NIBIR FF: Anybody Can Dance (epilogue updated on page no 127) - Page 53

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu4u

wah sonu u updated🤗

KK in his real avtar lol 🤣
he said sorry to NIshu😲
lekdhik wat a pair yaar...😳 n Lkehu kya muh dikahvungi mere gharwalo ko...🤣
n my dishu ❤️😆
London main ILU n bacho ko london ghumadunga Lol 🤣 sofy kaun hai🤣 mera future ka kya hoga😆😆😆
KK j of Raj Nisha😉
kadoos ne kya plan banaya Nisha n Raj ko bahar jaane se rokne keliye...hum sab ka plan bhi popat kar diya...
superb part sonu
waitng 4 the nxt

thanks ammu😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

superb yaar... partyyy

thanks mansi😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Loved the update... awesome yaar... kk is jealous ...loving it sooo much ... i m very excited for the next update...plz continue soon ...
And thanks for the pm ... 😊

thanks dear😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ItsMeAarushi

Wow sonu what an update...!!👏

I'm loving this j kabiraa a lot..😳
Nishu aur Raj ke plans ko flop kar diya...😈

Lekhu the 1960 model abb kya mooh dikayegi...🤣

Ammu...! Wah...! London mein ghumegi..! dishank ke saath..😉🤣

Waiting for the next part eagerly.. Update soon sonu..
Once again awesome update...!🤗

thanks aaru😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SaruSenan

Hey Sonu ( Hope I can Cal u sonu) Me Saru😉🤗
I m Newbie didnt comment on ur story till nw... Aaj comment kar rahi hu😆
(Ab sirf 8 Posts😭😆)

Par mein Hamesha follow karthi hu saare NiBir Stories n posts
Ur previous work "Aasmanom pe hai Likha" was suprb👏

This Story also is amazing 👏 (Wat If We Get MishRi Pair in such a similar story onscreen)
Abt 10 parts of the stroy I like all the parts.. Plus U r the writer who wud like to introduce ur forums friends too in ur story dats really nice dr..👏

I really liked the lst two parts more bcz we r used to see J Nisha but here We r watching J Kabir😆🤣 dat too in full form😆🤣 n BTW Raj ka kya connection hai??😉
Hmm Mujhe NiBir chahiye bass🤣🤣🤣

waise jab tumne bola tha ki tum discontinue kar rahi ho toh bura laga bt thank u dr 4 continuing the story n pls dnt ever think of discontinuing it.. We all love NiBir stories🤗
N Do Write More q ki DMM (Dil Maange More)☺️

Aaj se Like karunga sab parts ko comments aise late aayenge jab restriction hat jayega den wl surely comment tab tak Like se kaam chala lo😆😉🤣

thanks for liking my ff saru n yeah u can call me sonu😃
N i can understand these stupid restrictions😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

ANYBODY CAN DANCE

Part 11

(stunners were busy in decorating the hall...nisha n niya were helping them...nisha was standing on the stool but suddenly she slipped n raj caught her)

Nisha(she closed her eyes)-bappa meri kitni haddiyaan tooti hain...plzz bta do

Raj-ek bhi nhi...nishu open ur eyes

Nisha-haan

Raj-yeah...tum giri hi nhi ho

(nisha opened her eyes and she hugged raj but she forgot that she is still in his arms...KK saw them)

KK-iss raj ki prob kya hai...wait n watch raj ab tum dekho

Nisha-raj chodo toh

Raj-oh sorry

(KK entered)

KK-nisha tumhe mere ghar jana hoga

Nisha-kyun sir

Niya-haan KK wo hamare saath preparation kara rhi hai na

KK-niya its really important...kuch files hain wo chahiye mujhe...nisha jakar lekar aao

Niya-par wo toh mihu bhi la sakti hai...i mean she is also coming na

KK(now he is cursing niya)-yeah but abhi chahiye mihu toh sham ko ayegi

Niya-ohh...then u have to go nishu

Nisha-yeah m going

Raj-nishu wo

KK-n raj tum lia ki food arrange karne mein help karo

Raj-okk sir

KK-nisha go

Nisha-ji sir

KK-nisha...nsha...nisha...u know what i m a devil...i still don't know ki main yeh kar bhi kyun rha hoon...sorry for troubling you sweetheart...hey wait sweetheart...no ways

(at kumar mansion,nisha entered)

Kaka-bataya tha sir ne aap ane wali hain...sir ka room upar hai almirah ki 2nd shelf mein hongi files main de doon

Nisha-nhi main le loongi

Kaka-main coffee bhijwata hoon

(and she left from there,after some time mihu entered))

Mihu-kaka yeh bhai ke room mein kon hai

Kaka-mihu baby koi nisha mam hain

Mihu-ohh bhai ki PA...bhai told me...i'll go n chk unhen kuch mila bhi hai ya nhi

