NiBir FF- One Month to Fall in Love *COMPLETED* - Page 91

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: do0dleR

Shiiibuuu!!!!🤗🤗

Kya awesome likhti tu yaar...👍🏼 Mast proposal tha ekdum...😆...I read 29, 30 and epilogue all together...
And the epilogue was so cute... 😳
I know I never commented on time...😆...but I enjoyed the entire story...Keep writing more...😊

PS: One more popping in...😆😆


thanks Lily😃
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Posted: 9 years ago


Nisha caressed her 5 month baby bump as she watched Kabir perform. This was the fifth time she was watching the video, but she just couldn't stop herself from admiring her husband. She was busy with her choco-chip ice cream, when her mobile rang.

She smiled as she read the caller id. It was Jwala.

Jwala-(scared) Hello, Nishu bro... aap please mera ek kaam karoge? Jaldise Saurav ke naye ghar jaao... Kabir jiju ne bahut badi gadbad ki...

Nisha- (shocked) Kya kiya uss gadhe ne?

But the call was cut, so she went outside and ordered the driver. Saurav had bought a new house for Dolly, as their third wedding anniversary gift. The car stopped infront of a huge mansion. Nisha got down from the car in a hurry, but stopped when she read the name plate, "NiBir Mansion"

She was confused. Saurav ke ghar pe NiBir ka name tag? She turned when she heard Kabir's voice, "Don't be confused Nishu, this is our house... Humne tumse jhoot bola tha ki Saurav ne ghar kharida hai, actually yeh ghar maine humare liye kharida hai..."

Nisha was surprised and all she could was hug him. As they entered the house, their journey of last five years flashed infront of her eyes. Kabir going to Australia, her participating in archery competitions, Kabir returning and starting his academy, "NiBir Dance Academy", Dadaji-dadi agreeing for their relation and their marriage a year ago.

She felt a hand on her shoulder, so looked towards her right. It was her mom.

Nisha- (surprised) Maa? Aap kab aaye?

Laxmi- Tujhe toh meri yaad nahi, Kabir ne bulaya, sab aaye hai...

She was surprised as Ramesh, Dadaaji and Dadi came to meet her.

Jwala- Nishu bro ko bethne toh do..

Bunty- Oye bina degree ki doctor, chup kar... Maa aur Papa itne dino baad aaye hai aur tum apne nakhre dikha rhai ho...

Jwala- Don't forget, aur 2 mahino baad main doctor banane waali hoon...

Ramesh- Chup karo tum dono...Nishu, tu kamre mein jaa ke aaraam...

Nisha- Nahi, mujhe aap sabke saath time spend karna hai...

"Aur humare saath nahi naa?" She smiled as she heard Harsh's voice.

Nisha-American Bandar, tum America se kab aaye? Aur Kirti kahan hai?

She smiled as Kirti came with her 2 year old son, Krish. She took him from Kirti and sat on the sofa. Kabir and Jwala came with plates of snacks. They were enjoying their time.

Jwala and Bunty were staying with Nisha and Kabir since last year. Jwala was in final year in a medical college, while Bunty had just answered his 12th exams. Umesh and Aman owned a franchise of restaurants in Mumbai and were in Switzerland at present with their adorable son Uman.

Dolly and Saurav had married three years ago and were proud owners of a production house and proud parents of twins Diya and Shaurya.

Sukku was now a Bollywood star and was dating a Bollywood Actress Alisha. Harsh and Kirti had settled in America with Krish. Harsh was now Nisha's best friend, much to Kabir's annoyance. Vrinda was in Australia, and a famous choreographer there. She was dating her colleague, Aarush.

Nisha was a famous sports personality and Kabir owned Dance Academies in Mumbai and Australia. They had decided that if Nisha gives birth to a baby girl, they would name her Mishri, and their son would be named Nibir. Both the names signified their relation, sweet and passionate.

All were settled in life.

Nisha went in the kitchen to drink water, but her eyes sparkled when she saw the chocolate cake on the counter. Making sure that no one is around, she picked one slice, but winced when Kabir slapped her hand lightly.

Kabir- Kitna chocolate khayegi tu?

