur humaare liye faayde ki baat ye hain ki wo Natasha bewkoof hain...wo uss karan ko bhi kuch nahi baatayegi..!!

Nibir: beewwwooof..!!

Kabir: haan beta..bewkoof...!! aaur abhi wahi dono fasenge..!!

Sukku immediately called Natasha and somehow with his flirtatious techniques he managed to get karan's location.

Kabir: (monologue): ab to tu gaya karan...tune aaj tak jo jo kiya hain na...uska badla main aaj tujhse lekar hi rahunga..!!

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I know...you are shaackedd...no comments...!! Do like and comment..!! one more part and an epilogue left..!!🤣

Edited by sam_premc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
NiBir😲
Haila 8chps main kahin mention hi nahi kiya aur seedha dikha diya 😲😲😲
I love NiBir
Karan abh toh tu gaya 😈
I love NiBir and Kabir talk my eyes were mosit and I had a smile on my face reading that scene
Continue soon and I want both NiBir safe 😆
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
comments please...warna i won't continue it..!!😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update...
annie 👏maza aa gaya
Nibir ..u made me shaaccked...
Padosi se laaye hai..🤣
Baap bete dono hi..k..gazab..
Karan...tuh toh gayo...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

NiBir😲

Haila 8chps main kahin mention hi nahi kiya aur seedha dikha diya 😲😲😲
I love NiBir
Karan abh toh tu gaya 😈
I love NiBir and Kabir talk my eyes were mosit and I had a smile on my face reading that scene
Continue soon and I want both NiBir safe 😆


mere mind ka koyi thikana nahi hain mummu...main kabhi bhi aur kahin bhi kuch bhi likh sakti hun...i am bheryyy talented na..!!🤣🤣

thank you mummu for the comment..!!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sarthak0302

Superb update...

annie 👏maza aa gaya
Nibir ..u made me shaaccked...
Padosi se laaye hai..🤣
Baap bete dono hi..k..gazab..
Karan...tuh toh gayo...


hehe..thank you sarthak..!!😃

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