(at kk's room)

Nisha-yeh devil khadoos kamina tha...hai...aur rahega...iski problem kya hai sab wahann party ki preparations kar rahein hain aur main koi stupid si dance choreography ki file dhoondh rhi hoon...n dance choreography ki koi files kyun banayega...matlab chain nhi hai na issey

(she was searching for the file...n the drawer falls because nisha pulled it)

Nisha-haye sara samaan gir gya...chodega nhi ye khadoos mujhe(suddenly something touched her finger)

Nisha-aahh...what the hell needle thi kya(she searched for that thing n she found an earring)earring...yeh maine kahin dekha hai...kahaan

(mihu entered)

Mihu-omg...yeh kya hua

Nisha-yeh kiska hai

Mihu-yeh earring...kuch nhi...chod dijiye usey

(mihu gave her the files)

Nisha-plzz bataiye na...oh m sorry m nisha

Mihu-i know bhai ki PA ho

Nisha-ohhh...to woh khadoos...i mean sir he is ur brother

Mihu-hmm...m mihika kumar...n mere bhiya hamesha se khadoos nhi the...wo bas ho gye

Nisha-mera wo matlab nhi tha...yaar wo mujh par bina wajah chillate hain matlab aisa koi karta hai kya

Mihu-pta hai bat shayad koi wajah hai iski bhi

Nisha-achha mujhe lga wo aise hi hain but agar kuch hai toh tum mujhe bol sakti ho...main kisi ko nhi bolungi promise...i mean if u want to share

Mihu-i know nisha bhai tumhe bohot tang karte hain aaru told me usey niya bhabhi ne bataya par pta hai nisha bhai apne dard ko apne gusse se chupate hain woh na kisi se bohot pyar karte the

Nisha-pyar...n KK sir...i don't believe that i mean he is so heartless

Mihu-thats not true wo aaj bhi usi se pyar karte hain...10 saal baad bhi

Nisha-10 saal

Mihu-hmm...actually we r from jaipur...n wahaan bhai ke teacher the ramesh sir

Nisha-ramesh sir(she felt something weird)

Mihu-hmm...bhai used to learn dance from ramesh sir...n he has a daughter...geet

(nisha's heart beats r becoming fast)

Mihu-n wo bhi bhai ko like karti thi wo bhai ko kabira bulati thi...but bhai ko life mein kuch karna tha so he came here to fulfil his dreams but he promised geet ki wow wapas ayenge par jab woh gye ramesh sir aur unki family nhi thi...wo log kahin aur shift ho gye the

Nisha-Kab i mean KK sir went there

Mihu-hmmm...aur wo aaj bhi regret karte hain ki unhone geet aur ramesh sir ko kho diya

(nisha recnised that earring)

Mihu-wo mean n arrogant nhi hai bas pareshaan hai...woh ramesh sir ko bohot miss karte hain n geet ko bhi...mujhe toh darr hai ki agar geet kabhi wapas nhi ayi to kahin bhai akele hi na reh jaayein

Nishu-aisa nhi hoga

Nihu-excuse me...ohh no...m so sorry...i don't know why i shared this with u aaj tak aaru n niya bhabhi ko bhi nhi bataya maine...but plzzz don't tell bhai plzzz

Nisha-no i wont tell him...i have to go...bye

Mihu-bye...m sorry

Nisha-its okk

(nisha went from there)

(at car)

Nisha(monologue)-he is my kabira...he is the famous cheoreographer kk(she was crying because she was happy)but still wo mujhse aur sirf mujhse pyaar karta hai...sirf mujhse...n that was my earring main bhul kaise gyi...wo itne dino se mere saamne tha...mere saath aur main paaglon ki tarah use ladti rhi but not anymore ab main jaungi aur kahungi ki...ki main...kya kahungi main ki main geet hoon...wo bohot khush ho jayenge but jab wo papa ke bare mein poochenge tab kya...tab kya kahungi main ki papa nhi hain...no i cant tell him...not now wo toot jayenge wo aaj tak papa ko nhi bhule hain...phir stunners unka dreams world dance championship everything will be destroyed no i cant be so selfish...mujhe kuch time ke liye rukna hoga...bappa i promise WDC ke finale ke baad i'll definietly tell him but not now...n i know yeh championship to stunners hi jeetenge mera kabira jo unke saath hai...i love u mr khadoos kamina

(n she smiled)

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Posted: 10 years ago
Chalo atleast kisi ko toh sachi pata chali... Hope kabir ko bhi jaldi pata chal jaye.. And nitij ke liye jo shayaris bheji thi chaho toh unhe NiBir ke liye use kar sakti ho
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...finally nisha learnt the truth
waiting for the next update😊
Edited by Anagha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
You made my day...😊
Awesome...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
What an amazing update...but please make kabir more J

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