Nisha-(innocently) yeh cake yahaan pe akela pada tha, bichaara, isiliye socha taste karu...

Kabir- (explaining) Nishu, you are eating a lot of chocolates and that's really not good for you..

Nisha- par your baby loves chocolates... what am I supposed to do?

Kabir- (a bit sternly) Control your cravings...

Nisha's eyes welled up with tears. Kabir closed his eyes and cursed himself. How could he forget Nisha's mood swings?

Nisha-(crying) Tum bahut bure ho... I hate you... Humesha mujhe bewajah daant dete ho.. main baby se bolungi ki tumse baat na kare...

Kabir tried to stop her, but failed. She continued with her blabbering, until Kabir said, "shut up or else I'll kiss you..."

Nisha looked at him in surprise and then closed her eyes as he leaned in. He gave her a peck on her lips.

Nisha- Kabir, I promise ki apni chocolate craving control karungi (Kabir smiled) but kya main cake ka ek slice kha sakti hoon? (Kabir face palmed and Nisha giggled)

She picked a slice and took a bite and then fed Kabir. They shared the slice of cake. It was just like their relation, sweet and perfect.

Kuch kahaaniyan khatam hoti hai... toh kuch kabhi nahi...

Kuch kahaaniyan chehre pe muskaan laati hai, toh kuch padhkar paani aata hai aankhon mein ...

Par har kahani ki ek nayi shuruwaat hoti hai...Shayad panno par dil ke ...ya rishton ke gherayion mein...


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Posted: 9 years ago
First Comment 😉
Wow Shibu... What a surprise!! Jab se exams khatam hue hai itne surprise mile ki kya batau... This was just one of the amzing ones 😳
Pregnant Nisha 😳 😳 😳
NiBir Mansion
Wow... Everyone's endings are so happy... Diya, Shaurya, Krish, Uman and Nibir/MishRi ... Yeh bhi acche dost ban jaenge 😆 Sabka future bhi kitna bright hai... Thanks a lot for this amazing epilogue 2... Aur bhi likh dena please 😊
Edited by Black_Maniac - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
shibu pothi kithna sweet tha update just loved it to the coreand haa amazing update tha
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG wat a lovely surprise shibu
MishRi nd nibir names of baby 😳 😳 awww
Loved nibir scene
actually loved d whole concept but kya karu m biased towards nibir 😳 😉
Loved it loved it loved it 😳 😳 😳
aise hi surprise dete rehna
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Posted: 9 years ago
I just loved the surprise
one of my fav story
Thnku sooo much fr this epilogue... it was really very cute
All the characters well settled
Thanks fr d pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
Res for both epilouge & surprise update. 15th ko exam khatam hoga to then I'll comment after reading the updates.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bhanju Dat was A SWEET SURPRISE😃😃😃😃😃

See Saru is Like this now☺️☺️☺️

Amazingly Written👏👏👏👏👏

MishRi ho ya NiBir ho Humein toh sirf yeh patha hai ki NiBir=MishRi☺️😈

Loved every bit of it.. ☺️

Last Part par voh KISS☺️ Cravingsss☺️ Mood swings🤣

PERFECT ENDING👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Thank U 4 Taking time frm ur busy schedule to pen down this🤗 I luv U yaaraa😳

It was PLEASURE to be a part of this ONE MONTH nIbir Journey🤗

Do write Moreee🤗 Be Back Soon With NEW PLOTS🤗 Q ki DMM☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hayyeee Shibu 😳
Kya surprise diya hai 😳
Lagta tujhe mere res ki aadat ho chuki hai iss liye har baar kuch alag karti hai mera res dekhne ke liye 🤣
Chalo won't disappoint u 😆
Res 😆
Ab khush? 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
res...
unres

OMG😲
kya surprise tha shibhaanzz😉 epilogue 2😊 jab maine tera surprise dekha to i feel like i was in dreamland❤️...
baby boy hua to Nibir aur baby girl hui to mishri❤️awweee
nibir mension😊
uman😊
kirti american wala bandar n krish😉

nisha's mood swings wala part was so cute😳❤️ awwee loved it to d core😊

air. aise hi surprise dete rehna dear😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 9 years ago

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